~*~A Love To Remember~*~ MaanEet OS (LONG One)

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Hey Everyone!!!

So I Was Listening To This Song When This Idea Cropped Up Which I Immediately Typed!!!😆😆😆

I Dunno How It Came Out... So Keeping Fingers Crossed That You'll Like It!!!😛😛😛

Also Note To My Turning Tables Readers : Next Update Will Come After Eid If I'm Not Able To Post By Tomorrow. So I Hope You Guys Understand!!!😳😳😳


~*~ A Love To Remember ~*~ MaanEet OS


"Ahhh," Maan winced in pain as he hit the floor. He was least expecting to be pushed by Geet, so the impact was harder.

"Geeettt," he hissed and then stopped himself as he saw her welled up eyes and guilty face.

Damn!!! How could he lose control over himself like this!!! He cursed himself.

Maan and Geet got married almost 2 years before. With the intention of finally starting their family after one and a half years, they decided to go on a Mini Vacation in the chilly weather of Manali- their favourite holiday spot, when their car met with an accident on the way. Though both came out alive, they suffered various injuries. However, Geet was the one to suffer the most since the car was hit on the left side - where Geet was seated. And as fate would have it, she lost her memory in that incident. Partial Amnesia, the doctors had termed it. Her memory might come back in a week, or a month or even a year or more, they had said.

After staying in the hospital for 2 months, Geet finally got discharged 1 month back. Since then, despite the innumerable efforts of Dadima, Annie, Vicky, Dev and Naintara, she stayed aloof and distant from them all. Finally, she started opening herself quite a little bit to Maan- as she was told he is her husband, although she was reluctant to share the same bed with him. However, after much convincing from Maan, she finally agreed. Nonetheless, there was this distance and awkwardness which kept lingering between them.

To help both troubled souls, Dadima and company decided to send them on a two-weeks trip to Manali itself with the hope that they might finally return as one. She had two reasons for choosing that place. Firstly she thought that maybe doing that same journey again, Geet might remember that unfateful incident and secondly, she was aware how both of them had first met each other there during a one month trip organized by their respective universities and it was then itself that the love between them blossomed 6 years ago. So, spending time together there might, maybe; help Geet regain her memory, she had thought hopefully.

"Geet, I'm sorry," Maan quickly apologized as he rose on his feet.

Having reached Manali few hours earlier, they settled in their room as Maan ordered their dinner. Punjabi food, her favourite. Maan found it weird how despite forgetting everything, she still longed for the same cuisine. If only... He wishfully thought.

With the weather suddenly deteriorating, the cold air took over the whole house and both of them settled beside the fireplace for some warmth. However, as usual, Geet was still feeling cold. Therefore, as he normally did, he took Geet in his arms without any forewarning, forgetting about her current state of mind. As he soothed her back, rubbing it with his hand, he realised he missed this, he missed her, their proximity. On the other hand, Geet, unconsciously, hugged him back, feeling his warmth. That was it for Maan. No longer able to control himself he hugged her tighter, remembering their various moments of togetherness. After a while, he broke the hug, slowly to find a dazed Geet. Still lost in her, he tilted her face for a kiss. Just as their lips were about to meet, Geet came out of her trance and realised their position and what was going to come next. Unprepared for it, she pushed him with all her force. It was so mighty, that Maan hit the floor.

"No Maan, I'm sorry," she immediately said.

"Geet, no. I..." And he was cut by her.

"Please don't embarrass me by apologizing Maan," she almost pleaded as tears rolled down her cheeks.

Unable to see her tears, his hands, unconsciously, rose to wipe them off but this didn't happen as she took 2 steps back.

"Mujhse yeh sab nahi hoga Maan," she continued as she looked down, unable to face him. "I... I can't do this. Unless I remember a thing, I can't move on," she said in between sobs. "I realise that I'm being unfair to you, but try putting yourself in my shoes, maybe you will understand my position," she said as she finally looked up, hesitatingly, expecting a positive response from her.

"I know Geet!!! I... I... I promised to give you time but Pata nahi kaise. Geet, I'm not able to control myself around you," he replied guiltily. "But trust me Geet, I'll behave myself and you can take all the time you want, I'll wait for you. I'll wait for the day when you yourself will bare your soul to me," he continued before turning towards the door, wanting some time to himself. But he couldn't continue as he felt a tug on his hand. It was Geet who held him back.

"Maan!!! Please help me," she said in low voice. "Main iss tarah ghoot ghoot Kar nahi Jee sakti. Make me remember everything Maan. I want to move on with you," she added with a whimper.

Maan was taken aback by her words. He could see how she was suffering. Her heart wanted to be with him but her mind wasn't allowing her. And both were right in their own place, he realised.

Facing her. He placed his hands on her shoulders to reassure her of his support. "Geet, please d..." And he stood rooted to his place as she hugged him, this time, willingful, on her own.

"Please help me remember Maan," she pleaded as she cried clutching his shirt tightly.

Maan patted her head, wondering what to do to ease her pain and help her gain her memory back.

The knock on the door made them break the hug, each looking sideways, not wanting to face the other.

Finally, Maan went to the door and opened it. It was the room service who got them their dinner.

They ate in silent sitting by the fireplace. Since they were tired, they mutually decided to call it a day and went to bed, each lost in their respective thoughts.

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"Maan!!! Why have you brought me here???" A consternated Geet asked Maan wondering why he brought her by a lakeside when they were supposed to be going out for lunch.

"Woh Geet, I know we should be heading to the restaurant I told you about but this place came on the way aur tumhi ne toh kaha tha that you want me to help you remember your past, toh issiliye..." Maan let out as they walked towards the lake.

"Matlab???" A confused Geet asked him.

"Matlab yeh ke hamare pyaar Ki shuruwaat yehi huwi thi. We used to spend a lot of time secretly here," he replied with a smile thinking of those days but Geet was rather laughing- wait at him???

"And what's so funny," he groaned. No one laughs at MSK except Geet, he realised.

"Woh Maan, I can't believe ke Aap koyi kaam chup chup ke bhi karte hai," Geet replied in between her laughs.

Maan shook his head at her. True, MSK does everything openly. "Tumhari baat alag hai Geet," he said lovingly. "Waise Geet you look good while smiling but certainly not while laughing like a maniac, jaise ke abhi Kar rahe ho," he teased her.

"Ok I'm sorry. Mazaak Kar Raha tha," he apologized the moment she furrowed her eyebrows at him.

"Ab chalo, let's walk till that kiosk," he said pointing to the place he was referring to.

"Maan!!!" Geet called out to him as they were walking.

"Haan Geet!!!"

"Woh... Tell me more."

"Huh???"

"I mean tell me what all we used to do here. Mujhe toh kuch bhi yaad nahi. Toh you tell me," Geet told him.

The trip might be fruitful after all, Maan thought.

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Jo Bhi Kasmein Khaayi Thi Humne

Waada Kiya Tha Joh Milke

Tune Hi Jeevan Mein Laaya Tha Mere Savera

Kya Tumhe Yaad Hai

Din Woh Bade Haseen The

Raatein Bhi Khushnaseeb Thi

Tune Hi Jeevan Mein Laya Tha Mere Savera

Kya Tumhein Yaad Hain

Whatever Vows We Had Taken

The Promises We Had Made Together

You Alone Had Brought The Mornings Into My Life

Do You Remember?

Those Days Were Very Beautiful

The Nights Also Were Auspicious

You Alone Had Brought The Mornings Into My Life

Do You Remember?

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"Maan!!! Yeh sab tumhe ajeeb nahi lagta?" a 22-year old Geet asked a 23 year old Maan.

"Hmmm" Maan replied non-chalantly, playing with Geet's open tresses with his head on her lap as they settled themselves on the grass by a lake side.

"Ahhh," Maan shrieked as Geet pushed him off her lap. "Now what was that?" He asked as he stood up cleaning his pants which had bits of grasses.

"Main yahan itni serious hoke tumse baat Kar rahi aur tum ho ke pata nahi kahan khoye huwe ho," she replied irritatingly.

"I was lost in you," he said huskily as he bent in front of her, fully intending to make her blush.

"Hayeee Geet!!! When you blush like this, toh Jee karta hai ke..."

"Ke..." Geet curiously prompted him.

"Ke bas khaajaaoon," he added.

"Kya?"

"Tumhe aur kaun!!!" He said cheekily.

"Maaan!!!" She dirtied his shirt with the bits of grasses around them in an attempt to hide his embarrassment.

"Ewww Geet!!! Stop that warna!!!" He warned her.

"Warna kya?" Geet dared him.

"Warna kya??? Abhi dikhaata hoon," he replied with a smirk.

Noticing the glint of mischief, Geet realised she was in for trouble. So she quickly tried standing to make an escape but he was faster than her for in no seconds she found herself pinned under him, with his breath fanning over her face.

"Maaan!!!" His name came as a whisper from her mouth.

He didn't plan that, Maan thought as he felt himself losing his control over her. He was just teasing her and lo, now his own senses were being teased. Being in such close proximity with her, it was taking Maan all of his might not to do something that they might regret later on.

He was lost in his thoughts when he felt her hugging him. Not wanting to back away, he reciprocated the hug. And one thing led to another and that was when they finally shared their first kiss. 2 weeks after they first met. Quick enough, Maan would often tease her.

Half an hour later, as they regained their composure, they went to the lake and sat there, their hands interlocked, with their feet in the water. It was a sunny day, so the water was not chilly.

"Waise Geet," Maan began as they settled themselves there, "tum Kya pooch rahi thi," he asked as he remembered what happened before their little romantic session.

"Woh Maan, I was thinking... Errr I mean, ummm," she said not knowing how to proceed further.

"Geet!!! You stammer???" Maan asked mockingly faking a shock.

"Huh???"

"Why did you hide this from me? Pehle bata diya hota, toh kissi aur ko phassa leta," he teased her.

"Maaan!!!!" She hissed his name as she punched his left arm, knowing very well what he was trying to do.

"Acha I'm sorry!!!" He quickly apologized. "Now tell me."

"Woh, doesn't it look fictional to you, I mean yeh love at first sight wagera wagera, yeh sab toh kitaabon aur filmon Mein hoti thi. And now look at us, we've just met each other and lo we're already so much in love. Kabhi kabhi toh yeh sochti hoon, ke whether is it all a dream which might break anytime," she poured out her anxieties to him.

Cupping her face in his hand, he said: "Geet, it takes less than a moment to fall in love, trust me and this is our case too and I promise I'll always love you as much as I do right now. My love for you will never lessen, I promise."

"Sach Maan," she asked for an assurance.

"Haan Geet!!! And you're right. It does seem surreal. Two weeks back, had someone told me this, I would have laughed it off. But Geet jabse tumse mila hoon, aisa lagta hai ke agar ek bhi din tumhara chehra Na dekhoon, toh kuch khaali khaali sa mehsoos hota hai. Yeh joh hum roz chup chup ke milte hai Geet, isme mujhe bahut mazaa aata hai. You know Geet, if my family knows that I escape from my class tours to meet you secretly, they will never believe me kyunki MSK kabhi bhi koyi kaam chup Kar nahi karta. Lekin tumhare saath sab kuch alag hai Geet. Tumhare liye yeh sab karna mujhe acha lagta hai Geet," he confessed.

"Maan... Yeh t..."

"Shhh Geet," he stopped her from speaking further as he placed his index finger in her lips.

"Geet, please let me speak. You know I'm always hesitant in voicing out my feelings, something Dadima always gets angry about. But I want to be open with you Geet. I want you to know me in an out Geet. After the death of my parents, I changed without realizing it myself Geet. Mujhe laga ke ghar ka bara bete hone Ki wajah se, I need to act maturely and in a responsible way to cater for the needs of my siblings and ageing Dadima. Un sab ke chakkar mein, I forgot about myself. But Geet... You have brought out the old me. With you around, I feel ke main Woh pehle waala Maan hoon. I know we've known each other for just 2 weeks. But Geet, mera yakeen karo, these 2 weeks have been more than enough for me to realise that I want to be with you... Forever. These 2 weeks, are in fact, the most memorable ones to me. I'll always treasure these moments we spent here. And yes Geet, as cliche as it might sound, I feel as if you are the sunshine in my life, to my mornings," he said the last bit with a chuckle.

"Maan!!!" Geet said. To say she was overwhelmed with his confession would be an understatement. Having been an orphan all throughout her life, Geet now felt as if she had someone to call her own- her Maan!!! "I... I love you Maan and I promise I'll always be with you... I promise " she continued in a teary state.

"I love you too Geet," came Maan's reply before he engulfed her in his embrace to seal the promises they made to each other.

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"Geet, where are you lost," Maan asked Geet the following night as they sat in their room after their dinner.

"Woh Maan, when we passed by the reception area while coming into our room, I saw the same receptionist who handed you our room keys the day we checked it," she replied hazily.

"So???" Maan prompted not understanding her.

"Toh, usse dekh Kar I remembered that the day we came, while handling the keys to you, he had said, *Room 150 - like always*. Usne aisa kyun kaha? Do we stay in the same room every time we come here," she asked.

"Yes Geet!!!" He replied in the most casual way.

"Aisa kyun Maan???" She again asked, wondering what could be the reason.

"Actually Geet, during that University trip, this room was booked for you. And..."He stopped feeling embarrassed.

"And???"

"And, every night, after my friends would sleep, I used to come here through the back door, to spend time with you," he said quickly feeling the heat in his cheeks already.

"What???" Geet wasn't expecting this. "I can't believe you were like this. Well, leave you, I can't believe I was like this too," she said. "Maan, yeh sab kitni filmy lagta hai na. I'm guessing we must have had a rocking love story," she added feeling excited to hear more about their night stories from Maan.

Maan chuckled at her excitement. Memory loss or not, some traits are imbued, he thought. Looking at her excitement to hear more from him, he couldn't help but remember the *over-excited* Geet he had fallen for in the first place. Just few days before, she was all aloof and distant and see her now. Maybe his family was right. They needed this privacy for her to come out of her shell.


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Jaage Jaage Rehte The

Khoye Khoye Rehte The

Karte The Pyaar Ki Baatein

Kabhi Tanhaayi Mein, Kabhi Purvayi Mein

Hoti Thi Roz Mulaaqatein

Teri In Baahon Mein

Teri Panaahon Mein

Maine Har Lamha Guzaara

Tere Iss Chehre Ko

Chand Sunehre Ko

Maine To Jigar Mein Utaara

Kitne Tere Kareeb Tha

Main Toh Tera Naseeb Tha

Hothon Pe Rehta Tha Har Waqt Bas Naam Tera

Kya Tumhein Yaad Hai

We Would Stay Awake, We Would Be Lost

We Would Speak Loving Words

Sometimes Alone, Sometimes In A Gentle Breeze

Everyday We Would Meet

In These Arms Of Yours, In Your Shelter

I Spent Every Moment

This Face Of Yours, This Golden Moon

I Placed Next To My Heart

I Was so Close To You

I Was Your Destiny

Only Your Name Used To Adorn My Lips

Do You Remember?

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"Maan yeh sab karna tha, toh apne hi kamre mein reh lete," an annoyed Geet said as she angrily massaged Maan's head while he was watching a football match.

"Geet, kamre mein head massage dene waali nahi thi," he replied non-chalantly, engrossed in the match.

"Kya?????"

"Goooaaalll!!!!"

Both screamed in unison.

"Ahhh Geet, tumhaari awaaz hai ke ambulance Ki siren," Maan said as he covered his ears.

"Acha!!! Even I can say the same thing Mr-I-Love-Football," she retorted.

"Geet, gussa kyun karti ho yaar," he said looking at her.

"What else??? You came here toh I thought ke hum yeh karenge Woh karenge aur tum ko ke... And you know what, I hate football... In commentaries se irritate ho jaati hoon," she replied with a pout.

"Awww!!!! Baby Ke gusse ko bhagane ke liye, mujhe Kya karna hoga?" Maan asked sincerely wanting to make up to her as he switched off the TV. Yes the match was an important one, but she was more important. And he had already messed up. So time to make up.

"Theek hai, toh phir aaj poori raat mere saath bitaao," she quickly said not realizing her choice of words.

"Kyaaa???" Maan asked wondering whether she was ok. "Are you sure Geet?" He asked her as he gulped hard, wanting a confirmation.

"Yea Maan, I am," she emphasized on every word to let him know she was indeed serious.

"Lekin Geet, you only said ke shaadi se pehle no hanky panky..." He said in a low voice not wanting to anger her again.

"Kyaaa???? Yuck Maan!!! You Dirty Mind!!!" She said glaringly.

"What??? Dirty mind and me??? Oh hello, this was your suggestion," he defended himself.

"Maan!!! When I said ke mere saath guzaaro, I meant stay in my room till early morning instead of going back at midnight like you have been doing for the past few days," she gritted the words to him.

"Waise Geet, Joh maine pehle galat samjha Tha, woh better idea Tha," Maan teased her.

"Maaan!!!!" Geet leaned forward to playfully hit Maan but he was quick enough to grab her wrists and then pushing her on the sofa, he towered over her, pinning her under him.

"Maan choro," Geet said as she struggled to free herself.

"Kya Geet!!! Iss position mein kitna mazaa aaraha hai. Chalo na let's get lost in each others' eyes," he suggested looking too serious for his words.

"Maan!!! Pehle toh I only thought about it but now am pakka sure your Dadi will reject me at first glance itself," Geet said.

"Huh???" Maan was confused.

"Aur nahi toh kya... Mera saath kuch hi dinon reh reh ke tum kitne badal gaye Maan. Dadima toh yehi sochengi ke I have spoilt you," she added with a sad pout.

"Geet don't do that!!! You know what it does to me," Maan warned her.

"Fine. Toh let's do it," Geet said as she put her arms around Maan's neck.

"Do what???"

"Wohi... Getting lost in each others' eyes," Geet said in a serious tone.

"What" and seeing her grinning, he gently tapped his forehead to hers as both laughed whole-heartedly.

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"Geet I swear at times you become such a kid," Maan told her as he drived. "And who believes in these stupid things?" He asked for the nth time.

One of the housekeeping staff told Geet about a well which supposedly fulfilled every wish. All you have to do is buy a coin which is sold there and throw it with all your might in the well after sincerely wishing for it with closed eyes. And Geet, being desperate to get back her memory, fell for it and insisted Maan to take her there.

"I hate passing by this road," he continued as they neared the place where they had met with that accident.

"What's wrong with the place now?" Geet sales rolling her eyes at him.

"Geet it's the same road where we met with the accident in which you lost your memory," Maan said turning towards her while he continued driving. "And..."

"Maaan!!!! Aage dekho... Aaahhh!!!!" Geet yelled as he saw a heavy truck coming towards them from the opposite side of the narrow road.

Flashbacks of that day played before him and Maan just applied his brakes and leaned over Geet in an attempt to save her.

As if his stars were favouring him, they managed a narrow escape and that truck passed closely beside their halted car almost colliding with it.

When Maan realised they were safe, he quickly said his prayer and looked at Geet.

"Geet... Geeet!!!!" He tapped his face lightly to make her regain her consciousness.

Seeing that scene, Geet was taken back to that day. And out of fear, she lost her senses and fainted.

Seeing she was not waking up, Maan made a U-turn and took her back to the hotel.

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"Dr, how's my wife?" Maan quickly enquired as the Doctor finished examining Geet.

"Mr Khurana! There's no need to worry. From what you've told me, I guess she fainted out of shock. Don't worry she should be regaining consciousness anytime soon. She is fine," he reassured Maan as he placed his hand on his shoulder.

"Thanks Dr," Maan said as he accompanied him to the door.

Closing the door, he turned around to see the unconscious state. Maan was thankful they were alright - she was alright. However, a fear was still present. Ever since that day, he couldn't bear to see Geet hurt in any way. And even now, till the time she doesn't wake up, he will not be at peace.

Sitting beside her on the bed, Maan held her hand in his to provide her with some warmth. He knew how her body usually stayed cold.

"Geet, Please wake up," he said in a low voice. "I don't care about your memory. Whether you'll get it back a day or not, use mujhe koyi fark nahi parta. I just want you safe, beside me. Please wake up Geet," he kept mumbling when he heard her whimpers.

"Geet!!! Are you ok??? Open your eyes Geet."

Geet slowly opened her eyes feeling all hazy. She was having a terrible headache after all the happenings.

"Maan, I'm all good. Relax!!!" she reassured him placing her hand lightly on his cheek. And then as if she remembered something, she immediately asked.

"Maan tumhari gaal pe scar chali gayi kya?"

"Haan Geet!!! Woh toh kab k... Geet!!! What are you saying?" he asking as realisation dawned onto him.

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"Maan!!!! Kitni baar bolna padega that don't fool around when I'm cooking. There are so many dangerous tools in a kitchen. Ab lagi na gaal pe chot iss isss stupid knife se," she said as she threw the damn knife in the wash basin.

Geet was cutting vegetables when Maan came behind her and blew lightly on her bare shoulder.

Least expecting Maan there at the moment, Geet quickly turned around with her knife in her hand and the harm was done. Maan was left holding his cheek which bled. That swift movement from Geet caused the knife to slightly cut his cheek. And there she was, applying antiseptic on the wound with teary eyes as she kept telling him off.

"Geet!!! It's ok. See, I'm all fine. It's nothing." He told her.

"What nothing!!! It will now leave a scar on your face which will take weeks to heal," she said looking down.

"Geet yaar please!!! Mood theek karlo and jaa ke hum donon ki packing karna," he said not wanting her to feel guilty. "We have to leave for Manali early tomorrow morning. So go and pack our stuffs... Jaaao!!!" he literally pushed her out of the kitchen.

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Maan couldn't understand. How can she remember the scar which was gone in about 2 weeks time- the time when she was still lying unconscious in the hospital. Kahin usse... no Maan... don't get your hopes high, he warned himself not wanting to feel hurt.

"Geet, how do you know about that scar? Kahin... Kya tumhe... I mean...Tumhe sab kuch yaad aagayi???" he asked, though reluctant, feeling a bit hopeful.

"Haan Maan, Mujhe yaad hain, I...I...re-remember every-everything," she said in between choked breaths as she sat on the bed leaning against the head rest.

"Really Geet???" Maan asked fearing whether he could have misheard.

"Haan Maan," she confirmed, as she threw herself towards him, for a hug which was fervently reciprocated. He missed her...so much.

Haan Mujhe Yaad Hai

Din Ke Ujaalon Mein, Khwaabon Khayalon Mein

Maine Tujhe Pal Pal Dekha

Meri Zindagani Tu, Meri Kahaani Tu

Tu Hai Meri Haathon Ki Rekha

Maine Tujhe Chaaha Toh Apna Banaya Toh

Tune Mujhe Dil Mein Basaya

Pyaar Ke Rangon Se, Beheke Umangon Se

Tune Mera Sapna Sajaya

Tere Labon Ko Choomke

Baahon Mein Teri Jhoomke

Maine Basaaya Tha Aankhon Mein Tere Bassera

Kya Tumhe Yaad Hain

Yes I Remember

In The Light Of The Day, In Dreams And Thoughts

I Saw You Time After Time

You Are My Life, You Are My Story

You Are The Lines In My Palms

When I Desired You, When I Made You Mine

You Put Me In Your Heart

With The Colors Of Love, With Intoxicated Enthusiasm

You Decorated My Dreams

Kissing Your Lips

Dancing In Your Arms

I Had Taken Your Abode Into My Eyes

Do You Remember

"Maan!!! Maine aap sab ko bahut sataaya na... you especially," Geet said after sometime, still in his embrace.

Maan slowly broke the hug and placing his hand under her chin, he lifted her face up so that she could face him.

"Geet!!! You realise it was something beyond your means. You did not do that deliberately. We, all, were completely aware of your state. You shouldn't feel guilty about that," Maan made her understand. "And Geet, we took it as a test- a test of our patience. We all remained patient and see we have been rewarded, soon enough," he added with giving her a warm smile.

"Maan!!! I can never be thankful enough for having you in my life,"Geet said as she looked deeply in his eyes which were filled with love for her- only for her. "I love you Maan,"she added as she inwardly said her prayer, being thankful for regaining her memory.

"I love you too Geet. I love you too," he replied without breaking their eye contact.

And finally after 3 long months, they shared a kiss, a soul-searing one, which had been long due, in which they let out all the pain and sufferings they experienced following that one incident.


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TADA!!! That's It!!!😆😆😆

Phewww!!! Not That Was Long... One Post Was Not Enough😲😆😲

Hope You Guys Liked It!!!😛😛😛

Fingers Crossed!!!😳😳😳

Likes And Comments Are Highly Welcomed😊😛😉

Until Next Time🤗🤗🤗

Edited by ...Zah... - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow that was A Superb OS
Geet losing her memory and after 3 months finally she gets her memory back
Geet was that one person that brought out the old Maan the jovial guy

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hi congrats on the OS! thanks 4 da pm n beautful emotional OS! superbly written! Maaneet met in an accident! Geet lost her memory! dadi sneds Maaneet 2 spend time alone! they r in Manali! Geet wants 2 get 2 knw abt them! Maan agrees! he takes her to the place they have been before! Past well incorporated! Geet faints! Maan tensed! she remembers everything! Maan happy! intense hug n passionate kiss! 😊 👏 ⭐️
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That was a sweet story n i loved it!!
Keep writing more!

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I just read the name so thought to read it
nd its lovely story geet got her memory nd maan beside her allt he timw just loved jt
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Amazing story she finally get back her memory loved it
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wow lovely beautiful os yar..te way my maaneet ki love and they destinty started its game and geet lost her memory but my maan ki unconditional love and patience made her to get her memory and win they love was lovely..they nok jhoks was lovely cute..i love te os yar
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely os beautifully written maaneet are meant to be together forever she lost her memory and get it back where she lost i liked past most maan is so naughty loved it thnx for this story
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thanks for the lovely os
i loved the nice bend of present and past in this story... maan is really any gals dream man here... so loving so patient... enjoyed reading the os..

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