ArShi FF: Mere Rang Mein Rangnewali#2| Epilogue | 17/5 - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sadh123

Wow yagz.. after reading till the epilogue.. I was like what the no way this can't end.. such a splendid story and so magically penned down by my best sakhi...

Only then did Aru tell me it has a sequel of sorts to it.. tabi to I calmed down.. no way jab I start reading and this story ends.. nahi ho sakti..

Wow yaara this is equally good.. now I realise why you told me to read this.. you guessed na I will love this.. infact this has taken a special place in my heart.. the epilogue was just perfect.. romance bhi aur pyaar bhi.. love you lady for this.. last lines were the best..

" Itne Din Beeth Gaye Lekin Ek Sach Nahi Badla. Tum Hi Ho, Mere Rang Mein Rangnewali, Mujhe Poora Banane Waali. Thanks a lot for being in my life, Khushi. You are the best thing which could ever happen to me."

Kudos to yagz..running to the sequel or version 2!



Sadh, Yeh Ek Real Life Story Hai! Toh Credits Mujhe Nahi Uss Bhagwan Se Karo Jisne Yeh Khel Rachaya! I hope you understood what I meant!

I will tell the reason of those lines on scrap! Thanks a lot, darling! This is, was my favorite FF which I wrote!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#82
Amazing ss loves everything about it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83
Loved how you started the story! It felt like a fresh breeze through the summer heat.
ASR's anger was also well portrayed.
Their meeting at the NY uni. Loved their first meet as well!
Aww! Arnav's such a flirt! Even I wonder who chose him as the Head!
Oh! Those were all flashbacks?
Well, Khushi's such a nice girl! She helped Arnav get over his grief even though she hated him!
Oh! The intro for part 5 is just soo beautiful! Kahaan se laati hai itna talent! 👏
Ahh! I can truly feel the pain that khushi had to go through when Arnav left her after their marriage!
It's just so so painful, dear!
The way you presented Khushi's meeting with Arnav's Grandmother was amazing!
But yeah, in their position, divorce was the only option they had. Only if they stood up to themselves and confessed!
It was so nice of Khushi to accept the marriage just to ensure the happiness of an unknown dying woman!
Wow! Loved Arnav's cute little ways of winning back Khushi!
Urrggh! That disgusting Shyam! How could he even think of doing that to Khushi!!
Loved how you placed their confrontation!
OMG! You merged Khushi and Sheetal?
Loved how Arnav finally confesses his loved and claims his Khushi back!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Radhikerani

Loved how you started the story! It felt like a fresh breeze through the summer heat.
ASR's anger was also well portrayed.
Their meeting at the NY uni. Loved their first meet as well!
Aww! Arnav's such a flirt! Even I wonder who chose him as the Head!
Oh! Those were all flashbacks?
Well, Khushi's such a nice girl! She helped Arnav get over his grief even though she hated him!
Oh! The intro for part 5 is just soo beautiful! Kahaan se laati hai itna talent! 👏
Ahh! I can truly feel the pain that khushi had to go through when Arnav left her after their marriage!
It's just so so painful, dear!
The way you presented Khushi's meeting with Arnav's Grandmother was amazing!
But yeah, in their position, divorce was the only option they had. Only if they stood up to themselves and confessed!
It was so nice of Khushi to accept the marriage just to ensure the happiness of an unknown dying woman!
Wow! Loved Arnav's cute little ways of winning back Khushi!
Urrggh! That disgusting Shyam! How could he even think of doing that to Khushi!!
Loved how you placed their confrontation!
OMG! You merged Khushi and Sheetal?
Loved how Arnav finally confesses his loved and claims his Khushi back!

This MRMRW you were speaking about? I was thinking of Doorsi Waali MRMRW! HAHAHA! Main Pagal Hoon!
YEAH! Sheetal is a nice name okay? THank you so much Bhabhi!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85
Nice story...

Loved the way you have written it

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