twinj os :: waiting ::

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Posted: 9 years ago
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g'morning folks
guess who s back ??
yeah, its meee !!
so I wrote this os yesterday night, basically around 12:34 something, but then if wasn't opening on my laptop, so had to waittt till now.
I just read tiktik's our baby, and its beautiful so go give it a read, which reminded me that I had to post this os, so yeahhh, I am doing it now.
oh and also, ive taken to plotless lightehearted romances, not going to write anymore sad stories, just so yyou know.
or maybe I will. depends on my mood.
chodo kya leke baithe ho ...
oh and also, this os is for eshu, that is tiktik
happy reading!!

waiting
a queen imagination

kunj sighed again. he drove faster through the streets of amritsar. he and twinkle and mann were here for a vacation with their entire family. and look at him, he was out with anand bhaiya, yuvi and cherry bhaiya for some party, and those two idiots told him to stay. and he did. he knew he should have not, and he did. but here he is, in his car, on his way home, earlier than what the trio had planned for him. he literally had to drag the three brothers from the club before it was too late.
twinkle would be worried. and awake. mann ? oh she would be put off to sleep by twinkle somehow, but she must have seen her mum worrried and that would have worried her. damn his brothers to make his siyappa queen worry about stuff. hell, the acceleration isnt good enough-
"kunj tu faltu mein itni tension le raha hai," yuvi spoke from the back seat, "twinkle bhi baki biwiyo ki tarah hogi, so rahi hogi kharate marr ke" he hi fived anand, who laughed"mahi ko dekh? nikki bhabhi ko dekh, kajal bhabhi ko dekh ? hum log late night office se bhi aaye na, woh woh khana dhak ke so jati hai. twinkle bhi wahi kar rahi hogi, chill kar"
kunj narrowed his eyes at yuvi, "(a) tu twinkle ko nahi janta hai, so dont assume anything about her. (b) woh twinkle hai, agar office se ane mein late hua woh bhi bina inform kiye, toh raat bhar intezaar kar legi mera. (c) twinkle bakiyo ki tarah bilkul nahi hai, so dont compare her to any other ladies of the house." he knew twinkle was awake. he could feel it. they had that bond, if she ever got worried, he got worried automatically, without knowing she was worried. they had no idea from where this connection came from, but it did, and only the two knew about it and they wouldnt dare share their personal life with anybody.
"toh thik hai kunj," cherry smirked at kunj from the passenger seat in front,"shart lagate hai."
"shart?" kunj looked at cherry as if he had grown a third eye and a horn,"ha shart, shart is baat ki, ki twinkle bhabhiji abhi so rahi hongi, nad agar woh so rahi hongi, toh tu bald hoega , and agar nahi so rahi hui, toh-"
"toh hum bald ho jayenge"anand proposed.
cherry gave him his winning smirk, guessing kunj would obviuosly would say no, he loved his hair way too much to risk them.
"done" three faces fell open, they gaped at kunj who seemed to be confidently racing through the colony by now.
yuvi touched his hair and looked at kunj. someone would have to say goodbye to their hair, and that was going to be agonizing.
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kunj parked the car in front of the house and got out quickly, the other three following soon. they made their way to the main door and cherry gulped. he then moved forward to open the door and the four people stepped in the sarna mansion, which was silent and the lights were still on. they looked around and were met with the sight of twinkle, making her way towards her husband.
she was wide awake, no sleep in her eyes. kunj stepped forward and the couple engulfed themselves in a tight hug.
"you're late," she mumbled, as they pulled away, "well how was teh party guys ?" she looked towards the trio behind kunj, who seemed to have their life blown away. "um, aap log thik ho ?" she looked at kunj who merely smiled, tugging at thier intertwined hands, he spoke, " acha chal, tune khana toh khaya nahi hoga na? toh khana laga de, and mere liye bhi, tere haath ka khana khaye begar din nahi guzarta,"
twinkle smiled and nodded, frowning at the trio still asking if they were hungry, yuvi and cherry nodded and anand mumbled a yes, still in shock of the loss of their hair.
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kunj plopped down on teh bed and pressed a kiss on mann's forehead.
"mann ko samjhana itna mushkil tha," twinkle shook her head as she pulled out a tee and lower for kunj and closed the cupboard. "man hi nahi rahi thi,fir papa ji ne story sunayi toh mani hai, warna toh mere saath saath jagi rehti"
"jab hum dono itne ziddi hai, toh fir ise toh ziddi hona hi tha na ?" he pulled twinkle by the waist and made her sit on his lap, "i missed you" he mumbled through the curtain of her hair, making her smile, "i missed you too" she ran her hands though his hair.
"aaj se promise, no partying without the lady," he crossed his heart and twinkle laughed. telling him to go and change she pushed him towards the dressing room, and adjusted the blankets so that they could sleep.
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"seriously ? agar mahi ko pata chala ki yuvi aisa bol raha tha, toh she'd be mad at him for days "twinkle laughed silently as kunj looked at her.
they were halfway through the daily diary session. twinkle had finished telling him about her day and now kunj was telling her about the party. twinkle lay in the middle of the bed, mann hugging the right side of her, head on stomach, and her hand holding the hem of her kurta, fast asleep and kunj on the left side of her, his head on her chest his one arm supporting twinkle from below and the other holding mann to the trio.
"and tughe pata hai ? cherry bhaiya said he'd shave his head and yuvi and anand bhaiya would shave their's if they lost , which they did and now they'll have to do it," kunj laughed silently "imagine kar teeno ko takla," and twinkle burst out laughing, she shook silently until she could control no more and she laughed loudly, waking mann slightly. kunj, who himself was laughing at the thought tried to shut down their laughter to save mann her sleep but failed badly. mann sat up slowly and rubbed her eyes, "kya hua?" her sleepy murmur question made the duo laugh more as twinkle shook her head and mann climbed onto twinkle to sleep, resting her head below kunj's.
"kuch nahi princess aap so jao," kunj patted her head softly and glanced up at his wife who had started laughing again.
they say love keeps you going, were they ever wrong ??

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neverlandspirit thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I wanted to comment first so badly!!!😳
OK, back to the OS...IT WAS ADORABLE!!!
You know I love you a lot...and I love your stories a lot too
But this was utterly cute.
I particularly loved how you showed Twinkle and Kunj to have this telepathic bond, where if she gets worried, then he gets worried. That was brilliant. It had me awwwing really hard!

And loved how Twinkle always stays awake waiting for Kunj

Kunj being considerate of her and always trying to reach early


And then...Cherry, Anand, and Yuvi shaving their head!!!!!LOL
🤣 That was hilarious

I loved LOVED LOVED this one
I love anything and everything you write anyway

Love you
🤗
Edited by neverlandspirit - 9 years ago
SweetSau thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ress
Will be back to unress soonish after mom gives me a break from her study study Jaap!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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amazing... just loved it

their bet... 🤣 🤣

twinj love 😳 😊

everything was just perfect 👏
piu22 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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So cute and funny...
Just amazing... Thanks for the pm
Waiting for such kind of stories
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: neverlandspirit

I wanted to comment first so badly!!!😳

OK, back to the OS...IT WAS ADORABLE!!!
You know I love you a lot...and I love your stories a lot too
But this was utterly cute.
I particularly loved how you showed Twinkle and Kunj to have this telepathic bond, where if she gets worried, then he gets worried. That was brilliant. It had me awwwing really hard!

And loved how Twinkle always stays awake waiting for Kunj

Kunj being considerate of her and always trying to reach early


And then...Cherry, Anand, and Yuvi shaving their head!!!!!LOL
🤣That was hilarious

I loved LOVED LOVED this one
I love anything and everything you write anyway

Love you
🤗


yayy !! you did comment first!! good job sissy !! m proud of you !
thank youuu !
i know, i love you too and i love your strories more than any thing in tis whole wide world.
hehe, thanks again.
i love those kinds of bonds, so why not twinj, they practically already shared one.
i know, saara badla nikal liya, takle ache lage ge
thank you thank you thank you !!
love you more
me
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: SweetSau

Ress

Will be back to unress soonish after mom gives me a break from her study study Jaap!


ironically, id be waiting 😆 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: piu22

So cute and funny...

Just amazing... Thanks for the pm
Waiting for such kind of stories


thank you !!
youre most welcome
will write more pakka se !!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: shreya098

amazing... just loved it

their bet... 🤣 🤣

twinj love 😳 😊

everything was just perfect 👏


hi Shreya, again
well, im glad you liked it
thank you
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sakshi thank u for dedicating this story to me.
Its so cute.
I love twinj nd mann stories from u👏
Ok kunj nd clubbing nice.
The bet was😆🤣
I love twinj bond as both understand one another without saying anything telepathy.
And mann too was awake. How sweet.
I loved the fear which anand, yuvi nd cherry had on their faces when they saw twinkle up nd had not eaten anything.
Aww both had food together.
Last scene nice family moment s mann sleeping on twinkle.

Sakshi thank u again for writing this for me.
Luv u 🤗 sakshi for this.
Ur stories r always amazing.
Keep writing such cute stories.
Thanks for pm.

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