Omkara FF:Tujme Rab Dekhta Hai(ch 3)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello my Omkarains i am finally posting the first chapter of the FF on om and i really wish you guys will not throw rotten eggs after reading the chapter.Let me know your feedbacks as it will help me to improve my writing.
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Omkara FF:Tujme Rab Dekhta Hai

Chapter:1

Peace.That's the only feeling which covered the entire room with the candles which was lid by many people.Amist this soul touching peace sat a girl on a bench in a blue fitted jeans and a white tank top covering her head with a scarf with closed eyes and joined hands who was lost in her prayers.Anyone looked at the beautiful face of the girl could say she was feeling content and happy in her life by the small yet genuine smile which played on her lips.After few seconds the girl opened her eyes and looked at her lord jesus infront of her with gratitude in her eyes.From the look in her eyes it was clear that whatever she wished for was already fulfilled by the god and she is just thanking him silently.
''In the name of the father and of the son and of the holy spirit.Amen''said the girl and stood up completing her prayers.Then she turned to leave the church but stopped in shock seeing the person who became her everything in the past 6 months and her face broke into a breath taking smile.Without wasting any moment she ran into the open arms of the guy whom she missed so much in the past week.As soon as hugged the guy she immediately felt home as his familiar and unique cologne which engulfed her senses which never failed to make her feel safe and sound.For few moments she just stayed in his arms as he hugged her tightly cherishing the moment.
''I missed you Om''said the girl and hearing this Om smiled softly and placed a kiss on the top of her head.
''I missed you too Amyra.''said Om and slowly pulled her out of the hug.Then he placed a soft kiss on her forehead.
''Om what are you doing here?You were supposed to be back from Germany after three days right?asked Amyra looking at om in shock.
''Its true.But i came back soon as i can't be away from my princess anymore.Now let me pray and we can go out okay?''asked Om and Amyra just nodded with a smile.
Then Om took a candle from his pant pocket and placed it among the burning candles before lord jesus and sat on one of the benches joining his hand and closed his eyes.Amyra just started at Om with a smile as he continued to pray as she can't believe he is the same Omkara Oberoi who never belived in love before few months and called Amyra Allyson Vincent a fool for beliving fairy tale love do exist in real life.
Amyra never thought Om will fall in love with a girl like her and pray for her in chruch ignoring their religious barriers.Seeing the unconditional love Om is showing on her made her feel like the most luckiest girl and Amyra thought she can't thanks enough for giving her a better half like om even though she thanks Jesus for it just few moments backs.
''Ghar chale?''asked Om who was now standing infront of her after finishing his prayers and Amyra nodded with a smile.Then both of them left the chruch holding each others hands tightly as both of the missed the feeling of each others skin in the past week.
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When both of them came out of the chruch,Amyra's eyes lid up seeing Om's bike and she smiled liked a child on Christmas evening.
''Om you bought your bike?asked Amyra and Om smiled with a smile seeing her childish excitement.
''Haan.I know my girlfriend missed my bike more than me in the past week.So being the good boy friend i bought it surprise you''answered om.
''You are the best boyfriend in the world''said Amyra and kissed him on his cheeks hugging him tightly and Om hugged her back with a laugh.
''Okay now enough with the talks.Take me on a ride ''said Amyra.
''As you wish my queen''said Om as he sat on the bike placing the helmet on his head and Amyra sat on the back hugging him tightly resting her head on his shoulder.
''Chale?''asked Om and Amyra nodded.Then Om started the bike and drove away from the chruch.
Om was driving for the past 30 minutes without any destination just enjoying his Amyra's company.He never understood her love for his bike when he had many costly cars.
''Ammy why do you love my bike instead of my cars?asked Om and Amyra smiled a little hearing.
''I love your bike because i can't hug you this tight and forget myself in your cologne in your car na''said Amyra and Om smiled hearing her answer.
''so now tell me how was the art festival?Did you enjoy it?asked Amyra.
''It was so nice Ammy.I really enjoyed it a lot.I just you there.You would have loved it you know''said Om as he truly missed Amyra when he went to france to see the arts festival.
''I know Om.Even i felt bad missing such a opportunity.But what to do Mr.Sinhania's project was so important and i can't deny when he requested me to finish before the deadline''said Amyra with a sad face.
''Ammy its okay.we can visit next year and by then you will be Mrs.Amyra Omkara Oberoi and no one can demand anything from my cute wife''said Omkara caressing her head from the front and Amyra blushed hearing his last sentence.
''Hmmm so Mr.Omkara Oberoi is planing his wedding even before knowing whether his girlfriend will accept his proposal''said Amyra with a teasing smile.
''Well who cares about what my girlfriend thinks.If she says no to my proposal then i will kidnap her and will make her my wife''said Om.
''Hmmm then see if you got good talent in kidnapping''said Amyra.Just then then crossed a perfume shop which had a big poster of virat kohli and Amyra let out a dreamy sigh seeing it.
''If only i was bron as virat's neighbor''said Amyra in a longing voice.
''Kya?''asked Om as he didn't hear her properly first.
''Haan om i really wish my parents stayed in the house next to virat.If that happened i would have married him by now.My bad that i was struck with a oberoi Tarzan''said Amyra and Om frowned hearing the nick name she gave him when they first met seeing his long hair.
''If you are that sad being with this oberoi Tarzan then marry your cute Kohli who is stopping you?''asked Om with a glare and Amyra just smiled seeing his cute jealous face.
''You know Om you are so cute when you are angry''said Amyra with a smile.
''Yea whatever.''said Om still glaring.
''And moreover i want to hold the hands that creates the best painting and statue in the world and not the hands which scores centuries''said Amyra placing a kiss on his cheek and Om smiled hearing this.
''I love you om''said Amyra closing her eyes feeling the cold breeze on her face.
''I love you too Ammy''said Om seeing her peaceful face on the mirror.
Omkara Oberoi never believe that the fairy tale love existed in his life after seeing the loveless relation which his parent's had.Soon he made his arts his love,passion and he never thought one day he will love someone more than his arts.But this woman who was now resting on his back changed everything in his life when she enter his house and life before six months.She made him believe that fairy tales do exist in real life when she became his angel and reason for this survival.He just prayed to god never to snatch his angel from him as he know he can't live a life in which his Ammy was not with him.with this thought he drove to the cake shop which was just few minutes away to get his Ammy her cake.
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Amyra and Om was sitting on a bench which was near the cake shop.Amyra was eating the black forest cake which she loved a lot and enojoying the taste of it.When Amyra was about to have the next piece she looked at Om thoughtfully and bought the spoon which had a small piece of cake near his mouth.
''Have it''said Amyra and om just shook his head negatively.
''Nope.You have it''said Om as he was never a fan of cake especially anything with chocolate base.
''Oh come on om.You are not going to loose any packs of your abs if you have little bit of cake.Please for me''asked Amyra with a cute pout which will make om do anything in the world and he ate the piece of cake in deafeat.
''Ab kush?''asked Om with a smile and Amyra nodded with a bright smile.
''Then finish the remaining cake now''said Om and Amyra started to eat the remaining cake .Once she finished the cake Om laid on the bench resting his head on her lap and Amyra started to run her fingers through his soft and long hair.Feeling her smooth fingers on his scalp Om closed his eyes from the peace which her touch gave him.
''You know Om its a crime for you to have such soft and lovely hair.Many girl would kill to have such perfect hair''said Amyra and om smiled hearing the little jealousy in her voice for his hair.
''Ammy sometimes i think you love me just for my hair and if i decided to cut my hair you will break up with me''said Om.
''Ofcourse i will break up with you if you even think of cutting your hair''said Amyra and om opened his eyes in shock.
''What?And if i decided to cut my hair after marriage what will you do?''asked om.
''I will give you divorce''said Amyra casually and om looked her in disbelief.
''You know Amyra you are so mean ''said Om.
''Haan i am very mean but you do love this mean girl na''said Amyra with a wink and Om smiled shaking his head.
''woh toh hai.''said Om and looked at the sky which was covered in starts and smiled to himslef.
Om never thougt that one day he will believe in fairy tale.But today just being with Amyra amist the moons and stars Om felt he was already living a fairy tale with the moon and stars as their fairy god mothers ,their love as the castle and Amyra as his princess.Om never felt this conent like when he was with Amyra and he felt like he didn't ant anything more in his life.And with each passing day he became more and more eager to make Amyra his forever and decided to talk about their marriage to daadi.But before talking to daadi he know he must discuss it with Amyra as he never wanted take any decision about their life without discussing it with Amyra.He thought this was the right time and hoped Amyra will give a positive response.
''Amyra''said Om opening his eyes.
''Hmm bolo Om''said Amyra with a smile still running her fingers through his hair.
''I think i should talk with daadi about our marriage in few days''said om .Hearing this Amyra's hair stopped caressing his hair and she looked Om with a blank look.seeing her blank look Om's heart broke knowing the reason behind that look.He immediately got up from her lap and cupped her cheeks.
''Amyra say something.''said Om caressing her cheeks softly.
''What if she hates and rejects me Om?''asked Amyra as her eyes became moist.
''Ammy why would she hate a lovely,compassionate and caring girl like you.I am sure she will love you sweetheart''said Om softly sensing her fear.
''No Om i am sure she will reject me if she know how much of a bad omen i am.And i can't live without you Om''said Amyra as tears ran down her cheeks.seeing her tears Om felt his heart breaking more and more.He immediately wiped her tears and pulled her to his chest and hugged her tightly.
''Amyra i am sure she will not reject you.Infact she will love you a lot when she sees how much you love shivaay and Rudra and how much they love you.so stop worrying unnecessarily''said Om caressing her back as Amyra hugged him tightly.
''But Om what if...''said Amyra but Om stopped her from talking anything more.
''No if and buts Ammy.Even if she reject you i will marry you.Even if this world world is against our love even then i will marry.You trust me right?''asked Om and Amyra nodded.
''Then trust me in this matter too.I will make sure we will marry with everyones blessing okay''asked om and Amyra nodded hugging him more tightly.
''I love you Om''said Amyra and Om placed a kiss on the top of her head as a habit.
''I love you too Amyra''said Om and after fe moments he pulled her out of his arms.
''Lets go home now as my little bro is already missing his best friend cum di and he will skin me alive if i spoil your movie night today''said Om and Amyra smiled at the mention of Rudra.
''you are right.Let go home before he starts another drama of his claiming he is loved by nobody and he is the lonely soul in the world''said Amyra and Om was glad seeing her smile which bought sunshine to his life.
Then he stood up from the bench and gave Amyra a hand which she took with a smile and both of them left to the oberoi mansion hand in hand.

**To Be Continued**
So my friends let me know how was the first chapter.How many of you liked my tarzan nickname for our dream boy omkara.If i get enough reviews i will continue the next chapter


Index:

Chapter 2:Page 5

Chapter 3:Page 9
Edited by Akirawilliams - 9 years ago

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Mihika thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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pehle to hum hi comment karenge😆
superb update my dear👏👏
loved each and every line of the ff. der wer some mistakes but the way you presented it covered it all up...awesome sweety .. keep it up👍🏼

update soon and don 4gt 2 pm me😛

and yes thnx 4 d pm😊
Edited by Mihika - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow Catholic gf for my Om interesting
Frankly I too think the same how can he have such a beautiful hair 🤣
She calls him Tarzan lol poor Om
Rudra and his nakrae
It's interesting and totally different Om am seeing
Waiting for the next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
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it was like so cute
yeah om 's hair is really a girls wish

tarzaan 🤣 bechara baby

luv om and his hgf also

u utilised rudra perfectly 🤣 rudra and his nakras

thanks for the pm dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Res..

Unress..
Its too beautiful yaar...
I really loved it...
Haha Tarzan. 🤣
Update next one soonish..


Edited by Twinkle_Isha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awww such a cute fiction...
but how did they meet and love Kaise hua do continue girl...

ohh my Om and a Christian girl kya combo hein...

thanx for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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and Tarzan ROFLMAO... u added virat too hayeee
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Posted: 9 years ago
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cute one but whom to picturise as amyra
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Babes... lemme tell u my nickname is Ammy n all the time I read this I was imagining myself wid him!!!
I can't thank u more for this... want a sweet story and that with my name 😳
Loved it n loved it very much!! 😊

Just imagine... me n Omkaara on his Harley Davidson on the quiet roads... he driving & me sitting hugging him on the back...ishhh!!! So many feels!!! ☺️

Me sitting n he lying with his head in my lap... I caressing his hair... what more can I want!! ☺️

Maine mar jaana hai!!! 😳

Write more stories on Omie n Ammy 😉
I'd read all of them more than once!!
Edited by Amreen... - 9 years ago
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so lovely and cute..
love Amyra and Om's chemistry..
i m loving it.
please do pm me.
continue sooonish.

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