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Posted: 9 years ago
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Bhaiyu ur surprise is here...Hope u like it as when i read this story i just feel that this is written for our nibir...

NiBir OS
ThE GiFt


One dollar and 50-7 cents was all the more money saved from the grocer and the vegetable man...
Nisha's cheeks were hot and flushed. She counted again it was exactly the amount she had counted earlier...
The next day was Christmas... She could do nothing except falling on the couch and crying... Her plan was all spoil and now what else she can do her saving was less for her expensive gift... She want to buy it for kabir but now there is nothing every possible thing she can do for her saving she did but its not enough for that...
As it was, she realized that their life is full of sobs, sniffles and smiles, with sniffles predominating...
She lived in furnished flat at high rate per week. It did not beggar description though it was almost a look out on their life style...
In their good days kabir use to have a good income but becoz of some reason it decreased by 10%...
The next day was christmas and she have to buy a gift for kabir... a thought which was again and again coming in her mind...
She stood up and whirled suddenly before the mirror she pulled down messy bun of her hairs and let it fall to its full length... They were a beautiful mope of curls and brownish texture...The touch was fluffy and silky...
Her eyes sparkled brilliantly with an idea as she stroke them with her fingers... There were two things on which nisha and kabir were proud...
Nisha's hair and kabir's platinum whatch which had belonged to his father and grandfather...
While her hairs were not less than cascade from which any girl became jealous in fact any boy will also be a jealous of his watch...
Her beautiful cascades were reaching below her knee...There were tears in her eyes, as she dressed up in a minutes and cluttered out of door to the street...
She stopped in front of a great air conditioner building and read the board placed above..."Madame's Saloon"
She enter in and ask Madame " Will you buy my hair?"
"I buy hair" she said, "Take of your hat, let's have a look." she said...
While nisha nodded and take out her hat...
Her brown cascade rippled down while Madame start to adore them...
"30 dollars" said madame all loss in beauty of her hairs."

"Give it to me quick" said nisha...
The next 2hrs. passed quickly as nisha after the haircut, went to store to buy a gift for her kabir... She found a job chain, chaste in design, worthy of kabir's whatch, which had an old chain with some scratches...

She return to her flat and took out her curlers and within forty minutes, her head was covered with tiny curls. She thought she looked like a truant school boy. But what could i do with a dollar and 50 7 cents...

She thought aloud

Kabir was never late. When he stepped in he looked tiny. Aged only 20 he need a coat and gloves he could barely afford and he was burdened with a family. Nisha prayed silently as she stood before him. I cut my hair and sold it as i could not have lived through Christmas without giving you a gift... nisha said

You cut off ur hair ... asked kabir laboriously

My hair grows awfully fast. and now shall i put the chops on, kabir?...

I don't think there's anything by way of haircut,shave or shampoo that will make me like my girl any less... said kabir and drew out a packet of gift he had bought for nisha.

As she opened it, she screamed in joy, but soon tears started to beam in her dove shaped eyes. Kabir had bought a set of combs that nisha had long craved in Broadway window. Pure tortoise shells, with jeweled rims.

Hey my hair grows so fast kabir... she said as she hugged the expensive combs.

Kabir had not seen his beautiful present she thought, So she brought it out. 'Isn't so dandy kabir ? Give me ur watch. nisha said all excited

I sold it to get money to buy you combs. and now suppose you put the chops on... he coaxed...

A lone tear escape from her eye and she hugged him very tightly while he pour all his love...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Res
Ansh 🤗
Thank you for this os 😉
Unres
Awesome os ansh 👏
Loved it
Thank you again 😉
Edited by Sujayricky - 9 years ago
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Very nice and beautiful os...
oh_nakhrewaali thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
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Tasyam, this story is exact copy of THE GIFT OF MAGI written bu O.HENRY
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Posted: 9 years ago
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@ shibu
Ya i mention it above that i read this story somewhere...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aww..dat was soo sweet..
👏👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Tasyam... u rnt supposed to do that... plagiarism isnt allowed... U could have just made some changes ..this is totally not done...
Edited by ...Shibu... - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: TASYAM

Bhaiyu ur surprise is here...Hope u like it as when i read this story i just feel that this is written for our nibir...

NiBir OS
ThE GiFt


One dollar and 50-7 cents was all the more money saved from the grocer and the vegetable man...
Nisha's cheeks were hot and flushed. She counted again it was exactly the amount she had counted earlier...
The next day was Christmas... She could do nothing except falling on the couch and crying... Her plan was all spoil and now what else she can do her saving was less for her expensive gift... She want to buy it for kabir but now there is nothing every possible thing she can do for her saving she did but its not enough for that...
As it was, she realized that their life is full of sobs, sniffles and smiles, with sniffles predominating...
She lived in furnished flat at high rate per week. It did not beggar description though it was almost a look out on their life style...
In their good days kabir use to have a good income but becoz of some reason it decreased by 10%...
The next day was christmas and she have to buy a gift for kabir... a thought which was again and again coming in her mind...
She stood up and whirled suddenly before the mirror she pulled down messy bun of her hairs and let it fall to its full length... They were a beautiful mope of curls and brownish texture...The touch was fluffy and silky...
Her eyes sparkled brilliantly with an idea as she stroke them with her fingers... There were two things on which nisha and kabir were proud...
Nisha's hair and kabir's platinum whatch which had belonged to his father and grandfather...
While her hairs were not less than cascade from which any girl became jealous in fact any boy will also be a jealous of his watch...
Her beautiful cascades were reaching below her knee...There were tears in her eyes, as she dressed up in a minutes and cluttered out of door to the street...
She stopped in front of a great air conditioner building and read the board placed above..."Madame's Saloon"
She enter in and ask Madame " Will you buy my hair?"
"I buy hair" she said, "Take of your hat, let's have a look." she said...
While nisha nodded and take out her hat...
Her brown cascade rippled down while Madame start to adore them...
"30 dollars" said madame all loss in beauty of her hairs."

"Give it to me quick" said nisha...
The next 2hrs. passed quickly as nisha after the haircut, went to store to buy a gift for her kabir... She found a job chain, chaste in design, worthy of kabir's whatch, which had an old chain with some scratches...

She return to her flat and took out her curlers and within forty minutes, her head was covered with tiny curls. She thought she looked like a truant school boy. But what could i do with a dollar and 50 7 cents...

She thought aloud

Kabir was never late. When he stepped in he looked tiny. Aged only 20 he need a coat and gloves he could barely afford and he was burdened with a family. Nisha prayed silently as she stood before him. I cut my hair and sold it as i could not have lived through Christmas without giving you a gift... nisha said

You cut off ur hair ... asked kabir laboriously

My hair grows awfully fast. and now shall i put the chops on, kabir?...

I don't think there's anything by way of haircut,shave or shampoo that will make me like my girl any less... said kabir and drew out a packet of gift he had bought for nisha.

As she opened it, she screamed in joy, but soon tears started to beam in her dove shaped eyes. Kabir had bought a set of combs that nisha had long craved in Broadway window. Pure tortoise shells, with jeweled rims.

Hey my hair grows so fast kabir... she said as she hugged the expensive combs.

Kabir had not seen his beautiful present she thought, So she brought it out. 'Isn't so dandy kabir ? Give me ur watch. nisha said all excited

I sold it to get money to buy you combs. and now suppose you put the chops on... he coaxed...

A lone tear escape from her eye and she hugged him very tightly while he pour all his love...

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@ Bold
Shibu look at bold point which is indicating towards my point...

PS- see guyz firstly read properly i don't like when u people point me out for nothing...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I read that tasyam...but shouldn't that ave been in bold... People don't usually read the intro...anyways... I just did d work of pointing it out to you tat I read d story before... Some three years back... Baaki, its up to you, wt u decide...
Pease note, no offense and harsh feeling and m NOT trying to be dominating...
Edited by ...Shibu... - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...Shibu...

I read that tasyam...but shouldn't that ave been in bold... People don't usually read the intro...anyways... I just did d work of pointing it out to you tat I read d story before... Some three years back... Baaki, its up to you, wt u decide...

Pease note, no offense and harsh feeling and m NOT trying to be dominating...

I Agree... the story is actually included in some elementary class syllabus too...

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