AkDha SS ~Bonds Of Hearts~ Part 3 Pg. 60

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shikha

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Chap1 it was mindblowing yr...,jalal is such cute kid ,poor hamida and humanyu,oh gosh! naughty jo..There r few line i loved yr,giving it in my version="aur kitna khogi..Itna khogi to khadu ke fool joagi fir tumse shaadi kon karega","kal to tumhari gudia leela ka vivah hena,sabko bol diya hena",meri shaadi ki chinta mat karo mujhe to koi sundar sa rajkumar shaadi kariega haan"..Loved this lines yr..Moti noutanki was funny..Ok bye will comment tom. fr remaining chap , too sleepy,soo many pm,gosh 450,dimag kharab ho gya.Thanks fr pm😊

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shikha

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Chapter~2 bhi pad liya..Very enjoyble ,oo they all gone for camping,lol..Joja fight was interesting,"lajja nhi atti tumhe" 🤣,moti awesome yr ek gudia aur sweets ke liye kya kya kar rahi h..Par gudda kha h...?😆,Jodha carefree nature probably will get her in trouble..,palace mei bhi deer hote h kya..? cause you've mention it ! thanks fr pm n sorry ha like button not workin.😊

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shikha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#493

Chapter~3=it was full of masti n teasing ,i loved every bit of it ,mujhe kuch der ke liye bura laga ki jodha pura aam kha jayegi ,poor jallu bookha reh jayega but our jodhu is great! i loved this line"abb kya aankho se hi khoagi use?"😆THANKS FR PM UPDATE..SOON