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Ramya

@Ramya_98

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Mahi

@Mannmohanaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Cause I've to find words to describe it, in some Thesaurus or something🤔😆

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Anu

@SenAnu

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Posted: 9 years ago

Its Beautiful Ramya!!

Such a beautiful play of words, and an interesting theme..

Such a romantic ghost ;)

But the emotions were perfect and also the dilemma of the ghost man..

Loved it!!

Keep writing stuff like this :)

P.S. All the best for your exams

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MsChanadlerBong

@MsChanadlerBong

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hey Ramya! Beautiful piece . The words used very well suited and rhymed well . You have penned down a real piece of brilliance . Loved the genre also . Obsession is actually a very serious matter and a ghost having a obsession on a human ? Lord save the person . The last two line were a magic . You are Damon good poet . Ramya keep writing such poems . With such different genres 😆 . The genre is really unique I tell u . Never in dream I would think of ghost loving a human . Not even love but obsession . More dangerous re! The difference you tried to draw out in love and obsession . Well done gal !

Love the poem .

Love

Sam

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Sidhi

@ArtThouTheBest

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Posted: 9 years ago

It's so beautiful!!
Romantic and soulful!!
I am usually nt that much of a fan of poems; but this one touched me. I loved, loved it ❤️.
N the genre!! My Goodness. Never ever imagined a ghost in love with a human; let alone obsessed!!

Fanx 4 the pm dr

LOVE, Sidhi

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AMereWanderer

@AMereWanderer

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Posted: 9 years ago

Ramya di,

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Amazingly written di! For me, poem is one of the hardest aspects to write in English😛😆. You have expressed many emotions describing the obsession of the ghost for the human being! I am proud to have a forum friend like you. 😆

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Srutha

@SriMaatangi

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Posted: 9 years ago

Res 😛
Unres
Perfect ghost obsession Rammy 👏👏👏
This is fabulous ⭐️
You write poems as well as you write stories.
Good job. Write a lot more :)

Edited by KrishnaPriyaa - 9 years ago

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Shivam...

@Shivam...

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hey Ramya

Very good use of vocab and Rhyming was perfect

Intitally , so stupid of Me , I thought you were describing the feelings of a pregnant Lady😆 , till i reached the last 2 para's , i knew i had misunderstood something

A good read Definately.

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Mahi

@Mannmohanaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Shivam...
Hey Ramya
Very good use of vocab and Rhyming was perfect

Intitally , so stupid of Me , I thought you were describing the feelings of a pregnant Lady😆 , till i reached the last 2 para's , i knew i had misunderstood something

A good read Definately.

🤣🤣