Destined To Meet In Heaven (A RagNa OS) 26th June 2016

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HELLO all! Here's another OS from my side! Hope you all enjoy reading it.
Note: Please don't read it without listening to the song in the background.

Song name- Ankhiyaan by Kanika Kapoor from the movie Do Lafzon Ki Kahaani (2016)

*Music - 48 sec.*

Kalpana descended down the stairs of the mansion in a graceful way, holding onto her lehenga delicately.

She looked no less than a Goddess descending to the Earth from abode.

With her cheerful and satisfied smile, she came and sat down on the mandap.

Now only one thing was missing. Raghav.

It was now only 10 minutes left for the muhurat for marriage to get over but still no trace of Raghav.

So many calls and messages to him by everyone, yet no response.

Ankhiyaan ne ankhiyaan nu
Rabb jaane kyun diye faasley

She got up and headed towards Sammy.
She kept her hand on his shoulder as her eyes questioned him about his whereabouts.
He shook his head, apologetically.
She looked down and moved forward.

Ankhiyaan ne ankhiyaan nu
Rabb jaane kyun diye faasley

She came and stood at the threshold of the door while her eyes searched for her soul mate.
Kalpana's family members and Sammy looked at her with worried eyes.

Rondiyan ne chham chham karke
Teri yaadon mein marke

But no one knew what Kalpana was actually feeling. More than being hurt by Raghav's disappearance she was more concerned about his well being, about her Raghav being alright.

Rondiyan ne chham chham karke
Teri yaadon mein marke

She wiped some lone tears which managed to escape her eyes and headed towards her family who were in the hall, waiting on Raghav.

Bhul gayi'aan jindri de raaste

She went to Sammy and asked for the car keys.
Sammy took them out and handed over to her but even before he or anybody could question her, she left.

Ankhiyan ne ankhiyan nu
Rabb jaane kyun diye faasley

Sammy followed behind her, only to see the car speeding away.

Ankhiyaan ne ankhiyaan nu
Rabb jaane kyun diye faasley

"Please take care of her, God." He whispered a little prayer, closing his eyes.

*Music - 14 sec.*

Kalpana was driving furiously on the roads as she didn't stop for any traffic lights or anything.

Only thing which she knew was, she had to reach Raghav's house.

"Please don't let anything happen to him, God. Please. Please keep him alright. I.. I can't live without him." She said breaking down into sobs.

Om reaching her destination, she parked her car and ran towards the mansion quickly.
She patted the door.

"Raghav! Raghav! Are you there? Please open the door!" She shouted with concern lingering in her voice.

Duniya ki bheed mein main tanha si ho gayi
Paakar jo tujhko khoya
Khud hi main kho gayi

When she tried to open the door, the door opened on its own.
She wiped her wet cheeks and slowly entered inside.

The house was all messed up, not a thing at its place.
It was as if someone had robbed the house.

Kalpana ran towards Raghav's room, but he was nowhere.

She also checked his lockers and cupboards to find them perfectly locked, which means there was no robbery in the house.

Duniya ki bheed mein main tanha si ho gayi
Paakar jo tujhko khoya
Khud hi main kho gayi

"Then what could have happened? Raghav is a cleanliness lover, he can't mess up his home like this. Then what?" Kalpana thought aloud while she rubbed her forehead in frustration.

Kya bataun tere bin
Kajal se hai yeh din
Taare bhi bujhe bujhe hain raat mein

"DAMN IT!! Where are you, Raghav? ?"she whined and crashed down on the bed in dismay.

She was about to call his office for any details when Sammy's call came in.

Ankhiyan ne ankhiyan nu
Rabb jaane kyun diye faasley

Kalpana : Haan (yes) Sammy.. Bolo (speak)..

Sammy : Umm.. Kalpana.. why don't you come back now?

Kalpana : Why? Is everything alright there? And I am sorry, I took quite a lot of time.

Sammy : Uhh.. no problem. But just come back soon. Okay?

Kalpana : I will. But is everything alright?

Sammy : Yeah.. yeah. You just come back soon.

Kalpana : Hmm.. okay.

Call disconnected.

Ankhiyaan ne ankhiyaan nu
Rabb jaane kyun diye faasley

"Why was Sammy sounding so shaky? I hope everything's alright there.. I think, I should go back." Kalpana said to herself as she exited the house and went to her home.

*Music - 21 sec.*

Kalpana got down the car and entered her mansion to find it unusually quite.

The deadly silence gave chills down her backbone.

"What happened Aai - Baba? Why is there so silence? " she asked in an attempt to get rid of that unwelcoming silence..

.. just like the one before the storm.

Raahon mein baithe baithe
Nain pathra gaye
Khushiyon ke honthon pe
Dard kaise aa gaye

She ran over to Kamla, who stood there like a stone.
She shook her lightly from the shoulders, asking for attention and the answer to her questions.

Kamla didn't respond a little.

Kalpana's fear was now at it heights as everybody refused to answer her, be it her father or even her brother.
Nobody talked, just silent tears cascaded down from their eyes like a never-ending river.

Raahon mein baithe baithe
Nain pathra gaye
Khushiyon ke honthon pe
Dard kaise aa gaye

She at last tried to go to Sammy to ask answers to her unanswered questions when she stumbled and fell.

She stumbled on something cold and soft lying in the centre of the hall.

She looked down slowly at the cause of her fall..

and just kept on staring, wordless.

Her hand went on his chest automatically as she grabbed the white sheet down.

Her doubt was cleared.

The worst she thought, came out to be true.

Her world came down in million little fragments in front of her eyes.

Sapne jo roothe roothe
Jud ke jo dil hai toote
Tooti hain lakeere bhi ye haath mein

"RAGHAV!" She yelled in pain at the top of her voice.

Her hands caressed his now bloodied face, constantly asking him to get up.

Every success, every luxury, everything of the world now seemed nothing in Kalpana's eyes.

If someone offered her to trade everything which belongs to her with Raghav's life. She wouldn't have even taken a second and said yes.

She cried holding onto him as if she would never let him go away.
But only if she accepted that he was already gone.

Kamla, Vitthal, Pakhya and Sammy looked at her devastated state, themselves broken from inside.

Ankhiyaan ne ankhiyaan nu
Rabb jaane kyun diye faasley

Kalpana now laid her head on his once beating heart and entwined her fingers with his.

She kissed his hand gently and said, "I will never let you go."

She closed her eyes as silent tears still fell from them.

She stayed in that position for a long time.

After a few minutes, Kamla went up to Kalpana to take her inside and continue with Raghav's last rites.

"Kalpi.. come on beta, get up." Kamla said softly as she lovingly caressed her daughter's hair.

She stayed as she was.

"Kalpi.." Kamla called out to her a bit louder this time as she patted her cheeks gently.

As she touched her cheeks, she found her body abnormally cold and it didn't take much time for Kamla to understand what happened.

Ankhiyaan ne ankhiyaan nu
Rabb jaane kyun diye faasley

She was no more.

She left along with her soul mate, on a journey of their own and to find their own little world in abode.

If not Earth, maybe Heaven was the place where there were destined to meet.

I will never leave you' was what Kalpana promised to Raghav.

And she didn't break her vow.

*Music - 20 sec.*

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I was just listening to this song when my brain came up with this story.
Thought to share with you all.
Sorry for that heart breaking ending.

Likes and comments please!

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aww so sad😭
Great Story 👏
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Gosh ! Its a beautiful OS. Tragic but lovely. Thanks for your lovely OS
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Ruh banke milunga aasma me kahi
Ppyaar dharti par farishisto se kiya nahi jata


What an os excellent
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow !!! So emotional, painful and heart bring at the same time !
But so beautifully written dear ! And the song is just perfect for the OS it makes u feel even more ... It brings out your emotions
Keep blessing us with these wonderful piece of work 😉
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it was fab...loved it...👏

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😊SO beautiful and SO emotional .Thanks for this lovely sweet ,OS .please try to one OS with full of romance and RAGNS only .
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Awesome. ...
Emotional t😭
Edited by pratibha2603 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sabse pehle toh maaf kar de yaar ...bohut bohut sorry ! These days I've become very bad when it comes to keeping promises 🤢😭 Itni saari kulhadiya Jo maar li hai pairon pe 🤢
Well mera toh chalta hi rahega

Now coming to the os prathama ..I regret not reading it before. Not a happy ending (like I usually prefer reading) but a very very well written piece of work 👏👏
The story flowed well ...I kind of liked the end. I was actually praying ke bas real waale bakwaas se shaadi ka remake na kiya ho tune where Majboori walks in with his Revenge-cum-friend after marrying her...ewww...I don't even wish to recall it ! 😡😲

The ending here was nice , kind of reminded me of barfi's climax ...but this was different since the main protagonists hadn't spent their time till old age together & yet the amount of bonding between the 2 & it was indeed well executed 😳😃

One awesomely written writeup Prathama ...do write more & next time I would be there to comment without u reminding me ! 😉😃

MARUSHKAA

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