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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello Dearies...!! 🤗
Back to give a happy ending...!!!😛😛 yaya.. I know... I had denied it... But how can I say no to your lovely response...!! And a girl's demand for whom the story is dedicated...🤗 so here it is...
Hope you all like it...!! 🤗


Last part...!!


"Same to you Ms.Sunshine...!!!" I saw the massage arrive... My heart beat loudly watching the reply... Wasn't believing on my eyes...!! That he really wrote that...!!!

I close the chat... Without opening it...!!! Was feeling extremely happy...!!!! I sat there like dumb not ready to believe...! And found a lone tear in my eyes...! But I quickly wipe out...!!


I lie on bed and started tossing... I decided to reply in morning... Its very late in night...!!! I closed my eyes and try to sleep... But there wasn't any tress of sleep... My eyes remain wide open... Just everytime i closed my eyes... His face and thoughts come in mind... Once again mind drifted back to last some days...!!

After we had meet on that beach...!! I kept myself distanced... And try my best to stay away from him...!! But then I wasn't ready to loose that precious friendship too...!!! So I stay in touch with him... I decided to ignore my feel... Let us be like this... Just friends!!! And once again the same chit chats and continue talks started...!!!


I enjoyed with him... With every time avoiding my feel... Was feeling so good... He was in best of the mood felt like.. Always cracking jokes.. Making me laugh... Some caring talks.. And all the stuff continued in our chat... Just that I start wishing that if not as love but I always want to be like this with him...!!

But fate has some other plaanss...!! In those days... We are still at his place... My decision of going back to home get cancelled as daddy and all left from house to attend wedding any other place...!! And he don't want me to stay at home alone..!

So I m still here with jiju.. Nisha and Aisha di...!! As he said he will come to meet.. But he didn't come next day.. Don't know why..??! From that day till today he didn't show his face... And today right in the morning he was here...!! To stay with us for the day..! As next day in evening we are leaving...!!

We had chit chat randomly but since morning he was asking just one thing by massage "Did Nisha said something to you???" I replied negatively... I felt he is bit worried.. But when I asked what happen... He didn't said anything... Just sometime ignores it so sometime left the chat... And since morning he had asked this question for the sixth time...!!!

I was getting worried by the evening... He wasn't saying anything to me.. Just massaging me.. Being in same house.. Still he was doing massage...!! And in evening I asked finally to Nisha "what happened?? will you please tell me...!!"

Nisha look here and there... There was no one...!! She said "I will tell only with one promise..!!" I think for a while then said okk..!! She asked that... "If I tell you this... Still you will not tell him that I told you all...! He own his own will tell you... Promise me..!!"
I said "Okksss...!! Tell me fast...!!" She said "He said he likes and after conforming.. Me too told him that you likes him too...!!" I get shocked to hear that... I stared at her for some good minutes... Nisha came to know about my feel and all just some days ago...!! As I had told her to stop teasing after knowing this all...!!

And now here she is saying this all... Then I looked away "Don't do masti Nisha... You know all the things...!!" I said trying to control my emotion... I still feel like she is playing prank... And I don't want to hear this... She thumped her foot in anger said... "I m not lying... I am asking him since two days... And finally in morning he massage on his own that " yes I likes sunshine...!" And I told about you too... But now he want me to convey this all to you...!"

I was stunned to hear this all... I was feeling extremely happy from inside and my eyes started getting wet..!! I don't know what to say... I looked away again...!! Nisha said lefting the room "Don't tell him... That I told you this all... He will confess..!!" I hmmm in response and she left from there...!!

Later on I get busy... He didn't shown up since evening.. Had left for somewhere...!! But then again in night massage showers same "Did she says anything...??" I don't want to lie but I also don't want to break the promise too...!!! So I said no..! And asked what happen and why aren't you telling me directly...!! And once again he left the chat...!!

As I jumped on bed to sleep... Someone called me...!! No its not someone its Nisha...!! I looked here and there... She wasn't there... I was in room with Chahat... Aisha di's daughter...!! So I picked up the call and hear Nisha's words "look you both... Bohot ho gaya... You both knew all... So just say it here...!!" Yes... The call was on conference...!! I remain silent for sometime hoping that he will say something.. But then he didn't ... So finally I cut the call...!!

But I was too much irritated... And moreover Nisha start showing anger... So finally I massage him "I like you Mr.Rish..!!" And wait for his reply... He saw the msg but didn't reply... So I finally wrote "If you are angry.. Or anything... Tell me straight... I just want my answer... No matter what it is...!!!" And my cell beeped with quick reply "Same to you Ms.Sunshine...!!"

And now here I m... Tossing on bed.. But after almost twenty minutes fail attempt to sleep I checked my cell and got his msg.. "Kaha chali gayi... Come back... Ms. Sunshine..!!" But before I replied my room's door get open a little... As I sat on bed and was little taken a back as I saw him entering in room... I had left the door open thinking that Nisha will come..!!


He...


I enter in her room and saw her little shock face and smiled at her... She looks so innocent... There was no one except her and little Chahat... And she too was sleeping by now..!! I take step towards her and she didn't move ... just sit there watching me approaching...!!!

But something click me and I asked '' Are you feeling sleepy...!!" She nodded no like words arent ready to come out from her mouth... So I said "Want you to be on terrace... Waiting... Come soon...!!" I said and left from there...!!!

I walked here and there for five minutes... And finally she come up... She had drapped her dupatta around her covering herself as its little cold here...!! She come near and stand with a proper distance..!! She was still looking down..!! Probably feeling much shy... But a cute little shy smile was playing accross her lips... I smiled But then tonight I m not ready to stay silent... Like stayed in this all time..!!


After we settled down on terrace I started "To aap janti thi na yeh sab..!" She looked up at me for a minute and said "Nopesss.. Just in the evening Nisha tell me..!!!" I nodded and said "To batana to chahiye tha...!!" "You didn't come after evening and there wasn't your msgs too.. Aur waise bhi ye sab mujhe apko pehle batana chahiye ya phir aapko...!! Haa???" She asked cutely in little hyper tone... I smiled at her... And she look down..!she is right... I should tell her first...!!

"But itna to batana tha ke she told you anything... Baki me baat karta na...!!" She just said hmmm...!! I felt her little quite right now.. First I thought its because of her shyness but then something else was bugging her too...!! She stared at down... I hold her and turn her to looked at me.. She flinch a little then I leave her... I knew its new to her... "Look at me Madhu. Tell me if anything is bugging to you... Ask it anyything you want to know..!! You want to say something right...!!"

She looked up at me slowly and our eyes met and she nodded slightly... I m sure she wanna say something.. I hold her palm and tell "Tell me...!!" She take a deep breath than said looking down "Rishab.. Me aapko bohot pehle se like karti thi... But when you told me about your dream and your dislikeness towards this.. I decided to back out...!!" She looked up and I action to go on.. And she said just "To phir ab ye sab achanak ...??!!!!" She left her sentence incomplete but I got what she is trying to ask...

Well... She is still confused with this all...!! Yaa.. How can she be sure.. She is right.. I never show her any sign that I like her and all...Although I m crazily fallen for her...!! I decided to tell her all things...!! I put a finger under her chin and make her look at me..!!

She stared at me to answer her question and finally I started... " Madhu.. Since the time I met you... I have met lots of girl and interact with them... But then trust me.. I never like anyone else... Because they were truly different from me.. All time just spend time to impress others showing fake attitudes and all.. You know me right... As always quite types and loving to be alone more... Moreover I never like to be roaming around with them here and there... Never.. That's why that day I showed dislikeness towards this... Not about liking someone...!! " I stopped for a while... She was staring at me without a blink and listening very carefully... And as I stopped she just asked "Then me???"


I smiled brightly at her "I like you Ms.Sunshine.. Because you are truly different... I always like to talk and feel like sharing everything with you... Your understanding and caring nature always had pulled me towards you... First of all was confused that what's all this...what's all this... As you know I m idiot in this things... But the day when you left from beach like that.. I felt very bad..!! I get you are distancing but didn't get the reason..!! This was the actually realisation time.. Those two three days...!! And finally I got that you are the only one who is the best for me.. And I have fallen for you...!! But was afraid to know your feel..!! Somewhere you had done same things... Not showing any sign..! But when Nisha insist I can't hold myself back and told the truth...!"


I stopped completing... And observe her changing expression... Her eyes started getting wet and tear fall down as she said "I love you...!" I tried to gulp down her words... Feeling extremely happy I just hugged her tight in excitement and said loudly too "Love you too my sunshine...!!"

After some minutes I actually realised my quick action and her statue state... I was going break the hold... Just then get her hold on me getting tight which was loosen till now...!! She hugged me back tightly and me too...!! She said without breaking the hugg "No one makes me feel so awsome ... I had never expected this...!! That will be someone's this much close and special..!! You too are very special for me..!!" She was in tears.. Her voice was cracky...!!

I slowly break the hugg... And looked at her... Cupping her face I said "I love you...!! And don't like this tears.. So no more tears right...!!!" She said and I went near her and kiss on that tears and tear marks..!! She hold me tight as I kissed her on cheeks..!! Than on her for head... I was so near to her that can hear her heartbeats.. I can't hold back anymore... I bent down towards her lips and but then first look up in her eyes asked "May I...??" She blushed getting the meaning and said closing her eyes "Love you more...!!"

And finally I placed my lips on her and started tasting her...!! She flinch first but then hold me tight and started responding back...!! The kiss which started slow and smooth become passionate one..!! And finally we break it to have some breath..!!
She looked down in shyness...!!! And I smiled at her...!! I dragged her more towards me...!! She looked up and asked "What do you love most from my nature...??" And I smile and placing my lips on her for head said "Your innocent and unconditional love...!!"

*End..**

Plss... Plss...reply... And tell me...how's it...!!?!!
Love you all... Waiting for your views!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
Beautiful end
Loved madhu's love N innocens loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
Awesome update and lovely ending,
rk realized he loves madhu and both confessed their feelings
thanks for the update and rk's pov
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
Kya lazavab cute story h
Loved ot
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
Wow...this is truly innocent. Her love is so pure n unconditional.😳
R & M tattoo n RK thought it is Maan n Rishabh. Hahaha...u can't fool us RK. For us it's only Rishabh n Madhu.😳
If Nisha had not intervened, would they have confessed?😕 I doubt it!
Glad she came n spilt the beans.😃
Really enjoyed the TS.
Thanks!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Thanks for happy ending. At last rk realized his feelings n they confessed their love. A simple ,sweet n emotional love story. Write more on rishbala.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome ending buddy!! Am so happy that the girl to whom you dedicated this story made you change your mind 😆
Am happy RK finally confessed. Rishbala are united. Thanks for the ending
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey..😊..
Thanks for writing this part...!!
I like this part more...
So sunshine is happy as her rishabh said her something😛...
Hmm... Madhu decided not to break the friendship...
& she is trying to be happy, with the ways things are ...
Rk's pov was interesting...
Thats what we are saying naa madhu,
that ur Rk loves u, or why else, he would share all his personal stuffs with you..!!!
Think... Think...
Hahaha... Typically setting type proposal...
Rk asking someone else to deliver his love message to madhu🤣
Rk do u think her a pigeon, of ancient time, to deliver ur love message😆
Seriously Rk was a bug, always asking, "did she said anything"...
Seeing him, i was pulling my hairs, screaming dumbo go & tell her😉...
But anyway all well that ends well..
Rk barged into madhu's room😳..
They went to terrece...
Speak their heart out...
Initiate their first kiss tok...
This is called a lovely love story...😳...
Thanks dear for writing..
I enjoyed it very much...😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: vishuv

Awesome ending buddy!! Am so happy that the girl to whom you dedicated this story made you change your mind😆

Am happy RK finally confessed. Rishbala are united. Thanks for the ending


D'oh... Miu😆...
All our responses made her change are mind😎
Hain naa deary...!!😛
And am glad too that she give an ending.. 😃

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