I change? Because of you? (SS)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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I have a feeling I might not like what's in store today. So this is my story following yesterday's episode (20th June) ... forget the precap.


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"Sumo aa gayi dekho"

"kaisa tha tera din?"

"Koi baat bani beta?"

"aree...abhi tho aayi hai. Baitne tho do use "

"aaja chai peele"

After a long tiring day, she came home to her family. The last few days have made her realize that no matter how irritating they can be sometimes, she'll always have a family to fall back on when she was lost. Right now, she felt lost and defeated like never before. She had always been a fighter, the sumo fighter, but now she was facing her worst weaknesses. Her uncles and aunts were talking to her, but she couldn't hear any of that. She just kept walking away from all the noise and ended up in her nanu's room like this was some magical place where all problems disappear. Her nanu looked up from his book and gave her the most assuring smile ever, as if she had somehow done him proud right that moment. She ran to him and fell to her knees, with her head in his lap and tears flowing down her face.

Preeti followed her didi like a lost puppy and stopped at the door. She stood there shocked watching her strong sumo di break down like that. Her heart sank a little and, oh, how she could do anything to cheer her sister up right now.

"nanu, uss din aap ne poocha tha ki jo main ne kiya wo sahi tha ya galat. Main galat thi na nanu?"

He ran his hand on her head "beta..."

"mami ne sahi kaha tha nanu. App ne ithne saal tak jo rishtey banake rakhe, main ne sab kharab kar diya na nanu. Ithne saalon tak, sab kuch dekhthe hue, sab jaanthe hue bhi, aap ne nirmala aunty aur ramnath uncle dono se rishtha banaye rakha. Aur main ne ek pal mein sab khatham kar diya nanu...sab kuch khatam ho gaya."


"Kuch khatam nahi hua hai beta. Tum aise..."


"Aap tho uncle aunty ko kab se jaanthe the. aap ne bhi tho un ke misunderstandings door karne ki koshish ki hogi na pehle ... un ki madad karne ki koshish ki hogi naa aap ne bhi kabhi ... ha nanu?"

He let out a sigh and tried to pick her up. But heart was too heavy for her to stand up.

"Phir main ne kaise soch liya ke jo problem aap sab ithne saalon mein solve nahi kar paye, wo main ek din mein thik kar doongi. Ab dekhiye nanu baat kaha se kaha tak pohuch gayi. meri wajah se sab kuch badal gaya nanu"

"yeh rishtey aise hi hote hai beta. Inhe sammbhal ke rakhna padta hai. Varna baat bigadne mein der nahi lagti. par tum chinta mat karo. Sab tik ho jayega"

"Nirmala aunty ne bhi yeh hi kaha tha ... ki rishton ko sammbhal ke rakhna padta hai. Aur yeh bhi kaha tha ki unhe Sharavan se nahi milna chahiye ... agar us din main unhe jane deti, tho yeh sab hota hi nahi."


"Suman" This time he lifted her up sat her down next to him. Preeti came in sat by her sister. "Tum ne jo bhi kiya, us mein tumhara irada bikul sahi tha. Tum tho sirf sach samne lana chahti thi na?"

"Hmm ..." She murmured.

"Haan, bohot saal pehle, hum ne bhi koshish ki thi ke Ramnath aur Nirmala ka ghar na tute, par un dono ki baat ban ne ke bajai bigadti chali gayi. Par beta agar koi problem saalon pehle solve nahi ho payi, tho iska matlab yeh nahi ki koi phir se koshish na kare. Aise tho duniya ka koi bhi problem kabhi solve nahi hoga. Hai na?"

She nodded and let out a soft smile at how her nanu always had an answer for everything.

"Tum ne kuch galat nahi kiya. Haan bas shayad tumhe thoda aur soch samajkar kadam uthana chahiye tha. Par tum abh in sab cheezon ke bare me kyon baat kar rahi ho? Abhi sirf PCT ke baare mein soocho. Tumhare clients.."

"Wo sab tho ho jayega nanu" She said wiping her tears. "Kirai ki jagah hi tho thi. Aaj nahi tho kal mujhe koi aur jagah mil jayegi aur kaam bhi shuru ho jayega. Mujhe dukh iss baat ka hai ki ... "

" ... ki Shravan ne tumhare saath yeh sab kiya?"

That name ... hit her like a bullet.

What..no..This is not about him...Why did nanu?...no... in the last couple of days, he has made it very clear how important I am to him. And he is not important to me either. He does NOT effect me

"nahi nanu ... main tho ... "

"Beta, us ki jagah koi aur lawyer hota tho wo bhi yeh hi kartha. Phir tum kis ke office mein ja kar use gussa kar ke aati? Hum sab jante hai ki Shravan tumhara khas dost hain. par hum gussa usi par karthe jisse hum pyar karthe hai."

"what now? khas? pyar? on no! nanu... what are you saying?"

"tu chinta mat kar. sab thik ho jayega. Ab tu jake so ja. Preeti, ja beta, ise iske kamre tak chod de"

"chalo di"

She was still debating and denying the-shravan-influence-on-her in her mind and before she knew she was in her room. Preeti brought her in carefully and put her down on the bed like she was a big glass vase with a handle-with-care sticker on it.

"Preeti"

"Haan di"

"Abhi nanu ne jo kaha ... mere aur Sharavan ke bare mein ... tu bhi aise hi soch thi hai?"

"kya di?"

"yehi ki Shravan mere liye ... khas hai ... "

"haan di"

"aisa kyu lagtha hai tujhe?"

"Di, aap log kithe achhe dost hai. Aur aap tho Shravan ke liye kithna sochti hai. Aur us ki baat aate hi na, aap ek dum badal jate ho. Par use aap ke saath aisa nahi karna chahiye tha ..."

"Kya?...main kisi ke liye nahi badalti!"

"nahi di, aap sach mein badal jati ho. Aap ko nahi pata? Sab ko dikhta hai. Isi liye tho wo Pushkar bhi us din bet laga raha tha ... but haar gaya! ha ha" She giggled like the innocent puppy she is after dropping a bomb on sumo. "Par di, ek baat batau ... mujhe nahi achha lagtha aap kisi ke liye badlo. mujhe meri vali sumo di chahiye, bachpan vali, hummmesha! ok?" she piched her cheeks. "Ab aap so jao. Good night".

"Yeh kya bol kar chali gayi. Sab ko dikhta hai ki main uss ke liye badal jati hu. Shravan? Have I really changed for you?
I change? because of you?"


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Part 2 coming soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
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it was really good... chapter 1 was amazing... lovely start... update soonish... want to read
loads of love
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Nice job! Do continue soon!
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It was amazing.
Sumo is in soo much pain and as always Nanu is a sweetheart.
Update Soon!

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Interesting
nice really like it
do update soon...
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Really a good start
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