IshRa FF - If You Hold My Hand (Prologue Added On Page 1)

Indian TV 😆 we all know it sucks! You see the male protagonist become catalyst for all drama and a commodity to use for romance. It's upsetting to see the calibre of both Karan and Divyanka go to waste. They are made for better not this crap they are stuck with. I have had this story in my mind for a long time and I have, btw, tried to write it but I get no takers and trust me that's the worst feeling so please if you glance upon this and do read it please 😳 leave a word of encouragement 😃 it does wonders 😊

I have done enough baq-baq, let's scroll down to have a read of the prologue!

His shoulders drooping, head hung low, eyes merely blinking; he stepped into his house, silently. Keeping his bag to one side and hanging his car keys over on the peg, Raman went over to the kitchen to fetch a glass of water. There stood his heavily pregnant wife, heating their food. He felt a rush of anger through his veins, which soon calmed down as he saw her lovingly set their plates. He couldn't help but rush to her and engulf her in a back hug. She turned round to find him gawking at her and took him into a side hug and together they took their food over to their comfort zone, their bedroom.

Raman grabbed Ishita's plate from her hand and put it on the table; taking her to the bed and set pillows to aid her back. The duo relished the delicacies as Ishita asked him how his day went to which his reply always would be "tere saath waqt bithaake saari thakaan uthar gayi" and caress her baby bump, leaning in to kiss it 😳

However, she couldn't be spared from his mock anger as he questioned her why she was still wide awake when he could easily heat the food up himself to which his Madrasan would cutely reply "aap ka baby soone de toh naa. Papa ke bina neend kahan aati hai!" and as they spoke, the same issue cropped up...

"Ishita kab tak iss booj talle dabbha rahoon gaa main??"

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Interesting prologue...

Great start

Amazing prologue...
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