Akdha FF - ISHQ IBADAT updated teaser ch.22 on page123(01/04/2017) - Page 63

first of all sorry for this much late
finally i got free to read ur story further
chappi-12
its fab chappi jiya
so finally jodhas coronation ceremony came
all gets shocked seeing jo in soldier dress and even mainavati scold her but how can our ja remain silent seeing this and hw comes to rescue his wify from her mother's wrath and explains why jo was wearing soldiers dress and then mother and daughters meelan good and jas naughtiness in fake threatening to his mother in law
then in pooja too ja gets naughty but controlled by jo
then last part of ceremony wow hamida presented his late hubbys sword to complete it
then hamida and jos scene nice
ruks is really cheapest girl even now showing his cheap attitude and fake proud
even dare to agrue with hamida but finally hamida manage to get her out of auspicious occasion
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chappi-13
its superb jiya
so ja called bharmal and maina too to stand hold pak chadar during jos 😊 crowning nice
then cs come to crown jo on jas plea wow
ja jos addressing to their awam good and best part was when ja announced a special drabar for ladies and child under jo
then CS warning about coming evil scary and its solution is expected
then family time and mainas news regarding marriage of leela and demanding jo to come with them left both ja jo heart broken
Jos rudhna and jas manana wow
and finally ja with his Cunning mind able to convinced maina of leaving jo here only and both will come later
now i think the problem will be leela it can't be ruks i guess bakee let's see
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chappi-14
its Sweet chappi
ja jo in mathura to celebrate holi with their kanha and radha wow
and both dressed as fav badal and kajri
jos demand of churiya and when ja said he will buy whole shop jo made him realise that they r commoners so they can't buy whole shop and at last buy red green chudiya
then both performed like radha and Krishna on the words of Pandit
then Both played holi with full excitement and teasing each other
oh no jo drinked jas bhang dhandai and shows her full tantrums especially mere undliya jud gaye wala
finally with jas lot of efforts jo took its arag and went to sleep
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chappi-15
its one of the best chappi
jos answer to kanika and all rajvanshis wow
then jas sword practice and all girls drooling over him and which results in waking bhagin in jo
kanikas taunts on jos hubby is really a big irony
then jos showing all jas only her openly wow
and jas teasing jo over being jealous chuckling
precap damn interesting
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tzr
its amazing
jos answer to all wow regarding her ja wow
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First of all i m extremely sorry for late update plz forgive me but nw days i m really busy in my career starting new work which consume my all time thats why nt visitinhg forum nw days hope u guys understand my problem n i promise will try my best to gv next update asap...
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Ch.16.

Jalal n jodha was sitting in their room after finishing their morning prayer when mainawati entered in their room n Jalal n jodha greet her n she gv them blessing n request Jalal to do breakfast wid her brothers family ladies coz they all want to meet jodha's husband n Jalal looked jodha n with smile he accept her request n with mainawati both goes towards dinning hall where all rajvanshi ladies waiting for them including Kalika who already made her plan hw to come close to Jalal n make him her husband n when jodha n Jalal entered in hall all ladies stand up n looked them in amusement coz they never saw beautiful couple like them n some ladies praised Jalal's personality,some feel jealousy towards jodha coz she got handsome husband like Jalal,some just drooling over him,some feel anger for jodha n jalal n kalika smirk evil but without gv attention to anyone Jalal walks towards his chair n sit there n jodha stands beside him,all greet him n with smile he accept all greetings n mainawati introduced everyone to him n asked serve breakfast to Jalal n jodha smile,when jodha about to serve breakfast kalika stop her n looked Jalal n said...

KALIKA - jija sa hume bhi toh apni seva ka mauka dijiye jodha toh sadev hi aapke saat hai hume toh yeh mauka badi mushkil se mila hai n she gv romantic look to Jalal which noticed by both Jalal n jodha n jodha looked her in anger n Jalal smiled at her jealousy n possessiveness n he thinks to tease her but poor fellow dnt knw his idea backfires on him badly...

JALAL - haan haan kyun nahi shejadi kalika aap so toh hum pehle baar mile he toh aapki baat kaise taal sakte hai he said in sweet voice n kalika smiled wide thinks her plan working n jodha's anger increase like hell after listening Jalal's words n kalika's smile made it worse n she glare daggers towards jalal through her eyes n without saying a single she leave frm there all looked shocked at her action n Jalal's face turn white n thinks...

JALAL - ya khuda yeh humne kya kar diya jodha ko satane ke chakkar mai lagta hai humne apni bhaghin ko jaga diya hai ab toh aap gaye shenshah n he immediately standup frm his chair but kalika stops him..

KALIKA - aare jiju sa aap kanha jaa rahe hai aapka nashta Jalal feel irritating but he control himself n looked mainawati...

JALAL - maa sa humme muaf kijiyega par hum jodha begum ke bina khana nahi khate aap toh jaanti hai aur woh yanha se aise chali gayi hai lagta hai unki tabiyat thik nahi hum unnko jaakar dekhte hai aap sab naashta kar lijiye n Jalal also leave in hurry n kalika fuming in anger when Jalal going towards their chember raja bharmal stop him n told him abt important meetings with some rajput kings who want to peace wid mughal saltanat n wants to rule under mughal saltanat like amer n they want to discuss about Jalal's conditions to take them under his protection n Jalal wont denied this important political issue n without informing jodha or anyone he went out of palace with bharmal for meeting n other side jodha waiting him in their chember n with each passing minute her anger n frustration increasing n after 1hour when she came out frm her chember to ask about Jalal but no one knw abt him she feel tense abt him n while returning to her chember she meet kalika who smile n said...

KALIKA - arre jodha tum thik toh ho tum bina naashta kiye huye wanha se chali aayi kya huya sab thik toh hai waise shenshah ke saath naashta karke bahut aanand aaya unnhone humse kitni sari baatein ki humari pasand napasand ke baare mai jaana abhi woh kisi kaam se bahar gaye par unnhone bola hai sandhya ko lautkar woh phir se hume milenge hume toh lagata hai unnhe hum bahut pasand aaye n she smirked jodha looked her with anger n pain in her eyes n she went again in her chember though jodha knw Jalal's very well but in that particular moment her anger made her mind blind kalika smle evil actually after jalal leave dining room kalika came after her n she heard barmal n Jalal's talk n only she knws abt their meeting in palace n used this to create drift btw jodha n Jalal...n after looking pain n anger in jodha's eyes she thinks her plan definitely works this time n she laughed like rqaiyya chudail hihi...

Whole day Jalal mind was busy in discussion with rajput kings but his heart only thinks abt jodha n morning incident he worried abt her n in palace jodha thinking whole day why Jalal dnt tell her about his work why he dnt inform anyone n why he told kalika abt this. Whole day she fight war between her mind n heart n in last decide to confront Jalal for her all questions n she came out frm her chember n what she saw gv her biggest shock of her life she saw kalika hugging Jalal n his back facing jodha n when kalika looked her she gv her winning smirk jodha feel her head spinning n b4 she faint she went inside her chember n start crying in same time Jalal entered in chember calling her n when she heard his voice she wiped her tears n immediately pulled down curtain between them n truned her back n jalal smiled at her action n thinks...

JALAL - lagta hai humari jaan abhi tak humse naraaz hai tabhi yeh parde ki deewar lagadi hai humare beech n with mischievous smirk he trying to open curtain but jodha stopped him..

JODHA - iss aur aane ka paryaas mat kijiyega shenshah n jalal looked her n said...

JALAL - lagta hai humari jaan subah ki baat ke liye abhi tak humse naaraz hai par yeh kya baat huyi hum toh bus dillagi kar rahe the aapko ched rahe the humari itni si gusthaki ki itni badi saza ke hum apni jaan ka khubsurat mukhda bhi nahi dekh sakte yeh toh aapki nainsaafi hai Mallika-e-Hind n he opened curtain n came near her n touched her shoulder n this is enough for jodha to loose her control n she turned n looked him with angry red eyes n in high tone she said...

JODHA - hume ched rahe the aap dillagi ki thi humare saath kyun shenshah uss kalika ke saath naashta karna usski pasand napasand janna sirf ussko batake jana ke aap mahal se bahar ja rahe hai aur lautne pe ussko gale lagana aapke liye sirf dillagi hi toh hai, she laughed n looked into his eyes n said...

JODHA - haan dillagi hi toh hai aapke liye hum kaise bhul gaye aap shenshah he jab jisske saath chahe reh sakte hai jab jisse chahe gale laga sakte hai aakhir aap purush hai aapko adhikaar hai jo aurat pasand aaye ussko aapna bana lene ka aur hum kon hote hai aapse krodhit hone wale ya phir aapko rokne wale jaayiye aapki nayi pasand nayi cheheti kalika aapka intezaar kar rahi hogi hume apne haal pe chod dijiye Jalal looked her in disbelief n confusion n hold her hand n asked...

JALAL - jodha aap yeh sab kya keh rahi hai aisa kuch nahi hai aapko koi galatfemi huyi hai n jodha jerked his hand n said...

JODHA - galatfemi shenshah humne swayam abhi thodi der pehale aapko aur kalika ko gale lage huya dekha tha aap kehna kya chahte hai humari aankho ko dhokha huya hai nahi shenshah nahi Jalal shook his head n said...

JALAL - nahi hum yeh nahi keh rahe hai par aap puri baat jaane bina hi humpe gussa kar rahi hai pehale humari puri baat sun lijiye phir aap jo kahengi hume manzoor hoga par sirf ek baar apna gussa bhulkar khule mann aur dimaag se humari baat suniye n jodha looked him with calm eyes n said...

JODHA - kahiye kya batana chahte hai hume n Jalal make her sit on couch n he himself sit on ground infront of her n he took her hand n looked into her eyes n said,..

JALAL - jaan jo aapne dekha woh sahi hai par sach nahi hai...

Flashback -

After comingback from meeting Jalal going to his chember in hurry when kalika come towards him n they bump n kalika pretending to be fall but Jalal catch her n she hug him n same time jodha came out from her chember n saw them,jalal immediately pushed kalika n said aap thik hai shezaadi n without listen her answer n looking her he leave from there left fuming kalika behind...Flashback end...

Jalal took deep breath n said..

JALAL - jodha humne unnko gale nahi lagaya tha humne toh bus ussko girne se bachaya tha aur yeh aap kya keh rahi hai hum unki pasand napasand puch rahe the par kab hum toh din bhar raja shaab ke saat kuch raajput raajao ke saat masalat mai mashroof the aur hume jaldi me achanak se jana pada isiliye kisi ko bhi bata nahi sake hum toh aapke picche hi bina kuch khaaye aa gaye the par aapse milne se pehale hi raja shaab ke saath jana pad gaya hum allah ki kasam kha kar kehte hai humne na rajkumari kalika se koi baat nahi ki aap kaise kisi ki baat mai aakar humari mohabbat pe shaq kar sakti hai jaan iss se accha toh yeh hota aap hume maut de deti hum aapka bharosa jeetne mai phir se nakamyaab ho gaye n he looked jodha who looking him with teary eyes fill with pain n guilt n Jalal wiped her tears n immediately pulled her in his hug n in sweet caring voice he said...

JALAL - jaan khuda ke liye royiye mat aap toh jaanti hi hai hum aapki aankho mai aansu bardasth nahi kar sakte n jodha start sobbing in his hug n while sobbing she said...

JODHA - hume shama kar dijiye shenshah hum nahi jaante kab humara krodh humpe haavi ho gaya aur hum aapko na jaane kya kya bol gaye par humara vishwaas kijiye humne dil se woh sab nahi kaha tha aap jaante hai shenshah woh kalika bachpan se humare khilone humare gehne cheenti aayi hai maasa ke kehne pe humne kabhi kuch nahi kaha aur aaj jab humne aapko usske saath dekha toh na chahte huye bhi humare mann mai jalan aur aapko khone ki bhavna uttpan ho gayi aur hum aapka dil dukha baithe hume shama kar dijiye Jalal broke their hug n cupped her face n said...

JALAL - jaan hum sirf aapke hai aur sirf aapse mohabbat karte hai humse vaada kijiye aaj ke baad apne dil mai ek pal ke liye bhi yeh khayaal nahi aane dengi ki koi hume aapse cheen sakta hai ya phir hum aapko kisi ke liye chod sakte hai vaada kijiye n jodha smile n gv him promise n Jalal again hugged her n after sometime he said...

JALAL - jaan bahut bhook lagi hai humne subah se kuch nahi khaya hai ab humse nahi raha ja raha chaliye khana kha lete n jodha broke hug n looked him n asked..

JODHA - kya keh rahe hai shenshah aapne subah se kuch nahi khaya par kyun n Jalal chuckled n said..

JALAL - kyunki aap subah naashta kare bina chali aayi thi aur aapko toh pata hi hai hum aapke bina khana nahi khaate hai aur hume yeh bhi pata tha gusse mai aapne bhi kuch nahi khaya hoga toh hum kaise kuch kha sakte the n jodha looked him with teary emotional eyes n again hugged him tightly n said...

JODHA - hum kitne bure hai shenshah humne aapko galat samjha itni saari dil dukhane wali baatein boli aur aap humare liye din bhar bhuke rahe hume shama kar dijiye shenshah Jalal kissed her head n said...

JALAL - bus jaan ab jo huya ussko bhul jaayiye aur chaliye jaldi se khana lagwayiye hum tab tak apna libaas badal lete hai n he broke their hug n caresses her cheek n goes to changing room n jodha looked in his direction n in cold tone said..

JODHA - aap ne toh hume shama kar diya shenshah par hum apne aap ko tab tak shama nahi kar paayenge jab tak uss kalika ko sabak nahi shikha dete she smirk n said kalika aaj raat araam se so jao kal subah hum tumhe tumhare kiye ka woh sabak shikayenge ki tum jeevan bhar nahi bhul paaogi...

Next morning after breakfast Jalal went again outside palace with bhagwaan dass for some important work n after he leaves jodha went to participate in haldi rasam n when she entered in ceremony hall she finds kalika talking with some girls about her n jalal..

KALIKA - tumhe pata hai woh jodha ka jo pati hai kiss tarah mera dewana ban gaya hai kal raat ko hume mila tha aur dekhte hi hume gale lagakar humse usska prem sweekar karnr ke liye kehne laga dekh lena iss vivaah ke sammpan hote hote hum puri tarah se ussko apne kaabu mai kar lenge bechari jodha n all laughed n after listening this jodha blood boiled n she come to near kalika n without wasting any second slapped her hard n all looked her in shocked n kalika looked her with anger n said...

KALIKA - tumhari itni himmat tumne humpe haath uthaya tum jaanti nahi hum kon hai n jodha looked her with same anger n said...

JODHA - hum acchi tarah se jaante hai tum ek choti si riyaasat prithagarh ki ek mamuli se rajkumari ho par saayad tum nahi jaanti jinnke vishay mai jhooi baatein banakar jinnka charitra hannan (character assassination) karne ki koshish kar rahi ho woh humare pati hai aur iss pure hindustaan ke shenshah hai kalika smile n said...

KALIKA - jhooti baatein hum jo keh rahe hai woh sach hai tumhara pati hi humare picche pada hai toh hum kyun picche hate aur tumhe iss me kyun bura lag raha hai woh toh hai hi aisa yunhi nahi usske mahal mai haazaro auratein hai n jodha again slapped her n about to slap again when some women stop her n said..

Women - kalika sahi toh keh rahi hai sara hindustaan jaanta hai ki apni hawas (lust) ko pura karne ke liye kaise ussne hazaaro aurato ko rakha huya hai n jodha looked them with sharp eyes n said...

JODHA - sahi kaha kakisa shenshah ke haram mai hazaaro begum thi suna aapne thi hai nahi kyunki shenshah ne yudh mai jeetkar laayi sab aurato ki riha kar diya jo jaise zindagi beetana chahti hai usska waisi hi zindagi jeene ka intezaam kiya ja raha hai aur jo vivaah karna chahti hai unka vivaah karwaya jayega n she looked kalika n said...

JODHA - kam akal toh tum bachpan se hi thi aur ab kaan ki kacchi bhi ho gayi ho tumne bus yeh suna ki agra ke haram me hazaaro aurat hai toh tumhe laga tum humare pati ko humse alag karke apna bana logi par apni ghatiya harkatein karne se pehale pata toh kar leti yeh baat toh hindustaan ka baccha baccha jaanta hai ki shenshah ki sirf aur sirf teen vihaata patni hai baki kisi aurat se unnko koi matlab nahi hai par lagta yanha rajputana ke log aaj bhi barso puraani duniya mai jee rahe n she looked again towards women n said...

JODHA - aur aap kya keh rahi thi apni hawas ko pura karne ke liye toh janha tak hum jaante hai aapke pati ne bhi toh abhi apni beti se kam umar ki rajkumari se raajnetik vivaah kiya hai aur aapke pati ki bhi 5raaniya aur na jaane kitni daasiya hai kya rajputo mai rajao ki kai raaniya aur uppatniya (secondary wives) nahi hoti hume kisi ek bhi raja ka naam bata dijiye jissne apne bhog vilaas ke liye rakhi huyi dassiyo ko azaad kiya ho yeh himmat sirf humare pati mai hai woh humse bahut prem karte hai aur jabse humse vivaah huya hai sirf humare hokar reh rahe hai aapme se kitno ke pati aisa kar sakte hai all ladies lowered their eyes in shame but kalika start clapping n said...

KALIKA - bahut khub jodha bahut khub par tumhare kehne se sacchayi nahi badal sakti tumhara pati humara dewana ho chuka hai aur yeh tumne kal raat apni aankho se dekha tha tum ab uss se humara hone se nahi rok sakti jodha looked her with cold eyes n said...

JODHA - kal raat ko kya huya tha hume acche se pata hai aur humne socha tha tumhe sirf chetavani dekar jaane denge tumhari humare aur shenshah ke madhay galatfemi laane ki ghatiya koshish ke liye par jo tum shenshah ke charitra ka hannan kar rahi ho usske liye hum tumhe jarur dandh denge aaj hum tumhe dhikhyenge mughal saltanat ke shenshah ki aur anguli uthane waale ka yeh mughal saltanat ki mallika kya hasar karti hai n jodha clapped n called mughal guards in n ordered them to arrest kalika n put her behind the bars n she will announce her punishment after shenshah comeback n gurds arrest kalika n she start shouting..

KALIKA - tum aisa nahi kar sakti jodha tumhe yeh sab bahut bhari padega humare bapusa mughal saltanat ko barbaad kar denge n jodha laughed n said...

JODHA - mughal saltanat ko barbaad karenge kaise yudh karke woh kiss ke saath 50hazzar seniko ki sena ke saath toh hum tumhe bata dete hai tumhari jaisi riyaasat ke liye toh Mallika-e-Hind ki tukdi hi kaafi hai kyunki jaanti ho hume shenshah ne 2lakh seniko ki tukdi suapi hai jo sirf humare liye kaam karti hai chalo tumhari yeh iccha bhi puri kare dete hai n she called one guard n told him to send massage to her army commander that be ready to attack on prithagarh n kalika looked her in fear n her sister run towards mainawati chember n told her everything n mainawati immediately came in ceremony hall n looked arrested kalika in shocked n then she looked jodha n said...
MAINAWATI - jodha yeh sab kya hai yeh kya kar rahi ho tum toh jaanti hi ho kalika bachpan se hi aisi hai tum toh samajhdaar ho aur vivaah ke shubh avasar par jhagde ko badane ki jagah shanti se kaam lo n jodha looked her with cold angry eyes n said...

JODHA - shama kijiyega maa sa parntu iss samay hum aapki putari ya amer ki rajkunvari nahi hai hum hindustan ke shenshah ki patni aur mallika-e-hindustan hai aur koi bhi n she give killer gaze to kalika n said koi bhi humare pati aur humare shenshah ka apmaan karne ka ya phir humare pati ke charitra pe lanchan lagane ka paryaas karega hum ussko nahi chodenge n she again looked mainawati n in calm tone she said...

JODHA- amer mughal saltanat ka bhaag hai aur hum mughal saltanat ki mallika amer ki maharani se bhi yahi apeksha rakhenge ki woh hume humara kartavye pura karne se nahi rokengi n mainawati looked her with proud n said in her mind..

MAINAWATI- aaj humare saamne humari putari nahi hindustan ki mallika khadi hai aur hume garv hai usski maa hone pe n she smiled n said...

MAINAWATI- shama kijiye mallika-e-hind hum bhul gaye the aap ko rokne ka ya aapko aadesh dene ka adhikaar hindustaan mai kisi ko nahi hai sivaye shenshah ke parntu aapki maa hone ke naate humara aadesh hai ki vivaah sampurn hone tak apne aadesh ko rok le jodha looked her with soft emotional eyes n said...

JODHA - dhanayevaad maharani mainawati humara samaan rakhne ke liye aur aapki putari hone ke naate hum aapka adesh ka palan karenge aur vivaah sampurn hone tak kuch bhi nahi karenge n she ordered gurds to locked her in her chember n without her permission no one meets her n she looked towards all ladies n said...

JODHA - yeh vivaah shanti se ho jaaye isske liye hum chahenge jo kuch bhi yanha huya woh kisi ko pata na chale n all node their heads in agreement jodha smile cunningly n with mainawati she leave from there...

Precap :- jodha's comes to rajvanshis plan to insult Jalal n she failed their plan n starting of baba salim chisti prediction...

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Ch.17

Awesome update.

That was one classic update!!!! 👏