Akdha FF - ISHQ IBADAT updated teaser ch.22 on page123(01/04/2017) - Page 65

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Awesome chappy buddy...
Kalika is try to create rift between ja n jo..
Jo misunderstood ja..
I really killed that witch Kalika..
So nicely ja specify jo n jo is guilt for her behaviour..
My jo sherni is back..
How cheap this Kalika n other belming ja..
So nicely jo explain ja character...
I love the way jo explaining...
I love each n every line of story...
Jo cage kalika in her chamber..
Jo n rocked n Kalika is shocked..
Main is very proud for her daughter..
Jo is happy that her masa is with her..

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Jo got angry
Jalal pacified her

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Ch.17...


New Characters -

1. Maharaja Bhawani Singh (Mirtagarh) - Jodha's Mama(Maternal Uncle)

2. Maharani Maheshwari Devi (Bhawani Singh's wife/Jodha's mami)

3. Maharaja Jaswant Singh (Surjangarh) - Kalika's Father/Maheshwari Devi's Brother.

4. Kunwar Prithvi Pratap Singh - Leela's Groom

5. Maharaja Devendra Pratap Singh (Madhavgarh) - Prithvi's Father

6. Maharani Yashodhara Devi - Prithvi's Mother

(Note:- all new characters n state's name r fictional)

Mainawati n jodha was sitting in mainawati's chember when mainawati took jodha's hand in her hand n said...

MAINAWATI - jodha beta hum tumse tumhari maa sa hone ke naate kuch kehna chahte hai aur hum chahte hai ke tum humari beti bankar humari baat suno naaki Mallika-e-Hind bankar jodha looked her with sad eyes n she said...

JODHA - maa sa aap yeh kya keh rahi hai hum sada pehale aapki beti hai baad mai Mallika-e-Hind yadi aapko humari baat buri lagi ho toh hume shama kar dijiye mainawati smiled n in emotional tone she said...

MAINAWATI - nahi jodha hume tanik bhi bura nahi laga hume toh bahut garv huya humari beti ko Mallika-e-Hind ka kartavaye nibhate huye dekh kar parntu beta hum jo kehna chahte hai usse dhayan se suno n jodha node n mainawati looked into her eyes n said...

MAINAWATI - jodha tumne aaj jo kuch bhi kiya woh bilkul sahi hai parntu beta tum toh kalika ko bachpan se jaanti hu toh hum chahte hai ki but jodha cut her in btw n said...

JODHA - maa sa aap chahti hai ki hum ek baar phir se uss kalika ko shama karde parntu hum aisa nahi karenge kyunki iss baar baat humari nahi humare shenshah humare pati ki hai aur unka apmaan karne wale ko hum kabhi shama nahi kar sakte mainawati took deep breath n said...

MAINAWATI - jodha tum hume galat samajh rahi ho hum tumhe kalika ko shama karne ke liye nahi keh rahe hai hum toh bus yeh keh rahe the ki tum toh kalika ko acche se jaanti ho ussko kisi ki bhavnao ki parvaah nahi hai parntu hum tumse bus yahi keh rahe hai ki tum kalika ko vivaah ki rasamo mai bhaag lene do kyunki yadi iss karan leela ke vivaah mai koi adhchan aayi toh woh accha nahi hai kyunki iss sab mai leela ka toh koi bhi dosh nahi hai na toh beta ussko kalika ke kiye ka dhand nahi milna chahiye aur jaise hi vivaah sampan hoga tum kalika ko jo chahe dhand de dena hum kuch nahi kahenge jodha thinks about it n said...

JODHA - aap thik keh rahi hai maa sa hum leela ke liye uss kalika ko nazarband nahi karte parntu yadi uss ne ya kisi aur ne humare shenshah humare pati ka apmaan karne ki koshish ki toh hum kisi ko bhi shama nahi karenge mainawati smiled n said...

MAINAWATI - thik hai jodha parntu hum bus itna chahte hai ki iss sab mai leela ke vivaah mai koi adhchan naa aaye hume vachan do tum leela ke vivaah me koi adhachan nahi aane dogi n jodha gv her promise n mainawati hugged her with proud smile on her face...

JALAL n jodha was sitting in their chember discussing some political issue when one maid came n said that jodha's mami call her jodha node n said she will come after sometime but Jalal told her to go they will discuss this issue later jodha smiled n went towards guests chembers area where groom n bride family staying while passing through corridor she heard jalal's name frm one chember n she silently entered in that chember n hide herself behind the curtain n she saw her mama n groom's father talking about something n when she listened carefully then she found they are discussing their plan to insult Jalal in tomorrow's tilak ceremony...


Bhawani Singh - aap chinta mat kijiye samdhi sa jaisa humne tay kiya tha waisa hi hoga aapne iss vivaah ke liye anumati ke liye jo shart rakhi thi hume woh acche se yaad hai tabhi toh humne yeh vivaah yanha amer mai karne ka nirnaye liya tha taki hum uss Jalal ko apmaanit kar sake aur rajvanshio ke maathe pe kalank jodha aur Jalal ka rishta tod sake aur hum kal apni yojana ko anjaam denge jab tilak samahroh mai uss Jalal ko sirf jodha ke pati ke roop mai pukara jaayega toh usske shenshah ke aham ko bahut chot pahuchegi aur jab jodha ko hum badi behan hone ke naate tilak ke liye kahenge aur uss Jalal ko musalmaan hone ke naate rasam nahi karne di jaayegi aur ussko apmaanit kiya jaayega toh usska rajvanshio ka hiteshi hone ka naatak wanhi samaapth ho jaayega aur amer mai itna bada apmaan hone se usska amer aur jodha se naata bhi toot jaayega n he smiled cunningly n looked Devendra Pratap singh n both laughed hysterically...

After listening their talks jodha's blood boiled in anger n she just abut to comeout to confront them when mainawati's words came into her mind n she decided to keep this matter with her but she promised to herself that without createing any problem in leela's marriage she will protect Jalal's honour n amer's pride n fail their every planning to hurt n insult her shenshah n without making any noise she left frm there n went to Maheshwari Devi's chemer...

she entered in Maheshwari's chember n jodha greeted her n asked why she called her n Maheshwari smiled n said...

Maheshwari - jodha beti tumhara bahut dhanaywaad ke tumne kalika ko nazarbandi se mukt kar diya tum nahi jaanti aisa karke tumne hum par kitna bada upkaar kiya hai nahi toh iss vajah se leela ka vivaah bhi toot sakta tha kyunki humare bhai sa ke kehne pe hi samdhi sa iss vivaah ke liye raaji huye the n after listening this jodha understand kalika's father also involve in this conspiracy n she said in her mind...

JODHA - hume nahi pata tha humare apne mama aur rishtedaar hi humare saat aisa karna chahte hai woh humare pati ka apmaan karna chahte hai aur humara sambhandh todna chahte hai parntu hum unnhe kabhi safal nahi hone denge aur ek baar yeh vivaah sampan ho jaaye toh hum inn sabko dhand denge n she looked her mami n said...

JODHA - mami sa dhanaywaad ki koi aavashkta nahi hai leela humari behan aur hum usske vivaah mai koi adhchan nahi aane denge aap chinta mat kijiye Maheshwari smiled n said...

Maheshwari - tum bahut acchi ho jodha hum tumse ek aur vinnati karna chahte hai tum toh jaanti ho ki tilak samahroh mai tilak ki rasam badhu ki badi behan aur jijasa karte hai aur leela ki sirf tum hi badi behan ho toh kya tum aur shenshah yeh rasam karoge n jodha node in yes but in her mind she thought...

JODHA - kaise log hai yeh apni chaal mai apne parivaar ko bhi shaamil kar liya hai yadi mami sa sab kuch jaante huye bhi unka saat de rahi hai toh innko bhi hum dhand dene se picche nahi hatenge n maheshwari voice break her thought process n she looked her...

Maheshwari - beta hum jaante the tum mana nahi karogi isiliye humne tumhare liye aur jamai sa ke liye yeh raajvanshi vastra banwaye hai kal tum yahi pehanna n jodha node n ordered maid to bring those cloth in her chember n she asked her mami's permission to leave n left frm there n after coming out frm her chember jodha told maid that put those cloth in storeroom n dnt tell anyone abt this n she thought something n smirked cunningly n went to her mama n asked his permission to take all responsibilities of tilak ceremony arrangements n Bhawani singh thought this will be good for their planning all blame goes to jodha coz she arrange everything in tilak ceremony n break her relation with Jalal n he gv his permission happily without knowing jodha's real plan...


Next Day in ceremony hall all guests n family members entered with proper announcement of their status n all looked surprised with arrangements n decortion with huge throne in centre for groom n bride n all rajvanshi who knws actually wht going to happen in this ceremony smiled happily n waiting for jodha n Jalal's arrival but when gurds start to announce their arrival Devendra singh looked Bhawani singh in anger coz instead of announcing amer's princess n her husband arrival gurds announced Shenshah-e-hind n Mallika-e-Hind's arrival n when they entered all looked them in shock n surprise coz Jodha came in function in her mughal attire she was looking totally different completely mughal mallika n mainawati n bharmal smiled happily at their daughter n son in law their eyes sparkle with proud..

All satands frm their seats n rajvanshi who came there for their insult too stand up frm their seats after looking a powerful aura of around jodha n jalal n without looking anyone Jodha n Jalal went to throne wentn sit there with full royal attitude n with authority Jalal told them all to sit on there places n with same authority jodha ordered to start the ceremony n Devendra singh came near Bhawani singh n said...

DEVENDRA SINGH - yeh sab kya ho raha hai samdhi sa aapne toh kaha tha iss Jalal ko jodha ke pati se jyada koi izzat nahi milegi par yanha toh jodha hi usski mallika banke aayi hai aur sab unnko itna aadar de rahe hai aur hume bhi naa chahte huye usske sammaan mai khada hona pada Bhawani singh looked him with pleading eyes n said..

BHAWANI SINGH - hum khud nahi jaante yeh sab kaise huya samdhi sa humne toh puri tayaari ki thi Maheshwari ne toh jodha ko rajput vastra bhi diye par yeh kyun mughal vastro mai aaye hai hume nahi pata par aap chinta mat kijiye aage wohi hoga jaisa humne tay kiya tha Devendra Singh gv him angry look n sit again on his place...

Leela n Prithvi came n sit together infront pandit n he start rituals of tilak ceremony after completing pooja he asked Yashodhara devi n Maheshwari devi to call bride n groom's big sisters to perform final ritual of Tilak Yashodhara called Prithvi's big cousin sister n her husband as Prithvi was their eldest son they came forward n did tilak to bride n groom n gv them shagun n now Maheshwari devi look at jodha n asked her to do tilak frm Leela's side n jodha smiled n looked pandit n said...

JODHA - pandit ji aapko koi aapatti toh nahi hai n pandit smiled n he said...

PANDIT - aap yeh kaisi baatein kar rahi hai jodha begum yeh toh humara shobhagaya hai jo hume Mallika-e-Hind aur shenshah-e-hind ke haato hai rasam sampan kara rahe hai kripiya karke shenshah aap aur mallika yanha aakar apna sthaan grahan kare aur yeh shubh karye sampan kare jodha looked Jalal for his permission n he node in yes n both did tilak ritual with smile on their faces,Devendra singh trying to stop ceremony in anger but Jaswant singh stop him n told him to pretend happy they will talk abt this later..after finishing tilak ceremony dancers n singers gv their performances n all enjoyed function except some rajvanshis coz jodha ruined their plan completely...

In bhawani singh chember all sitting for silently n looked eachother with anger in their eyes when suddenly Devendra singh stood up frm his place n start shouting on bhawani singh...

Devendra Singh - bhawani singh ji hume yakeen nahi ho raha hai ki aapki ek jara si galati se humari sari yojana khraab ho gayi aap kaise jodha ko rasam ki tayyari ki jimmedaari saup sakte the kanhi aap humare saat koi khel toh nahi khel rahe bhawani singh looked him in shock n said...

Bhawani Singh - samdhi sa aap aisa kaise keh sakte hai bharosa kijiye humne yeh jaan bhujhkar nahi kiya tha humne toh socha tha yadi jodha sab tayyari karegi toh asani se Jalal ke apmaan ka dosh jodha aur amer pe aa jaayega aur unka nata toot jaayega humara bharosa kijiye hum abhi bhi koi na koi raasta nikal leenge Devendra singh looked him in anger...

Devendra Singh - aapko abhi bhi lagta hai koi raasta milega toh yeh aapki sabse badi galatfemi hai aaj tilak rasam mai jo sammaan jodha ki vajah se uss Jalal ko mila hai usske baad woh jodha aur amer ko kabhi galat nahi samjhega toh Jalal ko apmaanit karne ka aur jodha Jalal ka rishta todne ka khayaal apne dimaag se nikaal dijiye aur ab yeh vivaah nahi hoga humne jiss shrat pe iss sambandh ko haan kaha tha aap woh shrat puri nahi kar paaye bhawani singh looked him in horror n in pleading tone he said...

Bhawani singh - aisa mat kahiye samdhi sa aap yeh sambandh nahi tod sakte humari beti ki zindagi barbaad ho jaayegi yadi yeh vivaah nahi huya toh hum aapke haath jodte hai paanv padte hai n he about to touch his feet but Devendra singh took one step backword n said...

Devendra singh - ab kuch nahi ho sakta hai aapko yeh sab pehale sochna chahiye tha tab jab uss jodha ko tilak ki tayyari saupi thi ab rakhiye apni kuwari beti ko sada apne ghar pe after listening this maheshwari start crying n she start pleading to Yashodhara devi with folded hand...

Maheshwari - samdhan sa aap toh ek maa hai aapki bhi do betiya hai kripya karke samdhi sa ko samjhayiye na ke woh yeh vivaah na tode humari beti ka jeevan barbaad na kare n Yashodhara looked her n said.,.

Yashodhara devi - hum kuch nahi kar sakte hai ranisa yadi humare bas me hota toh hum kabhi bhi iss sambandh ko tootane nahi dete parntu Maharaj ke aadesh ke aage hum vivash hai hume shama kar dijiye n she turned her back n maheshwari devi start pleading to Devendra singh when someone opened door with strong push n all got 440 volts shock after looking person who standing at door...

To Be Continued...

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