RaVika OS: 'Major Revelation' - Page 2

Glad to hear there will be a continuation to this.. can't even express how happy since how good your previous OS and this one have been...

Btw - all salutes and so happy for you that you are serving the country by being a doctor and doing so well..

Originally posted by: docritu99

Jyoti u r such a sweetheart..
I was kindda avoiding writing but this idea was so irresitable and tempting I couldn't control penning it down.. I was already sure u guys will love it.. This one marriage proposal has the potential to clear out everything..😆
Ravi Devika NiVi all shock , Riya Rock... 😆

M glad I was able to convey their emotions and u enjoyed reading them..

Honestly when I was writing this I was thinking about our discussion on my last story.. The idea of getting them married was used in the show.. Remember..?? Though in a slightly different way.. this same thing inspired me to write thinking what if this time also something like this is telecasted.. And I began writing..

Ravi getting drunk is actually so lame and boring.. 😆

Thanks for liking and appreciating my idea and my creation..


WWooh.. Wooh.. Hold on dear.. So many questions.. U r firing like bullets.. I will sury be back with all ur answers in next part..

Till then njoy the Show..

Yes marriage is always the trump card in ekta soaps 😆 and in this case u used it perfectly to clear so many confusions from both Devika and Ravi's side at one go 😃


cant wait for your next part now .. glad to know u will write the next part

Originally posted by: LordRiddler

Glad to hear there will be a continuation to this.. can't even express how happy since how good your previous OS and this one have been...

Btw - all salutes and so happy for you that you are serving the country by being a doctor and doing so well..

Thank u so much dear..

Originally posted by: jyoti06

Yes marriage is always the trump card in ekta soaps😆 and in this case u used it perfectly to clear so many confusions from both Devika and Ravi's side at one go 😃


cant wait for your next part now .. glad to know u will write the next part

Will try posting it as soon as I can..

Well the ideas are already floating in my mind..😆

Wow
This seems interesting
Smart move I'll say
One marriage proposal which has the power to set everything on terms
Ioved your idea

Now I really want to see the same thing on show also
It will be very interesting
And if I Am not wrong that will be Ravika's 4th wedding 😆

Needless to say u are an excellent writer and I loved each and every line of this write up
Very beautiful description of surroundings and emotions and everything
The first para only blown away my heart

Now i am so happy to kno you are going to continue this
Plz I want to kno Ravi's reaction
Do continue soon

I am becoming more impatient and greedy now a days

Originally posted by: lalli36

Wow
This seems interesting
Smart move I'll say
One marriage proposal which has the power to set everything on terms
Ioved your idea

Now I really want to see the same thing on show also
It will be very interesting
And if I Am not wrong that will be Ravika's 4th wedding 😆

Needless to say u are an excellent writer and I loved each and every line of this write up
Very beautiful description of surroundings and emotions and everything
The first para only blown away my heart

Now i am so happy to kno you are going to continue this
Plz I want to kno Ravi's reaction
Do continue soon

I am becoming more impatient and greedy now a days

Aww thank u so much lalli..
Ur comments always make my day.. M so glad u like it..

How come 4th wedding..??
I no their 2 marriages only.. I myself want Cv's to try out something new like this one.. But let's hope to get something better than this to witness..

Yupp m going to continue this one.. But its just that m not getting much time these days..
I'll try to continue asap.. I have whole plot ready in my head just need some time to pen it down..