Ye kya hua!!!! - A Preekar Os

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Heya folks!!!! Lots of discussions about preekar kiss article...i thought why not write an os on that. Its my first preekar os so bear with me. Hope u all will have fun reading it.

YEH KYA HUA!!!!!

Sumo and bhaiya werent at talking terms. Bade papa bought the land on which PCT was built and asked bhaiya to hand over the papers to Sumo. Sumo can restart her catering business. Bhaiya was overjoyed , he rushed to Tiwari Killa with legal papers. PCT demolition had buried him in deep guilt. I had seen him dying a thousand deaths each day. He barely talked, immersed himself deep neck in work, avoided everyone like plague. My heart broke seeing him in this state. These papers were like a ray of hope for him(only for him) . He felt sumo will forgive him. I dont understand why he believed that Sumo will accept them. He knew her well enough, she values her self respect more than anything. She was strong-willed independent woman not a charity case. I didnt expect the unexpected knowing well that it was bound to happen. Sumo was furious seeing these papers. She clearly stated that my brother and bade papa can go to hell!! She doesnt need their charity after they mercilessly destroyed her dreams. Ouch it hurts!!!! Yeah that was too much for my brother. Both of them were hot-headed. Why didnt God send them to earth with warning," HIGHLY INFLAMMABLE!!!! Handle with Care." humphh...They were now mad at each other and refused to talk.
Arey yaar!! U guys are always concerned with bhaiya's love story..mera kya?? *pouts* So now lets start with my Adhuri Prem Kahani. Lemme remind u prem only from my side...hum uske ishq me fanaa ho gye, jaalim ko iski khabar bhi na hui! Hey!! Its rude to laugh at someone's misery. Hmmm so I texted Preeti.

Me: Hi!!! Meet me at 12pm in coffee house.

Preeti- Sorry yar, abhi meri nail art classes hain...not possible
Urghhh!! Ye aur iski stupid nail art classes. Hamesha mere pyar ki dushman ban jati hain

Me: Plzzz yar , its urgent. Bhai aur sumo ke bare me baat krni hai.

Preeti: Di ke bare me?? Ok I'll be there.
Yoohoo!! Love u Sumo. U r the best. Teri behen ko bulane ke liye tera naam hi kafi hai. *chuckles*

I picked my best shirt. Shampooed my hair. Yeah bhaiya once told me I looked cute with that hairdo. Lemme tell u a secret *whispers* actually Bhaiya looks damn hot when he flips back his hair. *frowns* "Kya??...Dont give me that look. Cant I admire my handsome brother?" I know most of u must be fangirling over my bro. *rolls eyes* Nobody is interested in listening my story. * fakes anger* Before u all interrupted, where was I?? Haan...after spending a couple of hours with my unmanageable hair. God!! How do people handle this. I prefer my jelled hair. "Ab kya hua??...I know I take time to get ready just like girls but not everyone is blessed with Greek God looks like my bro!! *snaps fingers* Dreaming about bhai??...back to earth ladies I was finally ready , checked in mirror and patted myself. "Pushkar Malhotra you look cute." *grins widely* It was almost 12:30 pm , still no sight of her. I ordered a cappuccino for myself.

Kisi shayar ki ghazal, dream girl
Kisi jheel ka kanval, dream girl
Kahin to milegi, kabhi to milegi
Aaj nahin to kal


Someone snapped fingers at me...how long did I zone out?
Pushkar...kaha khoye ho?? she said making herself comfortable on seat. My dream girl was sitting right in front of me looking stunningly beautiful in yellow anarkali.
"Tumhare khayalo me." I muttered to myself *dreamy eyes*



"Ummm kuch kaha tumne??" she asked with confused look



I shook my head. "Pagal ladki kuch ni samjhti hai"
"Bolo kyu bulaya tha mujhe?? Di ke bare me kya baat krni hai?" She asked sipping her coffee. "Yaar bhaiya aur sumo ek dusre se baat krne ko ready ni hain. Dono families me bhi itni tension ho gyi hai. Samjh ni aa rha sab kaise thik karu" I replied getting frustated with my bro n friend

"I think we should hire some goons. Jab di ko gunde pareshan karenge to shravan definitely unhe bachane ayega.I have seen in movies , hero rescues heroine and then they fall in love...cool na!!" she said voice filled with excitement. Awww how cute se looked giving those stupid ideas *stares at her lovingly* "Pushkar you are a gone case now. Ab tujhe uske bakwas ideas pe bhi pyar aa rha hai"
We chatted for a while, still getting no ideas how to resolve their fight. We drove to tiwari killa. I kept stealing glances at her in between. She looked so adorable with a cute pout playing with her hair. Dont know when I leaned on to her , my fingers wiped chocolate cake on her cheek.
"DANGER ZONE ALERT !!" "Control your emotions Pushkar." My inner voice screamed. She looked at me confused. I instantly came back from my fantasies and replied, " Wo chocolate reh gyi thi tumhare face pe". She touched her face and mouthed a thank you. "Thank God!! She was satisfied with my explanation." *sigh of relief*
We reached tiwari killa. Preeti was struggling with her seatbelt. I swear to God I was just helping her unfasten the seatbelt. She turned her head to my side and my lips accidentally brushed her cheeks. Our eyes grew wide...her with shock, mine with pure horror. "Mar gye pushkar..aaj to beta tu gya kaam se" I was too shocked to react. She opened the door, fuming she said," Pushkar ,aaj subah se tum bahut ajeeb behave kar rhe ho...lagta hai tumhara dimag kharab ho gya hai. Ab jab tak wo thik nhi ho jata , mujhse baat mat krna." and she left without a goodbye. *sad face*
Defeated i drove back to malhotra mansion. Why does it always happen with me??..jab kiss karna chahta tha tab kar nhi paya and ab ye ACCIDENTAL KISS!! ...not that I'm complaining. Accidental hi sahi kuch to mila *winks* but yar she is furious. Ab mujhe 3-3 logo ko manana pdega.( sumo, bhai n preeti). Help me Lord!!"
I tuned on to Radio Mirchi...

yeh kya hua, kaise hua, kab hua
kyon hua, jab hua, tab hua
oh chodo, yeh na socho yeh kya hua


Yo bro!! Only you understand my pain...


So how was it?? Menhgayi ka jamana hai so dont waste tomatoes n chappals on me, instead shower your likes and comments..Havent proof read so ignore my typos Waiting for responses...


Hope to meet u soon
Till then take care
Priyam

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Unress

To tell you honestly I dislike Preekar to the core and I wasn't happy about this OS
BUT BUT
When I read this OS and you left me speechless.
What an adorable write up,I went awww and hahaa
How do you manage to write so good?
I am always so lazy and lacking words/ideas and here you are with such amazing OS back to back.
Pushkar was such a cutie here,poor sweetheart here also he lost his lady love because of two angry birds🤣
You are way tooo awesome. Great job!
Do write more masterpieces.
Thank You for the PM.

-Mitali❤️
Edited by SleepyPsycho - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Unress
Priyam, my jaan!🤗
This was a pure treat! Loved the entire flavour here😆

Highly inflammable🤣

That whole second para was mindblowing! Totally fab!🤣

The Hair do thing and Shravan's looks plus Pushkar ka struggle was too good🤣🤣

Love your style here, like you did with the PehlaKhat😆
Awesomeness! (your new name) ⭐️

And lastly, the Accidental kiss! You've put it so much better! Maan gaye boss😎
*Take a bow*

Was grinning throughout 😆😉


The last line:
Ab teeno ko manana padega🤣


Can you do something like this for Ramu Kaka and our Chudail, please? *Pushku puppy face*

Love❤️

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aye haye!
Mera cutesy pushkin! Mila toh bhi accidental kiss 🤣

I loved this Priyam! Especially Pushkar's talks with himself😆
Shampoo ya gel, he looks cute either way!
I could dunk him in Moy coffee!
Edited by orion23 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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priyam!!🤗🤗 i'm in love with this style of your writing! the whole story is filled awesomeness🥳

Maza aagaya! bechara sa pushkar and uske fantasies😆
do write more on these type of concepts

Lots of love
Apeksha❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Artist_Forever



Unress
Priyam, my jaan!🤗
This was a pure treat! Loved the entire flavour here😆

Highly inflammable🤣

That whole second para was mindblowing! Totally fab!🤣

The Hair do thing and Shravan's looks plus Pushkar ka struggle was too good🤣🤣

Love your style here, like you did with the PehlaKhat😆
Awesomeness! (your new name)⭐️

And lastly, the Accidental kiss! You've put it so much better! Maan gaye boss😎
*Take a bow*

Was grinning throughout😆😉


The last line:
Ab teeno ko manana padega🤣


Can you do something like this for Ramu Kaka and our Chudail, please? *Pushku puppy face*

Love❤️



Mahi my love 🤗
I'm on cloud nine now...ur comment made my day *millions of hugs n kisses*
Thank u thank u sooo much ❤️ ❤️
Awesomeness?????...awww M blushing hard
I grinning like a fool reading ur comment...mom thinks mera uparwala mala khali hai 😆
Something on Ramini???...ur wish my command 😳
Thank u once again
Love u
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ApekshaM

priyam!!🤗🤗 i'm in love with this style of your writing! the whole story is filled awesomeness🥳

Maza aagaya! bechara sa pushkar and uske fantasies😆
do write more on these type of concepts

Lots of love
Apeksha❤️


Apeksha 🤗 🤗
Thank u sooo much ❤️
I actually suck in writing emotional stuffs ...so ab yhi likhna pdta hai 😆
Glad u liked it...
U promised epilogue of drunk sumo...yaad h na??
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: orion23

Aye haye!

Mera cutesy pushkin! Mila toh bhi accidental kiss🤣

I loved this Priyam! Especially Pushkar's talks with himself😆
Shampoo ya gel, he looks cute either way!
I could dunk him in Moy coffee!


Thank u sooo much zoya 🤗
Pushkar is such a cutie 😳 ...i enjoyed writing this os
Glad that u had fun reading it 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Priyam 🤗 meri chand loved it , the style of writing was amazing . Bechara pushkaar do write more on preekar really enjoyed it ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sapphire3


Apeksha 🤗 🤗
Thank u sooo much ❤️
I actually suck in writing emotional stuffs ...so ab yhi likhna pdta hai 😆
Glad u liked it...
U promised epilogue of drunk sumo...yaad h na??



@bold- mera bhi same haal hai yaara!😆
@RED- Haan ji bilkul yaad hai 75% work hogaya hai bas last part likhna baaki hai (vacations khatam hogaye mere and i'm not getting proper time to write 😔) will finish soon and post jald hi.. pakka😉

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