FF Kismat &Part 4 on page 5

Bani:Elder daughter of Nishikant Dixit.A hardworking and carefree girl she knows how to live life to the fullest but she is a rude girl too.A neglected child.In her house she is a quite person but outside the house she is all time bindaas girl.Never shows her concern for anyone but she loves her family very much tht she can do anything for them but she never admit.In short a complicated personality.U can never judge her she can do anything

Pia:Middle daughter of Nishikant dixit.She is intelligent matured and a clever girl who knows wht to do when to do.She can change sides easily.She is Kiran dixit's ideal daughter.She is good in studies she is good in everything

Rano:Intellegen among all siblings she is apple of Kiran Dixit's eyes.She is close to Bani.A balanced personality studious and funloving.She is also good in studies and obidient one

Pushkar:Nishikant dixit youngest childd.He is apple of everyone's eye even bani pamper him alot.Fun loving not too much into studies but an inteligent student.

Nishikant Dixit:An industrialist.A person who prefers his friend then his family.Always listen to other and go against his children and never listen his Chalden's Point of view.He loves all his children except for bani as Bani always standin front of him and she never obey his orders

Kiran:Nishikant dixit's Wife.A housewive with old traditions and value not very much educated.She loves her all children she think Bani is very rude to everyone.

Dadi:Bani's dadi who loves Bani but she never take bani's side if Bani is right

Dada:Bani's dada more like hitler.A very strict man who always think boys are superior then girls so he doesnt love Bani rano and pia.

Raashi:Bani's uncle's daughter(Cousin)She lives with her papa and maa in Dubai. Dada loves her alot

Ranveer:Nishikant's brother.He lives in DUbai and handle dubai office raashi's father

Purva:Ranveer's wife She loves her husband and child

Saahil:Nishikant's younger brother.married to Anu.Loves his wife
Krishna:Saahil's daughter.A very obidient daughter.Admires Bani's guts but at the same time she think bani's behaviour is not good

Jigs:Bani's BUa.She hate Kiran and this is the reason she mostly interfere in bani pia rano and pushkar's lifebut Bani never let her interfere in Bani's life.Jigs always say bad things abt bani and this is the reason of misunderstanding b/w bani and her parents

Jai Walia:Son Of Udhay Walia.Bani's family friend and a grp mate.He knws Bani very well and secretly he loves her
Udhay WAlia:An industrialist Nishikant's partner and best friend.He knows everything abt nishikant's life.He is a caring person
Gayu:Jai's youngest sister Bani's friend
Meera:Jai's younger sis but she is studying in the same class with jai and bani

Anjali,kavya,Angad and kripa:Bani's friends at college who knows everything abt her

Storyline:
Basically it is bani's story.She lives in a conservative joint family.Bani wants to study further but her dada being conservative didnt allowed her,But he gave her permission to study further when bani agreed to get engaged to the person he have choosen for her,the guy is none other then her friend jai who is already in love with bani but will bani fall in love with him yes or noo????Will Jai give her the love and support which her family didnt gave???

plz do comment.I know I m not a good writer but i'll post 1st part very soon plz let me know is it good or bad 😊

Plz do comment its a request😊

Another thing I dont think so FF title is suitable if u can suggest me a good one

Rida

WOw great start!!!!!


cant wait to see what happens next!!!

Angad and JAi together 😳

please cont soon
thanks
sanju

Part 1
Its night time stars are shining in the sky.We hear sound of typing keyboard.Then a room appeared which have pink coloured wall.There we see back of a girl with headphone in her ears unaware of her surrounding and very busy doing her computer work.Then a middle ages lady enters her room its none other then Kiran dixit.Kiran:Bani...Bani...Bani...Still Bani is very busy to notice her mom standing behind her.Kiran dixit was now mad on her that bani have not answered her on time.She took off her headphones.Now Bani turned around her face showed clear irritaion Bani(Rude):What was this mom Kiran:Bani beta cant u stop this habit of using internet at late night Bani:Mom I dont like when u call me beta and no I cant change myslef as long as I m not wrong I will not change myself And u shud go to sleep as its really very late.Kiran:Bani just shut it down if ur dada will see u using net at this hr he will get angry.Bani:Mom for once dont remind me that our dada live s with us and mom please dont interfere Bani took those headphone and again she put them on and started listen songs and downloading some software.Kiran left the room very angrily muttering something which was not heard by bani

Next morning Bani got up on the time got ready and headed downstairs there she saw her whole family in the living room.all youngsters were standing and all elders were sitting on couches.Bani crossed living room and went to kitchen she herself prepared her breakfast and had it alone then she cleaned up all the mess.Bani went into living room suddenly her phone rang and she picked it up.Bani:Yeah what happend Gayu.....Yeah I knew this I knew I m really very happy I got 80%.Bani directly went to her mom Bani(Excitedly):mom mom I got 80% Kiran:Whts there to be excited waisai bhi u arnt studying further Bani:Excuse me mom this is my life and I will decide weather I want to study or not and I will study Dada:In our family girls do not study after school Bani:Dada I want to study further Dada:I m sorry Bani was abt to argue but then her mother stopped her from saying anything Bani left the room with angry face Dada:yeh larki bohat batameez hai

At WM
Jai Udhay Gayu annd meeera were having breakfast.Udhay:Jai my boy I have choosen a girl for u.Jai choked his juice which he was drinking Jai:What papa Its too early Udhay:Jai I m talking abt engagement and U can marry her after stuying Jai:Ok who is the girl Udhay:U know her her name is bani Jai:Papa Bani meera and Gayu were also shocked hearing bani's name Udhay:So beta whts ur decision Jai:Jaisa aap theek samjhein. Udhay:I'll talk to nishikant waisai aaj tumhara result announce huwa tha na Jai:Yeah I got 82% and meera got 79%. Udhay:good good so any future plan Jai:Yeah I want to study further Meera:Same here dad Udhay:ok ok u can study jitna u both want to Jai:U r the best.Udhay left

At office
Udhay:Nishikant I wanted to talk to u Nishikant:Haan bol Udhay:Nishinkant baba se aur tujh se dono se baat karni thi Nishikant:Then we shud go to papa's cabin.Nishikant and Udhay went to dada's cabin Dada:Arre u two kuch kaam tha kia Udhay:Ji baba I need to talk to U Dada:Yeah go ahead.Udhay was now very nervous as he considered dada like his father he satyed quite for a while when nishikant gestured him to say whtever he wants to.Udhay:Actually:Baba I have choosen a girl for jai....,UMmmm Actually mujhe bani bohat pasand hai jai k liye so agar aap is rishte k liye razzi hoon Nishikant and dada were more then happy to hear this news Dada(Happily):I m more then happy with this proposal. and its a yes from us

In the evening
Nishikant and Dada entered house both were very happy with udhay's proposal.ND went to KD in his room Kd:kia baat hai U r looking very happy.ND:Kush hone ki baat hai tabhi tou U know Today Udhay came to me and baba and asked Bani's hand for jai.KD:And Aap ne kia jawaab dia ND:Offcourse I have said yess KD:Mujhe nahi lagta bani will agree to this as she is very stuborn ND:Yeah I knw she is very stubborn pata nahi kia hoga iska har kisi se panga lena and us ke upper us ka mis behaviour and usse haan kehna hi parega bohatho gaee hai us ki man maani

In Dada and dadi's room dada told everything to dadi and dadi was also happy with this.Dada then asked KD to call Bani.Kd went to bani's room KD:Bani ur dadaji is calling u Bani:mom i'll come later as I have some work KD:Bani its not the way to behave go to ur dada;s room Bani(Grtting her teeth):Fi9.Bani went to her dada's room she knocked the door Dada:Bani u dont have to knock the door Bani(Thinking):Hmmm daal main kuch kaala hai...(Outloud):Yess dadaji tell me what you want to talk to me Dada:Actually humne tumhara larka dekh lia hai Bani:WHat larka kiska larka I mean kia aap mujhe bataeingay wht are u thinking exactly Dada:Bani we want u to get engaged Bani:I m sorry Dadaji but I Cant Dada:Bani soch lo..Bani:There is nothing to think and I want to study further if u can say me no without thinking then I can do the same Dada:Ok bani if u want to study further then u'll have to get engaged to the boy of our chice Bani started thinking Bani(Thinking):Bani One day u have to get engaged to someone tou aaj hi sahii issi bahaane i'll be able to study further...(Outloud):Ok I agree dadaji but plz dont expect anything else from me KD(Smiling):kia poocho gi woh larka koun hai Bani(Not at all concerened):Not at all interested KD:He is ur friend Jai Bani was now surely shocked Bani:WHatt Jai..Jai walia KD(Smiling):Yeah exactly.Bani was very shocked tht she left the room without answering back

Bani went to her rooom and now she was lost in her thoughts Bani(Thinking):Jai ne haan kaisai kii...what the hell is happening why am I born in this family...oH no Now I cant do anything....Lekin bani think atleast u r getting engaged to ur friend who knws u and whom u know...But still dadaji didnt do any thing good...URrrghhh this family.After sometime KD called bani for dinner.Bani:Dekhiye mom I m not hungry so plz dont bother asking me abt my food and akk now U all can eat peacefully waisai bhi I dont like to have my meals with family. u can eat it if i'll feel hungry i'll have it later

thanks a lot for making meera jai walias sister
n plz continue

Originally posted by: dalia123

thanks a lot for making meera jai walias sister
n plz continue

Yaar its ok waisai she shud tie rakhi on jai's wrist in KS

anyway I'll try to continue soon 😊

great start and i hope bani will also start loving jai and pls dont bring anyone between them
pls continue soon

pls continue soon it sound diff.. and want to see a funny bani

davia

Hey great start 😉
wow this Bani has some attitude i hope she will fall for Jai 😳 one day 😕

plz cont

Taj

wonderful beginning pls cont soon.....
I think apropriate name to your ff would be
Kutumb -the destinity of a family
as so far what i have read it looks like a family drama and destiny of each and every member linked to that family
pls cont soon.......

hi,

nice part plssssss continue soon im waitin 4 the next part to see wat happens to Jai & Bani

great story

👏