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Posted: 9 years ago
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my other half... 😳
beautifull, fantastic, fantabulous, amazing, superrr se uparrr
aur ... i cant really describe in words... i got teary eyed while reading it... bravo to you yar
waiting for another fabulous piece of work from you😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: zubi_23

<font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="4">my other half...😳</font>

<font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="4">beautifull, fantastic, fantabulous, amazing, superrr se uparrr</font>
<font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="4">aur ... i cant really describe in words... i got teary eyed while reading it... bravo to you yar</font>
<font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="4">waiting for another fabulous piece of work from you😊</font>
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Thank u so much 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Charvi...beautiful. Urmila did go through a drastic change and you portrayed it in such a great poem. You said that you might not be able to put all of Urmila's feelings, but I say you did, in their full form and essence. Keep writing, dear, you'll do great things in life!

Gowri
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanku so much gowri
I am happy u liked the same
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Charvi!! This is amazing sweets!👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Charvi dear !!!!! 👏
I am just speechless !!!!! 😳
This is the most beautiful poem that I have read in life and I am saying true dear !!!!! 👏
How beautifully u conveyed the feelings of Urmila when lakshman is away from her !!!! 😃
U have great talent of poetry dear !!!! 😃
OUTSTANDING !!!!! 👏
I loved it to the core. 😳

KEEP WRITING MORE DEARIE !!!!! 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sumi-19

Charvi dear !!!!! 👏
I am just speechless !!!!! 😳
This is the most beautiful poem that I have read in life and I am saying true dear !!!!! 👏
How beautifully u conveyed the feelings of Urmila when lakshman is away from her !!!! 😃
U have great talent of poetry dear !!!! 😃
OUTSTANDING !!!!! 👏
I loved it to the core. 😳

KEEP WRITING MORE DEARIE !!!!! 😃


Thanks a lot sumi 😳
Me happy
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Posted: 9 years ago
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its truly amazing⭐️ 👍🏼
chars u are a wonderful writer
and the way u conveyed urmila's feelings is simply wow👏 👏 👏
her pain, her strength is just perfectly depicted such that one can truly feel for her👏
its so emotional yet so powerful👏 👏⭐️ 👍🏼
keep writing like this always🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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@shivi di

Thanks a lot di

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