what she must have thought .. urmilla's views a poem

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Sacrifice is a small word to define what she must have done , what she must have gone through .
I may not have been capable to encapsulate what could have been her feelings but a small try to show her inner turmoil .
TAKE ME , OH WINDS
Question me , I would reply
Ask me , I would supply
Speak to me , my words shall come down
I might roar to the world but my heart still rests in the town
The town where the part of me resides
The reason of my life , my eternal pride
My candle , which eliminates the dark
His face so gentle , his eyes having the spark

Oh mighty , let me walk to him
Let me face his troubles and move along path dark and grim
Let me take all his pain
And shower my love as gentle rain
Let me melt in the water he drinks
Let me mix with those inks
That colour the dress he adornes
Oh winds , take me away from this huge palace , these lawns
And drop me amidst ferns , misses and fawns
Let me mingle with the soft breeze that touches his face
Let me match the steps of melodies he plays
Let me swing around that little place
And flatter my feathers at a steady pace
And gaze direct into his eyes
Eternal , beautiful and where deep within love lies
But alas ! My god what did I say
How could be a barrier in his way
How could I even wish the same
This is a matter of selfishness , a shame
He belongs to the world and not just mine
Created to uplift the world by the divine
And why should I forget the role , I have to play
How could I from my duties sway
" be brave , be strong , be the support , be the strength "
Why did this promise such a drastic change underwent
I cannot speak to him , but take my message , my prayers along
To the place they actually belong
Let it be done on my behalf
Dropping my feelings on the feet of my other half

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Charvi <3
This is amazing girl :)
Keep up the good work :)
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Thanku @jaishree di
@srutha di
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charvi loved it❤️
fantastic do write more poems👏😃
Edited by sugunmanas - 9 years ago
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Beautiful dear, I loved the last lines most.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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OMG , Charvi . This is sooo sooo Beautiful !
Loved it . Anything I say would be an understatement .
I am speechless ...If you dnt mind , Can I send this to yukti ?

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Originally posted by: DilMereSuntaNhi

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">OMG , Charvi . This is sooo sooo Beautiful !
Loved it . Anything I say would be an understatement .
I am speechless ...If you dnt mind , Can I send this to yukti ?</font>



Thank you so much di 😊
Sure you can
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Charvi beautiful dear👏

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Originally posted by: gmgi

Charvi beautiful dear👏


Thanku so much 😊
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Awesome charvi beautifully written thx for sharing 🤗❤️

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