Kapil and sumona ff updated

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Kapil 
Sumona ff
On a relaxing Sunday morning Sumona was sitting in her bedroom with a cup of coffee in one hand and a novel in the other. She was so engrossed in reading that she didn't realise her phone was ringing.
Yaar!! Ye pagal bengalan phone kyun nahi utha rahi' said Kapil after trying to call her for the third time.He was about to call her again when suddenly his rang. Seeing her name flashing on the screen a cute "dimplevali" smile was formed on his face. He picks up the call 
(Phone conversation)
Kapil:hello
Sumona : sorry sorry sorry sorry ...I am really sorry sharmaji. Voh main book padh rahi thi ...aur mujhe phone nahi sunai diya...sorryyy
She said all this in one go.
K: Are saas toh lele.its ok babes ,phone hi toh uthaya.
S:haan nahi matlab ...sorry ..bas
K : chill sumona I didn't feel bad at all . Balki tumhari callee tune sunkar purani yaade taaza ho gai..
He started singing
...suraj hua madham chaan jalne laga
Sumona on other side of phone started blushing .Her cheeks started turning red
hmmm' said sumona as she couldn't think of anything
Kapil also did a naughty  hmmm in response as he imagined her reaction to this.
Sumona tries to change the topic
S:Acha phone kyun kiya tha?
K : oh haan ,I have a ver big surprise for u .
S:really!! What?
K:aaj subah mujhe london se phone aaya tha aur
S: aur kya 
K:mera 
Sumona: haan
K: mera
S :mera kya ?? She said in an irritated manner.
K:mera wax statue banene vala hai Madame Tussaud's museum ke Delhi vale branch main.
Sumona was absolutely stunned
S :Are u serious? ..really...wooow sharmaji! Congratulations!Mujhe aaj hi party chahiye.
K:Aaj din main thoda busy hoon
S :no sharmaji..no bahanas .Aap toh apna birthday bhi nahi manate.Iske liye toh party banti hai
K:birthday nahi mante toh kya...hamare jaise log paida nahi
S :asseble hue the ...I know...jo bhi  I want a party 
K ohk baba..aaj raat ko chale

To be continued
I hope u guys like it..its my first attempt
And ps do suggest a tittle also


S:yes aaj raat ko aap se milkar aapko ek tight hug karke congratulate karna hai.Aap soch nahi sakte ki main aap ke liye kitni khush hun.I am so proud of u sharmaji.
K: ohh really...doesn't matter atleast gice me a wifi kiss
S : shut up kapil shaam ko milte hain
K :Fine..pick me up from office at 8.
S: what happened to ur car?
K:are tune itni zyada bezati karva karva ke badi car kharidi hai. Usko logon ko dikha toh . (kapil said laughing)
S:sachi sachi batao ..why don't u want to drive? Back pain?? (In a serious tone)
K: How do u understand  everything?haan hai pain thoda sa.But pls don't cancel the plan because of that.
S : are u sure?
K:yes
S:par ek shart hai..aaj ke baad propwr exercise.
K:hmmm ( kapil said making a baby face)
S:good boy.Ok then bye sharmaji shaam ko milte hai
K: bye..my tv vali wife

Sorry gor the small upfaye..quite busy these days...will update soon
Thank u for the appreciation.. It means a lot






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Posted: 7 years ago
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Great attempt yraa :-) ," hmare jaise log paida nhi assemble hote h " brought back cnwk memories ..,great going ..do update fast 
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kashish95

Great attempt yraa :-) ," hmare jaise log paida nhi assemble hote h " brought back cnwk memories ..,great going ..do update fast 

Thank u ao much ..will update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Good concept 
I liked it 
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Unfair ! Mujhe PM kyun nahi kiya aur apna no. Bhi nahi diya to sms you ;)
Anyway, Haayyeee rockstar kya baat hai first attempt is awesome and I love how realistic the story seems & also the fact that kappu shares things with sumona :)

Looking forward for mooorrreee and jaldddiii

Lots of Love :)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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hey read your post...really likd it. looking forward for the nxt part.đź‘Ź
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kappumyfav

Unfair ! Mujhe PM kyun nahi kiya aur apna no. Bhi nahi diya to sms you ;)
Anyway, Haayyeee rockstar kya baat hai first attempt is awesome and I love how realistic the story seems & also the fact that kappu shares things with sumona :)

Looking forward for mooorrreee and jaldddiii

Lots of Love :)

I
Thank u so muchđź’”
Lots of love to u too
Next time pm pakka

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Very good start
We are getting more writers on the forum
Best of luck for your work
And lastly if it doesnt bother you much then pm me becoz i am always eager to read on KaSum