LaakhAm TS 'Tu hain kar ya na kar tu h mera lakhan'

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Hello everyone 😊 here I am with my third story on lakham , I miss them sooo much ,
It is a two short , and next part will be last one
Here is the small intro of my os
Thakur family is same as was in begusarai1 a little change I had added that they all live together in badi haveli .
Now , poonam is changed she is daughter of ragunandan sooryavanshi who is the newly appointed collector of district begusarai .


PART 1
,Phulan and rest of the male members are there in the hall of Badi haveli
Phulan : ye collector ka khuch karna padega
Mithlesh : papa , ham to kah rahe h , do goli daag dete h , na rahega baas na bajegi bansuri ...
Priyom : nhi bhaiya , ek bridge kai liye kisi ki jaan nhi le saktey ham log
Phulan : han mithlesh , priyom sahi kah raha h , apne gusse ko thoda kabu mai rakho ,
Mithlesh give his million dollar expression of annoyance .
Bhushan : waise bhi bhaiya , sune h bahut jigar wala h darta nhi h Marne se
Mithlesh : arrey , tum khuch bologey bailbudhhi ki bas aise hi khade rahogey tum bhi khuch sujhao do
Lakhan who was quietly standing at the corner in black kurta with his signature beads ,and black ring in his last finger said
Lakhan : bade papa , jo Marne se nhi darta h , uski koi na koi to kamzori hoti h , ham bas us kamzori ka pata lga le , phir dekhiyega khud chal kai aayega is haweli mai , aur papers par sign karega
Mithlesh : achaaa , to ab ye mahaparush contract contract clear karwa kai hamko dengey ...
Phulan : mithlesh ,,,, ham ko lagta h lakhan sahi kah raha h , lakhan tum ko Jo thek lge karo par koi khoon kharaba nhi chahiye hame
Lakhan : ji bade papa

Later at night
Lakhan was in his jeep resting his head on the sit , eyes close with a small winning smile at his face , just to disturb him by his action priyom interupted him ,
Priyom : ka baat h , aaj bailbudhi Muski ( smile ) mar raha h
Lakhan : abey , tum na ..., khuch nhi bas bade papa ki uuu ka kahte h hain priblem ( problem ) ka uupay ( solution) nikal liye h
Priyom : arrey , mere raja!!! ka haal nikal liya ree bailbudhi ne ,
Lakhan look at him with full attitude
Lakhan : ab to wo kal hi pta chalega
Priyom put his hand on lakhan's shoulder and said
Priyom : tum jab jab aise bole ho na .. to bura fase ho mere raja ...and laughing he said to soch lo
Lakhan remove his hand , and with annoyance he said
Lakhan : saalee , utro neeche
And start pushing him and finally succeed to get him out of the jeep
Priyom : abey suno too..soch lo pachtaogey betaa..
Lakhan didn't listen and run his jeep away


Next day
Its around 11:00. a.m , poonam was going to parlour to get ready , with her friends , she reached the place and one of her friend told their driver to get some things and driver does that
and just before poonam can enter in the parlour , she suddenly feel a heavy force which drag him and before she can come out from this kind of sudden action and get back her senses , she found herself in a jeep and she turn her eyes to the driver seat just to find a intense eyes as his face was half
covered with the scarf upto his nose , and in his right hand a black ring was doing nothing but just to enhancing and those eyes are constantly looking at her , poonam wasn't able to take her eye off from his intense deep one , but some breakers on the road, give a jerk to the jeep and poonam came back into real world , and when sge was about to say something , lakhan put a piece of cloth on her mouth which was chloroform init making poonam unconscious .
Lakhan come at badi haveli , leaving poonam in the jeep , he came inside the drawing room
Lakhan ; bade papa ab uu collector khuch nhi bolega , chup chap hamara kaam karega
Mithlesh : kyun apne aisa kaun sa teer Mara h jra farmaiyi
Lakhan : ham ne uski beti ka apharan ( kidnap) kar liya h ab jab tak uu sab khuch saaf nhi kar deta , uski beti yahin rahegi
Phulan : hmm , thek h ab koi aur rasta choda nhi tha us collector ne , bahut paisa lag chuka h hamara is project mai , lakhan us ladki ko badi haveli mai hi rakhna abhi
And phulan leaves from there
Lakhan : uu , bahar jeep mai h
Mithlesh : to ander kahe nhi laye
Lakhan : uu , behosh h to kaise... le kai aate
Mithlesh hit his forehead
Priyom : arrey to ham leke aate h
Mithlesh :yeh dekho , ek h ( pointing towards lakhan ) jahan se sharafat ka Jo nadi h wo yahin se nikalta h , aur ek ye ( pointing towards priyom ) inka to khair koi jod hi nhi rah gya h awaragardi mai ...
Mithlesh calls Kali their servant and ask her to get poonam inside and he direct priyom to lock poonam in the room at terrace .
Poonam is now in a room , priyom was about to lock the room from outside but his mobile rings .
Priyom took out his mobile
Priyom : arrey priya ka phone
He picks up the call
Arrey jaaneman kya baat h aaj khud hi ...before he can complete priya starts yelling at him
Priya : agar 5 min mai tum yahan nhi mile to phir kabhi apni shakal mat dikhana hame
Priyom ; nhi nhi suno !! Ham aa rahe h
And priyom literally runs downstairs and kick his bike .

After an hour poonam got up and found herself in a store room type place She got up and Cleans her clothes using her hand and she was wondering were the hell she was , she was lost in her thoughts when a heavy manly voice enter into her ears , she followed that voice and come at the window , she starts peeping out and found a tall young man who was talking to someone on mobile ( No points for guessing who is it , )
Lakhan : kidhar ho be , bhaiya kab se puch rahe h
Priyom : meri jaan koi bahana bna de , phase pade h thoda
Lakhan : saale , tum se kitni baar kahe h kii...
Priyom : acha acha abhi baat sambhal lo waise bhi aaj to bahut bada kaam kiye ho , acha ye batao ye ladki kab tak rahegi wahan
Lakhan : bas ek baar uu collector maan jaye phir is ladki ko bhi chod dengey waise bhi bade papa kaun sa isko takleef mai rakengey .chalo acha rakhte h
And lakhan cuts the call , he said to himself its getting very hot today he needs a shower and he walks to his room , on the other hand poonam now know why she is there , she just casually push the door to check whether its looked or not but wowww her luck it wasn't lock at all , she come out and take a 360 turn with a smile she said
Poonam : hmmm , jagah to mast h
She was exploring more of haveli terrace but suddenly she sees her dad from the balcony with police
Poonam : ohhh shit!!! Papa hame le jayengey , arrey yaar hame kahin chupna padega ,!!! Kya kare kya kare
She look at the room in front of her and decide to hide in that room , she goes inside and looking here and there to find a suitable place for her to hide , her eyes followed the path of bathroom , poonam snap and said yes it will be the perfect place , lakhan who had just completed his shower was about to come out of the bathroom, but before that poonam opens the bathroom and within a flash of sec she quickly closes the door lakhan become confuse wat was going on
Lakhan : arrey ye ka ...
Before he can complete his words poonam put her hand on his mouth and looking at the door she said
Poonam :shhh!!! Hamare papa police kai sath aaye h aur agar unhone hame dikh liya to wo hame sath ...and she look at him ooo oo again those pair of eyes which was looking at her with huge amazement she was again lost in his eyes and she realise he is the person who had kidnapped her suddenly she listen some sound outside , she pulls her hand off and put her fingers on her lips gesture showing that to just keep quite to lakhan and she steps Towards the door and eavesdrop on the outside sound
Lakhan look at that mysterious girl who was in green short kurta with black jeans and her right hand filled with colorful bangles and her hair all open a very lightly curled at the end , he wasn't able to get why she don't want to go with dad , she was listing very carefully as if she was the kidnapper and lakhan was his prey , an unknown smile comes on his face after sometime she moved from there as the searchers are gone ,
Poonam : jao check karo gye ki nhi mere papa ,
Lakhan walks towards the door and opens it he took up his kurta and move downstairs , as he come down he found everyone in the hall
Phulan : lakhan wo ladki kahan h ,
Before lakhan can answer , poonam from the upstairs said
Poonam : yahan h ham
Everyone look at her
Mithlesh : ye to bahar ghum rahi h , kya ho kya raha
Poonam : han hamko kisi ne lock hi nhi kiya tha , par acha hua nhi to papa zaror dhond lete hame phir le jate , wo to hamne dekh liya ki papa police ko lekar aaye h isliye ham khud hi chup gye
Everyone was shocked to listen that
Mithlesh : ham samjh pa nhi rahe h ki tum jaanbooj kar kyun kar rahi ho aisa , par tum hamari madad kyun kar rahi ho
Poonam : nhi ham aapki nhi , aap hamari madad kar rahe aap sab
Mithlesh : ab ye kya h , dekhiye madam jra aap saaf saaf samjha dengi ki aap kahna kya chah rahi h
Poonam : aaj hamari shadi si , Jo ham nhi karna chahtey they ham pray kar rage they ki kisi bhi tarah ye shadi ruk jae , aur phir chamatkar hua aur ye ( pointing towards lakhan ) hamko yahan le aae bas itni si baat h
Phulan : tum ko dar nhi lag raha h
Poonam : nhi , aap logo kai bare mai suna h aap log kisi ko faltu mai nhi pareshan kartey thakur h aap log trust kar saktey h aap logo par ,
Mithlesh : bilkul thek suna h , lakhan ise wahan Patna kai pass Jo hamara ghar h wahan shift kar do
Lakhan : Ji bhaiya

Poonam : ek min ek min pls pls hamari baat sun lijiye thakur uncle pls looking at phulan dekhiye police yahan dhoond chuki h hame to dobara yahan nhi ayengey to ye sabse safe jagah h aur pls hame lock karna room mai , ham to khud hi kahin nhi ja rhe h to lock kyun karna ,
Phulan : thek h , tum yahan reh sakti ho , lakhan nazar rakhna tum is ladki par iski zimmaidari tumhare upar h
Poonam ; thank uuu thank u

A week passed , poonam was become fav of badi ammi , she has good bonding with guddi and Maya also
Poonam has to tease and scold priyom about his Casanova character
But she admire lakhan a lot from heart ,
Its late night about 11 pm guddi and poonam are at their room when they listen some noise outside they both come out and found a drunken mithlesh
Mithlesh : saala hamko chadti hi nhi h
Lakhan : han bhaiya ...
And mithlesh is blabbering too much and both priyom and lakhan is supporting him
Poonam and guddi burst out into laugh

Next day
Lakhan was doing exercise on the terrace and poonam who was Wondering in the gallery stops looking at him and start to stare him lovingly resting her head on the wall just then priyom came there
Priyom : kya ho raha h poonam
Poonam : khuch nhi bas tad rahe h lakhan thakur ko , kya dikhtey h kya height h
Priyom pick up the water
Priyom ; sochna bhi mat khuch lakhan h ye lakhan kisi ladki ko bhav nhi deta h
Poonam : hmm , ( putting her both her on her Cheeks ) inka to pata nhi par ham to full lattto hain and she lost in his dreamland suddenly she comes back in real world
Poonam : priyom suno na Bhai , setting karwa do na meri ...
Priyom who was drinking water spilt it out and start coughing ..
Priyom : pagal ho kya
Lakhan : ka kar rahe ho tum dono wahan
Poonam : satyanash priyom ab tad bhi nhi payengey mar jao tum
Wo to bas ham ise bata rahe they ki khuch seekhe aapse , ladkiyon kai aage peeche na ghuma kare , chichora panti chod de , hamko to aise ladke bilkul pasand nhi ham to kisi tall , handsome , Sharif ladke se shadi karengey , ab sun rahe h na meri baat
Lakhan : ee sab hamko kahe bata rahi ho ka ham rishta lagwane wali masi h ka jis se karni h karo
Priyom starts laughing , poonam ; isko to ham maza jarur chakyengey and she sees mithlesh coming towards them in the window glass mirror and an evil idea comes into her mind and she smrik
Poonam : tum dono ko mithlesh bhaiya se khuch seekhna chahiye
Mithlesh who was coming there stops
Poonam continued
Poonam : matlab kya style , kya attitude unko dekh kai thakuroo wali feeling aati , aur unki english to aur bhi gazab aur...
Mithlesh feel so proud
Priyom : bas bas kabhi dharu kai nashe mai dekhna
Poonam : han dekhe h , unko to daru chadhti hi nhi h
Priyom : hahaha , bhaiya to dharu nhi chadhti and start laughing so hard ee lakhan dekho isko batao
Lakhan who was doing push ups
Lakhan : ab hum ka bole ...
And before lakhan can say anything poonam interrupt him
Poonam : ahhh
Lakhan turn his face towards her and found mithlesh is standing behind both of poonam and priyom
Priyom : ka hua
Poonam : khuch nhi bas khuch lag gya tha , han aap kya bol rahe they lakhan thakur
Lakhan stammers hain uu ... Uu ham kah rahe they ki sab khuch to hamne mithlesh bhaiya se hi seekha h , goli kaise chalana h , kaam kaise karna h
Poonam : acha , priyom tumne khuch nhi seekha bhaiya se
Priyom : seekha hai na , ladki ko kaise patana h , kaise no Lena h unse , bhaiya ek no kai flirt they ... nhi flirt they nhi abhi bhi h
Poonam : ham nhi man saktey aisi chichori harkat mithlesh thakur kar hi nhi saktey yaar wo itne handsome h ladkiyan khud hi peeche padi rahti hongi
Priyom : arrey nhi bhaiya , bahut bade wale kalakar they , tumko malum h ek baar ek ladki ne papa se shikayat kar di thi bhaiya ki phir Jo santi se sootayi hui thi
And he start laughing and get up from the bench they were sitting and while laughing he turn around and found a very furious mithlesh in front of him and he hardly gulps
Priyom : wo ... bhaiya ham to
Mithlesh take ups a stick and start betting priyom
Mithlesh : saale tumko to aaj ham bahut khuch sikhayengey
Priyom : bhaiya , maaf kar doo
Mithlesh : tumko to ham ruko
But priyom runs and a servant come and told mithlesh that bade thakur is calling him
Mithlesh : beta abhi to trailer tha , puri filam to bad mai dikhatey h
And he leaves poonam burst out laughing
Priyom : ruko tumko to
But lakhan also start laughing seeing the pity condition of priyom , priyom who was going to take his revenge from poonam stops and they both look at lakhan in disbelief .. After a while lakhan stop
Lakhan : ka h aise kahe dekh rahe ho tum dono hamko kabhi kisi ko hastey hue nhi dekha ka

Priyom : dekha h par tumko nhi
Lakhan : han to isse pahle tumhari aisi kutai bhi to nhi hui na
Priyom once again remember and walk towards poonam , but poonam ran and hide behind lakhan
Poonam : lakhan thakur bachaiye
Priyom : lakhan tum hato
Poonam : nhi , ham aapki zimmaidari h , aapko bachana padega
Lakhan : ka h priyom , pagla gye ho ka hato
And then mithlesh calls priyom
Priyom : tumko baad mai dekh lengey
And he leaves , lakhan turn towards poonam and ask
Lakhan : hamare peeche kahe chupi tum
Poonam : kyunki hame pata tha ki hamare lakhu hame bacha lengey
Lakhan : ka?? Lakhu kaun
Poonam : aap aur kaun
Lakhan ( in full anger ) dekho hamko eee sab naam se mat bulana samjhi
Poonam made poor face and said
Agar aise chillake bologey to ham sab kai samne bol dengey , jao aaram se bolo
Lakhan this time a bit calmly
Thek h ab dobara mat bolna hame bilkul pasand nhi ki hamko koi aise bulaye aur jo hame pasand nhi wo ham na to kartey h na karne dete h
Poonam : par ham to wahi kartey h Jo hame pasand h
Lakhan : matlb tum phir bulaogi is naam se hame
Poonam : nhi ham kyun ...
Lakhan : tumne hi to kaha ki Jo tumhe pasand h wo tum karti ho
Poonam : han wo to ham kartey h par hame apka naam thodi pasand h
Lakhan : acha hame LGA ki ..
Poonam : kya lga , aur aise kyun lga aapko ki hame ... Boliye
Lakhan : uu , bahut kaam h hamko
And he leaves , poonam smiles


Next day
Priyom and poonam Were busy in chattering
Priyom : arrey poonam aaj to black mai gazab hi lag rahi ho
Poonam : pta h hame , waise lakhan thakur ko kaunsa rang pasand h
Priyom : ham apni setting kar rahe h aur tum apni
Poonam : chappal , ...
Priyom : kya tum chappal se marogi hame
Poonam in heart man to yahi kar raha h
Poonam ( loudly) nhi ham puch rahe h ki chappal kaisi h hamari
Priyom look at her sandles
Priyom : han thek hi h
Then lakhan comes on the terrace and walked towards the balcony he was looking angry
Priyom ; Abe lakhan idhar aao
Poonam ; han thakur aao ( kash ye bhi meri tarif kar de )
But lakhan don't turn back not even say a word
Poonam : ab kya ho gya inko ,,
Just then guddi comes
Guddi : abhi lakhan bhaiya ko bahut dant padi h mithlesh bhaiya se bahut gusse mai h
Priyom : acha , aaj to ye kisi se baat bhi nhi karega
Poonam : ham sab se bhi nhi
Priyom : haha , tum kya bahut important ho , mud kai bhi nhi dekhtey h jab gusse mai hota h , bachpan se jantey h
Poonam : aur agar hamare sirf ek baar bulane par mud gye to ...
Priyom : ho hi nhi sakta , chahe 1000 bar bhi bula lo nhi bolega khuch bhi
Poonam : hazar nhi , sirf ek baar awaz dengey aur thakur mud kai sedha hamare pas ayengey
Priyom : nhi ho sakta
Poonam : to fir thek h lagi shart 5000 ki Jo jeeta paise uske
Priyom : thek h
Poonam : to paise nikal kai table pe rakho
Priyom : tum bhi
Poonam : bhul gye ham kidnapped h jab ghar jayengey to de dengey par abhi tum nikalo kyunki ham harengey hi nhi
Guddi : nhi poonam tum har jaogi mat khelo
Poonam : relax guddi , poonam jadu ki chadi ghumti h aur sarkare badal jati h ye to sirf thakur h
Priyom : eee bailbudhi , lamboo , sharmile hmmm ab to aa hi nhi sakta chahe Jo bhi kar lo bahut gussa h lagta h nhi to abhi tak to hamari haddiyan ( bones) tod chuka hota sharmila kahne kai liye , poonam tum to gyi ye ko paise
Priyom put the money on the table
Poonam stands up
Poonam : guddi chair side mai karo
Guddi does that
Both priyom and guddi are thinking what poonam is up to but in very next sec wat poonam said was beyond their imagination , they both look at her surprisingly

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First part end
Okk pls everyone tell me it was good 😊 nice šŸ‘šŸ¼ or bad

I hope u all enjoyed while reading thanks to everyone who read it šŸ¤—

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Naam bada jabar hai poo ke papa ka šŸ˜†
Acha hai bishu šŸ˜‰
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Super bishu best was "bhai setting karwao na" loved it...Bishu. Jaldi likh šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 9 years ago
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😊 woww it's too gud bs 2 parts likhogi thts nt gud kash badi stry hoti phir bhi waiting for 2nd part luv to see lakhan thakur aur priyom ko bhaiya bola Poonam ne 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I really loved..nxt prt jaldi likho...I wish ye ff hota..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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mast hai bhest hai jabar likha so sweet and cutie haiā¤ļø
i think poonam will say him i love u lakhan thakur tabhi woh shock ho ga aur murre gašŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sorry for the late comment, actually padh toh kal hi liya tha par reply aaj kar rahi hoon and I just loved it.Waiting for the next part. Plzz update it soon 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank u everyone for appreciating it šŸ¤—

@tanu its okk dear , no need to be sorry

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