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radha 🦚

@wohradhahai

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Amazing story priya..reminded me ofof my childhood... I always loved these kinds of stories..
But I thought Ragini was a yakshi..ha ha..u made Laksh..
Amazing one..
Thanx for writing..

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Jia Roh

@dewcute

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Wow!that was an amazing one shot!

My jaw touched the ground when I read the last part!!!

U and your writing style both are amazing!

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priya_86

@priya_86

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

I am actually quite surprised by this response. ...It was more of an experiment on my part...have never written this stuff before. ...but as per tales...theses people exist and it's difficult to spot them.

Thanks Senorita, Neha, Jiya

Senorita...This was more of a thriller...so I guess it is difficult to transform it to a SS

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Shinning_AD

@Shinning_AD

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Thanks for the PM

Woww so Laksh is the Yaksha 😆

The concept and plot is pretty intereting

Can we get more of these Priya 😉 Write more

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Dear Priya,

That was an amazing OS with a real ''blow in the solar plexus ending''. While I was reading I was so sure (teaches me right, one should never be a complacent reader😡) it would be Ragini who was a Yakshi that I was thinking even the name somehow compliments her being one. Never thought it would be Lakshya who would a Yakshya (bad rhyming but I cannot stop myself😳)

Great writing as usual.

love,

Nyna

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@rbb1

Elite

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Wow another interesting story Priya keep writing

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priya_86

@priya_86

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Was it really scary?😕...LOL when i am reading it I am finding it quite funny

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APUDEEP

@Apudip

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Nice priya 😊

Aami roopkathar golpo porte khub bhalobashi. By the way, aami bhujtei parchilam naa je Lakshya is the one 😳

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priya_86

@priya_86

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Apudeep
Nice priya 😊
Aami roopkathar golpo porte khub bhalobashi. By the way, aami bhujtei parchilam naa je Lakshya is the one 😳

Thanks Aparna😃

Amar'o supernatural stuff khub bhalo laage