SASHA:MHMG chapter 11 updated *completed*

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi guys back with new story
Its on sameer aisha
"MERE HUMDUM MERE GHOST"

character sketch
Arjun rawate: handsome, hot headed, 2 nd in command (having no past)

Sameer rathod : etf chief

Etf member : sakshi shree chotu

Liza and Aisha : "bhoot"

1 chapter will update soon 😉
chapter 1 : page 1
chapter 2 : page 2
chapter 3 : page 3
chapter 4 : 3
chapter 5 : 4
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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER 1

Sam and navin outside the house
Navin ( Sam's friend ) : yelo Sam ghar ki chabiyaa
Sam : thanks
N : are dosti me thanks kaise but ye bat batat tera khudaka ghar hoke tu yha kyu reh rha
S: mera man nhi lag raha what itne bde ghar me
Masa babasa rajstan chale gye to socha khi aur chala jau and best place your home tuze paiso ki help bhi ho jayengi
Navin smiled
One man came there," yja pe bhoot hai merit baat sunn.
N : lo ye phirse aa gya isko mere customer ko bhaga deta hai sam tu iske bat pe mat ja
Man : " agar zinda rehna chahte ho to laute jao Baku Teri marzi"
N: " jao baba yahase"
Man went from there saying "bhoot he vha vo kisiko nhi chodengi"
S:"chodengi wow!!! Phir to won bhootiya huyi"
Both laughs.
S : "ye bhoot ka kya chakkar hai"
N : "me batata hu par tu promise kar tu ye ghar chodke nhi jayenga iss ghar ka rent help krta hai muze ghar chalane me plz"
S: k nhi chodinga waise bhi bhoot woot pe mera trust nhi
N : tu policewala he tujhase kya chupana
WO 6 month pahele me Men's do ladkiyo ko ye ghar diya tha par wo dono mar gyi suicide murder don't know I think wo case close kr di gyi thi. Use buddhe ne mere coatomer ko wise haklwa diya. Kuch logone bhoot dekha bhi but aisa nhi ki wo log mare bye
S: tu dar mat in haseen bhootniyon ko me dekh loonga
N : thanks year
Navin send kamvali bai to clean house
Here sam was happy his small house.
Someone staring at sam from house
Bhoot(Aisha) : dekhti hu kitni der rukata hai ye banda and smirks.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome start dear
amazing CS
aisha aur liza bhoot 😲
love the concept
waiting for the next part
cont soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#4
Mindblowing concept.
Very nice start.
Aisha and liza bhoot????? Bohot accha.
Pls pls pls do cont soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start 😊
Cont. Soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#6
Hey dear!!!!
Brilliant Start👏
CS was good
Sam apne dost ke ghar reh raha hai...aur wahape do bhoot😲😲
Par Sam chotu ki tarah darpok nahi hai😆😆
Dekhte hai aage kya hota hai...i think it will be a funny story😆
I hope baaki couples ka bhi thodha role ho😳
Continue soon...pm me if possible😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aayesha n Liza are ghost..
N Sam is going to live in that home..
Let's see ab kya karegi dono bhutaniya..?
Plz continue soon
N do pm me plz..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thank u guys meri story like krneke liye
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 2
Here kamwali bai chillate huye bahar atii hair
Sam : kya hua
KB : (kamwali bai) bhooott..
S : kya.. Koi bhoot nhi wha chalo mere sath
KB : me nahi aaungi me chali yhase
Sam enter in house
S : ab ghar mujhehi saaf kRNA honga
First in bhootiyo ko to dekh lu.
He searched everywhere but no one was there.
Ye insan bhi na sirf vyaham hota he phir bhi nhi samjhate.
Aisha to Liza who is busy in reading medical book.
Aisha : " dekana WO kitna cute hai."
Liza usko bina dekhake chali jati
Aisha : "offo Marne ke bad bhi ye ladki kitabo me ghusi huyi hai. Jane do isse baksh de diya jiyo apni zindagi khusi se but bad me zaroor satayungi."
Sam starts cleaning house. Poora Sunday usme nikal jata hai. Door bell rings
Sam opened door.
Arjun was there he hugs him
A : dekhu to kaisa hai tumhara ghar
Hmm achi jagah hai
S : tu ruk me chai bnake lata hu
Aisha : ab ye kon hai
Hayee me toh phirse mar jau aise handsome log yha pe ane lage toh aaj me jinda hotina full on line Marti.
Liza call her.
Liza : kya hai aisha Jo bhi aaya usko taad rhi ho. Oho khi koi pasand to nhi aya ek bat dhyan rkho hum bhoot hai samjhi.
Aisha : kya hai jab dekho tb yhi sunati ho kitno dino ke bad koe handsome bande hamare ghar aaye hai aur tum ho ki tu kr na apna kam.
Me na iske samane jati hu dekhate hai ye kaisa react krta hai
( WO log sirf unki marzi se Insaan ko dikhaiyi de sakhate hai vrna nhi)
Sam comes with tea and coffee
Liza stopped her.
Liza : nhi aaisha ruk ja . and WO use uske kitaboo wali kamare me leke jati hai. ( liza ka secrete kamra hai Jo sam ko nhi pata)
Aisha : hadd hai liza
Liza : arre ye dekh new things
She starts annoying her with medical new things.
Here arjun and samer,
Chitchat hone ke bad arjun Uske ghar jata hai
And sam drift to sleep.

Suddenly he woke up at 3:00 am by hearing some voice.
He took his gun and went to hall he saw photo frame fell from table he pick it and place it on it's place
Aisha : I think ye police officer hai. Issko to acchhaa sbk sikhayenge.
Liza : OMG ye to sameer rathod hai Maine to notice nhi kiya. Aisha ye bohot acha officer hai shayad ye hmari madad krde.
Aisha : par kaise khi hum isse madad mange aur ye bhaag jaye.
Liza : bohot din hai aisha isse yhape settle hone do phir kuch sochenge.
Aisha nods
Here Sam again went to sleep.

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In etf office
Shree : chotu mera dimag mat kha chup bhaith.
Chotu laughs and again starts his chatarpatar.
Shree : chotu agar tu chup nhi bhaita na muh tod dunga
Chotu laughs : tu muze marenga chuhe
Shree punch him and scream in pain
Shree : AAA...

Making cry face :
Shree : chup chotu wha mere owner ke mehman ne dimag kharab krke rkha hai aur ab tu.
Chotu : are tension mat le
Chale jayenge
Shree : aur phir ayenge mera dimag kharab ho jata WO log shantise baithte bhi nhi ratbhar bakbak muzee bhi nhi sonee dete.
Yha pe arjun sir sone nhi dete aur wha pe memhan
Ab me nya ghar kha dhundu.
Sam hear all their conversation.
Sam : koi baaat nhi shree tum mere sath mere ghar me shift ho jao.
Shre : par sir
Sam : me request nhi order de RHA hu and WO cabin me chala jata hai.
Shree : dammit se acche WO mehmaaan hai.
Chotu : are sameer sir nariyal hai
Shree : aur us nariyal pe me sir phodu
He bhagwaan ye mere sat kya ho RHA hai
Chotu laughs
And shree again fight with him
****************************
Shree shift his luggage to sam house after solving case
Sameer : welcome shree
Shree enter in house he feels awkward.
Sam : shree daro mat ajse ye tumhara ghar hai
Shree ( MV) : thank you sir I love u
Sam : shree kha kho bye
Shree : kuch nhi sir aapne itna kuch kiya mere liye aj dinner me bnayunga
Sam : OK. Par pehale fresh ho jao.

Liza pass from there
Liza usko top to bottom dekhati hai
Liza : yeto shree hai oho ab to mza ayenga bda attitude hai isme aaj churchur krdungi
Specky... Tumhara badluck hi bad hai khud kuyeme kudne AAA gya hahahaha. Tum to gye specky and smirks.


Edited by meeshu55 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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sorry guys aaj boring lava honga na part next time achwala part likhungi aaj ke din zel lo 😕 😕
chppal ande tamater sab allow hai 😆
Edited by meeshu55 - 9 years ago

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