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Hi everyone,anyone missing me.yes I know all r missing me.so here I am to surprise u all.as u all knew I am is on a vacation .so a big sorry for not updating anything and not commenting on anyone's story,i have many pending pms,I will clear it as soon as I come back. But don't worry I will do it both as soon as I came back.
I know u guys won't mind.now I am back to the point.so I am here to give u all a pleasant surprise.
So the thing is that,that today is a very special day,pucho kyun,pucho pucho.chalo chodo main hi bata deti hoon.
Actually exactly one year back I updated the first prologue of my very story, that is ,tune dil mera toda.
So today I complete an year as a writer. After an year i have 25 ss,10 ts and 18 os.a total of 53 stories over 85 threads.Wow wonderful achievement by me.wow Raksha u really rock.
But mujhse bhi jyada rocking hai mere readers who made me a successful naa very successful writer.so I should thank u all.so a big thanks to all my wonderful readers,love u all guys.
Toh yeh toh hui mere achievement ki baat,ab isme surprise kahan hai,toh what can be more surprising if I start a season#2 of my very first story,tune dil mera toda.
I know many would be excited to read it ,as many loved it so much.
So my surprise for all of u is,season #2 of tune dil mera toda.
Sounds interesting, so here in it goes ,its prologue.
Ohho ek baat toh bhool hi gayi.this is my 25th ss on ishra,wow silver jubilee. Feeling great, on top of the world, waise I am actually on somehow top,going to Rohtaang valley in manali.and trust me guys its too beautiful, beyond imagination but too cold.let it be.
So enough of my thanks and love u.here is the prologue, the theme is feeling of being cheated by her beloved,as the title suggest.
#2 TUNE DIL MERA TODA
Ishita was standing and looking at the scene in front of her eyes.Raman was having breakfast and was running late for his work as usual.
He often get late and she rushes to finish his work and today also she is doing the same,arranging his things but now everything has changed.she lost the authority over her Raman.a tear fell off her eyes thinking about it.she was going to her room when shagun screamed.
Shagun- what's this ishita.why u r standing idle.don't u have any work.make a coffee for me.she said opening her arms in air,she just woke up.
Raman raise his head to look at ishita hearing shagun's voice.she was looking at him with anger while he look at her with helplessness.
Raman- why u r screaming on her like this shagun.
Shagun- then how should I behave Raman.after all she is our maid.
Raman roared at his top of voice- she is not a maid, got me.
Ishita cut his words and said- nahi shagun ma'am.I am ur maid.she said stressing on the word ma'am making Raman grit his teeth in anger.
Shagun- if u guys r over can I get a coffee.don't know what's wrong with u Raman.
Ishita- jee,saying so she went into the kitchen.
Raman went to shagun and said- why u r doing this.u know naa she is pregnant.
Shagun-toh,why u r worried.its her husband's work.
Raman was tongue tied and went inside his room in anger while shagun sat down reading a magazine.
After a while,
Raman- Ishita,I am not getting my CD.come and find.
Ishita slowly went inside the room giving shagun her coffee.
Raman locked the room and said pinning her to the wall- why u r doing this ishita.
She answered expression lessly- why u r doing so sir,let me go.I have lots of work.
Raman- don't pretend that u r not understanding anything.u don't have to be maid. I will buy a house for u and u can stay there happily.for god's sake ishita,u r pregnant ,baby.
Ishita- aur kya hongi main aapki.mistress??kyunki biwi hone ka haq toh aapne shagun ko de diya Raman.she asked with moist eyes.
Raman cupped her face and said- u r my jaan .don't u know how much I love u.trust me main sab kuch thik kar dunga.
Ishita- trust??u really think after doing this,u deserve my trust.no Raman I can't trust u.and if u really love me then go to ur so called wife that u love me and I am pregnant with ur baby.keh do jaake usse ki main maid nahi pyaar hoon tumhara.can u do this Raman.
Raman look down hearing her words.
She wiped her tears and said- then sorry Raman sir.I can't trust u for me and my baby.let me go sir.she said stressing on the word sir.
Raman left her hand feeling guilty.she walk towards the door ,turn and see him.
Tune dil mera toda
Kahin ka naa choda
Sanam bewafa sanam bewafa
Raman look back at her with moist eyes
Main nahi bewafa,main nahi bewafa
That's all for now.enjoy and don't forget to drop ur views and hit like ,will wait for it.
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