Ishra ss-#2 tune dil mera toda,pt 7 on pg 131 updt on Dec 27

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raksha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#311

Originally posted by: divyaruhi
lovely and beautiful di

poor ishita
had to face a lot since childhood
but she is happy
and that matters the most

raman fas really become a deewana
clicked all expression of hers
and here unknown to this,
ishita is feeling sad

i loved that hotel room scene
hope ishra meet soon

thanks for pm di
please update soon

Thanks divya

Glad u loved it

Yes Raman has become her deewana

Will updt soon

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raksha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#312

Originally posted by: nafnaf
Part 2
Wow a beautiful update!!!
So Ishita lost her parents when she was little and Vandu's parents looked after her!!
Vandu's father not a nice man!!!😡
So now she is independent and lives in Mumbai!!!

She is sad that she has no one to love her - but little does she know that soon her life will be filled with lots of love!!!

Raman has fallen for her and is wooing her so romantically!!
So many pictures all around her room and then the beautiful different , different flowers with sweet and romantic notes on each one!!!❤️
He is watching her from the opposite room - haayee mein mar jaawaan!!!

Please update soon and also thank you so much for the pm and also so sorry for late comment!!

Thanks nafisha

Glad u loved it

Yes Raman is fallen for her

Will updt soon

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raksha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#313

Originally posted by: sukanksha
Oye hoye
Diwano Ki basti me ek naya diwana aya hai naam hai uska RKB.
Mastaani hai uski Ishita... ;)

Yes he has become her deewana

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raksha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#314

Originally posted by: Rkchinju
Awesome ..
Poor ishu ..sad story...
Lekin koi nahi ishu ka personal photographer aagaya hai 😳
Aur beautiful surprise diya ...
Loved it..
Update Soon..

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raksha

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Marvi15
Plz update soon

Will updt soon

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raksha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#316

Originally posted by: traveller_girl
Wow...awesome update di
Loveeeddd it
RKB ki notes aur bouquets...haayeee
Continue soon

Thanks hetu

Will cont soon

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raksha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#317

Originally posted by: 9900
Awesome updates di 😃
Loved them loads😃
Raman was mesmerised to see ishu😃
He already fell in love with her😃
Loved them falling together😳
Raman clicked many pics of ishu😃
Loved how he decorated ishu's room😃
Please continue soon can't wait to read the next part 😃

Thanks Pooh

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raksha

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: rufana10
awesome update
felt bad for poor ishita...her past is painful but it's a
very good thing dat now she is self independent
nd not a burden to anyone...
ishita wants a life partner who will love her d same
way her bala jiju loves her akka as she is craving for
love nd care in her life badly...
she became sad when she couldn't click her pics by dat
photographer unknown to d fact dat her personal
photographer is clicking her pics of every movement...
raman decorated ishita's room wid her pics, rose
bouquets nd notes...wow ❤️
his notes were lovely nd romantic...
ishita was happily surprised seeing d surprises nd
wants to know who is this crazy aashiq of her...
waiting to read further...
update soon di...

Thanks rufana

Loved ur comment dear

Will updt soon

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raksha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#319

Author's note- this updt is specially for divanshireen aka shireen,who was asking for this updt since long.

PART 3

Ishita was sleeping peacefully after the visit to rohtang while raman was busy in capturing some beautiful pics of random people and the beauty of the place from his balcony only.waiting for her to wake up and atleast come to balcony once and his wish got fulfilled after two hours when ishita finally came in the balcony .she was wearing a white chikan suit with chudidaar,her hair were wet and water droplets were falling off her face.she was having a coffee in her mug and was standing keeping her hand on the railing.Raman kept his camera aside so that she didn't suspect him.he sat on the rest chair in his balcony ,ordered a coffee and pretented to read a magazine.but in real he was looking at her ,mesmerised at her pure ,innocent beauty while ishita was sipping her coffee and smiling remembering the flowers and notes.while Raman was just smiling seeing her smiling.he was happy that he is successful in bringing a smile to her sad face.

Raman went inside happily and dialled a number,suddenly ishita heard a phone ringing.at first she ignored thinking it's not the ringtone of her phone but later went inside to check as it was coming from her room only.she was looking around when she saw a small box kept in a corner and sound was coming from it.she was amused seeing the box .she opened it only to find an iPhone 7 in it.ishita was happy and thrilled to see it.she had always seen it in someone's hand and even saw its ad but never ever had thought that she can ever touch it.and today she actually has an iPhone in her hand that too the latest one,whose cost is as equal or even more then her total earnings of around six months.she was looking at it with amusement when it ringed again making ishita confused as she don't know how to pick it.after few rings she could finally pick it.

She said meekly scared of the reaction from the other side- hello,who's this.

Raman- ur rkb,did u like ur gift.

Ishita heart skip a beat hearing his voice.it was masculine ,husky and too gentle .

Ishita- who r u??

Raman- tumhara deewana. Now tell me did u like ur gift.

Ishita- yeh mere liye hai.

Raman- nahi uss khoobsurat ladki ke liye hai jisne mera dil chura liya hai.he said making her blush.

Raman- iss tarah sharmaogi toh main khud ko rok nahi paaunga ,tumse aur pyaar karne se.stop doing it ishita,maar daalna chahti ho kya.

Ishita look around to see from where he is looking at her but he hide behind the door and said- idhar udhar kya dekh rahi ho.apne dil mein dekho.mera naya address wahi hai.jaise tumne mere dil ko apna permanent address banaa liya hai.

Ishita- par main toh aapko jaanti bhi nahi.she said innocently.

Raman- uff ishita,itne pyaar se mat bolo.I can't take it.OK I am telling u about myself.I am a man of 28 years old.works in Mumbai and came here for holidays and here I found u ,my love ,my ishita.now u tell me about urself.

Ishita was silent as she was scared to share her information to a stranger.

Raman- I think u r not comfortable. OK let it be .achcha bolo with whom u have come.I saw a man and a lady along with u.didi ,jeeju hain kya.

Ishita- yes akka ,jeeju and their son shravu.they live in Chennai.

Raman- and u live alone somewhere else.naa.

Ishita- how do u know.

Raman- guess kiya.OK what u do.

Ishita don't know what to say as she don't have any permanent job.

Ishita- nothing much.bas aise hi kuch bhi.

Raman- ohho,Papa ke paise udane wali.

Ishita- I don't have appa,jinke paise mein uda paun.she said sadly.

Raman- oh sorry.

Ishita- don't be.my parents died when I was small.akka ke parents ne hi mujhe pala hai.now I live alone.doing some random jobs to live my life.so kuch bhi permanent nahi hai,neither my job nor my address.

Raman-i can't say about ur job but now u have a permanent address ,and that's my heart.tum hamesha rahogi wahan.

Ishita- u really love me or u r flirting with me.main bahut simple ladki hoon.chote chote sapne hai aur kabhi kabhi unhe pura karne ke bhi paise nahi hote .so please if this is some kind of joke ,please stop.kisi gareeb ladki ka dil tod kar aap kuch haasil nahi kar paoge.and I don't have anything to give u.

Raman felt bad hearing her words.

Raman- come out of ur room.

Ishita- ji?

Raman- yes come out of ur room and look around .jahan tak tumhari nazarein jaati hai utna pyaar karta hoon tumhe aur jahan tumhari nazarein thahregi wahan khada hoon main.pehchan sako toh pehchaan lo.

Ishita came out only to see beautiful greenery all around and a beautiful five star hotel in front of her.she was looking closely to identify him but to her bad luck, four guys were standing in the balcony talking on phone.

Ishita- yahan pe chaar log hai.aap kaun se hai.

Raman- tumko kaun pasand hai.

Ishita- agar Maine aapko pasand nahi kiya toh aapko bura lagega naa.

Raman- par agar pasand kiya toh achcha lagega.tell me who is best among them.

Ishita- let me check.saying so she start looking at the four guys.

Ishita- I like the one in black tee.

Raman- there r two I think in black tee.

Ishita- woh jiske cute se dimple hai.

Raman smiled hearing this.

Ishita- hey he smiled.lagta hai meri baat sun li usne.

Raman- really u like him.that's so sad ,I am not that one.I am the one at the corner.

Ishita look at saw a black huge man standing wearing a yellow t-shirt and smiling looking at her.

Ishita gulped her saliva and said- this is u.

Raman smiled and said- haan,kyun achcha nahi hoon.

Ishita- nahi ,achche hai,matlab .Surat se kya hota hai.u love me so much that's important.

Raman- matlab main sundar nahi.u don't like me naa.main yahin se jump karke jaan de dunga.he said teasing her.and to his luck that man was also looking down only.

Ishita- no no please don't do this.dekho pyaar se turant to nahi hota naa.we can meet and try to fall in love.aap achche honge toh mujhe aapse pyaar ho hi jayega.but don't try to kill urself.

Raman smiled hearing her innocent talk and said- then we will meet in the evening. Till then take care of urself and I love u ishita.

Ishita- u too take care.

Raman- I love u nahi bologi.

Ishita- I need some time.

Raman- agar main woh cute dimple wala hota toh I love u bolti mujhe.

Ishita- bye,will talk later.

Raman- achcha tumne yeh toh bataya hi nahi,how u like my surprise.

Ishita- it's beautiful. More then I can ever expect.saying so she hung the call ,Raman too went inside .

Ishita sat down on the bed and said- his surprise,his voice,his gestures r so sweet but he looks so horrible.main kaisi lagungi uske saath.but I can't deny him also.kya karu.murugan show me some path.zindagi mein pehli baar kisi ne iss tarah pyaar lutaya hai mujh par .I can't break his heart.kya hua agar woh thode kam handsome hai.but he loves me.she was thinking when she got a message.

8o' clock at banquet hall of hotel sunshine.an exhibition exclusively for u. Will wait for ur arrival,can bring ur family if u want.I will meet u there .

Ur RKB

Ishita replied- I will be there.

Just then she heard a knock at her door.she opened it only to get a parcel.she opened it and saw a beautiful while gown along with a matching diamond set.it reads,

Wear this ishita and stop my breath.

Ur RKB

Ishita smiled seeing all this.

Ishita- u have a charm ,rkb.I will be there to meet u.murugan just make me fall for him.I can't break his heart.she said to herself and went inside her room.

Raman went to mirror and smiles remembering her words- his cute dimples.

Raman- so she like my dimples.my cutie pie.kaise buddhu banaya.I am sure she will kill me after our meeting.but she is so cute.itne bhi bure nahi hai.kitna bada pathar rakha hoga apne dil par yeh kehne ke liye usne.he said and ruffled his hair smiling like an idiot.

That's all for now.enjoy and do comment and hit like.will wait for it.

Precap- ishra meeting.

Ps- even after updating 12 stories in a week,I am getting bad responses. Don't u think u guys r unfair to me.

Edited by cutieruhi - 8 years ago

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lonelyyyy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#320

resss
yee m first 😃
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unres
dii such a cute update
raman is niharofying his ishu not bad
iphone 7 gift diya raman but raman ishu ko mehnge gifts dene ki koi jarurat ni h agar tum pyar agar sachche dil se kroge na to bhi ishu tumse pyar kregi okk but shuru shuru gifts shifts jaruri hote hain so achcha h 😊
aaye haye ravan kumar apni itni pyari pyari batpn se mar hi daloge 😳
naya address ishu ka dil kitna cute h na raman
ramam ne toh pura intro hi de diya kya krta h khan rhta h
ishu ghbra rhi h i can understand itna jldi kisi stranger se apni batein btana mushkil h
hey ishu aisa mt bol main sad feel kr ri hun yar raman h na ab
raman shi bola job ka toh pta ni pr permanent address jarur mil gya 😳
ishu raman luvs u not flirting okk
ramam yar tu jldi se ishu se mil le na kitma chup chup k pyar krega
aaye haye ishu cute dimple wala achcha lga ishu wo tera deewana raman hi h
raman wo mota yellow tshirt mein i cant imagine dii raman ti pitega bad mein ishu se
ishu ki halat patli ho gyi 🤣
ishu bechari dr gyi pr phir bhi man rkhne l liye kh diya
waiting for ishra meeting
raman teri pitayi hone wali h pehli hi meeting mein 😉
diii plz update soonnn plzzz

luving dis beautiful story ❤️

Edited by lonelyyyy - 8 years ago

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