I wait... (A Poem)

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Sunaina

@coolkitty_23

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Posted: 17 years ago

I wait and i wait..
wait for a message..
a distant yet distinct message..
my patience eats time...
and time it takes kills me...
a slow and sure killer...
time flows and so does the day..
morning to noon to night...
i wait and i wait.

Letting hope to never die...
letting myself not to believe it will..
i wait and i wait,
redefining all my perseverance..
challenging my power of endurance..
i still wait and wait..

I shall win...
I tell myself..or so to say convince..
A self i no longer know..
or maybe too complicated to know..
a confused mind...
an unrecognizable self...
is it me?I wonder...But..
still i wait and i wait....

--Sunaina..

Edited by coolkitty_23 - 17 years ago

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divan

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Posted: 17 years ago

Nice, Ilike the following a lot

"Letting hope to never die...
letting myself not to belive it will..
i wait and i wait,
redefining all my perseverence..
chanllenging my power of endurance..
i still wait and wait.. "

is this a typo "chanllenging "

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Sunaina

@coolkitty_23

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Posted: 17 years ago

oh yes, tht is a typo...will correct it..😊

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Sunaina

@coolkitty_23

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: iiLOVEyouu
beautifully written 👏

Thank you...😳

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Sam

@Naughty_n_nice

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+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

Very very nice!!! Moving this to the Sher o shayri section (Poetry section)... It will be more in place there!

-Sam

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Sunaina

@coolkitty_23

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Naughty_n_nice

Very very nice!!! Moving this to the Sher o shayri section (Poetry section)... It will be more in place there!

-Sam

Thanks Sam.....😳😳

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OnlyHope

@OnlyHope

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Posted: 17 years ago

Naina Diii...another wonderfuul poem! 😳 👏

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I wait... (A Poem)

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