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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: angel_juhi04


Even if Asad has really changed Zoya will not believe him wateva he says cuz in d past weneva she thought he has changed he always became worse. Like after Mangalpur came d slap or after Tanveer exit came d trading thing to Ayaan for Nikhat. As I replied in Anopama's comment, ZOya had no one to advise her to leave d relationship where she is always but now Matt is making sure dat no one hurts Zoya. We all crave for such a friend in our bad times who will always stand by us. He will realize dat it will be hard to win her dis time like he always did wid 1 guilty look, 1 sorry n 2 tears. He has to realize how he actually never realized d depth of his mistakes dat he only brushed it off wid just 1 sorry. Many times, he did not apologized to Zoya at all. Zoya can't give in to him like her abnormal self earlier as she realized dat its not good to forgive someone so easily only to be hurt again n taken for granted. Zoya n Matt r supposed to take Asad's class dis time to show him how it feels to be treated badly in another country n how everyone around him felt bad due to his arrogance.




hmm interesting... let see how asad going to face this challenge...

and yes Friends are very important... like Matt👏 👏 👏 👏
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Teaser 2: Asad, Will You Be In A Live-In Relationship With Me?

Asad tried a lot to win Zoya by giving her bouquets, chocolates n other gifts but Zoya who did not wanted him to take for granted again always threw or send back his gifts. Asad saw a new Zoya in New York at least new for him. She wud go to pubs n discos to chill out wid her friends n even Zeenat but she wud not have alcoholic drinks. He even saw her in bikini while going to beach or at some pool party where he is also invited. Zoya had no problems wid all dis but she was surprised dat Asad had not reacted on all dis. She wonders if Asad is really changed in those 2 years. But she also fears dat once in India, Asad may show his true colours again as she can't trust him after wat she went thru for 6 months due to him.

"Tumne Zoe ko 6 mahine tak hurt kiya n most probably aage bhi karte if Zoe did not came back here," said Matt who saw Asad in d parking of Zoya's office unhappy wid Zoya's behaviour, "Tumhaari to 6 din me hi hawa nikal gayi Zoe k behaviour se."

"Tumne kabhi pyaar nahi kiya hai jo tumhe meri feelings samajh me aayegi," said Asad.

"Oh plz, muje pyaar k baare me gyaan de," said Matt wid attitude, "Haan, maine pyaar nahi kiya hai kisise ab tak but I don't judge girls by their clothes. I don't tuk d anger of my troubled past on anyone around me. Agar main kisise pyaar karta to use kabhi hurt nahi karta. Main use mujse nafrat karne ka mauka hi nahi deta tha. Luk at u, Asad. U say dat u love Zoe. But u never made her happy. In fact, u hardly talked n had fun even wid ur own mother n sister cuz u were still stuck in ur past. U ordered around ur mother n sister cleaning ur things troubling them wid ur OCD. U even did not listened to ur mom many times n cuz of dat even she was afraid of ur angry n things u wud not approve of like allowing Najma to wear jeans n letn u know dat Najma cut her hair short. U were only busy in ur work dat u hardly spend some family time wid them. Then how can u keep Zoe happy?"

Asad was shocked at wat he said which was true.

"I have said many times dat wateva I did was in d pat n I have truly changed," said Asad.

"Even if u have truly changed, Zoe will not believe u. U know d story na The Boy Who Cried Wolf' where d villagers did not believed d shepherd boy even wen he said d truth which caused destruction in d field. Same way, u did mistakes many times n Zoe always thought dat u had changed but u wud always show ur true colours n bcum worse than d previous time. So, even if u r saying d truth dat u have truly changed Zoe will only think dat u have not really changed n will show ur true colours soon," said Matt n left 4m there.

Asad realized dat wat he said was true. How can he expect Zoya to trust him so easily?

Same afternoon, Zoya told Matt dat she will put such a proposal before Asad in order to give him a chance dat he will be astonished. She tells Matt her plan. Matt tells her she sud not do dis as he will only hurt her again but Zoya tells him dat dats only his test.

It was d last day of Zoya's meeting wid Asad. Only they were there in her cabin.

"Asad, I think u r doing a lots of efforts for wanting a chance to win me. I think I sud give you a chance. But I don't think u can do wat I want," said Zoya wid a conspiring smile.

"I will wat u want, Zoya to win ur trust," said Asad.

"Asad, Will You Be In A Live-In Relationship With Me?" asked Zoya.

Asad was shocked.

"No need to be shocked, Asad. I only asked u to be in live-in relationship wid me not to have sex wid me. Its legal in India also but here its not a big deal. Vo kya hai na, Asad. Cuz of Akram & u, I have lost my belief in marriage. It may take a lots of efforts to believe in marriage again. So, if we r in a live-in relationship for some time we can figure out dat whether our relationship will work or not. So, we sud have live-in relationship for a month. U have only 1 month to prove dat u have truly changed. If u hurt me then u will lost ur only chance. I will never give u chance again. I am actually takn a risk of giving you a chance by letn u cumn so close to me. So, do u agree or not?" asked Zoya boldly.

Asad was again shocked wid wat all she said. If she had even talked abt live-in relationship earlier he wud have judged her wrongly n insulted but now even if she is involving him n herself in a live-in relationship he is not getn even a little bit angry on her. He knows dat she is modern but he did not knew dat she supported things like live-in relationship. May be she was afraid to say it to him due to his nature dat he will insult her. He thinks dat may be dis is d chance for him to prove his love for Zoya so he sud agree.

"I agree," replied Asad calmly, "I don't know wat else u planned for me but I only know dis much dat I can't let go of dis chance. I am ready for dis live-in relationship."

"Well, we will live in my farmhouse not in my family's house. Dis live-in relationship will be secret between us n my friends. Our families sud not know abt dis," said Zoya.

"Okay, I will not tell anyone," said Asad.

"Well, u can get ur visa extended for a month. If u fail in ur chance n hurt me in any way then I will get u deported to ur country d same way u did to me after accusing me of trying to kill my so-called step-sister. Tab main tumhe rokne k liye vaha aakar fake engagement nahi karungi, said Zoya reminding Asad of his act 2 years ago.

Asad was ashamed wid wat he did n regretted for it.


A/N: The way Zoya is shown is normal with girls living in India also at least those who live in high-societies.At least, Zoya don't smoke and drink. What will be the result of this one month live-in relationship? Will Zoya's bitterness with Asad's family and her step-family will get reduced or will it get increased even more?


Edited by angel_juhi04 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very excited for the update after reading this amazing teaser
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Can't wait for this update
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amazing teaser

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Very excited for the update after reading this amazing teaser
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