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T168

@T168

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

nice update

thanks for the pm

continue soon!

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Rkchinju

@Rkchinju

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

It was superb yaar..
Biwi ne puttar ko khushbu se pehchan gayi
Raman and driver talk 🤣
Adi saved ishu.. 👏
Adi darling❤️
I so loved ishu and adi convo
Now waiting for talli puttar and biwi romance 😉
Loved it totally..
Update Soon.

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traveller_girl

@traveller_girl

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Awesome update Gayu...

I am still wondering how you are going to incorporate snow romance in this

Raman and driver's convo...too good

Continue soon

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Ishra2015

@Ishra2015

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Waiting for update... Update soon... Interesting story... Pm me

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lakshmi

@maduragymhasium

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

superb update dear

love it

continue soon dear

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sukanksha

@sukanksha

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Nice start
Same hai par alag hai

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Nikki

@desire_nikki

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Awsum start...

Continue asap..

Take care😛

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Sonal

@...Forever...

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Oh that was awesome

You said no romance

But still there was romance...

Mast zabardast

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Aarohi Talegoankar

@Albeli26

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#29

is this snow one?????
I am soopar excited for this one 😆
I hope u will not going to disappoint us gaya di
humari ummedon ko khara karna diii
update soon
sorry for late comment but u know na we are shippers of ur stories

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sayujya

@sayujya

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#30

HI Gayu...

Each of ur stories is a treat for ur fans..This one is superb...as usual...It shows a bold and more human ishita so far...and also with out mani aliya baggage..

Please dont let ishita give in so easily to raman...make him really work hard for an apology...it is what we wanted to see in the serial even...but donot think this will happen in ekta's yhm..they may throw ishita at raman's feet the moment he mellows down..

May be you can bring in mani for some time even..just for the jealousy angle...

Any way...i dont have to give much suggestions..as you r the best and knows how to handle the plot superbly...

Just a request to please uphold ishita's pride for some time more..before she gives in...