(MG-FF)HURTFUL HEARTS THREAD 23 EPILOGUE PG 128 (May 27th'2K16) - Page 71

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Ahh!! just realized, HH has been running for more than 2.5 yrs now... Its in the end of Dec 2013 I had started posting it on IF...And Its mid of 2016 now...That's quite a long time period, innit ??? Well, I have tried to make Epi as different from other Epi's of my works as possible...That is why there isn't any mood swings or nokjhoks before arrival of baby...That was kinda same thing to write in every Epi, and I always try for different ends to my works...So, my fingers are crossed, hope you will like the Epi...Do share your views/thoughts/good or bad, for one last time...Did I really justify the chrs as I had started them from the beginning of Hurtful Hearts??? I never thought, I will be feeling this low at this point...2 and half yrs, is a long time...It just passed in a blink...

Anyways, Thank you so much,from bottom of my heart, to every single reader of HH, who read(doesn't matter liked or commented/silent reader(s)) and for loving HH this much that it went for 2 and so yrs, and crossed 100 and so parts...I appreciate readers patience level too, sometimes I was really bad with updating but had tried my best, to be regular with all my works...without putting any of the work on hold...Alright, this is going too far, lets get back to the Epilogue...Epilogue is the long one so...Scroll down to the next post plz...

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Days were passing like that, and Geet now, was a final year student...Handling, studies and baby at the same time...Maaneet had a baby girl, just like Geet has wished for and they named her Abhilasha... Maan and Yash were handling business...

Avi was grown up boy, so when Yash suggested to send him to boarding school for his betterment, Avi has accepted and was willing to go after hearing the benefits of that life, also that his friends were going there, he knew he was going to enjoy...but the mother still was not at all convinced to send her son away from her...She has cried, and was being adamant on not to send her kid away...

Avi looked at his Dad, seeing her mom cry, he didn't want to go, but he has to...He wanted to explore a new life, and according to him it was fun...He wanted to enjoy there, with his friends ...Maan just shook his head and shrugged at his Son..Yash tried to console his DIL..who was nowhere to listen to anybody..

Yash:- Geet beta, its just a matter of few years ..And he will be coming in the vacations after every semester...So, stop worrying...

Geet:- No, I won't let him go...

Yash(sighed, at her repeated answer):- Maan, talk to her...

Maan:- But, what should I talk???

Yash(glared his son):- Convince her...

Maan:- Am sorry Dad, but I won't ...I know, she won't be convinced by me..In fact, she will put all blame on me, that am trying to send Avi away...That's all my idea...Etc...So, sorry, I won't indulge myself in this...

Yash:- kya Maan, you are scared of her...

Maan:- Well, if you think so, then let it be...I don't want to see her cry for years for Avi..We all know, what place Avi has in her life...So, why to separate her from him???

Geet(heard her Hubby Khurrana's words and instantly was beside him):- See, even Maan knows this ..Plz papaji, don't send him away...

Avi:- Mama, mujhe jaana hai, Dadu ko nahi...Tou aap unka mind change mat karo..Aur plz aap maan jao...

Geet:- Nahi, aap kahen nahi jaaogey...And that's final...Haan...

Maan shook his head at the mother and son's cute fight, both were trying to convince each other..telling the pros and cons of the boarding life to each other...But, the net result was, both were adamant...and not convinced by each other...Amidst of this, Maan got a call and he excused himself from His Dad to attend it...

Maan:- Yes...

Other side:- Sorry to trouble you Sir, but we wanted to confirm are you going to take Miss Chopra from here???

Maan(closed his eyes and nodded):- Uhh!! Yeah...

Other side:- Will you just tell us, when???

Maan(looked inside the room to see Geet's pouting face and said):- In the Evening...

He said that and cut the call...He has been waiting for this day from past one and half years now...He has followed His mother and got her admitted in the best hospitals..Got her treatment started and sent her abroad for her recovery, once she was good, she was back again to this city..Though, Miss Chopra, initially has denied for any kinda financial help, but he has convinced her...Telling her...This was the least he could have done for his Geet's happiness...He remembered of the first time, he talked with Miss Chopra...

Flash Backs...

Maan:- Am not helping you for you...Am helping for Geet's happiness...

Miss Chopra(smiled):-Can't you, for once, talk to me normally???

Maan:- Give me one reason, for even talking to you???

Miss Chopra:- Yes, you are right...Am not a good mother...Bad indeed...But...whatever...

Maan(cut her):- Plz...you can't call yourself a mother even...You don't know that feeling...(He then mocked)Huhh!! Mother...

Miss Chopra:- Whatever happened, I can't change that ... But, we can make new relations ...

Maan:- Listen lady...Am not here to listen your talks...Am here to take you to hospital for your treatment...I will leave you there...you will have to get over with your treatment, and then you are free to go...

Miss chopra:- I don't want that ..

Maan(cut her again):- And whatever you are seeking, I can't give you that ...I know, you had some motive behind coming back in our lives...But, I won't let you get success in achieving that ...

Miss chopra(smiled sadly):- I don't have any motive...I was there coz Geet brought me, and I left, when I realized you have a perfect family and my presence will only cause more pains to you all..But, here again, you have come after me...Its always either you or your Geet who takes the initiatives ...Accept it or not, you have that soft corner for me, for your mother...(She smiled at the end looking at him)

Maan(looked into her eyes):-Look into my eyes, do you feel any love in them???Any care???(He shook his head)There's nothing...There's no feeling for you...Geet is unhappy, that you left without any treatment, and I can't see her unhappy...She wanted this treatment for you, and am only doing this for her happiness...I don't care for you, you are no one to me...So, stop your thoughts right there and think of it as a payback coz you didn't abort me ...Brought me to this world and I have to be thankful to you for your this generosity...Nothing else can be the reason...

Miss chopra looked at her son, as he took her bag and put her clothes in it, that were in his view...She loved her son more...only if, she has been a nice mother, she would have kissed him for his help...But, she knew, she deserved this treatment from her Son...As He was done, Maan then called a nurse who helped her get in his car...

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Maan went to the room and the scene was still the same...Avi trying to convince Geet and Geet telling straight no to all his attempts...

Geet:- Main naa, abhi aap ke friends ke parents se baat karti hoon, wo log kese bhejtey hain unhen...

Avi:- Thek hai, agar mere friends nahi jaengey tou main bhi nahi jaaonga...

Geet(smiled):- Done???

Avi:- Haan, par wo log nahi manegey...(He showed Geet, his tongue)

Geet(s smile widened):- Wo mera kaam hai...(She has a plan for that too...She glanced at Maan, who guessed, that this bomb was going to blast on him...She was going to use him and his power for her happiness)

Maan shook his head with a smile and left the room, she too followed him and both were left all alone to stand in front of each other and this was the time, he was going to give her the happiness...

Geet:- Maan, you will convince Avi's friends parents naa??? Plz Plz ...don't say no...

Maan(pulled her and made her sit on bed):- I have to tell you something...

Geet:- No, first promise me you will do this ....

Maan:- I want to talk something Geet...(His tone was serious)

Geet(was serious instantly):- What happened???

Maan:- Be ready by 5 in the evening, I will take you somewhere...

Geet:- where???

Maan:- Somewhere...

He was serious and Geet was a bit worried with the seriousness of his voice...Before she could have asked he made her look at him...

Maan:- Nothing to worry abt...You will be happy...I have a surprise for you..

Geet(sighed):- You scared me...(Maan smiled)I will be waiting ...(She stood and came near Maan)Now, abt Avi????

Maan(smiled, pulling her closer):- Let him go Geet...He wants to explore new world...He must experience different thing too...(Geet looked away trying to get out of his grip) Till when you are going to protect him from life's hardships???Sooner or later he will have to learn everything...He is a grown up boy now...

Geet:- But...

Maan(interrupted):- Shh!! I don't want to hear anything more on this...Let's end this topic here... (Geet pouted and looked away..He sighed) This is the last time, am doing this for you...(He took his cell phone out and Geet smiled)But, from next time be prepared...(Happily, she nodded)

Maan dialed one of Avi's friend's... and talked with his father...convinced him to not to send his son away this summer and do that in the next one ...Of course, who can deny MSK...The father agreed and the rest was done easily...

Maan(cut the call and looked at her):- What ???

Geet :- You know, you are so sweet My Hubby Khurrana... And I love you for that ...(She hugged as she thanked him)

Maan(hugged her back):- But, next year, he is going to boarding...

Geet:- Only if, he wants ...Then...(Saying that she winked and Maan shook his head, knowing very well...She will never let that ever happen)

Geet was so happy to have her Avi back on track...Well, Avi didn't get to know of His Dad's doings, as he just got to know that one of his friends, wasn't well so he won't be able to make it to the boarding's this year... and rest of the friends followed...

~~~

Evening,

Geet entered a semi dark place, with her Abhi in her arms...Maan followed her in and switched on the lights...Avi wanted to go and play with his friends and so, she took little Abhi with her, since Maan asked her to...giving excuses of her being small so, Geet must take her with herself... and now Geet was looking around the place in question...

Geet:- Maan, what is this place???

Maan(got hold of her hand and said):-Come, I will show you round...

Geet went with him, soon, Maan opened a room and there Miss Chopra was setting her clothes in the Almirah...She turned as she heard a voice and was surprised to see Her son with her DIL...

Miss Chopra:- Am glad to see you...

Geet was shocked, first to see her alive and smiling in front of her...She looked healthy too... and second, Maan was the one, who brought her there...Means, all these months he knew, where Her Teacher was...She looked at Maan, in gratitude...Maan averted from her eyes...knowing what questions they carried ...

Maan:- I will...leave you both ladies...(Maan looked at her and smiled) I hope, you liked my surprise...

Geet:- Thank you...But, I want to know something...

Maan:- We will talk at home...Now, that you have Her...you can talk to her...I will come back after an hr...(glancing at Miss Chopra, Maan left from there )

Geet sat with her Teacher, who told her everything...How Maan contacted her...sent her for her treatment and now that she is fully recovered, has arranged a place for her living...

Geet fell more for her Hubby Khurrana, hearing Miss Chopra...How he took care of her, just to see her happy...Miss Chopra saw her granddaughter and took her in her arms...Geet smiled seeing the love she showered on her daughter...Whatever sore relation Maan shared with his Mother, he didn't stop her from meeting her and made sure, that Geet took Abhi with her...So, that she would see and love His daughter...After spending a lot of time with Her Teacher, Geet finally called Maan who reached there after a while...

Maaneet in car...

Geet looked at her daughter as she looked out, Maan silently was driving the car and glancing at her way every now and then...Geet smiled, knowing very well, what Maan wanted to know, so she contemplated a bit, then started...

Geet:- You, know, Ma'am was so happy seeing her...(she said as she cradled her daughter)She even played with Abhi...And Abhi too was enjoying with Ma'am...

Maan(smiled, feeling nice):- Hmm...

Geet(looked at Maan):- You wanted her to see her, isn't it ???

Maan(glanced at Geet and then sighed):-Hmm...yes...I think, she has the rights...(He looked at Geet, uncertainly)

Geet(put her hand on his shoulder):-She does...And there's nothing wrong in thinking so...

Geet smiled at Maan, Maan took her hand in his and kissed the back of her hand...with a smile, as if, he was worried before on his own weird thinking and now was relieved hearing her...

Maan:- You are so understanding Geet...And I love this thing in you...Thanks for being with me...

Geet(placed her head on his shoulder):- And I will always be with you...Thank you for this special surprise...

Maan smiled as she kissed his shoulder and felt nice...Geet didn't ask him anything else, nor probed for forgiving his mother, and taking her back to the Mansion...She has left this on him, completely and he was thankful to her, for her this thinking...

~~~~

After a few months,

Geet was getting ready for her college, when Maan came and hugged her...Looking at her all the time, tensed face, he smiled...

Maan:- Tensed???

Geet(nodded):- What will happen???

Maan:- You always look this tensed when you go for any of your exams...(He turned her so that she was face to face with him) Now, grow up Geet...You are a mother now...So, stop worrying for small small things...

Geet:- Maan, you are forgetting, I became mother once I got married and came here in your Mansion..

Maan(sighed):- yeah...Right...(He was abt to cont when their daughter woke up from her sleep and cried) Well, let me attend her...while you get ready...

Geet smiled as Maan kissed her and then rushed to take their daughter up in his arms and within few moments, she stopped her cries...Maan was very supportive husband...He has proved himself not only a caring and loving husband but a perfect father too, who looked after their daughter, when Geet was not available...

Evening,

Maan was with little Abhi and Avi in his car, waiting for Geet to come out from her exam hall...Today, was her last exam..And so, Maan thought to personally pick her up...Avi was playing with Abhi, when she started crying...

Avi(looked at His Dad):- Sorry, wo...Maine kuch nahi kiya...

Maan(sarcastically said):- I know, sab kuch maine kiya, hamesha ki tarah...

Avi giggled and Maan took His daughter up in his arms, as she cried...Soon, she sobered down with her father's cajoling and Avi looked at them both in awe...

Avi:- Aap hamesha use kaise chup kara letey ho Dad???

Maan:- Yeh ek art hai, tumhe kyun bataon... (He told Avi, with his MSK attitude and in the next sec, Abhi cried again..Maan and Avi laughed)Lo mama aa gaen...

Avi came out of the car and ran towards Geet, who was talking with her friends, while walking upto the car...Avi hugged Geet as he said...

Avi:- Mama, main , papa aur abhi aapko lene ae...

Geet(took him up in her arms):- So sweet...

Her friends nodded as she bid bye to them all and looked at her...They were awed as they saw how supporting her husband was...He came up to her and kissed her forehead, while hugging her...Geet smiled and took her daughter in her arms...

Pooja:- He is the richest man in India, yet he came to pick her up and both are normal husband and wife...

Tia:- A normal couple...Dreamy...(she sighed as she looked at them both from far with a smile) I wish I too get a man like Maan Singh Khurrana...

Pooja:- Too bad, he is already HERS ...Let's go, we are getting late...

Tia looked at Pooja in annoyance as she broke her tiny heart by saying that and both the girls left as Maan's car moved...

Geet(looked at Maan as he turned the car in another direction):- Are we going somewhere???

Avi:- Haan mama, Date par...

Geet(s eyes widened):- Kis ki....

Avi:- Apki aur papa ki...Aj aap ki anniversary hai naa...

Geet(smiled, ruffling his hairs):- Tumhe bara yaad hai...

Avi:- Papa ne bataya...

Geet(asked as she played along):- Acha aur kya kya bataya papa ne???

Avi:- Aur,(he thought and then said) Haan, us din aap mera haath pakar ke he...andar ae thay...ye bhi bataya...

Geet looked at her Husband, who winked at her, and Geet once again got in to those memories, when she developed a special bond with Avi instantly, as she got married with Maan...That Maan and This Maan, was completely different one...Geet felt happy that Maan has changed lot from rude Hubby Khurrana to this loving and caring Maan...

They entered the farmhouse, where everyone from their families was present to celebrate Maaneet's special anniversary occasion...But, what surprised Geet, was...Presence of her Teacher...Miss Chopra...Who looked at her with a smile and Geet looked at Maan...

Maan:- I thought, you would like it ...

Geet:- But, Papaji...

Maan(cut her):- He doesn't mind...Her presence doesn't really affect any of us...

Geet smiled and passed little Abhi to Maan, as she wanted to go there...Maaneet met with everyone and soon, cut and fed cake to each other and then rest of the members ...Suddenly, Maan bent on his knees and everyone looked at him ...few in confusion and few in shock ...MSK bending in front of anyone, was least expected for Yash and other khurranas...

Maan:- I love you Geet...(She blushed as she looked down and then at others, when Maan took hold of her hand) I never knew, I will ever come out of my hatred for women..and live a normal life like every man...But, you entered in my life and everything changed..This HEART which was filled with HURT, once...Now, beats for you...Am the luckiest man on earth...To have you as my life partner...Thank you so much for coming in my life...Sticking with me...changing me for my good...Be with me always ...

Geet nodded, clearing her tears off her face...Hugging him...Maan smiled and parted to kiss on her head...

Geet(whispered):- Happy Anniversary...

Maan(smiled):- To you too...

This was the perfect end of her day...Maan's confession in front of all and like this ...was unexpected not only for Geet but others too...

Yash and Dadimaa, too had tears hearing him...Their Son has gone though lots of betrayal in all these yrs that they have lost hopes of any recovery...But, Geet did this ...

Dev and NT hugged Maan and Geet simultaneously and had a little bit of teasing...Geet's parents were happy looking at Geet's happy fmaily...She had everyone...Her Husband...Her children...Her Loving FIL...Her caring Dadimaa... and Her Teaser, BIL and SIL...

Miss Chopra, looked at the happy family, in front of her and regretted her past ...But, she smiled when Geet looked for her...waved at her, to let her know, she still was there...

Geet looked at her and sighed, whatever situation was, she was not going to force anyone to take Her Teacher back in their lives, since she felt Her Teacher was wrong and this was their decision..More over, Her Papaji's decision...and she respected that so she left upto to them...

Smilingly, Geet took her Abhi in her arms, and kissed Avi's check...as he came running to her, with little Abhi in his arms..

So, Here HH ends...Do leave your views for Hurtful Hearts For one Final time...Thank you to those, who read...and always/occasionally left comments on HH...Thanks to Silenties as well...

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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome epilogue I really like that Geet came to the terms about Maan and Yash not forgiving miss chopra, and I also like the fact that maan took Abhi to meet MIss chopra
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice ending
Maaneet had a daughter named abhilasa
Maan helped his mother only for geet's happiness
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it was so soon you ended but i loved the way you described this family oriented and i liked the way you made the relation of Miss chopra and Maan sometimes when there is a crack in relation it can never be mended...
Nice story and happy ending,,,,
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Posted: 9 years ago
lovely end
really geet's entry in maan's life change maan totally
geet also respect her huby n papaji's decision towards her teacher
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Loved it but will miss it..
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just awesome . geet delivered a baby girl & they named her abhilasha , maaneet are happy with their children . geet stopped avi to go boarding school , though she took help from maan 😛 maan bear the expenses of ms. chopra's treatment for geet 's happiness . one day he took geet & abhi to meet ms. chopra but maan never ever forgive her . geet 's exams are finished & maaneet celebrated their anniversary with everyone . maan confessed his feelings to geet in front of everyone 😉 all are happy
will be miss this beautiful story
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow seriously its been 2.5 years!!!!!!!
but im feeling like its just some days before i stared reading it
n the thing touched me was geet n avis bonding :)
n yah a super rude maan :P

but now maan became so goody goody hubby :P

loved the epilogue :)
geet still the over protective mother for avi :P

gonna miss it :(

BTW any change of season 2 ?? ;)

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