Shayari: Lauta Mera Ateeth

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Hylo Everyone...😊

This is my first attempt on something like this...

Actually, it's my own story that I have tried to describe in this urdu poetry...

I am not sure of anyone like it or even give it a read but if accidently one does.. so please don't forget to leave your feedback... 😛

Here goes my first poetry on this forum...and my story

"Luata Mera Ateeth"

I am not even sure about the title...😆😆..

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Here it goes:

In chaar saalon me khud ko sambhale huve the hum

Aapki yaad me akele roya karte the hum

Har subah aapke chehere ko dekhne ki umeed me aankhein kholte the hum

Har raat aaapko Milne ki dua me guzara karte the hum

Dimaag ye kehta rehta dil se ki :

Jo chale jaye vo vapas nahi aaya karte

Jo lamhe beet jaaye vo phir jiye nahi jaate, aur

Jo kismat me na ho usse paane ki khuwahish nahi kiya karte

Dil maane hi wala that inn baton ko,

ki kismat chal baitha apni hi ek chaal

Aur chaar salon se band padhi kitab phir khol baitha vo

Mera ateeth jaa khada huva mere saamne..lekin is baar

Ek alag roop

Ek alag andaaz,

Ek alag rishte se

The jo kal tak hum ajnabee

aaj dost ban baithe hain,

Nahi jaata koi ki aye dil-e-nadaan

kahan le jaaye ki ye justugoo-e-arzoo tujhe

Kitni hi koshish Karo me uska saaya dil o dimaag pe chaya rehta hai

Mitkate bhi na mit sake shayad aise nishaan vo chodne aaya hai

Kaash vo hota meri kismat me!!!

Magar afsoos!! aye shayar-e-mohabbat

Hai teri zindagi uss asmaan ki tarah Jahan kabhi dhoop to kabhi

Gadd gaddahat-e-badal hoti hai!!

Plz give honest reviews...

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.nilu.

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Really nicee. Keep writing more 😊

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powergirlpriya

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Posted: 9 years ago

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really nice poem👏 keep going dear ⭐️

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