TwiNj OS || Watermelons

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Watermelons

"Twinkle!" Kunj shouted, running into the house. "Twinkle!"

"Aayi!" His wife shouted back, her voice echoing in the empty corridors. "What's in your hand?" She asked, coming down the stairs, her eyes glued onto the brown paper bag sitting in Kunj's hands.

"Watermelons!" He replied, his grin ripping his face open. "Look at how big it is!"

He took it out of the packaging and held out the big, dark green melon before her eyes.

"Tarbooz!" Twinkle yelled excitedly, bouncing up and down.

Kunj smacked her lightly on the head.

"Tarbooz ni, mateera."

"Jo bhi ho! Mujhe abhi khaana hai." Twinkle grinned, grabbing onto a knife.

"Oh Miss Amritsar Express." Kunj took the knife from Twinkle's hands. "Jis speed se tum jaa ri ho na, yeh mateera ni, tumhara haat kaate ga."

"Toh tum kaat kar do na." She tilted her head and flashed her dimples at him.

Kunj couldn't help but chuckle at her childish antics. Sometimes it's hard to imagine to Twinkle as a grown woman. Her excitement over little things, her bubbly nature, energetic personality - it all presented her as a naive, innocent and delicate little creature. Someone who didn't know the horrors of the world.

In a way Kunj preferred that. He saw pure light in her and to see that light to waver for even a flicker would pain him immensely.

In that moment, watching Twinkle take a huge bite out of the red, juicy flesh, Kunj was ready to absorb all the darkness in the world. All the horrors, all the pain and all the sufferings. He would take it all just to see that ever lasting smile on her face. To see those big, chestnut eyes shine so bright. To see those dimples make an imprint into her cheeks. To hear that tinkling laughter echo their home till they grow old.

Kunj took a deep bite out of the piece of watermelon that Twinkle held out for him.

It was incredibly sweet.

Just a little less than his wife.
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dramebaaz.af thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Why gotta break my heart with so much cuteness overloaded?
I love a bubbly and excited Twinkle!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Haye gur.
Never gonna see watermelon same way again
I mean I look at it with bhukad eyes but now twinj ki yaad ayegi lol

Loved this sweetness overload.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Gur your writings always make me smile 😊however the situations may be 😃always lovely sweet cute n fantastic šŸ˜³šŸ‘
Yeah Ian ab shayad show me aisa kuch na bataaye😭but I'll too remember watermelons with twinj cuteness 😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This was cuteness overloaded. I LOVED IT
I can honestly just keep reading this.
Gurleen you write so frickin' well, even the smallest things become more beautiful when you pen them down.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was so cute!
Gods! You are such an amazing writer Gurleen!
And you know the thing I love about your writing? The way you find inspiration from little things.. ā¤ļø It just shows how wide (and wild 🤣) your imagination is!
Thanks for such a sweet OS :D
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awww Gurleen this was sooo cute! I loved how you portrayed Twinkle's innocence & bubbly nature so well and Kunj being in awe of her AWW!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This was so so so amazing!
Gur,Soo happy to have you back on writing again,Ohh boy I missed your stories!!!


This was very cute!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aww this was so so sweet, cute and adorable os. Loving this bubbly twinkle.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: areeba_blossom

Why gotta break my heart with so much cuteness overloaded?

I love a bubbly and excited Twinkle!


Cuz it's the season of breaking hearts. šŸ˜Ž

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