Tere mere kahani Os last part on page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi m new here...
I always wanted to write so now I came with this story which is based on current track.


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TERE MERE KAHANI

PART 1

It start with when ishita ran from the room adi follow him... Ruhaan hid behind door after both leave she cry to saw their parents in that state... After composing herself she leave saying she is tierd nd want some rest...
She leave in car when she saw the similar place she asked driver to stop car.. she came to that please nd remember that in that place she lost her every thing...
Her happiness... her ishima... her father... her life... every thing.. after remembering all this she brust into tears...
Ruhi: kiu mere sath e asa kiu hoa kiu mj se mera sb kch dor chala gya kiu...
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While on the other hand ishita also want some loneliness so she also went that place...
After reaching their she screamed ruhi name in her sobs...
Ishita: ruhi mera bcha kaha chli gai apni ishima ko chor k.
Dekho na ruhi ma kitni akeli ho gai koi mjy pyar ni krta hr koi kehta h k ma ne apni ruhi ko Mara lkn ma asa ni kr skti ma apni ruhi ko bht pyar krti hn plz come back ruhi tmhari ishima adhuri h tmhary bina... tot gai hun ma sb ki nzrn may apny liy nafrat dekh k... plz come back na plz...
She screamed ruhi many times..
Ruhaan also hear all this nd brok down to see her ishima like this she says I love u ishima in low voice adi see ruhaan nd say ruhi tm zinda ho... he hug her nd says u were right ishima r papa eik e ho k rhyn gay phly ma akela th ab tm b mere sath ho chlo ishima k pas... ruhi step a back I don't want to go to this woman.. she left me... after telling this ruhi run nd drove back to home adi shocked to hear this..
He take ishita to home nd dnt tell about ruhi...
At ruhan room...
Ruhi lying on bed nd recalling ishita's words nd start crying. Nd says ishima abi b mjy pyar krti Han wo abi b mera intzar kr rai hn mjy un k pas jana ho ga... she stand up for going when nidhi came nd slap her...
Nidhi: oooh you want to go to your ishima...
Mere e ghalti h tmhy zinda ni rkhna chahiy th Mar dena chahiy th saying this she call ishita saying if u want to see you ruhi then came same place... Nd saying he kahani jaha se shuru hoi waha e khatm ho gi... she hang up the call nd pulling ruhi hair drag her to that place...


Ishita on the other hand get shock to know that ruhi is alive she also felt happy but then she remember her words that ye kahani jaha shuru hoi waha e khatm ho gi...
She run nd collide with the raman raman got angry..
Raman: andhi ho k...
He stop seeing ishita state adi also came nd ask ishita wat happen she says that mjh usy rokna h nd she run... Adi understand this nd told every family about ruhi...
Every family got happy nd want to meet ruhi... Nd also tensd Adi call Abhisheik he came nd ask where ishita have gone no body know where she is???? Suddenly raman say that he know... Nd all leave with raman...
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ishita reach that place nd searching ruhi then she saw ruhi with nidhi... she ran to her but nidhi stop her saying
Nidhi: finally u come... see ur face how sad nd helpless u r... seeing u in this state I m very happy nd she laugh...
Ishita: plz ruhi ko chor do plz...
Nidhi: mmm ok chlo tmhy ruhi se milny dete Han she free ruhi... ruhi run to ishita nd hug her saying plz save me I dnt want to leave u again plz ishima mjy bcha lo... DIL SE DIL KA RISHTA NO HA PAL DO PAL MAY TOTTA NAHI...
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Ishita kisses her all over her face nd again hug her at that time nidhi pointed gun on them also raman nd all family members came nd saw all this...
Nidhi: o oooh see who come the RKB I told u that I destroy ur life... Nd saying she about to fire on ruhi ishita came in front of ruhi..
Ishita. : aj we 7 sal pehly jo hoa wo ma ab ni hony dn gi..
Nidhi: chlo phly tmhy e Mar lete han she pointed gun on ishita when Abhisheik fire on nidhi hand nd lady constable arest her...
Abhisheik : ye boj JO ma 7 sal se sath se brdasht kr raha hun aj utar gya... ab dekhta hun ye nidhi kesy bachti ha...
Every body hug ruhi raman also hug ruhi nd kiss her forehead...
To be continued...

Sorry for mistakes nd plz tell me that how's my work... Nd also told me what type of end u all want a sad one or happy..


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Happy but not right away. He should assure ishita first, it should not be for kids. Grey shagun would be nice touch, so that Raman knows how he disrespected ishita as his wife
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Welcome to the forum dear! Nice start! Do continue soon, and about ending, I wud suggest you to write some hatke ending, and which wud be suitable according to ur story! 😊😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nyc os ..
I loved it..
Update soon...
N pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks to all for your love... 😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Here is last part...
Part 2


When every one is happy to see their ruhi alive they dnt notice that one person is missing which is ishita...


After a while ruhi observ that her ishima is not here... she calling her name loudly...
Ruhi: ishima... ishima...
Then Raman turn to her nd said..
Raman :us urat ka nam b na lo aj jo kch b hoa ye sb us ki wja se hoa ha...
Ruhi: nahi papa ishima ne ye sb kch Jan boj k ni kia wo to hm dno ko bchana chahti th...
Raman :Enough... Not a word again nd sb ghr chlo mere bete itny dno bd ghr ai ha..


They all reached home...





While ishita on her home crying seeing her family pic... aliya came nd see her Amma in that state she ask

Aliaya : what happened Amma... ap itna kio ro rai hn
Ishita: mere ruhi zinda h aliya... Mere bachi zinda ha nd she hug her...



Ruhi came her home toshi ji does her arti and call her inside...
Ruhi saw her home after 7 years nd recall her childhood... she see every where her pics... but she also notice thier is no photo of ishita...

Ruhi: Dadi yaha ishima ki koi pic kiu ni ha????

Raman: ruhi tm bar bar us orat...

Adi interpreted in it nd shout...

Adi.:bas papa bas why u blame ishima all time
Raman slap him nd say

Raman: asy bat kryga apny bap se???

Adi: Han... jb bary rsta bhool jayn tn choty e unhy rsta dekhaty Han...
Raman again slap him...
Adi: Mar lo aj jitna marna ha lkn sach to ap ko sun'na e pry ga...
Raman shocked...
Adi: ishima ghlt ni h papa... na wo kbi ghlt th nd Hon gi... ma janta ho ishima hm sb se 7 sal dor rahi lkn is ley ni k she started her new life blky is ley she feel guilty r wo b us bat pay unho ne ni kia wo aj tk khud we bhag rai Han...
Lkn ap shayaid bhol gay Han k ap ne ishima ko force kia th ap ne e unhy kaha th k ma apny dno bcho ko bchao ga lkn u fail nd ulta ap ne Sara dosh ma pay dal dia...
Ma nai janta k ap ne kya bola ishima ko k unho ne suicide kr lea... lkn ab 7 sal bad ishima ko zinda dekh k eik bar b pocha k kaha th wo itny Sal... kis hal may the... nahi blky ap ne unho bht insult kia... you are wrong papa you r wrong... Nd he cry.
Raman was also very hurt not bcz of adi's words because what he did with her ishita...
He also want some answers so he goes to meet her... see this all family follow her... meanwhile romi nd mihika also come to meet ruhi... bcz simmi call them...






In ishita home.. -----
Raman go inside house nd see ishita hugging mani nd mani consoling her... he becomes jealous nd separate them nd turn to ishita..

Raman : kya krdia tm ne mere bacho ko mere khilaf krdia... khud to apni life enjoy kr rai ho mani k sath... r kya pta k itny saln may konsa rishta bna...

Ishita slap him... this is beyond her limits what he thought about her... she agin slap him..


Raman on the other hand cry nd also felt happy bcz he also wanted that ishita let her anger out..

Ishita: kya bolny ja ray th Han...

Raman :ma wo...


She agin slap him...

Ishita: Han ma mani k sath rahi kiu k us ka ehsan th mj pay mjy bchaty bchaty he become paralyze... to isi ley mjy apni zindgi us k nam karni pari us k bacho k nam krni pari...

Raman: lkn...

She again slap him..

Ishita : not a word raman not a word... itny saln se tmhary kahy har wo lfz mere kano may gunj ray Han jo tm ne mjy kahy... Raman ruhi mere b beti th ma ne b usy khoya th... in fact ap we ziada th wo mere ley hamary rishty ki dor th... jb mjy ap ki aur ap ko mere sb se ziada zrort th tb ap ne mjy khud se bht dor kr dia...
Raman: ishita mere bat suno. ..

Ishita : Mar gai ishita... Mar gai th ma tb jb ap ne mjy banjh bola... Mar gai th ma tb jb ap ne mjy manhoos kaha... Mar gai hun ma Raman... ab mj may koi takt ni ha kch b khonyki so I m leaving back to London... ap smjhna ma eik bura khwab th jo chla gya...

Raman: nahi ishita asa mt kaho Han ma janta ho ma ne tmhy bht insult kia lkn tm janti ho na ma pagl hun gussy may kch b bol deta hun... please mjy maf kr do plzz ishita plz... ma ne jb tmhy police station dekha to ma bht khush th lkn tmhy mani k sath dekh k mj se brdasht ni hoa kiu k mjy lga k tm ne mjy chor k mani ko choose kia.. I was angry I was jealous... plz mjymaf kr do plz sorry.. plz ishita he fell on his knees nd folding hand for forgiveness...


But ishita goes to her room nd looked it..

Raman crying when romi put her hand on Raman shoulder Raman stood up nd hug him nd say
Raman :Romi mjy maf kr do ma ne sb ghalt kia ma ne tm pay blame kia.. plz sorry...

Romi :no bhai its not ur mistake.. I know your condition that time but I angry on u... I leave u when u need me plz mjy maf kr do...

Raman nd romi hug her...
All goes to their home... when ruhi start crying nd saying I want my ishimaback...
She turn to Raman nd order him
Ruhi: papa I want my ishima... ap unhy rok lo na..
Raman :ma kya krn ruhi ma ne ishita ko bht dukh diy han ma usy kesy mnao?

Adi: jesy phly mnaty th...

Aliya also come nd told every family that Amma going to London...
Aliya: rok lo Amma ko wo ap k beghyr ni reh skti... firstly I was selfish but I know that she love u all
Ruhi come nd hug her..


Romi: bhai apny andar k Ravan Kumar ko jgao r apni jhansi ki rani ko roko...
Every family member cheer him...
He became happy to find family support...
Ishita ama nd appa also come nd told Raman to stop his wife...
Raman went behind ishita... ishita pack her bag nd not listen to any one every family members try their best one by one but nothing

Raman knew her JKR nd smile at her ishita sat in car Raman come in front of car ishita said that leave the way but he also her RKB he lay down on road nd say..
Raman : tm ni utri to mj pay see car guzarni pry gi... plz ishita maf kr do na pka asa kbi ni krn ga...
Ishita came from car nd said...
Ishita: what all this nonsense...?
Raman got up nd pretends nothing had happen.
Raman: what?
Ishita : Ravan kumar ho blkl 3 bachn k bap bn gay akal zra b ni ha... she start her lacture..
Raman stare her...
Raman: plz maf kr dy na kitna nakhra dikhay gi...



Shagun also come nd say

Shagun: ishita u know what I m tierd plz apni family ko smbhalo...
Ishita simile a bit then Raman continue
Raman: ma janta hun ishita I hurt u very much but i tried my best to forget u every thing...
Ishita: pka?
Raman: pka yar... but plz ab thapar na marna bht zorse Mara tu ne..
Ishita extend her hand nd touch her cheeks...
Raman hug ishita every body clap for them..
Ishita come to home when ruhi stop her saying...
Ruhi: ruk jao sb ishima ghr ni a skti..
Every family member got tensd nd confused
Ruhi: ary baba shadi se pehly kon ghr ata h.. I decided k hm papa nd ishima ki again grand shadi kryn gay...?
What say gues????
Every one agree...





Marriage is going so well... all couple dance on wedding nd enjoying...
Adi nd aliya acting on ishita raman cataracter nd remember them their fight...
Every one clap...
After that adi nd aliya also fighting like Nd become more close freind...
After wedding rituals Raman told pihu about her real mom... all are happy nd finally pose for family photo in this photo aliya nd adi look at each other nd picture clicked...

Some new love is also here for future '.. 😊😊😊


THE END...





SORY for mistakes...

Hope u enjoy it nd hit like..
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