New OS : SILENCE BEFORE THE STORM updated part 2 on page 5

Hey everybody !!!! it's me maya . I am new on this forum and I am writing a one shot for very first time . It's on the current track . Here is it's prologue and I will update it soon .
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One had said that there is a silence before a storm . But the silence of ishita was not creating any sense . Raman was continuously blaming ishita on ruhi's death but she was silent .why? She was accused of doing a crime by going away from family for 7 years but she was still silent . Why? Raman had dropped bomb on ishita by saying that he is going to marry shagun . He had burnt her pictures her very last memories but still she was silent . And today even ruhi had accused ishita for her suffrings . A long tear escaped her eyes on listening to this but she was silent . Maybe a storm is waiting for both Iyer and Bhalla family .


That's all for now share your precious views .




SILENCE BEFORE THE STORM:

Raman was surprised to see ruhi alive . More than surprise he was happy . But ruhi was angry with him . Raman successfully convince her that it was not his but ishita's fault . On the other hand ishita came to know that ruhi is alive. She got up from the bed and thinks to meet her when someone opens the door of ishita's room in iyer house . It was none other than ruhi along with raman . Before ishita could say something ruhi starts

Ruhi : so the person whom I love the most destroyed my whole life you are seriously a stain on mother name . How could you do this to me ? how could you do this to your rooh?

ishita could not believe this . Even ruhi was blaming her . She remains silent.

Ruhi continues: I don't know how can a cheap woman like you survive . You must have died seven years ago . Now go to hell . Don't dare to come close to me or my family again .

Saying this ruhi walks out with raman . ISHITA was silent . And a long tear escaped her eyes.


1 MONTH LATER



IYER HOUSE
Everything has been changed alot since ishita had returned . Iyers are meeting with bhallas. They are sharing their old bond . Raman ,ruhi and pihu are living in some other society . Ishita is living with iyers . Adi frequently visites her . Aliya and mani also visit hrr regularly .She talks and live properly with bhallas and iyers but it was not normal. How could it be normal ??? Ishita living a proper life without raman and ruhi ?? It smells fishy .

One day mihika entered ishita's room without knocking at door . Ishita was unaware of her presence . She was smiling holding a paper. As soon as ishita saw mihika she quickly hide the paper . But she sees the paper . When mihika asks ishita about the paper she makes lame excuses . It was strange. Ishita had been changed slot in this month . Her skin colour changed into pale yellow . Dark circles form around her eyes but still she was silent . Her family members asked her to consult a doctor but she never do it .

One more month pass

One day mani entered into ishita's room . She was holding the same paper . Now the paper become a mystery for them . They all think of exposing the paper . It was a fine Sunday . Ishita was out so the family members thought to find the mystery of paper . Mihika opens the cupboard to find the paper . She opens the paper hesitately as she thought it is not right. She read the paper which was not less than a storm for them . It was a report from a CANCER HOSPITAL . The report declared that ishita was suffering from blood cancer since two months . Her feet froze to ground . The iyer family broke down . They were shattered as their whole world was crashing . In an hour ishita returned home .

She entered the launch just to see mani aliya and he family crying . She gets shock and ask if everything is okay ?
Mani shows her the reports and questions what is this . His eyes had tears . Ishita smiles instead of answering.

Mihika: akka what is this . Why did you not tell us before .
Mani: we should have done your treatment . Are you mad. Don't you care for yourself before hiding this .
Izhita take a deep breath and starts
Ishita: Don't you remeber my suicides mani ?? Don't you remember how many times I had attempt suicide but I failed ? Don't you remember my prayers to God that kill me ?? And now today when all these prayers are going to filled up you think I am mad to tell you . Don't you remember 2 months ago ruhi had told me that I should die ? Don't you remember raman's words ? Now this life is just a burden on earth . This is not just a report but my tickets to other world . And non of you can do anything now . It's my last stage . Tell raman and ruhi that I am going away from their lives. Far away from them . Now no one could stop me . No one.

Saying this she faints and died ...


One had said it so right
"THERE IS A SILENCE BEFORE A STORM "

Welcome to Forum dear. 🤗
Looking forward to ur OS. Prologue is interesting. Update soon. 😊😉

Thank you all I will try to update it as early as possible 😳

interesting start
my poor ishita..
would love to read more
continue soon

Khushi

Welcome to the forum 🤗
Prologue looks promising.. Continue sooonish 😳

Originally posted by: ishradivek

Thank you all I will try to update it as early as possible 😳

I am eagerly waiting for your update..update as early as possible. .plz..plz

Updated share your views 😳

Originally posted by: ishradivek

Updated share your views 😳

I just checked. Writing is simply superb. loved it but I got shocked at then end. Ishita died? 😲 Is there going to be another part? Or this is it?

Originally posted by: Water_Angel

I just checked. Writing is simply superb. loved it but I got shocked at then end. Ishita died?😲Is there going to be another part? Or this is it?

thanks but that's it . I had made it a sad end. Sorry 😆

Death of ishu was the storm . I had to match the end with title . Sorry for sad end 😃 😒