TWINJ Os:* JEALOUS KING*

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Posted: 9 years ago
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..JEALOUS KING..
Twinkle: awww!!! My baby u look so cute whenever ur angry...(combing his hairs)
K: am not angry ya!!! Am getting late( almost cried) where is my tiffin...
T: today ur lunch is prepared by babe. Go get it frm her.
K:( he peaked twinkle on cheeks) ok, but u have to come to recieve me am going with babe but will return only if u and dad came to take me. Ok????
T: ur wish my command(giving a salute)

A voice came frm downstairs
V: kabir...putter we r getting late, come fast..
T: go babe is calling u
Kabir: coming babe !!!!! (He once again peaked twinkle) bye mumma!! Bye papa!!!
T: bye bye my prince...
Kabir just ran towards her dadi to go to school

K: if ur ma- beta talks r over so, can i ask if my wife have time for me ???
( kunj finally spoke how was stealing glances at both of them over a news paper till now) 😆
T: offcource i have kunj why r u talking like this???
K: just like that, u r so busy now-a-days ( extending his hand to his wife)
T: u dont have to wait or request just order watever u want( taking his hand and sitting on his laps)
K: but i dont think i have that right anymore. As my place got replaced( hugging her by waist)
T: replaced???( confused) what r u talking about and replaced by whom???
K: by kabir ...(kissing her neck)
T: now i get it...
K: what???(attentive)
T: kunj u r still a kid and u calls me a baby
K: thats what u r...
T: and whats ur opinion abt urself mr. Sarna . I mean ur jealous of ur own kid kunj which father do like this???
K: but u calls him ur prince( pout) which used to be my place...and i got repla...
He couldn't complet his sentance as twinkle put her lips on his to shut him up!!! 😳
T: are u mad kunj!! How can u just think that ur place in my life can ever get replaced
K: but...(shushed by twinkle)
T: kunj u r the most imp & special person of my life. Get it straight on ur head. Your place in my life can never get replaced...ya!! But it can get promoted...(smirk)
K: promoted( confused.)
T: when kabir was not in our life u were my prince. Right???
K: nodded like a kid
T: so, when my prince came in my life becoz of u . You got promoted and became my king. 😊 Got it or should i explain further 😉
K: happiness was back in his eyes. He was now not willing to say anything. So, he just kept his lips on his queen's. They broke apart when they felt the urgens of air
Twinkle joint their forhead eyes closed. Both just listening to other ones heartbeat.

T: u will be always my KING...!!!

THE END
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So guys how was it??? I really dont know wat i have written. Story just started to take form in ma head and i just began typing
I know their must be spealing and gramatical mistakes in some places as i have not checked it. Posting frm mobile 😕 . Acctualy first i thought to post it but than sided the idea but then thought to just post it. So all the like comments and critism all thing are welcome 🤗

..Simmi..

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priyanvs thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow dear nice os
so cute and sweet
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Dear Simmi!
This is a very cute scene. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Splendid. ...
lvd it yaar
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Cute OS 😳
Loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awww beautiful os
just loved it dear😃
Edited by kusharberry - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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amazing os. loved it <3
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Posted: 9 years ago
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That was wonderful Simi!
AWW King & Queen, my babies..you made me cry..
That was SOO beautiful. Loved itt.
Please write more!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Such a wonderful OS Di!
Totally adorable
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: priyanvs

wow dear nice os

so cute and sweet



Thank you
Glade u liked it

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