FF : Tum Jo Aaye Zindagi Mein (Teaser update)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello friends, I'm starting my first ff on my favourite couple. This story inspired from few bengali shows, I hope you all will like it.

Please must read and drop your comments.

Buddy me for pm.

Tum Jo Aaye Zindagi Mein

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Tum Jo Aaye Zindagi Mein

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The Akash Ganga community Hall was decorated with the lights, it was biggest day for Bhalla's as their son finally gets the CEO of the year. But where's he?? Mrs. Bhalla was searching for him when she saw Iyers walked in, her expression changed seeing them. "Yeh log yaha kya kar rahe hai? Meine toh nehi bulaya.. Phir kisne bulaya? Zaroor yeh Bhallaji ka kaam hai." She mentally cursed him for calling them there.

"What happen Toshiji?" Mr Bhalla patted on her shoulder.

Mrs Bhalla furiously glared at him, "Bhalla jee what's this? Did you call them?" She eyed him towards the Iyers.

"Oho Toshiji.. They are going to be our relatives, Ishita is going to be our daughter-in-law. It won't look good if we didn't call them. Samjho baat ko!!" He explained her.

"No Bhalla jee.. I'm not going to accept her." She replied.

"Toshi jee it's Raman's decision to marry her, don't forget. When he himself wants to move on with someone then why are you messing everything?"

"Maybe it's Raman's decision but I'll not accept her, never ever." She left from there.

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Everyone was enjoying the party when someone came and shouted, "Stop all this."

Ishita who was standing aside alone, recognized the voice and turned at the direction, the lady approached to her and slapped her. "How dare you Ishu? My son had gone just before two weeks and here you're planning to get married again?"

"Mummyji.. Please listen to me..." Ishita tried to explain her with a sob.

"Stop it Ishita.. I never seen a shameless girl like you. Chee!!" She made a disgust face, meanwhile Ishita cried and Mrs Iyer came to them saying, "Don't say anything to my daughter. You have no right on her, you have lost all your rights on her on the day when you throw her along with her daughter."

"Yes. I did right... Look Ishita... You can do what you wants but... I will not let Ruhi to live with you. I'll take her with me today only.. Where's she?" She searched around to find her whereas Ishta pleaded, "Please mummyji don't do this. I can't live without her."

"Ruhi.. Ruhi.." The lady started calling her when she heard a husky voice, "You can't take her with you because now Ruhi is my daughter." Everyone turned at the entrance, Ishita too looked at the direction and found him standing.

I hope you all like it... Please drop comments, silent readers you guys please drop a comment in a single word at least.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice teaser...
Do update soon and pm...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congratulations for your first story dear 😛
Very nice and interesting teaser dear 😊
I think who said ruhi is my daughter was Raman 😉
Continue soon dear 😃
Loved it loads 🤗
Thanks for pm 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ishrasoul

Nice teaser...

Do update soon and pm...

Thank u friend. May I knw ur name?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb teaser one request plss gv intro naa
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sanjana_IshRa

Congratulations for your first story dear 😛
Very nice and interesting teaser dear 😊
I think who said ruhi is my daughter was Raman 😉
Continue soon dear 😃
Loved it loads 🤗
Thanks for pm 😳

Thank u friend.. Yes thats raman only.. Who else can be..😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow gr8 one
Very nyc prologue
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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congrats for your first ff dear

fabulous teaser dear

superbly written dear

love it so much dear

continue soon please ( if possible give english subtitles when you update dear so that i can feel and live on your update its my humble request dear please )

when you update please pm me dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rayaland

Superb teaser one request plss gv intro naa

Intro?? u mean character sketch?? anyway thank u.

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