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neitka

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Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#511

part 38

finally dhire dhire progress ho rha hai

loved it

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neitka

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Posted: 9 years ago

#512

part 39

superb

shukar hai arjun ne bhi riya ko observe kiya

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neitka

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Posted: 9 years ago

#513

part 40

jealously dose

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neitka

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Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#514

part 41

superb

love abhi's character

interesting

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neitka

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Posted: 9 years ago

#515

part 42

feeling bad fr shakshi

bt ariya ke beech kya hogya

hope fr se misunderstanding na hojaye

continue soon

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rvss

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Posted: 9 years ago

#516

Owesome.

Ariya ke bich ki duriya dhire dhire kam hoti ja rahi he.

Sam ja jealous wala idea work kar raha he.

Arjun ko ab ehsas ho raha he...

Sakshi ke father ki deth ho gai.

Feeling bad for her.

Arjun sakshi ko bhot saport karta he.

Ye dekhkar riya bhot dukhi rehti he.

I hope arjun riya se baat karke sari misunderstanding dur kar de.

Waiting for next part. ..

Kya aaj nahi mil sakta.

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Aayat23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#517

HELLO THERE...
I'M REALLY VERY SORRY FOR NOT REPLYING TO YOUR UPDATES, I WAS BUSY WITH WORK.

COMING TO THIS STORY YOU KNOW WHAT YOU ARE ONE OF MY PERSONAL FAVOURITE WRITER ON THIS FORUM. THE WAY YOU GIVE IMPORTANCE TO EVERY CHARACTER OF ETF TEAM, IT'S JUST SOMETHING MARVELLOUS.

I AM IN LOVE WITH THE WAY THIS STORY IS SHAPING , RIGHT FROM ARJUN'S SLOW REALIZATION TO SAMESHA'S PLAN. I DON'T HAVE WORDS TO DESCRIBE THE GRIN I HAD SEEING ARJUN'S JELOUSY AND SADNESS SEEING RIYA MISUNDERSTOODING WHOLE ARAKSHI SCENE.

I AM SUPER EXCITED FOR NEXT PART.
I WON'T SAY UPDATE SOON, AS I DO KNOW IT TAKES ALOT FOR WRITER TO SHAPE UP HIS/HER STORY...SO I'LL SAY I'LL BE WAITING FOR NEXT PARTS...

THANK YOU FOR PMs 😊

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ariyabestfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#518

Part 43:-

Next morning:-.

Riya jab subah uthati he ..aur khud ko akele room me pati he..

Woh room se bahar aati he..Arjun ko dekh rahi he..

Aayesha:-kya hua..?Arjun ko dekh rahi ho..?

Riya:-woh he kaha..?

Aayesha:-Arjun n sameer dono pune gaye he..subah subah..kuch important meeting thi..woh parso wapas aayege..

Riya feel bad thinking Arjun left without meeting her..

Aayesha Riya ki sad face dekhti he..aur woh Riya ko batati he ke Arjun kyo Sakshi ko itna support kar raha tha..

Riya Sakshi ke liye bahot bad feel karti he..lekin usake dil me fir bhi ab ye baat baithe gayi he ke may be Arjun ko Sakshi ke liye kuch feeling he..

Puri team Sakshi ke ghar jati he usse console karne ..Riya bhi Sakshi ko console karti he..

Aise hi do din ho jate he..Riya usake aur Arjun ke bare me sochti rehati he..

Idhar Arjun bhi pune me Riya ko bahot miss karta he..

Ek raat riya so rahi hoti he..samjun pune se wapas aata he..

Arjun toh directly Riya ke room me jata he..woh blanket odake so rahi he..usaka sirf face dikh raha he..Arjun usake pass so jata he aur usse dekhte hue nind me chala jata he..

Next morning..

Arjun sleeping hugging Riya..riya get up first n she saw Arjun hugging her..

Riya (in mind):-Arjun..yaha ...par woh toh aaj sham ko aane wala tha..nahi shayad mein sapna dekh rahi hu..Aayesha ne toh kaha tha ke woh log aaj sham ko aayege fir Arjun yaha kaise..?ye zarur mera sapna he..

She smiles to herself..woh usake taraf dekhti rehati he..(usse lag raha he Arjun usaki imagination he)

Woh dheere dheere usake balo ko caress kar rahi he..

Arjun ki nind khulati he aur woh Riya ko dekhke ke ek badi si smile deta he..

Arjun:-good morning..

Riya ek pal ke liye arjun ko bas dekhte rehati he..

Riya:-tum sach me ho..?

Arjun(puzzled):-excuse me..?

Riya ko pata chal jata he ye usaka koi dream nahi..sach me Arjun he..

She get up hurrily from bed.. Stood besides bed..n still staring him..

But now Arjun too staring her without blinking eyes..

She has ware a hotpant n spaghetti..

She raised eyebrow seeing Arjun looking her like that..

But arjun 's look still don't change..

She look to herself.. N realize..

She open her mouth in shock..n then rush towards door to go out of room..

But before that Arjun rush to her n pull her to him..

Riya look him with shocked n big eyes..

Arjun:-kaha bhag rahi ho tum..?

Riya itni shocked he ke woh sirf kisi tarah door ke taraf dekhti he..

Arjun:-ye pehanke bahar jaogi..?bahar Sam hoga aur woh abhi bhi..aur usse toh bas chance chahiye tumse flirt karne ke liye..

Riya just staring him with shock..she never thought in her dreams also that she will hears possessive talk for her from Arjun's mouth..

Arjun:-muze itna ghurne se mein pighal nahi jauga..

Riya fir bhi usse bas shock me ghurti rehati he..

Arjun:-jao Jake change karlo..

Saying this he signal towards washroom..

Riya come out of her shock n about to rush to washroom but he again pull her to him..

Arjun:-meine tumhe bahot miss kiya..

Riya again look to him with big eyes..

Arjun:-hello..ye badi badi aakho se muze ghur kyo rahi ho..?tumne muze miss kiya ya nahi..?

Riya(smiles):-meine bhi tumhe miss kiya..

Saying this she rush to washroom..

Arjun smiles n goes to his room..

After sometime..

Riya get ready for office..she is standing infront of mirror.. She remember the moment just before some minutes..

She smiles with blush..

But suddenly she remember about arjun n sakahi..she get teary..but somehow manage to control she come to hall..abhi was about to leave for hospital..

Riya:-abhi..tum hospital ja rahe ho..?

Abhi:-ha Riya..kyo..?

Riya:-tum muze office drop kar doge..?

Samsha look each other..Arjun is glaring abhi n Riya..

Aayesha:-lekin ri..tumne toh breakfast bhi nahi kiya..hamesha ki tarah ham Charo sath jayege..

Riya:-nahi Aayesha..muze kuch kaam he..(looking to abhi)chale abhi..?

Abhi nodded ..Riya left with him..

Aayesha:-kya hua..?kya kaam hoga aisa..?office me toh aisa koi kaam nahi he..

Arjun get more frustrated..n left to his room to get ready for office..

Aayesha:-sameer ..ye sab ho kya raha he..hamne socha tha Riya ko thoda bahot jelious karayege toh Riya Arjun pe gussa hogi..usse zagada karegi isse Arjun Aur Riya ke bich thodi duri aayegi Aur ye duri Arjun ko ehsaas dilayegi ke Riya unke kya mayne rakhti he..lekin yaha toh Riya Arjun se baat bhi nahi kar rahi..Aur unhe avoid kar rahi he..

Sameer:-hmm..actually hamne ye socha he nahi..par ab samaz aa raha he ke Riya ka pyar Arjun ke liye itna unconditional he ke woh apne pyar ko arjunnko khushi ke liye kurban kar sakhti he..Riya shayad firse Arjun se dur Jane ke bare me soch rahi he..

Aayesha:-hey bhagwan..ab kya hoga fir..?

Sameer:-don't worry ..Arjun pe yakin he muze woh sab thik kar dega..Riya ki misunderstanding dur kar dega woh..hame bas thode dino ka intzaar karna hoga..just wait n watch..

Aayesha nodded..

The whole day Riya keep distance with Arjun..

At night..after dinner..

Arjun standing in balcony..he is disturb due to odd behavior of Riya..

Riya come to him..finally she had made her mind to talk to Arjun..

Riya:-Arjun..muze kuch baat karni he..

Arjun turn to look Riya..

Arjun:-ha muze bhi tumse baat karni he..

Riya:-muze pata he tum kya kehna chahte ho..

Arjun:-kya..?

Riya(ek taraf pray kar rahi he ke woh Jo soch rahi he woh sab galat he dusari taraf usaka dimag man nahi raha):- aap yahi kehna chahte he na ke aap Sakshi ko pasand karte he..?

Arjun( angrily):-/what the hell Riya..?

Riya:- muze Aayesha ne bataya tha ke Sakshi ke papa ke sath kya hua..I feel really bad for her..but I m glad u were there to support her..

Arjun'- Riya stop it..mein sirf ek dost ke Nate usaki help kar raha tha..

Riya:- its ok Arjun..I can understand may be shayad u feel interested in Sakshi or some other girl. .it's OK Arjun agar kisi aur ladki ke liye aapko attraction feel hota he Jo mere liye feel nahi hota.. U r free to live ur life..I will be always there for u as ur friend...

Saying this Riya turn to go.. But Arjun hold her hand n pull her to him. She almost hit on him..n tightly hold his shirt to support.. While Arjun's one hand holding her hand..n another hand now rested on her waist..

Arjun:- ab mein Jo kuch bhi keh raha hu gaur se suno..first.. Sakshi meri sirf dost he aur kuch nahi..

Riya just stared him..

Arjun:- second jiss attraction ki baat tum kar rahi ho..woh muze Sakshi ya fir kisi aur ladki ke liye sivay roshni ke feel nahi hua..

Riya still staring him..

Arjun :- third n last one.. Meine ye toh kabhi nahi kaha ke I don't feel attracted towards u..

Riya staring him in shock..

Arjun is smriking..

Same time abhi come there..

Abhi:-Arjun..??Riya..??

Arjun leave Riya..Riya moved away..

Abhi:-tum dono yaha..??

Riya look to Arjun who is staring her..

Riya(trying to hide her blush):-mein..mein bas apne room me hi ja rahi thi..

Saying this Riya left from there to her room hurrily..

Arjun give his signature pose to abhi..

Abhi goes to his room with smriking..

Here Riya is in her room sitting on bed..

She is not beliving on her ears what arjun had said in last..her heart is running marathon..

Next second she feels Arjun's footstep..

She hurrily lye on bed n close her eyes tightly posing as if she is sleeping..

Arjun come inside her room n lock door behind him..

He saw her sleeping..but he knows very well that she is not sleeping actually..

He shook his head n just lye besides her..

But could not sleep..

Ek toh usaka dimag soch me duba hua he aur dusara aaj hamesha ki tarah usane Riya ka hath nahi pakda he..issiliye woh bas karwate badal raha he..

Riya bhi ye samaz jati he..woh apna hath Arjun ke pass move kar deti he..lekin aise pose karte hue ke ye usane nind me kiya he..

Arjun smiles lightly..n hold her hand..

He keep staring Riya..

Arjun(in mind):-ha ye baat sach he Riya ke mein tumhare liye aur bhi bahot kuch feel kar raha hu..aisa attraction meine ab tak sirf roshni ke liye hi feel kiya tha..jab pune gaya tha tab bhi tumhe miss kiya..kya ye feeling attraction se badh kar he..?par mein firse pyar kar raha hu..?is it possible..?

He don't know when he fall in sleep..

Next day:-

Ariya hamesha ki tarah ek dusare se baat kar rahe he..has rahe he..toh samsha ko pata chal jata he ke finally Riya ki misunderstanding clear ho gayi he..

Sakshi also come to office..but she is sitting with gloomy n sad face..

After her dad's death she is coming first time to office..

All look each other sadly..

Riya get up n goes to sakshi..

Riya:-Sakshi..tum thik ho na..?I know ye sawal puchna hi thik nahi he..par..just remember we all with u..u r not alone..ur etf family is there..

Sakshi don't say anything just hug Riya..

Riya too emotionally hug Sakshi..

Baki sab(except samjun) bhi Sakshi ki taraf bhagte he..aur sab group hug karte he..

Sakshi:-ruko..ruko..

Sab side ho jate he..aur shocked hokar sakshi ko dekhte he..

Sakshi (looking to samjun):-har waqt officer mode me hona zaruri he kya..

Samjun shook their head in disbelief..

N they too come for group hug..

All share group hug..

At evening..

They had almost finished their work n all are ready to go home..suddenly shree's phone buzz..

Shree(on phone):-kya..?oh god..accha thik he...mein aa raha hu..bas aa hi raha hu..

He cut the phone..

Aayesha:-kya hua shree..?

Shree(panicked):-Liza ko labour pain suru hue he..ma papa usse hospital le gaye he..

Sakshi:-oh god..chalo shree jaldi chalate he..iss waqt usse tumhari sabse jyada zarurat he..

All reached to hospital.. Tab tak Liza ko bhi hospital laya gaya he..

Liza stretcher pe he..shree usaki taraf daudta he..

Shree(worrily):-Liza..tumhe kuch nahi hoga..don't worry sab thik hoga..don't worry ..mein hu na..

Liza (in pain,angrily):-tum ho issiliye ye sab ho raha he..na tum hote..na muze tumse pyar hota..na hamari shadi hoti..aur na baccha..speaky sen agar aaj ke baad muze hath bhi lagaya na toh soch Lena..khud tumhe mar ke apne hi hatho se postmartum karugi..

Shree bechara itna shocked he ke bas Liza ki taraf dekhe ja raha he..

Sam(mutter to shree):-don't worry shree.. Liza iss waqt dard me he na issliye ye sab bol rahi he..u know Aayesha toh itni strong he ke bade bade criminals ko dhoti he..par woh bhi aaryan ke waqt aise hi ho gayi thi..aur usane bhi muze aise hi kuch dhamaki di thi..

Now shree's shocked eyes turn to Sam..

Sam nodded in positive..

Shree sigh..

Shree(holding Liza's hand):-tumhe Jo bhi karna he kar Lena mere sath..par usse pehale tum aur baby sahi salamat ghar aao..

Liza(with tears):-oh speaky sen..I love u..

Shree:-I love u too lizard..

Abhi took Liza in room..all other waiting worrily out of room..

Abhi ek gynaecologist he..aur wahi Liza ko treat kar raha he..

After almost 2 hours,abhi come out..

Abhi:-shree..congrats beti hui he..n ur wife is too safe..

Shree(happily):-thank..thank u so much abhi..kya ham usse mil sakhte he..?

Abhi:-thodi der baad..

Abhi:-left from there with smile..

Everyone congratulate shree..shree toh cloud9 pe he..

Thodi der baad sab log Liza ke room me hote he..Liza ko congrats kar rahe he..

Riya:-Liza..plz..mere bechare best friend ko mat marna yaar..

All other laugh..Liza make puppy face..

Liza:-sorry shree..pata nahi kya ho gaya tha muze..

Shree:-its OK Liza..aaj ke din tumhare liye sab maaf he..aaj tumne muze meri zindagi ki bahot badi khushi di he..

Saying this shree took baby in his hands..

All gathered around shree to see baby..started talking about baby..n making noise so that baby look to them..

Shree(bhale hi Riya na kehati ho par shree toh usaka best friend he..Bina bole hi usake dil ki baat samaz jata he..):-ri..tu itne piche kyo khadi he..?don't u want to see my baby..?

Shree goes towards Riya holding baby in his hand carefully..

Riya saw the baby..she remember about her baby..but she somehow manage to control her tears..

Riya:-she is so cute..par..par..I hope ye Teri tarah gazet freak na ho..

All others giggle except two people ..Arjun n shree..they knows though infront of all Riya is smiling n trying to make smile others..but from inside she is feeling broken..

Arjun softly hold her hand unknown to all..

She look to Arjun..Arjun give her light smile..

She nods little..

Sakshi:-chalo..ab sab nikalte he..ab Liza aur baby ko rest karne dete he..

Chotu:-ha..shree..mein tum sabke liye khana bhijawa dunga apne ghar se..

Aayesha:-aur mein yahi rukti hu..kisi cheez ki zarurat padi toh..

Riya:-no Aayesha..tumhe bhi toh rest ki zarurat he na..tum bhi pregnant ho..office ka kaam,ghar ka kaam..mein ya Sakshi yaha ruk jate he..

Aayesha(in mind):-hey bhagwan..pata nahi ye fake pregnancy ka drama kab tak karna padega..plz kuch karo..god..

Aayesha smiles..all others trying to hold their smile..

Aayesha:-Riya..muze thodi na kuch kaam karna he..bas baithna he Liza ke pass..u don't worry..aap sab ghar jao..

All left to home..Aayesha stayed at hospital.. Abhi bhi duty ke liye hospital me hi he..Sam ko kuch kaam he toh woh commissioner ke sath busy he..

Ariya come back to Sam's home..both are lonely at home..Arjun order food for them..both took dinner..but he knows Riya usake pregnancy ke bare me soch ke dukhi he..aisa nahi he ke woh shree n liza ke liye khush nahi..par woh khud ke liye dukhi he..aur Arjun ko samaz nahi aa raha ke Riya ka mood thik karne ke liye kya kare..