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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ok guys... I am back once more with a new OS... Hope you like it... This is actually what i want to see on the show someday... Hope the Cvs have something like this in store for us. Enjoy reading and let me know your thoughts:


Sona has had enough for the day... First Dev's irritating mami always remind her that they need a girl for Dev who is like Natasha or may be Natasha is the one. Ishwari Auntyji, Neha, Riya and Nikki everyone has already started liking Natasha. And whenever Natasha comes the girls starts giggling... This is what hurts Sona and to top it all she always see Dev talking sweetly to Natasha and discussing stuffs other than their business. This hurts her the most.

She has now started ignoring Dev. She always avoid coming face to face with him now. And even if he's around she don't look at him at all. And Sona thought Dev is not at all getting affected. As, this was a one sided love story according to her.

On the other hand... Dev is disturbed... He's not getting a single chance to talk to Sona these days. She's not talking to him. They have not argued on even a single topic since a week. She doesn't even make an eye contact with him. And Dev being Dev didn't have a reason to call and talk to her. He thought it would be stupid if he calls her for no reason... He was feeling ignored. He's not talking to the one he has started sharing his feelings to. He is extremely upset about the fact.

The only way to see Sona and get a chance to talk to her is to be at home in the afternoon. He has started making excuses to hold meetings at home now. And who else he has these meetings with... Natasha. He was not aware that Sona's cold behavior towards him is because of Natasha's over friendly nature.

He tried but she didn't come infront of him even today. After the meeting he had to drop natasha to her place. As soon as Natasha entered the car... Dev saw Sona coming out... And finally they had an eye contact. Ufff... There was a sort of relief and longing in Dev's eye and even Sona had that longing in her eye. But seeing natasha she was upset.

Dev instantly said... Come Ms. Bose... I'll drop you after dropping Ms. Gujral. Pat came the reply: its ok Mr. Dixit... Our ways are different. I can go by myself. Dev was hurt with her words. She don't even want him to drive her home now. He was thinking what has he done... But there was no answer to it.

Dev: Its too late Ms. Bose... Come i'll drop you. Its not safe to go alone at night.

Sona: No Mr. Dixit... Look there's taxi behind you. I'll manage. You have some important work to finish. You should go.😭

Dev: But...😕

Before Dev could say something Sona started walking not looking at Dev.

Natasha: Dev... I am getting late... Can we please go now.🤢

A worried Dev sat on the drivers seat and started driving. Natasha was continuously talking to him. But he was not listening to any of her talks.

Dev thought to himself: Why is she so stubborn? Why is she not talking to me properly? Now she don't even want me to drop her home... I have never seen someone so damn stubborn and suddenly he remember what Tina told him once that Sona is as stubborn as him. And a sweet smile came on his face.😊 Natasha was a bit surprised with his smile.

All way long Dev was worried that whether she reached home safely or she is on her way... He just wanted to drop Natasha as soon as possible and go back to see whether Sona reached safely.

And here Sona didn't take the cab and started walking alone not realizing it is not safe at this time in night.

Dev dropped Natasha and as soon as she was out of his car without even greeting Gudnite he made a call to Sona... But an upset Sona was crying and she cut the call which made Dev angry... What does she think of herself? Here i am worried like hell and she's not even picking my call... Enough... I have to talk to this girl now... The anger vanished in a fraction of seconds and the worry overpowered his mind.

Here Sona was walking unaware of the surrounding. Few goons saw her and started walking with her. After a few steps Sona noticed them. She stopped... Who are you guys? What do you want?

And these guys started misbehaving. Sona slapped one of them in anger. She was not the one to take the crap from these roadside romeos. She was about to call her dada but by mistake dialed Dev's number. A smile came on dev's face seeing her number... He picked the call and one of the guy snatched her moblie.

Dev: Hello. Ms. Bose... You reached home safely?

There was no reply and suddenly he hear something... It was Sona's voice. Give my phone back to me or i'll go to the police. Those creeps started laughing and Dev panicked.😲

Sonakshi... Sona... Sona... Can you hear me? Where are you? Talk to me dammit... He didn't cut the call and started driving like mad. He had never before drive the car in maximum speed. The worry, anger, restlessness... He was experiencing all these feelings at the same time.

Here Sona was trying to get her phone back. Obviously it was given by Dev to her... And for her this could be the last thing she had of Dev with her. The goons were trying to touch her. She took a rod from the roadside to scare them. But they were 4 in number and thought they'll overpower Sona... One of them snatched the rod from her and Sona was scared. One of the goon came near her. She closed her eye in fear.

And heard a sound of fighting. As soon as she opened her eye... There was Dev beating those guys black and blue.😊

She couldn't believe what she is seeing. But it was true. Dev was furious... His eyes were red in anger... Sona uttered Dev and he looked at her equally worried and angry... The goons after the fight ran away. Dev came to Sona in anger and she clutched his hand tightly out of fear and started crying... She was not ready to leave his hand at any cost... What would have happened, if you were not their... I don't know what they would have done to me... I would have died Dev... He sensed her fear... Cupped her face and said... Everything is fine Sona... Nothing happened. Look you are fine now... Let me drop you home. She took her phone from the ground and Dev made her sit in the car.😳

Dev started driving... He made her calm but was still extremely angry at her and she sensed the anger.

Sona: I am sorry.😭

Dev: What sorry? And why are you saying sorry to me...!

Sona: You are angry at me... I know.😭

Dev: Who am i to get angry... I am not angry at all.

Sona knew he don't want to talk to her because of her stubbornness today. It was her stupidity. Anything could have happened if he was not their and she started crying.😭

Dev: (He just can't see tears in her beautiful eye) Why are you crying now? Stop crying. Now stop behaving like a Kid Sonakshi. Please don't cry.😭

Sona was crying uncontrolably now... Dev stopped the car by a roadside. Stop crying Sonakshi... But she was not listening. He came out of the car... And bought her out too. His anger melted watching her cry vigorously.

Dev: Ok... Ok... Now stop crying... Look nothing happened... You are fine... Nothing happened... Everything is fine. I am with you.😊

And this was it. Sona couldn't control anymore and hugged Dev tightly like never before. And Dev responded to the hug for the first time. This was their first hug.

Sona: I am sorry Dev... I am really sorry. It was all my stupidity. What if something happened today... What would have i done... What if you were not there?😭

Dev: Shhh... Stop it now. I told you na nothing happened. And till i am with you nothing bad can come near you... I am their always. So just stop crying... Please.

Sona(Still crying) Didn't want to break the hug. She held him tighter now and even Dev was lost in the hug. The thought of what if something happened to her scared him to the core. He couldn't understand why was he scared like hell.

Sona's hand touched Dev's hand and she felt something. It was blood. She panicked.

Sona: Dev... You are hurt. Show me your hand.😲

Dev: Nothing happened to me. Its a small cut. Let it be.

Sona: Are you mad? There's so much of blood... Show it to me.😭

Dev: I said let it be.

Sona just pulled his hand.

Dev: But...

Sona: Shut up and let me dress the wound. Don't be stubborn.😊

She took out the first aid box and started dressing the wound. Dev was lost in her beauty... The innocence in her eyes... They way she was looking worried for just a small cut on his wrist. He was lost.😳

It was the first time Dev felt something like that. His heart skip a beat... Or may be he had this feeling since long but never before thought about it.😳

Sona looked at Dev and he came out of his thoughts...

Dev: Well... Why were you fighting like that with those creeps for just a phone. Are you mad? (with a worried face)😲

Sona: You won't understand.😊

Dev: And why is that so?😕

Sona: Let it be.

Dev: (with seriousness in his voice now) I want an answer. Look at me Sonakshi.🤢

Sona: I said let it be.

Dev: I won't tolerate this stubbornness anymore. Tell me Sona. I am talking to you.🥱

Sona: Because you gifted me... And she realized what she uttered just now.

Dev was looking at her surprisingly and a tear roll down Sona's eye.

They were lost in an eyelock.

Sona thinking do you have the same feelings Dev... And Dev thinking why is my gift so special to her... She didn't even cared for her life for that stupid phone... and why are you avoiding me Sona... What's my mistake... And what's happening to me these days..!!😳😳


The End..!!!! This is the end to the OS, but a start to the two-sided DevAkshi love story..!!! Do share your views guys.😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
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OMG...I loved it..and i hope the writers see this one to put in the actual story...PLZZZ
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this is so amazin!!!! their first hug aahh i can feel it!! i really want this to happen on the show!!!
u r really a good writer!! thank u for writing this one 😊
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Awesome writing..
pls update quickly cant wait
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Originally posted by: bundleofjoy

this is so amazin!!!! their first hug aahh i can feel it!! i really want this to happen on the show!!!
u r really a good writer!! thank u for writing this one 😊


Thank you for the kind words.🤗
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Originally posted by: -Raz-

OMG...I loved it..and i hope the writers see this one to put in the actual story...PLZZZ


Even i wish they add something like this in the actual story.😊
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Originally posted by: sammy8182

Awesome writing..

pls update quickly cant wait


Thanks for the appreciation dear... I didn't think of an update though.😊
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Superb, awesome, tremendous OS...I feel it actually happens in front of my eyes 😊 ... I wish CV team were read your OS nd the story of d show unfold like this 😊
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Originally posted by: Ferdous_69

Superb, awesome, tremendous OS...I feel it actually happens in front of my eyes 😊 ... I wish CV team were read your OS nd the story of d show unfold like this 😊



Awww... Thanks for appreciating.🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely! Lovely! Lovely! I definitely want something like this to happen in the show.

And you know what's the best part? Sona fighting back with goons. Loved how she just didn't let go. Good thing Dev Babu is lost in her! 😆

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