Teri yaad mein, a sonnet for Swara :)

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Hi lovelies,
Posting from my phone for the first time and also I've done this kind of writing for the first time. It's a page from Sanskar's diary, where he is writing a sonnet for the missing beloved. Do share your views.
Love,
Sakura



yeh baadal tumain bhi dekh Tha honga,
hawa se yun bathatha honga,
ke jaa ke thumain bathaye kabhi,
yahan hum kithna akhela honga...
bin chaand ki yeh sithare,
thumare bina jaise aangan,
hawaon Mein hamari ehesaas,
kabhi Na kabhi tho aaya honga...
Garajthe baadal poochtha honga,
kahan hai wo bhahoon ka Sahara,
jub kabhi baarish Jo aayein,
hamara kwaab toh aata honga...
mausam ki tarah chale aaonge,
aadat hai intazar ka,
ibadat iss mohabbat ki,
thumne bhi toh kiya honga...
nigahon Mein thumarein hum,
kudh ko dekh Na chahathe hai,
chaltha raha tere thalasha Mein,
Teri bahon Mein ruk Na chahathe hai,
anjaan apni jaan se ho gaye thum kaise,
rooh hoon thumari tum bhool gayi kaise...
dill pe Na do dastak,
mehemaan ki tarah,
samandar hoon Teri intazaar Mein,
nadhi tumain toh aana hi honga...

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Wonderful sonnet Sakura
Each and every line is so beautiful .
Loved it.
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Originally posted by: Vini224

Wonderful sonnet Sakura

Each and every line is so beautiful .
Loved it.


Thanks Vini! I'm glad you liked it 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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beautiful...! just beautiful. 😳 loved it.
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Saku,
Its amazingly beautiful!!

Mrs Swara Sanskaar Maheshwari is gonna be missed until she is back

-Shonali
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Originally posted by: Helee

beautiful...! just beautiful. 😳 loved it.


Thanks a lot 😊
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Originally posted by: .IamShonali.

Saku,

Its amazingly beautiful!!

Mrs Swara Sanskaar Maheshwari is gonna be missed until she is back

-Shonali


Shona,
Super glad to see you here 😃
Thanks a lot. Yes, she will be heartily missed 😳
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Its beautiful Saku :)
I'm already braced myself to see heartbroken Sanskaar pinning for his Swara!
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Beautiful ,loved it 😳

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