A Love Lyrical. An Armaan Riddhima TS. Last part updated on pg 6.

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palak sharma

@lashyyy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

wow beautiful update
so many ups n down in their relationship
loved how you shows the pain of both ar
armaan struggle n ridhz pain for separation
it's awesome
so finally all is well n this misery also end
wow armaan really planned a beautiful surprise for ridhz
how he always keep watch on him
sent her flowers on every special day
n then the surprise performance it's really mind blowing.
loved it
thanks for the pm

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San

@slippedaffairs

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

This is so awesome Nim.

Aww Armaan is so sweet.

The songs were perfectly used at places.

The confession and everything was perfect to P.

I Loved it soo much.

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Seya

@se.ya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Hi :)

I know, I'm late but, I couldn't make it anytime sooner! Sorry :(

Since I'm sure that you're tired of listening to me saying that 'I loved it', this time, I'm changing the phrase to 'You Made Me Love It ❤️' :D

You did really make me love it! I'm not an angst lover, thus, I hardly read through each sentence of any chapter which involves angst in it. But, this, A Love Lyrical, is definitely one of those very few stories, where I have read every word or say each and every letter! Again, how are you so perfect at narrating?

It was difficult for me to read how hard it was for them to keep away from each other. Riddhima's condition, again, was very much relatable. I've noticed, you always make Riddhima's character more close to reality! I'm glad you do :) As I said, it's easier to relate to!

About Armaan, I loved his determination; unwavering love towards one that he believed, is meant for him! A perfect fairytale character, I say! Beautiful :)

Again, love your writing and keep writing more and more!

Take care :)

Yours

Sweety.