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hai sai...
hmmm u started to write ff's on ashlok... nice to hear that n read ashlok stories as i love them soo much
well it was nice start with the asthas words very emotional even a rude one also can melt for her pain, how much she bearing...well written in the 1st chap all her emotions...
oh god astha was suffering from fever... but she managesto be normal...
life was going to her but no happiness... shlok cant understand her nor himselself,
he cant even dont wat he wants y he was behaving...y want hurt astha...
oho asthu in that pain she remains to be back herself n bahaving normal to thought she will divorce him n this relation complete after this.
but she dont no wat was her inner heart feels actually she loves him with her whole heart but he broke that in term of revenge...
y shlok ur seeing anything in one way only u better understanding asthu everyway then this confusion was not there na...
wat that so many accidents to harm astha... but at the same time saved by her hero...is this a plan to make them together or separate them.
anyway due accidents shlok thinking had changed little bit but the end wat he did not trusting her...
poor asthu no need to bear all these now u should take a step to away him its better then he know the value of u...
asthu u really awesome while going also ur thinking about his happiness want give him happiness in the form of swathi how sweet ur...no will get such lovely one like u but shlok is missing u...
i liked ur unconditional love...
sai the way u showed her in this writing i loved very much...
waw u gave good twist both divorced n accident to astha, shlok was trying his best to be with astha...
n try to convince the parents of astha...it was like movie for me those episodes... which she was in hospital n shlok went to astha's house to make accept him again by kalindi... superb
that meeting of ahlok n swathi was also like seeing movie one hero two heroins hero has to choose one in them whom will be that was very interesting...
the conversation bet three was well written... with simple words n no drama is there as they were prepared for anything...
now it was funny wat that niru baba accepted to stay shlok in astha's house hats of to him yar... he can do anything for his fame,to not to be distroyed...
kalindi was superb made condition...ofcourse she loved her daughter very much na...
i loved ajju n shlok bonding n their chat...the way she made shlok understand him how balance the life n love the ppl...
yes if such elders r there in our life no one have chance to do wrong things...
asthu ur rocking yar get back ur shlok with so much struggle...
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