twinj TS ::FIGHTING BACK:: upadated part 2 pg 1

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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey guys
I got an idea for a ts, which I jotted down and then thought of posting,
do leave your thoughts about it
the other part will be updated soon, maybe by tonight,
love you loads
sakshi

fighting back

the sarna clan had assembled in twinj's bedroom
kunj was on the couch, twinkle's head on his shoulder and his arm around her, bebe was pacing the floor in big wide hurries steps, leela and usha sat on the bed, heads joined in deep thought, cherry and anand were lazily sprawled on the yellow chairs, mamu stood beside leela, muching on a chocolate.

"oye good for nothing log ! kisi ne kuch socha kya?" cherry spoke, breaking the silence,
the clan had assembled for the soul purpose of defying yuvi once again.

everybody shook their heads, at which cherry groaned. "yaar, mai toh is yuvi se tang aa gya hu, peecha hi nahi chodta hai humara" anand spoke in an irritated tone.

"yeh baat toh tune ek dum sahi kahi, good for nothing, jab dekho tab aajata hai jaan khane, pehle jhoothe sign karwata hai, jhoothi shaadi karta hai, twinkle bhabhi ji ko pareshaan karta hai, saala batameez kahin ka" cherry grinned as mamu made his way to him, and hi5-ed him to show he agreed.

suddenly twinkle sat up straight, making kunj tighten his arm automatically, lest there be some trouble,"ha toh jhoothe sign srif woh thodi na karwa sakta hai," twinkle spoke, her eyes shining,kunj raised an eyebrow"tu kehna kya chahti hai?"

"mai yeh kehna chahti hu kunj " everybody started paying attention, straightening up and looking at her eagerly"ki usne humse divorce paper pe sign karwae the na? jisko ki hum obviously nahi mante hai, but hum bhi toh kuch aisa hi karwa sakte hai"

leela smiled, a confused look on her face"mai kuch samjhi nahi puttar, saaf saaf bol na"

twinkle sat up straighter and intertwined kunj's hand with hers"arre ma, dekho, what if hum humare lawyer ko bulaye and use kahe ki meri and yuvi ki so called shaadi ko court mein register karna padega, you know, woh official signatures required hote hai wgarah wagarah !?" everybody nodded
"toh hum shaadi ke papers ko divorce papers mien badal denge" she spoke.

kunj suddenly pecked her on the cheek out of excitement, "zabardast plan hai siyappa queen", twinkle blushed, as bebe coughed, making kunj realize what he had just done, that too infront of everyone"uuugh" kunj opened his mouth to try explaining, but he did not know what to say"mai wohh-"

"koi nahi kunj, abhi tughe maafi, teri biwi ne idea mast diya hai yaar" cherry spoke up, making kunj blush harder.

"waise yeh plan toh sachi mein acha hai twinkle puttar, kuch nahi toh at least ise try toh kar hi sakte hai na,"

"waise yeh maa bete ki Jodi hai kahan," usha spoke "kahin humari baatein toh nahi sunn rahe hai?"

"are nhi maa" anand spoke up"anita yuvi ko sherwani ki fitting ke liye*imagine some place* le gayi hai, aaj sham tak ane ka plan hai unka, and ghar pe humare sive koi nahi hai, toh darwaza band hai, and is room ka bhi toh darwaza band hai"

"twinkle, tu aise achanak se use accept karegi toh use shak nahi hoga kya ?" kunj spoke again, twinkle shook her head, "uske bbhi solutions hai mere paas" she grinned"do cheese kar sakte hai, yah toh tum mughse batameezi se baat karo, and bade wale jhagde ki acting karo mere saath, ya toh fir kisi social butterfly ko pata ke hum use is shaadi ki insult karne ko kahen, ki yeh shadi registered nahi hai, and all that,?"

kunj smiled big,"oye siyappa queen, khaya kya hai tune aaj? dimag hai ya metro train?" twinkle smiled bigger and squeezed his hand.

"ha puttar, yeh tph tu ekdum sahi keh rahi hai, lekin kaun sa part karna hia?" bebe said thoughtfully,
"are bebe" cherry grinned, "aaj raat ko kunj ko chillane do twinkle bhabhi ji par, and fir woh tv ki heroin ki tarah, poore ghar mein bhatak bhatak kar roh sakti hai, kal subah, haldi ke function se pehle, mai mere dost ki ma ko bulalunga and fir dekhenge baith kar hum TAMASHA !!" he laughed at his own idea, but everybody else was seemingly impressed.

"done toh fir, twinkle kunj sarna, get ready for the fight" kunj spoke with a giggle, twinkle mock smacking him and laughing, making everybody laugh in the process.
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in then evening, after yunita have arrived, just before dinner, a smash was heard from twinj's room, everybody rushed there,"AISE KAISE TU ITNI CARELESS HO SAKTI HIA TWINKLE!?"
kunj was shouting, pieces of shattered glass lay on the floor,
"ITNI CHILLANE KI ZAROORAT NAHI HAI KUNJ, TUMNE MUGHE BATAYA THA KYA?" twinkle shouted back,
"TUGHE HAR BAAT BATANA JAROORI NAHI HAI MUGHE" kunj's increased hi volume by a lot, making everybody wince,
"kunj ? twinkle ? baat kya hai, aise kyu jhagad rahe ho dono? abhi toh tumhe ek dusre ko support karna chahiye na?"bebe spoke softly, trying to end the fight,

"kya support bebe? yeh ladki mughe pagal kar degi ek din, " kunj spoke looking at twinkle, who was tring hard to stop herself from smiling,

"arre lekin hua kya hai" bebe spoke, already frustrated,

"arre bebe!" kunj groaned"mera London wala project yaad hai? twinkle ne un papers ko phek diya"

bebe gasped and usha groaned "twinkle yaar, jabse is shadi ka kissa shuru hua hia, tum aise bewakoofo wali harkat kaise kar sakti ho,"

"twinkle bhabhi ji, aap bhi good for nothing hi nakali" cherry spoke in between, trying his hardest to not smile,

twinkle faked some tears"kaise ho tum sab, agar mughe pata hota toh mai phekti kya? tum sab toh mughe aise baat kar rahe ho jaise maine yeh sab jaan mugh ke kiya ho ?"

she ran out of the room, and yunita surprised, hi5ed each other, "himmat kaise hui teri kunj" yuvi moved towards kunj in anger"woh meri biwi hai, tu use aise baat nahi kar sakta hai"

anita huffed and moved out of the room, murmuring a sympathetic"meri bechari bahu."

as the villains departed, kunj took a breath and slid on the bed"now that was difficult," he said getting up and starting to walk out of the room, when bebe grabbed his arm,"kahan chale kunj?"

"twinkle ke paas, aur kahan," kunj spoke as a matter of fact"mughe lag raha hia maine shayad jyada zorr se chilla diya uspe"

bebe and cherry smiled, "oye kunj, thand rakh" cherry spoke in a soft tone,"teri biwi ka hi plan tha woh, use bura nahi lagega," he placed his hand on kunj's shoulder,"lekin ek baat kahu? tum dono mia biwi bade lucky ho jo ek dusre ka saath hai tumhare paas"

kunj smiled as the duo departed, pulling out his mobile from the pocket of his jeans,
-on the text message-
kunj: u okay ? :( ...sorry , thoda zyada chilla diya na
twinkle: im great, and nhi tumne achi acting kari;)
kunj: :) mai tumse milne aa rha tha, bebe ne kaha ki pla flop hoga agar mai gaya toh*pout*
twinkle: aww mera pyara sa husband, kitni fikar karte ho meri
kunj: woh toh hia , jab biwi aise risky kaam karegi toh fikar nahi karu toh kya nachu?
twinkle: *pout* ek secret batau?
kunj: batana ho toh bata
twinkle: tughe nahi bataungi toh kise bataugi?
kunj: bol na
twinkle: I love you
kunj: :D
kunj: I love you more
twinkle: haw, mai tumse jyada pyar karti tu
kunj: acha ?? zyada bhav mat kha, puri duniya janti hai ki mai tughse zyada pyar karta hu
twinkle: lol
kunj: tughe yeh funny lag rha hai?
twinkle: nhi, tumhara pyar funny nhi lag rha h, woh toh meri favourite cheez hai,
kunj: toh hasi kyu?
twinkle: humne fight shuru kari on the topic that who loves the other more
kunj: lol yes, hum dono jaise koi nahi,
twinkle: I see anita the chudail coming to me, baad mein baat karti hu
kunj: yeah, best of luck

to be continued
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Posted: 9 years ago
#2
This is awesome Sakshi loved it.
Cant wait for d next part.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved the start 😳
Cant wait for the next part
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#4
its superb
how you showed the caring kunj is sooo good
let's see what will happen next
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hahahahhaha that was funny nd cute at the same time.. hahahah 🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
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🤣 lol mast plan..that was damn funny and cute at the same time..how do you think of such hilarious scenarios..m in love with the dialogues...bang on they are..almost alike in the show..and cherry's involvement is best..would love to see more of his scenes on the show as well. Love it!👏..Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
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im sorry im late, but I got back from my classes and was lazy.
but here's the part two, and part three comes soon enough
hope you guys like it



anita strolled into the room a little too graefully for a pretence even, twinkle inwardly signed, agreed she had a great plan ahead, but how can you expect twinkle kunj sarna to spend even a few minutes with a person who didn't even deserve to be called one, twinkle sobbed, acting perfectly,

"maine toh kaha tha na twinkle, yeh sarna's koi kaam ke nahi hai, is kadar chillate hai jaise pao ki jooti ho, ek toh khud kangal hai and upar se tumse aise - chee chee, sharam karni chahiye in logo ko, waise bhi, tumhara na, inke beech reh kar kuch nahi ho sakta hai, ek woh kunj-"

"lekin mai hi kyu" twinkle converted her anger into her tears, her blood boiled like anything at Anita's words, and she was going to start talking about her husband? nope- her name is Mrs. twinkle kunj sarna and she wasn't going to listen to anything against her husband, not at any cost.

"toh tum upset kyu ho rahi ho twinkle?" anita sadly smiled, stroking twinkle's hair, doing a happy dance inside her brain, "mai aur yuvi hai na tumhare paas, ab toh officially tum meri bahu ho" twinkle winced inwardly at the word"and hum logo ki responsibility bhi, toh tumhe unki kya zaroorat hai ?"

twinkle sniffed, the hard part was coming now,"shayad aap sahi keh rahi hai," she sobbed again"aapko atleast meri fikar toh hai," and seeing yuvi walk up to her"and yeh dekho, yuvi aa gaya, lekin kunj? uska toh koi pata hi nahi hai, is duniya mein mera koi nahi hai she dropped to her chair.

"aise na bol twinkle, hum hai na tere paas, tu aise bolegi toh humara kya hoga" yuvi said, and was about to stroke her hair when twinkle hugged anita auntie- us yuvi ke touch se behtar toh is chudai ke gale lag jau, she thought as she winced, feeling anita wrap her hands around her frame.

"tum thodi derr jake aaram kyu nahi kar leti? thoda better feel karogi," ainta spoke as twinkle broke from the hug, sniffing"yuvi ise apne kamre mein le ja, bechari bohot hurt hui hogi"

yuvi's room ? twinkle almost got a heart attack, nononononono, not his room, she smacked herself inwardly, phirse siyappa ?!

"are mummy ji, uski zaroorat nahi hai, actually bubbly parso trip pe jaa rahi hai collage ki taraf se, toh usne mughe invite kiya tha for a night stay, mai ja sakti hu kya?" twinkle spoke like a baby, even though yuvi had bad intentions towards twinkle for the night, he couldn't help but melt at her baby face, he nodded before anita could realize what was happening and twinkle smiled a little and ran from their, stopping directly in bubbly's room.

twinkle huffed, damn, that was long, opeing the door, she almost knocked the life out of the poor sister who was harmlessly sitting and stuffing her wadrobe with clothes.

"deeds ? aap yahan, itni raat ko ?" twinkle hugged bubbly so hard that the poor soul couldn't breath, "ha main yahan, waise aaj tune meri jaaan bachai hai, toh hug toh banta hai na!?"

"maine aapki jaan kab bachai? mai toh aaj sham ko hi aayi hu nani ke ghar se" a confused bubbly cutely frowned at her sister, who suddenly got to the doors and windows and slammed them shut. bubbly out of habit understood it was one of those times when her sissy had to share something important with her, she got to closing the rest of the windows and then the sisters in sync fell on the bed, twinkle turned to face bubbly and filled her in with her happenings of today.

"deeds, waise plan toh bohot acha hai, im proud of you" she said, but was left surprised when twinkle went on her back again, with a pout."kya hua ? all okay na?"

"kya all okay bubbly," twinkle groaned. she signed heavily and closed her eyes" mughe kunj ki yaad aa rahi hai, mughe na uske paas jane ka mann ho raha hai," she blushed slightly at the sentence and grabbed a pillow and placed it over her face.

"awww deeds, see I told you na, ap dono ko bas ek dusre ke liya banaya hua hai" bubbly pulled twinkle's cheek as she blushed harder"lekin don't worry, apki yh behena na, ab apna kamal dikhaye gi"

twinkle looked at her sister as she grabbed her phone, and called somebody,"hello, pairi pauna bebe--ji mai thik hu, aap ?--ha, ek kaam toh tha--ji mai na actually kunj jeeju ko twinkle deeds se milwana chahti hu, toh aap na thodi derr ke liye uv and anita pe nazar rakhiye ki woh jeeju ke aas paas na bhatke and jeeju pe nazar na rakhe--ji? ji ji, main abhi jeeju ko phone kar rahi hu, --and ha, is bare mein kisi ko bataiye ga nahi, ha, thik hai , okay --yeahh--bye--Namaste bebe!"

by now twinkle was up and awake, her confused look making bubbly laugh"aap hi se seekha hai deeds, itne shock mat ho" twinkle shook her head and motioned bubbly to continue, who was by now calling radhika, her very best friend, and then aman, her other best friend, some gibberish was exchanged which twinkle didn't pay attention to but then--"jeeeju! hi- ha ha, apki biwi mere paas hai,*laugh* --don't worry mai unka ache se khyal rakh rhi hu, acha ab suno, -- ha, aman aaye ga thodi derr mein, yeh keh ke ki use kuch help chahiye, aap uske saath chale jayege ga, okay, aapke liye ek surprise hai uske paas--ha twinkle deeds thik hai jeeju, bharosa nahi hai kya mughpe? ha thik hai--okay, bye!!"

"twinkle deeds chalo" bubbly dragged her out of the bed," jaldi chalo na yaar- hum dono late ho jayege" twinkle thought it was better to keep mum than to question her sister, so she nodded and moved along the path bubbly walked on.

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ouside the singhania house

bubbly pulled twinkle out of the taxi and moved towards the grl at the door, she was dressed in large pj's that drowned her fat frame, "radhika !!" bubbly hugged her friend and grinned as two headlights flashed their way, and a car came to a halt in front of the mansion, twinkle seemed disinteestied and looked on to the - wait what ? kunj? here? twinkle's mouth flew open as she gaped at bubbly, who merely winked"your welcome deeds. anything for my sister!"

twinkle ran into kunj's arms as he lifted her up and burrowed his face in her neck, "missed u" he said, a murmur so soft that only twinkle could hear,"missed you too" her muffled up whisper only made sense to kunj and no one else, who carefully put her down again and looked at bubbly,

"yeh sab kya chal raha hai saali sahiba!? enlighten us please?" kunj whispered, his voice betraying his happiness on being back with twinkle,

bubbly grinned and spoke "your wish is our demand jeeju, here goes the story,
I called up bebe and told her to keep the mother son distracted and busy, so that they could not spy on you, and then I called you to tell you whatever I said, I called radhika and fixed a sleepover with her and told ma to say that me and deeds went for a sleepover with my friends- no mention of who they are, I called aman and told him to act like a collage guy and bring you over, so now, yunita think, twinkle deeds is with me and you are with aman, but what they don't know is that aman is going to his beloved bed until 4 in the morning and I have a get together with radhika and you guys" she motioned towards twinj"get to spend the night away from all this troubles! what say ?"

kunj's mouth hung open, and twinkle slightly grinned, as realization hit her 'aap hi se seekha hai deeds, itne shock mat ho' she laughed and shook her head, confusing kunj more, "why are you laughing now?"

"i'll answer, she is the master mind of this plan jeeju!! " kunj looked more confused"she thought and implemented this plan about two years ago for me, so the perfect pay back huh?" bubbly laughed at kunj's face, poor guy seemed dazed,

aman yawned, "yaar bubbly, mughe subah 4 baje fir se uthna hai, toh mai jaa raha hu," he spoke yawning all the while, as twinj thanked him and the girls waved, radhika and bubbly bid a good bye to twinj and ran to the house while twinj stood had in hand, a whole night away from the prying eyes of the world, twinkle leaned her head against his chest as they begun to walk, aimlessly , happily enjoying the silent night breeze.

to be continued.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow!! Its really nyc...
thnku fr d pm.. :-)
Nd eagerly w8ing fr next part...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sorry fr walking in.so late,.,
Aaree kya perfect planning thi..
MazA aa gaya
Ye TEI walon.ko.padhna chaiye...
Kitna mazaa aayega,..
Full Family involve,..
Finally Chery talking sensibly...😆
Loved it..
Next part Sooner...
Link.me Pls..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#10
Awesome can't wait for d next part

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