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Posted: 9 years ago
oh my how could her family do this to her...now that they realize what she feels for maan too...glad she confessed to accepting his love yes she has not returned the confession but maan knows that she will stand by him...
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Wonderful part.. Geet want to give a chance to their relationship n maan is happiness is no bound... Can't believe geet fly can do such a cruel thing for revenge.. Geet took the bullet fr maan n critical.. I don't believe geet dad's crocodile cry yaar... Hope maan don't fall in to his trap.. Hope geet is safe... Pls cont soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
plz maan be careful...

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Posted: 9 years ago
I mean to say abt Sashi chor Gupta
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Originally posted by: nihatri

I mean to say abt Sashi chor Gupta

Oh! HAHAHAHAH!
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Thank you so much and sorry for the delay!
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Part 15

" And you think I will believe you Mr.Gupta? I am not that stupid, because anyone who has proper frame of mind will not be able to trust you after witnessing the extent you can stoop. You may as well leave now because I don't want my Geet to be stressed out by seeing you, once she wakes up." Maan ordered as he turned out not even waiting for the reply he would get from Shashi.

" My daughter may not see YOU after she wakes up, dear son-in-law!" Shashi exclaimed through his gritted teeth and before Maan could think of an answer to that and react, the sound of bullet being fired and a man yelping in deep pain, fell on his ears.

Maan instantaneously turned around to see Karan who was smiling at him in a rather painful manner, while his eyes noticed blood pooled near his feet, due to the wound caused by the bullet which hit him. It didn't take long before Maan realized what exactly happened in the few seconds. Shashi had come to the hospital to kill him directly but Karan took the bullet to save him. But why did he do it?

With the sound of bullet being fired, the security personnel rushed in to catch a running Shashi who was running to save himself after he saw Karan taking the bullet instead of Maan. With the number of witnesses and proofs against him, Shashi Gupta had no way to escape now for sure. But Maan knew it was not the time to waste his thoughts on a criminal but it was time to save a person so deeply in love.

" DOCTORS! GET THE DAMN STRETCHER!" Maan shouted his lungs out while he looked at Karan with a softened gaze which had just respect and admiration in his eyes as he supported his falling frame with his muscular hands.

" Why did you do this Karan? Why did you take the bullet on my behalf?" questioned Maan, as Karan looked at him with the same smile which was adorning his face ever since he was it.

" How could I not take it Maan? I had promised Geet that I will always protect her and her happiness and her happiness lies with you, within you. Even if I die while fulfilling a promise made to my Geet, I will not feel any regret." Karan breathlessly whispered as Maan's breaths hitched thinking of the possible consequences of him losing his breath. But much to his relief, the stretcher had arrived along with the emergency team, while he promised Karan, " Nothing will happen to you or Geet, Karan. This is my promise to you."

As the stretcher took a turn, and got away from Maan's sight he felt immense guilt filling in him for thinking that Karan was a bad guy, who wanted to use Khushi. He was guilty that he was snatching Karan's love from him, and he could also see how genuine Karan's love was for Geet.

Maybe he did wrong by marrying Geet again, but this time with force. After all, if he didn't marry Geet forcibly, Geet or Karan wouldn't have been in hospital, struggling between life and death after taking a bullet each for him and probably Geet would have been more happy with her family, her parents and a fiance who loved and valued her more than his own life.

As he was lost in his thoughts, he felt someone calling him which had effectively broken his reverie of thoughts. As he looked up, he saw a worried doctor looking at him with sympathy floating in his eyes.

" Mr.Khurana, this is about Mrs.Khurana's health. Her health is deteriorating constantly and it is better if you and meet her. Because now only prayers and love can save her and bring her consciousness back, without which we cannot confirm anything about her health." The doctor explained in a low voice while Maan's world crashing down. Why was destiny so harsh to separate all his loved ones from him, to take them away to the chamber of death?

The doctor left Maan in a shock, because he could understand that Maan was taken with shock and needed sometime to digest the hard reality. Maan regained his strength and composure, for his Geet.

With trembling hands, he opened the door of the room where Geet was laid after proving the extent of her love for Maan. He moved to her, making as less sound as possible to not disturb her and also because of the fact that all his strength both mental and physical had drained. He stood beside the bed, when Geet laid wrapped in everything white, wrenching his heart as his eyes burned with pain and the soul got scarred with love.

" I am with you, Geet. Nothing will happen to you, Geet. You will be alright, baby. You will be able to scold me like you always do." Maan muttered while resting his throbbing forehead against Geet's cold one, as she was constantly loosing her temperature indicating Geet's dropping health.

Maan started placing a trail of kisses while tracing her jawline with his rough lips, as he continued rubbing her palms in between his.

" If you want to punish me then do it dammit! But don't leave me. Because sans you, Maan Singh Khurana has no life. Come back even if it is to punish me Geet. Come back..." Maan whispered against her lips, before he claimed them in a passionate kiss, in hope to raise her dropping temperature and in an anticipation of a response.

Love does things, which are termed as miracles in the medical sciences. A firm yet soft moan was let out by Geet's lips into Maan's lips which made tears of happiness form in his eyes, which dropped on Geet's eyes as he rested his forehead against hers.

As Geet's eyes opened slowly and weakly, the sight which she beheld erased all her pain to give her just happiness. And just one sentence escaped her mouth,

" I love you, Maan..."

The faint, breathless hoarse whisper which left her lips, dallied storms in his heart while the tears of happiness flowed from his eyes as if he had won the entire world. As Geet's hands moved up to hold Maan's strong arms, warmth of their love had started to spread in their bodies. They were stuck in an ecstatic web of feelings as every other feeling in this world seemed vague to them.

" I love you too, Geet. I love you so damn much. Don't you dare do something as stupid as this. You are my life Geet. Without you, I cannot imagine myself for even a second." Maan whispered against her lips, as tears or ecstasy escaped from their eyes as the pain left from their lives.

A exquisitely beautiful and genuine smile adorned their lips, as they brought together the broken pieces of themselves by taking each other in an embrace of love.

But deep inside Maan was guilty of his actions in the past. Will this guilt separate these lovers once again? Or will Geet stop him?

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Edited by .MereRangMein. - 9 years ago
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Part 16

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After 2 Weeks,

Those two weeks seemed like ages for Maan as he waited and prayed for his wife to get well soon even if it is to scold him and leave him in a ocean of anguish. There was guilt, there was pain, there was anticipation but there was love which overpowered every other emotion.

To see his wife finally at his home, almost brought tears of happiness to his eyes to see his wife all hale and healthy. May be that was what true love was all about. When a person's pain wrenches your heart more than your own pain and their one smile erases all yours sorrows and agonies, and fills up your heart with satisfaction, understand that you have been a victim of true love.

After the most wanted confession, Maan felt himself losing the grip over his self-control but the guilt which possessed him seemed to make the grip tighter. And Geet, being his true soulmate could understand that there was something odd about Maan's behavior towards her.

As Maan supported Geet and made her walk into the room which was decorated for Geet's welcome, tears rolled out of Geet's eyes as pride filled her heart.

" What was the need of all this Maan? I know that you were more stressed than I was and still you thought of making this. How much more do you intend to make me fall for you?" Geet teased him about the small things which he does for her to make her feel immensely special and all the more in love with him.

" Shouldn't I be the one who should be questioning you about this? You have already drowned me in the ocean of your love and you are still making fall for you every time I lay my eyes on you. Not that I am complaining but this is not done." Maan was trying to be more cheesy and more fun-loving ever since the confession at the hospital after realizing that Geet was a typical Bollywood Fanatic who loved cheesy stuff and comedy. Maan cupped Geet's angelic face in his palms and placed a warm kiss of assurance on her forehead as Geet's eyes closed to lose herself in the moment.

The grip over the self-control began slipping away once again as Geet's hand held his hands which were holding her head. As he pulled himself away from her and looked at Geet whose eyes were closed and a pretty shade of red ran on her cheeks sensing his intense gaze lingering on her.

A shy Geet turned away from him, when Maan held her by her forearms and pulled her to him while Geet's back pressed against his muscular torso evoking sinful desires. He pushed away the hair which hid her skin from his bedroom eyes and placed it all on her right shoulder as he placed butterfly kisses all over her left shoulder and traced his path to her jawline as a sensuous moan escaped from Geet's lips while her eyes were closed as she lost herself in the moment of love, passion and desire.

As Maan's breaths tantalized her senses, Maan expertly threw away the veil which covered her as he bit her earlobe showing an example of his heightened desires for her.

He held her by her shoulders and turned her to face him while Geet's breath paced as she put tomatoes to shame. Maan once again cupped her face but not to place a kiss on her forehead but to capture her lips in a frenzy and passionate kiss. It felt as if she would melt by the way he was eyeing at her and her lips. As their breaths fanned their faces and the temperature of the room was being heated up, Maan's guilt came in play as he pulled out from the warm embrace controlling his inciting desires for his FORCED BRIDE.

Maan's sudden actions evoked a sense of shock in Geet, who still couldn't understand the reason behind his actions. But as soon as their eyes met and Geet felt the layer of guilt clouding the pools filled desire, Geet realized from where his actions were coming.

" Is this how much you love me Maan? If you want to feel guilty for something, then feel guilty for destroying my romantic mood and disturbing my passion. Maan, even if it to destroy me, love me. Even if it is to kill, don't leave me like this. Because without you, this Geet doesn't have any reason to live or an identity. I love you and I know that you can never hurt me, Maan. I trust you more than myself. So please don't go back on your actions and hurt me. Mujhe Hamesha Ke Liye Apna Bana Do, Maan. Please..."

Geet's words were like a balm to his scars of guilt and fuel to the fire of passion lit in the pools of his eyes.

" Are you sure, Geet?" Maan wanted to listen to her love-filled once again to reconfirm himself which Geet gladly did.

" I have never been more sure in my life, Maan." Geet answered without any kind of hesitance in her eyes or thought in her mind, making Maan's eyes swell with the fiery hot tears of happiness which burned and soothed him at the same time.

Maan scooped Geet in his arms while locking his own eyes with hers, as if capturing these moments forever in his memory so that he could relive these moments throughout his life.

There was unknown commotion in his mind which turned turbulent owing to the bewitching sight of his wife in the moonlight, who asked for nothing but except for him. With love-filled eyes, passion-filled actions, desire-filled steps Maan placed Geet on the bed as delicately as if she was a glass doll who would break if not handled properly.


The night was still young and the drowning in the ocean of passion, ecstasy and happiness was still remaining.

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Edited by .MereRangMein. - 9 years ago
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Last Part

Bheege hont tere, pyaasa dil mera

Lage abrr sa haan mujhe tan tera
Jamke barsa de mujhpar ghataayein
Tuhi meri pyaas tu hi mera jaa
Kabhi mere saath koyi raat gujaar
Tujhe subah tak main karu pyaar ha
Oh oh oh, oh oh oh, oh oh oh, oh oh oh

As Maan eyed at Geet's tantalizing form which lay in front of him, as it reflected the light of full-moon which had escaped to look at the surreal beauty named Geet, who had shut her eyes in coyness as she surrendered completely to the love and affection of her husband.


Maan placed tiny butterfly kisses all over her face, as her fingers played with his shirt buttons, as she tried to unbutton them in an inexperienced manner.

Maan placed long kisses of love over her eyes as he mouthed huskily,


" Look at me, Geet!"


Geet's eyes slowly opened to find a beautiful image, painted with love in the eyes which were staring back at them. What would you call it if even your reflection changes to that of someone whom you love? Love or something beyond a definition?


His dilated eyes drank the enchanting beauty of hers and the love which floated in her eyes.

Saansein aanch teri, tan aag tera
Chhine nind meri lute chain mera
Kaala jaadu karein lambe baal tere
Aankhein jhil teri ?? laal tere
Kabhi mere saath koyi raat gujaar
Tujhe subah tak main karu pyaar oh
Oh oh oh, oh oh oh, oh oh oh, oh oh oh

There were tears in both their eyes. But they were not the tears of anguish or distress like in the past, they were the tears of happiness, of bliss and of ecstasy that now filled their life.

The hot staggering breaths of Geet were fanning Maan's face, as dipped down to place a gentle kiss on her forehead which would put a thousand lip-locks to shame. Because that kiss was not that of passion, of desire or of lust. It was just pure love, which was truly lethal and dangerous for it existed in the most purest and truest form. After all, love was just like alcohol. It would leave you intoxicated, lost and addicted to it, only to destroy you one day.

But it is something no one wants a cure from. Just as love.

Maan moved towards his right, to gently bite Geet's earlobe as he took out her earring with his sensuous and hot mouth, while Geet's cheeks went ablaze due to the passionate ministrations of her husband. Her left earring also soon laid forgotten by both while both were soon covered by the veil, which once used to cover Geet's bosoms from the bedroom eyes of her husband.

Oh oh oh, oh ho oh, oh oh oh, oh oh oh
Aankhein keh rahi, jo na ham kahe
Use sun le tu jo na lab kahe
Tu na soye aaj, main na sou aaj
Tujhe dekhu aaj, tujhamein khou aaj
Kabhi mere saath koyi raat gujaar
Tujhe subah tak main karu pyaar


Maan held the zipper of her kurta to remove that piece of clothing which was serving as an obstacle for him from appreciating the natural beauty which his wife was.

Geet held his hand, in nervousness while her action hinted him towards her coyness. He held the hand with his other hand as he freed its grip on his hand holding Geet's zipper and placed a tiny butterfly kiss on it while Geet's eyes closed on alien feelings clouding her mind.

" Mujhe Haq Hai, Geet."

In one go Maan pulled the zipper down and soon the kurta was lying on the floor with no one caring for it. As Maan's bedroom eyes traced the scar left by the bullet on her angelic and soft bosoms, love flooded in his eyes which soon spilled tears out of them.

" Why, Geet? Why did you take the bullet for me?" Maan's voice cracked and was shaky due to emotional turmoil which was affecting him seeing the mark on her body which can never be removed.

" Waada Kiya Tha, Nibhaana To Padhega Hi Na, Maan." Geet sensed the confusion which clouded Maan's eyes which were glistened with both tears and the moonlight lingering on his face, " The seven vows we had taken unconsciously when we were mere children, Maan. One of them states that we both will protect each other no matter what and I just did what I promised that I will do."

Words after that would seemed cursed. Because there were no words which would express their love for each other. But their eyes, their eyes expressed the deepest feelings of their hearts in a language that they knew and understood perfectly. The language of love, the most beautiful and sacred of all the languages.

Maan placed a long, lingering and soothing kiss on her scar, which was completely healed by then, while Geet threw her head back while waves of pleasure engulfed her completely.

The clothes soon lay discarded on the floor, while Geet tried to cover herself from her husband with her hands. It was not shyness that was influencing her actions, it was the intense gaze of her husband which was making her go nervous.

" May I?"

Probably it was this change in his that made her fall in love with him. A person who had not thought before taking away the single piece of cloth on her body, was now asking her permission to kiss her.

" Tumhein Haq Hai, Maan."

And Geet buried her face in his chest, as emotions took a toll over her. Maan cupped her face with his one hand, while his other hand encircled her waist. He lifted her face as he started placing kisses all over her face, so that no inch of her face feels jealous of the other.

He gently turned Geet to place himself over Geet, as he captured her lips in a frenzy and passionate kiss, which made her go breathless as he went breathless by her reciprocation. As they parted for breath, Maan went southwards to worship her swan-like neck and collarbone, which was soon covered with the marks of his love, while his hair was ruthlessly pulled by Geet as she lost herself completely in the ocean of passion.

No single inch of her body remained unloved by him, as pulled himself away from him to take the final step in their passionate love-making to take their relationship to the next level.

" I am sorry, Geet. This will hurt you." Maan warned her in breathy tone, while Geet looked at him with her eyes wet with tears of love.

" If your love hurts Maan, then I am ready to be hurt every single second of my life." Geet's answer made his heart flutter with happiness and love.

With one single thrust, they had become one while the warm blood of hers greeted him at the entrance of her womanhood. As gasps of pain escaped her mouth, Maan stilled himself inside her while capturing her lips in gentle kiss after whispering sweet-nothings in her ears.

But soon the gasps of pain, turned into the moans of immense pleasure and groans of intense love.

And finally, after giving a trial by fire they had found their night of love and passion to become one forever, in every way possible.

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