twinj FF ::back home::

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Posted: 9 years ago
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hola people!!
im back with another story, this time an ff
its called back home, and its purely plotless. read on to know what it is about.

so this was something that I had dreamed at thought about, something that was on my mind for quite a few weeks, but I have no idea about what is gonna happen next, and I might or might not continue this, so YOU guys have to tell me if I should or not.

this might seem like a piece of crap to many poelpl, but being the hopeful person I am, im hoping its not.

this is just a part of the first chapter. do drop in your views on this.

loads of love
sakshi

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BACK HOME
a queen imagination


sarna mansion.

the house was quite. something that it had been accostumed to since the past 3 years. a silence that existed like thick air, no laughter and no happiness.
bebe sighed at the photograph in front of her, it was kunj and twinkle, laughing loudly as cherry was smacking the back of kunj's head and bebe had back hugged twinkle, usha and manohar were in the background, grinning at the happy sight of their loved ones, it also had mahi, she sat smiling at her didi's eyes, and also leela and rampi, holding their stomach trying to stop laughing. that was when times were good, something that no longer existed.
no, dont get her wrong, there was nothing wrong with their lives, something was just missing.
when yuvraj and his works got out of hand, bebe sent twinkle and kunj to jamaica, to keep them safe. and turns out it worked for better, twinj were happily settled there, and bebe got updated through weekly emails and once in a month video conference. she sighed more. yuvraj had died in a car accident and anita was now in prision. the lives of the sarna's were free and happily independent but they were empty. no longer did twinkle's laughter echoed in the hallways, no longer could kunj be seen running from an angry twinkle, no longer did usha and bebe talk about favourite foods with twinkle, no longer did twinkle sat and talked with papaji for hours making him laugh away, no making faces at the dining table and no falling asleep on shoulders could now be seen. the sarna mansion, though free from troubles, was an empty place.
bebe had to call a family outing today and called everyone, the taneja's and the sarna's. they were sitting in the living room, but not a word was spoken, strained smiles exchanged and some greetings passed. bebe sighed at the sight and lowered the eyes. suddenly the wind started blowing inside the house from the open doors, and dust entered everybody's eyes. clearing off the obstacles, everybody gasped. two figures, could be made out from the door, a man, with a dufflebad in his hand and his other hand grasping the hand of the petite lady beside him, whose other hand was wound carfully across a bundle who seemed asleep.
and the silence was broken by the wind, which flowed still, as bebe spoke aloud two words,
"twinkle? kunj ?"

tbc.

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17.sonal thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Definitely a go Head From Me...
Dnt ever Doubt...
And U r continuing this one...
Its Veru Interesting..
And Bebe being My Most Favorite Character...
I am In fr this...
Do PM me..😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: 17.sonal

Definitely a go Head From Me...

Dnt ever Doubt...
And U r continuing this one...
Its Veru Interesting..
And Bebe being My Most Favorite Character...
I am In fr this...
Do PM me..😉



thanks you di !!
im glad you liked it,
I will try my best to continue
and yep I surely will pm you
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice ff...interesting...pm me if possible... 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: hurrom

nice ff...interesting...pm me if possible... 😊


thank you
will surely pm you, don't worry
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting start 😳
Loved it
Cant wait for the next part
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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So nice FF Sakshi 👏loved it!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sakshi that was good. U should definitely continue. Definitely want some happy family moments. Love bebe a lot. Do pm me when u update. Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Absolutely LOVE the queens imagination! Yuvi dies n Anita in jail lol feel much better after reading that line🤣
And that was one evil cliffhanger. looks like they had a baby. this is so adorbs.
Stop teasing us yaar. Please update soon!

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: .Anisha.

Interesting start 😳
Loved it
Cant wait for the next part
Update soon



thank you
will update soon

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