***Ek Ajnabi Rishta*** rajveer naina (lrl) part 16 on 2 thread - Page 54

Originally posted by: Sweetmoon

When r u updaing???????? Pls update. Nd waiting to see d strong nd determined naina...nd ya who's dis rishi?

so sorry moon ji
yr thoda busy hujase he time milt h i will update chater ready h bas thoda sa edit karna h...

Originally posted by: ritikaagrawal

awesomeee😊
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thank u ritika 😃

Aarti,

Originally posted by: sridhsc

Aarti,

Update karo yaar, Reveal the FB

Then we can get to see more understanding in between RN.

sorry for the delay sri ...i will update tonight

Mujhe toh ab comment karne pe v Dar lag raha
Kahi tum meri eyes na phod do ki itti late comment
Bt fir v himmat karke comment kar ri 🤢
Yar such mai kya likha h
Really
Matlav naina itni badmash thi
Itti masti karti thi
Or thank god vo uncle ka jisne naina ko bachaya or apni beti ki tarh pala
Sach mai
Nai toh kya hota Naina ka
Naina or Tom boy 😆
Maza aa gya
But ye College mai kya hua aisa Naina ke sath
Or ye rishi kon h
Reveal soon yar
Waiting 4 update

Luv millee 😛 nd today scared too

Originally posted by: Milleegarg

Mujhe toh ab comment karne pe v Dar lag raha
Kahi tum meri eyes na phod do ki itti late comment
Bt fir v himmat karke comment kar ri 🤢
Yar such mai kya likha h
Really
Matlav naina itni badmash thi
Itti masti karti thi
Or thank god vo uncle ka jisne naina ko bachaya or apni beti ki tarh pala
Sach mai
Nai toh kya hota Naina ka
Naina or Tom boy 😆
Maza aa gya
But ye College mai kya hua aisa Naina ke sath
Or ye rishi kon h
Reveal soon yar
Waiting 4 update

Luv millee 😛 nd today scared too

* Ek Ajnabi Rishta****




Part 8


Naina : mere zindagi ka sabse bada grahna wo ...RISHI ...


(Guys maine toh yeh character kahi toh hoga wali rishi (shabir alhuwaliya) ko sch kar lekha hain par aap jise chao usse imagin kar sakte ho)


Naveen : Rishi ????



Naina : haa rishi... Aaj bhi yaad hai muje wo din jab main pheli bar college gayi thi...apni nayi college nayi scooty par...
Main aur mere saheli priya dono hi bohat exited the apne college life ko le kar ...jab hume apne college gayi toh asa laga ki hum kisi aur he duniya me aa gaye ho...hum dono hi middle class family se belong karte the ..aur waha share ke sabse rahez logo ke bache padhne aate the ...shuru shuru me hume bohat problem hoti thi adjust karne me...sab mazak bhi banate the ki hum jase middle class log waha kase puch gaye ...par maine kabhi inn baato pe dhayan nahi diya ...bas apne padhi ki our sara dayan laga diya dhere dhere hum uss mohol me adjust ho gaye ...main padhe me achi thi toh jald hk class ke bacho se mere dosti bhi hone lagi ...
Dekhte he dekhte ek saal kab beet gaya pata hi nahi chala ...ab toh mujhe dekh kar koi kah hi nahi sakta tha ki main wahi naina hu jo ek saal phele uss college me aayi thi ...aur college ke bache mujhse yeh kah kar baat nahi kiya karte the ki main ek middle class ladki hu...
In ek saalo me main college ki most popular girl ban gayi thi...padhai me humesha ki tarah best thi ...mere popularity sirf padhai ki waha se nahi thi ...main college ke har ek activity me part leti aur sab me hi best thi...mere joyful aur helpful nature ki wajah se teachers aur students dono ki he favorite thi main...

Par kahte hai na jada popularity bhi achi nahi hoti ...mere saath bhi kuch asa hi tha ...mere jada popular hone ki wajah se jaha log mujhe bohat like karte the wahi kuch logo ko main bilkul pasand nahi thi ...

Par maine kabhi in baato par dhayan nahi diya ...aur bas life ase hi haste khelte beet rahi thi ...
Main second year me thi jab achanak humare mid term me ek naya student aaya ...usse kisi wajah se achanak transfer kiya gaya tha humare college me ...
Hum sab haran the kyuki iss tarah mud term me kisi ko admission nahi milta tha toh usa ladke ko kase admission mil gaya ...woh college me aane se phele he kafi popular ho raha tha ...logo uske bare me baatein kar rahe the ...ki achana kase kisi ko admission mil gaya ...

Maine kafi kuch sunna uske bare me uske aane se phele he log kahne lage the ki woh kafi bigda hua hai...uske papa koi criminal the ..kafi paise wale ,political connections the unki ..jiski wajah se unke bete ko iss tarah saal ke bech me admission mil raha tha ...


Aaj bhi yaad hai mujhe woh phele mulakat...




****Flashback****



In college


Naina bhagte hue apni class ki taraf jaa rahi thi ...aaj traffic ki wajah se late ho gayi thi ...


Naina stairs pe bhagte hue upar ki taraf jaa rahi thi ...tabhi uska pair fisla aur wob sedheyo(stairs) se gairne hi wali thi ki kisi ne usse apni baho me pakad liya ...


Naina ne dar ke apni aakhe band karli thi...woh insan naina ke masum chahre ko dekhne me bussy tha ...




Boy : (very sweetly) ab aap aakhe khol sakti hain ...safe hain aap ...


Naina ne uss ladke ki aawaz sunn kar apni aakhe khol ..toh khud ke samne ek ajnabi chahra dekha ...
Naina jase kho gayi thi uske chahre me uski aakho me ...
Bas ek tak usse dekhe jaa rahi thi...



Boy : (concern) aap thik hain ...


Naina : (apne khayalo me khoyi hue) haa...


Boy : (smiling) maine pucha aap thik toh haa...



Ab naina jase hosh me aayi ...khud ko usse dure karte hue ...



Naina : ( embarrassed) ji wo thank u ... thik hu main



Boy : that's good ..par please jara dekh kar chala ki jiye abhi lag jata apko ...aagar main sahi waqt pe nahi aata ...



Naina : wo sorry main class ke liye late ho rahi thi ...isliye jaldi me thi...



Boy : koi baat nahi next time dhayan rakhiyega ... apse jada jaruri nahi hain class...



Naina : ( blushing) ji ...main chalti hu der ho rahi hain ...anyways thanks


Yeh kah kar naina waha se thoda sharmate hue jane lagti hain ...



boy : wase agar aap bura naa maine toh please ek help kar sakti hain ...actually main naya hu yaha ...aur mujhe mere class nahi mil rahi hain ...



Naina : (smiling) ji bilkul btaiye konsi class me hain aap...



Boy : B.A 2 year ...


Naina : (surprised) b.a 2 year...iska mtlab hum same class me hain ...chaliye main apko class dekha deti hu...



Boy : (happily) that's great ...Matlab mujhe aate hi ek dost mil gayi ...(little hesitated) well hum dost toh ban sakte hain na ...


Naina : (smiling) bilkul ban sakte hain ..(haath aage badhate hue) hiii i am naina ...



Boy : ( handshake karte hue ) hey i m rishi ...


Naina ke chahre ka rang udd gaya ..rishi ka naam sunn kar ..kyuki naina ne itna kuch suna tha uske bare me.. woh bhi sab galat ...par naina ko toh rishi bohat hi acha laga ...



Rishi : kya hua ...any problem



Naina : (hesitately) woh actually maine jo sunna tha ...


Rishi : (smiling) lagta hain mere aane se phele he mere bare me kafi kuch sunn liya hain ...par trust me main asa nahi hu ...its just mujhe gussa thoda jada aata hain aur issi wajah se mere asi image hain ...par main dil ka bura nahi hu...par agar apko sahi nahi lagta toh its ok ...main apko force nahi karuga mujhse dosti karne ke liye ...




Naina rishi ki baato se kafi impressed thi ...usse laga ki jo kuch bhi usne sunna hain rishi ke bare me woh sab jhut hain kyuki rishi itna sweet tha ki naina ko unn baato par yakeen he nahi hua...




Naina : main apne dost dosro ki kahne se nahi khud se banati hu ...so aaj se hum dost...wase chaliye class ke liye late ho raha hain ...aap phele he din professor se daant nahi khana chahey gay



Rishi : (making face) that's not fair...dost bhi kahti hai aap aur aap bhi kah kar itne formal bhi ho rahi hain ... mujhe asa lag raha hain jase main uncle type hu ...please mujhe tum he kaho...




Naina : (haste hue) ok rishi par tumhe bhi mujhe tum he kahna hoga ...manjur



Rishi : manjur...


Naina : ab class me chale warna professor hum dono ki class laga de gay...




Aur phir dono haste hue class ki taraf chal padte hain ...




Flashback End*****


Naina : kash main kabhi mile he nahi hoti rishi se ...



Abhimanyu : jo logo ne kaha aur jo apne ne bataya usme toh zameen asman ka antar hain ...kaha ek bigda hua rahis baap ka beta aur kaha yeh rishi he was very genuine to u ...




Naina : (with painful smile) shayad isse liye kahte hain ...kabhi kabhi aakho ka dekha bhi dhoka hota hain ...mere saath bhi kuch asa he hua ...kisi ki baato ko nahi mana maine socha jo dekh raha hain wahi sachi hain ...aur aaj uss sach ne he mujhe iss haal me pohcha diya ...




Naveen : phir... phir kya hua ...


Naina ek nazar Naveen ko dekhti hai phir khud ba khud uski nazre jhuk jati hai...



Naina : (nazre churate hue) mujhe wo pasand tha ...aur main usse ...we started dating each other...




Naveen : (shocked) dating???? (Little angrily) Yeh jante hue woh kasa hain ...



Naveen ki baat sunn kar naina thoda gharbra gayi...


Raj ne Naveen ko shant rahne ka ishara kiya ...



Raj : phir ...kya hua naina



Naina raj ko dekh rahi thi usse samjh nahi aa raha tha ki woh aage ki baatein btaye ya nahi .. Par raj ne usse aakho he aakho me apni baat pure karne ka ishara kiya aur naina ne phir se apni kahani sunani shuru kardi



Naina : kahte hain na jab waqt bura ho toh insan ke saath sab bura he hota hain ...chahe koi kitna bhi acha kyuna kar le ...


Main aur rishi ek dosre se bohat pyaar karne lage the...pure college ko pata tha ki hum ab ek relationship me hain ...
Sab ne mujhe roka mere sare friends ne mujhe kaha ki rishi mere liye sahi nahi hain ...mujhe uska sath chod dena chaheyi ...infact mere college ke teacher tak ne mujhe rishi se dor rahne ki hidayat de...par main ..main toh jase pyaar me pagal ho gayi thi ...mujhe rishi ke siwaye koi dekhta he nahi tha ...
Bas rishi he rishi tha mere zindagi me ...main ek ek kar ke apne sare dosto se dor ho gayi...kyuki sab rishi ki burai karte the aur woh mujhse bardash nahi hota tha...

Dheere dheere rishi ki sangati ka aasar dekhne laga mujh par ...maine college bunk karna shuru kar diya ...raato me baba se chup chup ke uske saath disk ...pubs jane lagi ...
College me ab mere reputation bohat kharab ho gayi thi ...sab mujhe galat samjhne lage the ...par main toh kisi aur he duniya me thi ...jaha charo taraf sirf rishi ka pyaar tha ...uska saath ...par mujhe nahi pata tha ki main ek ase daldal me ghus rahi hu jise nikalna mere bas me nahi tha...

Par kahte hai na jhut ke pair nahi hote bas ...kuch usse tarah mujhe rishi ka asli rang nazar aane laga ...
Rishi ab mere kareeb aane ki koshish karne laga ...par main uss chiz ke liye ready nahi thi...mana main pyaar karti thi usse par apne baba ke diye hue sanskaro ko kabhi bhi bhul ko taiyar nahi thi...

Jab maine rishi ki galat baato ko mane se inkar kar diya toh dheere dheere humare bech jhagde hone lage ...usse mujhse ab jase koi pyaar tha he nahi bas ek he chiz chaheyi thi ...usse mujhse aur main asa kuch karne ko taiyar he nahi thi...
Mujhe kuch samjh he nahi aa raha tha ki kisi karu apne dil ki baatein kisi btau apni pareshaniya ...kyuki ab mujhse pure college me koi baat he nahi karta tha ..mere sare dosto ne mujhse muh mod liya tha ...main pure tarah tutne lagi thi...jis rishte ke bharose maine apne sare dosto se dor hue thi ab woh he mera nahi tha...
Par mujhe abhi bhi lagta tha ki sab thik ho jayega ...agar rishi aur main shadi kar le toh ...



Abhimanyu : (harani se) shadi??? Naina aap uss insan ki niyat samjh rahi thi phir bhi usse shadi karna chahti thi..???



Naina : (with sad smile) jab pyaar ka bhoot ser pe chadta hain na toh sahi galat ki pahchan karne ke takat kho deta ha insan ...uss waqt mujhe sirf rishi aur humara rishta dekhta tha mujhe aur kuch nahi ...main kuch bhi karke bas apne rishta bachana chahti thi...pagal ho gayi thi main rishi ke pyaar me ...



Yudi : so what he said... Ki usne tumse shadi.???




Naina : nahi nahi ki usne mujhse shadi...(strain face) jaan se mar diya maine usse ...



Room me sab naina ki baat sunn kar ek dam shocked rah gaye ...naina ne uss ladke ko mar diya ????
Naveen ke toh chahre pe koi expression he nahi tha...he was beyond shocked...




Shalini : (shocked) tumne usse mar diya kyuki usne tumse shadi nahi ki ...




Naina : asa he kuch samjh lejiye...




*****Flashback*****




Naina rishi ko college me dhundh rahi thi...tab usse pata chala ki wo college ke terrace pe tha ...

(Rishi aksar apni dosto ke saath waha baithe kar sharab peeta tha )



Naina jab terrace pe gayi toh usne rishi aur uske dosto ki baatein sunn kar shocked rah gayi



Pankaj : yaar rishi tu kab se uss ladki ke aage papad bel raha par aaj tak kuch kar nahi paya ...karna toh chod tu toh usse ek kiss bhi nahi kiya ab tak ...




Manav : rishi wase mana padega kya chiz patai hain tumne ...kamal ka maal hain woh bas kuch jada he satisavtri ban rahi hain ...



Varun : haa yaar dekhne me toh mast hain woh ...kash ek bar mil jaye mujhe maza aa jayega


Naina in sab ki baatein sunn kar kitna disgusting feel kar rahi thi ...uska man kar raha tha ja kar sabka khoon kar de par usse laga ki rishi jarur kuch bolega unn logo ko ...aakhir pyaar karta hain woh naina se ...par jo rishi me bola wo uss kar toh naina ke hosh he udd gaye ...




Rishi : ( drunk ) yaar chinta mat karo chidiya jaal me phas gayi hain bas ek bar main apne maan ke murad pure karlu phir tum logo bhi le lena maze uske saath...mujhe konsa usse shadi kar ke ghar le jana hain ...
(Laughing) par yaar ek baat toh hain ladki me dam bohat hain warna aaj tak koi rishi se khud ko ab tak bacha nahi paya ...kuch jada sanskari hain ...



Varun : par yaar woh toh kuch karne ko taiyar he nahi hain ...kase karega tu ...



Rishi : tu bas dekhta jaa ...bohat ho gaya uska drama aaj raat main usse apne saath disk le jaa raha hu...phir kya haa drink me ek goli milai aur humari pyari naina black out... Phir kare gay je bhar ke maze uske saath...



Naina se ab aur nahi usna jaa raha tha ...aaj usse khud pe sharam aa rahi thi ek ase ghatiya insan se pyaar karne ke liye...



Naina : (angrily) rishiii...


Rishi aur uske dosto ka sara nasha he utar gaya naina ko dekh kar...



Naina gusse me aage jaa kar rishi ko ek jor dr chata marti hai...



Naina : (slapping him) how dare you...tumhare himmat kase hue mere bare me asi ghatiya baat karne ki ...hum ek dosre se pyaar karte hain kamse kam uss pyaar ki he thodi izzat kar lete ...aaj ke baad mujhe kabhi apna shakal maat dekhana nahi toh mujhe bhi nahi pata ki main kya kar jaugi tumhare saath...



Yeh kah kar naina waha se jane lagte hain ...



Rishi gusse se aag babula ho raha tha ...



Rishi : (angrily hold naina hand) tumhari itni himmat ki tum rishi pe haath uthao...ab main tumhe dekhata hu rishi se panga lene ka natiza ...

Yeh kah kar rishi naina ko apni taraf khechta hain aur jabar dasti usse kiss karne ke koshish larne lagta hain ...



Naina khud ko usse chudane ki koshish kar rahi thi ...par rishi usse chodne ko taiyar he nahi tha...


Naina : (angrily) leave me rishi ...chodo mujhe ...



Par rishi kuch sunne ko taiyar he nahi tha...


Varun aur baki ke dost khade khade maze le rahe the...


Varun : (enjoying the sceen) come on rishi ...aaj isse mat chodna ...isse bhi toh pata chale rishi se panga lene ka natiza ...



Pankaj : rishi isne tere insult ki hain ...ab tu iski asi insult kar ke zindagi bhar nahi bhule yeh...come in buddy dekha de isse tu kya chiz hain...


Manav : Haa bhai aaj toh ise sabkh sekhana he hoga ...badi satisavitri banti hain naa yeh...




Naina rishi se kisi tarah khud ko chuda kar bhagne lagti hain par manav akash aur varun uska raasta rok lete hain...naina apne aapko yuh unke jaal me phasa dekh kar dar jati hain...aur rone lagti hain ...



Naina : (rote hue ..haath jod kar) please jane do mujhe ...please




Sab naina ko yuh rote dekh hasne lagte the ...



Varun : (laughing) arre bhabhi ji aap kyu ase roo rahi hain...aab kaha gayi apni aakad




Manav : arre arre nahi nahi bhabhi ji please aap asa mat roiye ...hume bohat dukh hota hain apko ase dekh kar...chaliye ek kaam karte hain...Rishi ke saath saath aaj hum sab mil kar apko jannat dekhate hain...phir btaiyega ki apko kasa laga ...



Rishi phir se naina ko pakad leta hain aur uske saath jabardasti karne ki koshish karta hain...naina madad ke liye chilati hain...par manav terrance ka gate band kar deta hain ...naina ki aawaz ke shor se neche ground pe students aur teachers ki bhid lag jati hain...par koi bhi aage aa kar help karne ko taiyar nahi tha ...sab rishi aur uske family ke rutbe se darte the...




Rishi nashe me tha naina se jhage me uska pair ek rod pe pada aur wo phisal gaya ...nashe me hone ki wajah se woh khud ko thik se samhal nahi paya ...naina rishi diwar ke pas he lad rahe thi aur jab rishi ka pair phisla toh wo seedhe terrace ke diwar se neehe gira ...

College three floor ka tha ..aur jaha se rishi neche gira waha neeche ek straight iron rod lagi hue thi...
Rishi seedhe uss rod pe gira ...rod Rishi ke seene ke aar par ho gayi thi ...aur rishi ne ussi waqt apna dam tod diya ...




Waha sabhi khiade hue logo ke toh hosh he udd gayi ...kuch he pal me kya se kya ho gaya kisi ko kuch samjh he nahi aaya ...Naina ko toh jase boot bani khadi thi ...aur rishi ke dosto ka sara nasha utar gaya tha



Ground pe khade sabhi log rishi ko dekh rahe the par koi bhi usse bachane ke bare me nahi soch raha tha ...
Rishi ke friends bhi terrace se bhagte hue neeche aaye ...par naina uske pairo tale toh zameen he khisak gayi thi ...uske haatho anjane me he sahi khoon ho gaya tha ...



Jab naina ne thoda hosh samhala toh woh bina kuch soche samjhe apne ghar bhag gayi ...rishi ko yahi choda kar...




*****Flashback End*****


Room me pin drop silence tha sab shocked the naina ki baat sunn kar koi kuch nahi bol raha tha...


End of part 8


Important note

Originally posted by: RNforever

Don't try to act smart millee ...iss bar koi mafi nhi milegi tumhe😡😡...kab se wait kar rahi thi tumhari comment ka m ...par ma'am toh gayab h ...😡

Ab tak m next update bhi kar diya hota woh toh kisi kam me busy tgi isliye nhi kiya ...tumse yeh eed nhi thi mjhe😭😭😭

Mera dil dukah diya jao baat nhi karti tumse m🥺

M so sorry sweetheart
Actually ghar pe functions chal rahe the
Toh sab relatives aa rakhe the
Toh time hi nai mil raha tha ki kuch karu
Bt nw I Ll comment time 2 time
Sacchi
Av toh maan jao
Kaan pakad ke sorry
Tum bolo toh sit ups v kar du
Bt maan jao
So sorry to hurt u
Luv u so much babes
🤗 ❤️

Originally posted by: Milleegarg

M so sorry sweetheart
Actually ghar pe functions chal rahe the
Toh sab relatives aa rakhe the
Toh time hi nai mil raha tha ki kuch karu
Bt nw I Ll comment time 2 time
Sacchi
Av toh maan jao
Kaan pakad ke sorry
Tum bolo toh sit ups v kar du
Bt maan jao
So sorry to hurt u
Luv u so much babes
🤗 ❤️

chalo fhik h thik h maaf kiya ...
wo kya h na mera dil bohat bada h 😉
chalo ji jao next chapter enjoy karo kar diya tumhare liye update

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊