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Hey Folk ! I don't know what count this OS has in my list 😆😆 Ummm maybe its the 23rd or the 24th story in all I have written for this forum . Well this is a small goodbye gift from me for you all before I leave writing for MB forum . IDK if this OS makes any sense but I am sure that one last time you can make me feel happy with your sweet comments . I will miss writing for this Forum and reading your crazy , comic , sweet , awesome and all kinds of comments . I hope guys that like you have encouraged my stories , the same way you will encourage other writers of this forum . Writers are working really hard to keep this dead forum alive with their stories 😳😳 Ohk now after giving a long preaching session , I present you one last story from my side .




P.S. - This story is from a child's POV so words have been twisted in their language but to make you all comfortable the original word has been written in the brackets . 😳





*DPS School Annual Function*


Today was the annual function of the school and there was lot of

hustle bustle in the school . There was an excitement and

happiness in the environment since everyone from KG students to

higher class students to teacher's to principle all were busy with

the preparations for the evening function to kick start



Meanwhile in the playground away from all the crowd and chaos a

5 year old girl from UKG (Upper Kinder Garten) std was

beautifully dressed up in a white gown with a high pony tail

wearing a beautiful tiara . She was sitting on the cool grass

basking in the sunset view of the beautiful summer evening with a

cute baby smile playing on her lips


"I'm a little pincess (princess), see my crown
I'm a little pincess (princess), see my gown


When I am sad, I never wear a frown
When I am happy, I dance around


I'm a little pincess (princess) because I chare (share)
I'm a little pincess (princess) because I care


When I am sad, I never wear a frown.
When I am happy, I dance around" , The girl was singing the poem

in her cute baby voice



She was in her own world reciting the poem which she was supposed to say in the skit for the function , when a boy who was elder to her came and saw her sitting alone and smiling to herself . He sneaked near the girl and smiling evilly to himself , he pushed the girl making her fall on her face which resulted in hurting of the girls elbow and hands . And the boy started laughing after pushing her



"This is your punishment Madhu for making me get punishment

from Pia Mam" , the boy said while laughing



Madhu started crying with pain



"Momma ... Momma" , Madhu said in her cute baby tone and

started blowing air on her elbows where it was paining



The boy was laughing uncontrollably on seeing her cry



"Hey Mukund !! Stop making her cry else I will complain to our

class teacher" , A fairly cute chubby boy from Mukkund's class

said



Seeing that boy Mukund stopped his laugh


"Why did you made her cry ??" , The chubby boy asked Mukund in

a high pitch voice



Mukkund looked at the boy and dint say anything and glared at

Madhu who has now stopped crying and was looking at her chubby

saviour



"Tell me Mukkund that why you made her cry otherwise I will tell

to our class teacher that you have hurted your sister"



"Rishabh don't try to defend my sis "



"I asked why did you make her cry ?"



Well Mukkund was Madhu's brother and he was 2 years elder to

Madhu . But they hardly behaved like siblings . Fighting and

pulling each other's hair and clothes was a normal thing for both

of them . No no no if you thought that Madhu was an innocent

kid then you are highly mistaken because she can give you a first

thought of a new definition to the word devil and monster . Wait

let me prove it to you .



Once when Mukkund was doing his English homework of writing the

correct spellings against the wrong one , and matching the

columns , he was eating 5 star chocolate while doing his home

work . Madhu came to his room with her Barbie doll as she

wanted her elder bro to play with her . Seeing her obsession - 5

star chocolate , she asked Mukkund to share the chocolate with

her .



"Bhaiyya !! Even I want 5 tar (star) cholate (chocolate)" , Madhu

said in her baby voice looking hungrily at the chocolate Mukkund

was eating



"This chocolate was given to me by my classmate since today was

his birthday . If you want then tell mom . She will buy you a

one" , and saying so he went back to his homework and chocolate



"Bhaiyya pleech (please) only one bite"



"No . I will not give my chocolate to you . Why do you want to

eat my leftover chocolate ?? Go and ask Mom to buy you a new

chocolate . And stop disturbing me . I have to complete my

homework"



Madhu sat there near her brother looking at the chocolate

Mukkund was eating with so much of pleasure . She kept looking

at the chocolate with her puppy eyes in an attempt that her bro

will look at her and will share her favorite 5 star with her , but

he was busy with his homework when after few minutes he felt

conscious and looked at his devil sis who was looking at him with

puppy eyes . He knew it that untill he shares the chocolate with

her , she will eat his head and will not let him be in peace



"Stop staring at my chocolate else I will get stomach ache in

night" , Mukkund chided Madhu



"Bhaiyya !! Our Anjali Mam told us that charing (sharing) is caring

. So you should also chare (share) this cholate (chocolate) with

me"



Mukkund looked at her pissed off and he gobbled the whole

chocolate in one go



"I don't believe in sharing and , now I have eaten the whole

chocolate , so now go from my room . I have to complete my

homework and saying so he picked up Madhu in his arms with her

Barbie and brought her to her own room"



"Play here on your own today . I have to complete my homework" ,

and saying so he left from Madhu's room



"Bhaiyya ish (is) very bad . He dint chare (share) his cholate

(chocolate) with me" , Madhu said in her cute tone and smiled to

herself the next instant



At night when everybody went to sleep , Madhu stealthily came to

Mukkund's room and climbed on the chair to reach the table

where he has kept his school bag . She took his bag and went to

her room . She opened his bag and saw all the books in which he

has done the homework with today's date . Finally she got hold of

his English notebook .



"Bhaiyya you dint chare (share) your cholate (chocolate) with me .

I am angry with you" , and saying so she took out the eraser

from Mukkund's pencil box and erased all the answers he has

written for match the column and correct spellings



"Now the shcore (score) ish (is) eqal (equal). You knew it that how

much obesd (obsessed) I am with 5 star but still you dint chare

(share) it with your sis" , Madhu said with a proud smile and she

kept the pencil box and books back in the bag and again went

quietly to Mukkund's room and kept his bag



And next day when in school Mukkund was asked to show his

homework , he went to his teacher with a proud look of

completing his homework but when the teacher saw the incomplete

homework , Mukkund got a shock which was not less than a minor

heart attack for him and his face went pale . He got the

punishment for the deed which he hasn't done and he was told to

stand outside the class by holding his ears



"Hahahaha..." , suddenly Mukku heard a known voice and looked

towards the source of sound



"Yay ! Bhaiyya yeshday (yesterday) you dint chare (share) the

cholate (chocolate) with me so I erased all your answers from the

book" , Mmadhu said while controlling her laugh



"You brattt" , and saying this Mukkund pulled Madhu's hair and

even Madhu pulled Mukkund's hair and started fighting in the

school corridor



So now you got to know that our innocent Madhu is not that

innocent



"Mukku ! I am waiting for an answer . Why did you make her cry

?" , Rishu aksed in an angry voice which made his ears and

cheeks red



"Yesterday I got a 5 star chocolate from Purab in the lunch and

that time only Madhu saw the chocolate in my hand and before

she could come to me and ask me for the chocolate , I ran from

there . Luckily the bell rang and I went to class . I thought that

I will eat this chocolate later on while the school will get over ,

but then in class I thought that if Madhu finds chocolate in my

bag then she will eat my head and I knew it that Madhu will

come to my class after every lecture to see if I had that 5 star

chocolate with me or not , or I ate it . So while Pia Mam was

writing the addition answer on the blackboard , I started eating

the chocolate by hiding from Pia Mam's gaze and this little brat

had her games period that time , so instaed of coming here to

playground she came to my class and I dint knew about it that

she has her games period . I was enjoying my chocolate in the

class when she shouted in her shrill voice from the main

classroom door that "bhaiyya eating foods in class is a bad habit

and Anjali Mam has taught us this" , The whole class including Pia

Mam looked at me that instant and she saw the half eaten

chocolate in my hand and punished me by making me stand at my

place by holding my ears .You were absent yesterday that is why

you don't know . And Rishabh don't fall for her innocence . She is

a witch"



Rishu looked at Madhu who was hiccupping because of the crying

session



"I compained (complained)to Pia Mam because he dint chare his

cholate with me and my Anjali Mam had told ush (us) that we

should always share our things with others because sharing is

caring but he is a bad boy" , Madhu said while pointing towards

Mukund



"And eating in a class is a bad habit na Rishu Bhaiyya" , madhu

said with an innocence



RK got shocked hearing bhaiyya from his Madhu's mouth



"Madhu don't call me bhaiyya" , Rishabh said in a panicking voice



"But you are my Mukku bhaiyya's fend (friend) and clasmate"



"But I am not your bhaiyya . You can just call me Rishu or

Rishabh"



"But" , Madhu was trying to say something when Mukkund

interrupted her



"Leave her Rishabh . You don't know my sis . She is a big drama

queen" , Mukku said in a pissed of voice



Madhu again started crying . Rishu felt sad seeing her crying like

that



"Go from here Mukku" , Rishabh said to Mukku in an authoritative voice



"Hey Madhu don't cry na pleech" , Rishabh said but still Madhu

was sobbing violently



"OK !! If you will stop crying then I will give you a 5 star

chocolate"



Madhu hearing the name of her obsession - chocolate ,

immediately stopped crying . And she looked with her puppy eyes

towards Rishabh



"Really !! You will give me cholate ??"



"Yes" , and with this he took out the chocolate from his pocket

and unwrapped the chocolate wrapper and gave her the chocolate

. Madhu happily took the chocolate from Rishabh's hand and

started eating it . While RK was looking at Madhu with a content

. Madhu saw Rishabh looking at her and she thought that Rishabh

also wanted the chocolate , so She forwarded the chocolate

towards Rishabh's mouth and smiled . Rishabh also ate from the

same chocolate .After finishing the chocolate Rishabh took out

his handkerchief and wiped Madhu's hands and after that even

Rishabh wiped his hand and kept back his handkerchief .



"Thank you Rishu . You are so shweet(sweet)" , Madhu said happily

by kissing Rishabh's cheeks



Rishabh knew Madhu since her KG days because of his best friend

Mukkund . And in first moment only Rishabh instantly fell for

Madhu's plum red cheeks and her cuteness . She was one cute

girl though a naughty girl yet she was sweet . rishabh would come

to mukkus house quite often with some or the other pretext just

to see his cute plum red girl . Rishabh knew of Madhu's obsession

for 5 star chocolate because it all started in RK's house





*Flashback*

*At MK Mansion*


"Rishu beta your friend Mukkund has come to meet you" , Radha

said



Being a single child to Kundra's , RK was quite smart and mature

than his age and most of the time he would behave like a grownup

boy . Its not that he would not have fun with his friends and

parents but he behaved much responsible which always lead ways

for appreciation .



RK was happy seeing Mukkund , but his happiness grew 10 folds on

seeing Madhu at his home



"Hi Rishabh" , Mukkund said



"Hi Mukku ! Hi Madhu" , RK said with excitement



"Let's go to my room" , and saying so RK took Madhu and Mukku

to his room



Mukkund had come to RK's house for copying down maths note

which he had missed for 2 days and so RK was helping Mukku in

completing his notes but , RK was time and again looking at

Madhu who was looking at RK's room singing her poem "Humpty

Sumpty sat on a wall" . Sfter few minutes Madhu came towards

Mukku



"Bhaiyya I am feeling bored" , Mmadhu said with a puppy look



"You have brought your Barbie na then play with it and let us do

our work" , Mukkund chided Madhu and Madhu felt sad that no

one was there to play with her



Seeing her sad face RK felt sad and he instantly ran from his

room and came back with a chocolate after few minutes . He

gave her one 5 star chocolate and sat beside her observing her

expressions



She looked confused that what was she supposed to do with this

rectangle kind of thing which was covered with some yellow

colored beautiful printing paper with something written over it in

red colors and stars made on it and , she started playing with it

to which RK just chuckled seeing her all confused



"You look so cute when you are confused" , RK said to Madhu while

pinching her cheeks , making Madhu's cheek turn plum red - his

favorite color



"Rishu what I am supposed to do with this ? Which toy is this ?

Does this toy works on battery ??" , Madhu asked with innocence



Rk laughed looking at her cute antics set of questions and he took

the chocolate from her hands and unwrapped the chocolate and

made her eat the chocolate with his own hands . She looked very

happy and instantly fell for this rectangle piece of food



"What was this ? It's very taty (tasty)"



"It's a chocolate called 5 star"



"Can I get more ?" , Madhu asked with a puppy look



"Sure Madhu" , and saying so Rishabh gave her another chocolate



"Thank you Rishu . You are a good boy" , Madhu said with

happiness and kissed RK's cheeks after finishing the chocolate



RK was shocked with Madhu's kiss but he felt happy that the girl

whom he likes has kissed him and that moment only RK decided

that if ever in his life when he will grow young and marry , then

Madhu is the only girl whom he will marry . RK smiled seeing her

happy .



Since Mdhu has fell for this chocolate , so she would always cry

at home to bring her one 5 start chocolate and her parents would

bring that and since that day there never went a single day when

she would not have her favourite 5 star chocolate . Sometimes at

her house but it was almost Rishabh who would give her a 5 star

chocolate during the lunch break in school . Although Madhu's

parents had brought a huge stock of 5 star chocolate for their

daughter yet Rishabh would always carry a 5 star chocolate in

school for his Madhu , so that he can see her smiling happy and

get a kiss from his Madhu . Yes ! they would always share that

one chocolate and after finishing the chocolate Madhu would

always kiss RK's chubby cheeks making him happy and blush at

the same time .



Since the first kiss RK had become Madhu's "personal 5 star"


*Flashback Ends*




"Rishabh !! What have you become for the annual function ?" ,

Madhu asked in her innocent voice after wiping her hands from

rks handkerchief



"I have become the prince who has come to take his princess with

him to his palace"



"Oh so you are that boy who has become my pince (prince) in the

play" ,Madhu said with a shock which was later replced with a

happiness



"That means you have become my princess" , RK asked ecstatic



"Yesh Rishu"



RK's happiness knew no bound . He wanted to jump out of

happiness but refrained from doing so since he dint wanted

Madhu to think of him as a fool



"Rishu I want to say something . Pomish (promise) me that you will

not scold me" , Madhu said while holding Rishabh's hands with her

tiny fingers



"Say it Madhu , I will never scold you"



"Rishu I love your chubby cheeks very much" , and saying so she

pinched his cheeks and smiled happily to which even RK smiled



"Come Madhu lets go to hall . Everyone must be waiting for us"

, and saying so RK makes Madhu stand and holding her hands they

went to the hall .




I dint proof read the OS so kindly ignore all kinds of errors and do Hit the like button and comment on it 😳😳

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Posted: 9 years ago
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I feel like cry...😭😭 i came first on your last story??😭😭 Oh no!!!😭😭
why baby?? i know we have discussed about this topic already but still it hurts me that i won't get to read your stories...😭😭 you are one writer too good in writing thriller stories & cute stories like this one...😳😳 but still i respect your decision... i just hope your not leaving the forum but just leave writing... you are not leaving MB forum right??😳😳

This story is chooo cuuute!!😛😆
i loved this Madhu so much... thought she is a brat i love her for her cuteness & her cute antics & her sweet baby voice... 😛😆 i guess her front two milk teeth has fallen that's why she couldn't pronounce words clearly bcos i used to talk her like that only when i was 5/6 yrs... i also talk like this when i put lipstick on my lips without touching my upper lip & bottom lip...🤣 i could see myself in place of madhu... even i love 5 star so so much... my favorite cholate!!😉😆
Whoa! 7 yrs Rk loving a 5 yrs old girl,... what a puppy puppy love!🤣
LOL! this little girl is so wicked... she took her revenge nicely by erasing her bhaiya's homework!😆😆 Poor Mukku... got punishment from pia ma'am... but still that's not the way to treat his little sister... he pushed her & hurt that cute baby girl... glad Rk came on her rescue & made her smile by giving her favorite five star chocie...😛😳
Oh my my... so many kisses in ishu's story... why the hell can't you show your adult Rishbala kiss this many times?? 😡😆
i was hoping you will take a leap & show Rk madhu all grown up & still in love... Rk giving her favorite 5 star & propsing her... then their marriage... even on suhaag raat she could ask him for 5 star & they sharing a different kiss... not the sweet cheek kiss but a soul scorching kiss..☺️☺️
i just loved this story yaar... so adorable little couple are they... not only in the play they are prince & princess but in real life too...😃😃
Rk with chubby cheeks... awwee... even i wanna pull his cheeks & also kiss madhu plum red cheeks... 😛😆... amazingly cute story... thank you so much Ishu darling... i just wish you change you mind & come with brilliant stories after your exam... love u...🤗
Edited by madhurish - 9 years ago
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Ishu why are you stopping it right here😭😭😭...please yaar don't stop writing...I really love your stories :((

Anyway coming back to the update...okay though I am commenting but really I don't feel like commenting because I am upset right now...but as it's your last story...I just had to comment.

Loved this RK and Madhu I never could have never imagined them as kids through out the OS...I thought they would grow older s thestory progresses...but it's nice you showed them as kids...really loved them...Hahahaha RK fell for Madhu already...so cute

I don't know I really don't feel like commenting more yaar...really feeling sad...why are you doing this??😔

Edited by srksimran - 9 years ago
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Awww... Such a Cute Story!!!! I loved it sooo much... I don't want to say more I fell like crying... I am really sad.. I have read your so many stories.. But i respect your decision... I can't force you to write.. Well miss your writing so much.. But why you are leaving? You are one the best writer in forum.. I wish you have a great future..
Edited by .Poorva. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Res unres
Awesome os 👏👏
Madhu is sooo cute and rishu is sooo sweet
I felt this os never ends
Please don't leave this forum and keep writing such stories😭😭
Edited by lovRishbala - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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loved it although i thought they will grow up.why are u quitting is it becoz viv is cming in a nw show,pls don't go frrm forum will miss ur stories,people like u are the reason why forum is alive
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Your last story !!! why ishu ???
i am feeling sad ,u r one of fav writer here ishu.
we all are missing rishbala this is the only place where we feel good by reading stories ,reading post on rishbala.so many writer or member left forum,u also going left ?or just u leave writing ?pls don't leave ishu.
os was awesome(but not feel good during read ,beause ur news of leaving)

it is sweet and cute os ishu.
little rk and little madhu,how cute!!!.
what a revange madhu ,oh erase all mukund homework,lolz.
sweet os .
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Posted: 9 years ago
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oh first I have to say that Madhu's song was too cute!

I hope you come back to writing here at IF as I would love another chapter to this story, something like 18 years later.

Story was wonderful and the characters of Rishab and Madhu were so cute.

all the best to you!
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Cute story.
Loved devil madhu she was too cute. So was rk. Can't believe such little girl thought of payback.
I have always admired your stories gonna miss them. Hope you will change your mind and update sometime in future. Gonna miss your stories.
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Sooo cute os.Madhu's baby voice n rk's chubby cheeks.I feel a strong urge to pull his cheeks .Madhu is so cute n rk feels a pull to her at the age of 7.Inseparable rishbala.I smiled throughout reading the os but feel to cry as this is ur last story. Why r u quitting writing .just take a break for ur exams.U r one of the finest writers of MB forum. Plz reconsider ur decision.
All the best.

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