RiMa OS - My Personal 5 Star - Page 2

Originally posted by: madhurish

I feel like cry...😭😭 i came first on your last story??😭😭 Oh no!!!😭😭

why baby?? Oh girl every good things have to come to an end and so was my writing for this forum 😳😳

i know we have discussed about this topic already but still it hurts me that i won't get to read your stories...😭😭 you are one writer too good in writing thriller stories & cute stories like this one...😳😳 but still i respect your decision... i just hope your not leaving the forum but just leave writing... you are not leaving MB forum right??😳😳 Yeah of course Bae I am just quitting writing and not MB forum . I know we have already discussed about this so many times and I am really happy that you respect my decisions 😳😳

This story is chooo cuuute!!😛😆

i loved this Madhu so much... thought she is a brat i love her for her cuteness & her cute antics & her sweet baby voice... 😛😆 i guess her front two milk teeth has fallen that's why she couldn't pronounce words clearly bcos i used to talk her like that only when i was 5/6 yrs... i also talk like this when i put lipstick on my lips without touching my upper lip & bottom lip...🤣 i could see myself in place of madhu... even i love 5 star so so much... my favorite cholate!!😉😆 Hi Fi I just can't survive without 5 star . Awww girl how cute you must be looking then with your 2 teeth's fallen 😆😆 . Wish I could have one pic of yours when you were small with those teeth fallen

Whoa! 7 yrs Rk loving a 5 yrs old girl,... what a puppy puppy love!🤣 I can't help it girl bcz you always crib to me that I never show any romantic scene so I thought to give a romantic story only 🤣 🤣 Now don't accuse me that Ishu never writes romantic stuffs 🤣 🤣

LOL! this little girl is so wicked... she took her revenge nicely by erasing her bhaiya's homework!😆😆 Poor Mukku... got punishment from pia ma'am... but still that's not the way to treat his little sister... he pushed her & hurt that cute baby girl... glad Rk came on her rescue & made her smile by giving her favorite five star chocie...😛😳

Yeah afterall RK has to come to ave his not so innocent Madz from every harm . Future husband he is afterall 🤣 🤣 Yup that's my favourite scene where Madz erased all the answers of Mukund's homework 🤣 🤣

Oh my my... so many kisses in ishu's story... why the hell can't you show your adult Rishbala kiss this many times?? 😡😆 ROFL 🤣 🤣 🤣

i was hoping you will take a leap & show Rk madhu all grown up & still in love... Rk giving her favorite 5 star & propsing her... then their marriage... even on suhaag raat she could ask him for 5 star & they sharing a different kiss... not the sweet cheek kiss but a soul scorching kiss..☺️☺️ Wohaaa you think too ahead 🤣 🤣 🤣 So fast you are with their romance 🤣 🤣 🤣

i just loved this story yaar... so adorable little couple are they... not only in the play they are prince & princess but in real life too...😃😃 Yup they are cute and real life prince and princess 😳😳

Rk with chubby cheeks... awwee... even i wanna pull his cheeks & also kiss madhu plum red cheeks... 😛😆... amazingly cute story... thank you so much Ishu darling... Your welcome dear . 😳😳 Go and pull your sis's cheeks instead of Rk's bcz he is with Madz and let them have some romantic time alone . Stop disturbing them 🤣 🤣

i just wish you change you mind & come with brilliant stories after your exam... love u... 🤗 Love you too babes ❤️❤️ It really felt nice to read your long and wonderful comment 😳😳😳

Originally posted by: srksimran

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Ishu why are you stopping it right here😭😭😭...please yaar don't stop writing...I really love your stories :(( Oh dear ! I know I am not doing good but we have already discussed about this . Pls now I want to relax and read your wonderful stories with a touch of comic and comment a long long thesis on your stories 😳😳😳

Anyway coming back to the update...okay though I am commenting but really I don't feel like commenting because I am upset right now...but as it's your last story...I just had to comment. Awww mela bacha ! sorry dear to spoil your mood but I hope you will respect my decision 😊

Loved this RK and Madhu I never could have never imagined them as kids through out the OS...I thought they would grow older s thestory progresses...but it's nice you showed them as kids...really loved them...Hahahaha RK fell for Madhu already...so cute Yup Bae RK has already fallen for her and I thought you guys have anyways read so many romantic stories on adult Rishbala so thought to show their younger version 🤣 🤣

I don't know I really don't feel like commenting more yaar...really feeling sad...why are you doing this??😔 Sorry Simmi for really spoiling your mood 😭😭😭. I know I can't compensate it for you . Ok tell me what can I do to make your mood happy ?? Other then coming back and writing stories you can tell me any thing and I will do it to make your mood happy 😳😳 Pakka pinky promise 😳😳

Originally posted by: Clara20

cute os...loved it