Of Father & Son : Raman & Adi Fan fiction

I happened to read a topic on Adi's callous behaviour towards Raman during his birthday party. Upon reading that, I've decided I wanna pen a fiction on this father and son. Let me know if you'd want me to continue!

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PART 1

I'm sure all you guys remember Friday 20th December 2014. Well I'm recreating that scenario and trying to piece it together with what I had envisioned for Ashok's revelation to Adi. CVs kinda botched it up so I'm hoping you guys will like my attempt!

OF FATHER & SON

In who he trusted to become his father was the same man who robbed his mother off her dignity. At this moment, Shagun Arora who had woven dreams of becoming Mrs Khanna, lay in the pit of debris; consumed in her own angst; this woman failed to see her young boy trying with all his might to be strong. Strong for his mother...

He assured her everything would be fine but to what extent was that true? Who did he have to turn to? At that moment, the only person he thought of was the same Raman Bhalla he'd insulted many a times. The same Raman Bhalla he'd blame for causing hurt to his mother! Then why was it that the same Raman Bhalla came to this boy's mind?

Not giving it a second thought, Adi took out Shagun's phone from her purse and once he found the number after a frantic search; dialled it ... expecting nothing but his PAPA to come to his rescue

In that moment, something within Adi changed ...

It's really short I know but I wanna gauge your responses first and then continue otherwise if you guys are not interested then I won't bother but I really wanna write this one and don't worry I have the continuation in mind!

Interesting start - would love to read more!

Beautiful... I had always wanted some one to write on Raman and Adi, am waiting for the next part eagerly..

Amazing start! This is a beautiful relationship I would love to read on! Two of my favourite characters and the ones I find so realistic, I like the concept already! I can't wait to read ahead to see your take on this! Looking forward to this one!

Nice start re...