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Part 2 (c)

One day there was a heavy rain outside. And this heavy rain started affecting Nandini's senses.She was afraid of heavy rains and thunderstorm due to some past events of her life.Her past memories started haunting her so at that night she in her fear came in Maniks room.


Like a fearful kid she came towards his bed .She wanted to wake him up But when she saw him sleeping her mind stopped her .so without making any noise she move very near to him and with great care she caressed his face in the air in her dazed condition. His presence was giving her strength in this fearful night...



She sat on the carpet near his bed... at that time his back was towards her... while looking at his back tried to control her senses but all her efforts failed and she went back to her past.


Flashback


Nandini was lying on the hospital bed when she heard some murmers...


" Dehan se dekh isi floor k kisi room mein hogi... Boss ne kaha hai osey zinda le k ana hai... Chal jaldi kar dhond ose."


She knew that they were talking about her... so she left her bed with great difficulty as she had the head and leg injury at that time... she covered her face with the help of veil and started walking outside.


That was also the rainy day... She tried very hard to escape from those goons.But to her badluck one of them saw her and started following her.


When she came outside that goon came infront of her and immediately pushed her in a car.


When her eyes opened she was in a godown... She heard some voices


Voice1: But boss app ne hi to kaha tha k osey zinda lana hai yahan.


Voice 2: Haan kaha tha... but os k yahan ane se pahle hi mera kam pura ho gya to ab yeh merey kisi kam ki nahi hai... bada shouk than a isey os Manik ko bachane ka... Jan to is ne bacha li oski... lykin o ski factory(hahahaha) ... Os ki Factory pe jo humla hoa ... Zindagi bhar yaad rakhe ga wo...


Voice 1: To Boss ab is ka kya karna hai...


Voice 2: Arey khobsoorat kum umar chirya hai... aish karo...


Nandini when heard this her eyes popped out with shock and her heart stopped beating.


Nandini: Ayiappa plzzz mujhe bacha lo.(after this she takes a long breath and thought) Nandini abhi yahan koi nahi aye ga... tujhe apni madad khud hi karni pare gi...


With this she looked here and there and then her eyes stopped on 1 window...


She ran towards that direction and with great difficulty open that window... She saw that there was a small dangerous path outside which leads her towards the adjacent building.


Nandini remembered her ayiappa and climbed out of that window...



Within 10 mints she was successfully escape from that place...


Flashback ends


She thought


Ayiappa app yeh kya kar rahe ho... You know na yeh mosam mujhe wo din yaad kara deta hai...os din... Jo hone wala tha... App to sub jante ho to phir kyo...tou phir kyo ayiappa?(tears came in her eyes.


But then her gaze shifted toward window and she saw thunder light from that window and with fear she closed her eyes and stopped herself from shouting .She tightly closed her eyes and prayed to her ayiappa: Ayiappa plz plz plz isey rok do plzzz.


Manik heard some murmurs near his bed . In his sleeping state thought:Yeh merey room mein kon hai?


He very slowly opened his eyes ,tilted his head and Saw Nandini... who was sitting on the floor near his bed with closed eyes.


He thought: Yeh is waqt yahan? But meri sehat to thek ho gayi thi na pahle se... to yeh... Itni raat ko yahan kya kar rahe hai.


On same moment he heard the voice of thunder and then another voice but this time it was Nandini's voice.


Manik's eyes stopped on her face. He felt some uneasiness when he saw her fearful face.


She with tightly closed eyes again said in slow voice: No plz plz plz ayiappa stop kar do na ise plzzz.


Manik when heard this he sit straight ... observed her for sometime...and turned on the lights of his room.


Nandini got a shock when she saw room lights on.she at once looked up towards Manik who was staring her .


Nandini with broken words : wo ... wo ... main...


Manik who noticed this fact in last 5 mints asked with raised eyes: Tum barish se dar rahe ho?


Nandini: Nahi


But at same time again with thunder Nandini shouted in slow voice: Oh no plzzz stop.


Manik gazed at her beautiful face... And for the 1st time he admits in his heart that she is really beautiful ... A pretty face and a pure soul ...and with her denial a cute smile came on his lips.


he with that smile said: Hmmm to tum really mein thunderstorm se darti ho.


Now with amazed expression: aisa kyo?


Nandini who wanted to divert her attention from this rain thought to have a chat with Manik.


Nandini didn't want to disclose the real reason: said wo I don't know but bachpan se hi aisa hai.


Manik: Y? childhood mein kuch hoa tha kya?


Nandini lied to him: kuch yaad nahi hai... may be jab Appa aur Amma ka accident and un ki death hoe tab kuch hoa ho.


Manik got a shock on listening this. So he with astonished face asked:U mean tumhare parents ki death ho chuki hai.


Nandini very innocenty nodded in yes.


That point changed Manik's thinking towards Nandini.Dont know Y but his heart wanted to know more about her.


Manik thought for a sec: Ahhh very bad Manik Malhotra ... is ne kitna khyal rakha tera... tera ghusa bardast kiya...kitna kuch sunaya na tu ne isey... Week se zyada ho gya isey yahan and u want to know about her... Today... Very bad...(Then his heart gave courage to him) Manik better late than never.


After this encouragement from his heart.He asked again with surprised expression: To phir tum rehti kis k sath ho.


Nandini replied: Chacha Chahi k sath.


Nandini only wanted to spend this fearful night so without thinking much she was giving him answers to all his questions.


Manik: and what about your siblings?


Nandini: mera sirf 1 bhai hai.Rishab osi ki wajha se to main is profession mein ayi thi... Mujhe os ka treatment karwana tha na.

Manik: Treatment? Kis cheez ka?


Nandini: wo osey bachpan se hi kuch attacks ate they.bus osi cheez ka treatment.


Manik: Hmmm to ho gya os ka treatment.


Nandini with sad smile: Ho raha hai.Aushotosh sir ne osey treatment k liye bahir bheja hai.


Manik: Hmmm


Now Nandini asked: Aik baat pochun?


Manik while resting his head on headboard: Pucho?


Nandini:wo tumhare friends har time tumhare sath hi rahte the but ab kafi dino se main yahan hoon main ne un me se kis ko yahan nahi dekha.

Manik with surprise looked at her and asked: Tumhe kaise pata k merey friends merey sath hi rahte haan?


Nandini when heard averted her gaze and now to normalize the situation she said: Wo main ne aik interview me suna tha...


Manik in his sleepy voice: Ammm wo... Wo sub yahan nahi haan... concert k liye abroad gaye hoe haan. Yahan hote to mujhe kisi doc.


Nandini felt bad on his words coz she take it like a tuant whereas Manik told her this in general way.


Nandini: waise Manik tum me yeh change kab aya?


Manik with surprise asked: Kon sa change.


Nandini with taunting voice said: Yehi har baat pe taunt karney ka.


A cute smile came on Manik's face after listening this complain and with that smile he replied: Hmmm pahle nahi thi but wo mera friend Cabir hai na os k sath rahte rahte aur oski ulti baton k jawab dete dete shayad ho gaya hai.


Nandini s tongue again slip on this and she said: Ya I understand os k sath rahte rahte to yeh sub ho sakta hai...


Manik heard this and again gave a surprise look to her.


Nandini on receiving this surprised look rewind her sentence and thought: Ayiappa app yeh ajj kya karwa rahe hooo mujhe se...


Then she again make a lame excuse and said: wo un k interview suna tha .


Manik: Hmmm


And the night passed like this.


In Morning


After breakfast Manik received Cabir's msg that they are on their way to home.Manik told this to his servants and Nandini heard this.


Nandini in her room starts her packing while thinking: Nandu jaldi kar... Un k yahan ane se pahle nikalna pare ga... Manik ne to kabhi sahi se dekha nahi tha but agar un mein se kisi ne pehchan liya to... Kya bole gi tu? No ... No...Mujhe abhi yahan se nikalna hoga...aur waise bhi Mnaik ab thek hai...


Nandini after packing came in Manik's Room .Manik looked at her and asked: Kya hoa ab... I think Barish khatam ho chuki hai...


Nandini: Ya I know... Wo main yeh batane ayi thi k main ja rahe hoon.


Manik got surprise on hearing this he asked: Kya kaha?


Nandini jokingly starts explination: Wohi jo last kitney dino se tum chahte they... Main ne kaha tha na k agar mujh se peecha churwana hai tuThek hona pare ga... to ab jab tum thek ho to... meri duty yahan khatam ho jati hai...


Manik: But


Nandini picked the note pad and write something on that and then said: Mnaik yeh is pe mein ne next week k liye med likh di haan...abhi to yeh medicine tumhe kuch din tak continue karni hai... Next week k baad you are free...


Manik felt sad on hearing the news of her leave...He himself don't know y his heart wants her to stay here for some more days. Now when he started liking her presence , she was leaving.


Reluctantly Manik gave her permission and Nandini left from there.


After 1 hour whole Fab 4 gang with their partners came back and attacked on Manik's room.


Manik was sitting with closed eyes when he felt a ball hit him.


Manik with pain said: Ahhh Kameene Cabir... abhi abhi to thek hoa hoon.


Cabir with concern and anger: acha tujhe yaad a gya k tu bemar tha... Kameene hamein nahi bata sakta tha.


Manik with smile: Bata deta to kya hota ... Yehi na k tum log concert chor k wapis a jate. So main yehi nahi chahta tha.


Mukti: But Manik this is not Fair yaar...tu apni baar apni problem kisi ko nahi batata.


Dhruv; Haan Buddy aur yahan to uncle aunty bhi nahi theyjo tera khyal rakhte...


Manik: Don't worry buddy. Mom ne aik Doc arrange ki thi.


Cabir: Ki thi? Mean... Larki ayi thi?


Manik while making fun of him: Cabir ki thi ka mean ab tak wohi hai jo tu ne school mein parha tha.


Cabir while sitting beside him asked: Kaisi thi... hot thi kya?...kahen tera temperature oski hotness se hi to cool nahi hoa.


Manik to others: Yaar plz abhi isey yahan se le jao. Nahi to jo temperatue gya hai na is ki baton se phir se a jae ga.


Aliya and Mukti: Cabir osey abhi rest karne de na. u know na temp k baad weakness se hi bura haal rahta hai.


Abhi and Dhruv: Haan haan chalo abhi yahan se abhi isey rest karne do.


Navya: Manik tum ne kuch khaya?


Manik gave a smile on this sisterly concern and said: Haan navya wo Doc jane se pahle yeh sub kuch kar k gayi hai. Tum log thak gaye ho gey abhi rest karo.


After this all left for their rooms .


Aliya and Mukti came in that room in which Nandini was living.


Mukti open her cupboard and something fell from it on the floor.


Mukti saw a duppata and when she lowered down to pick it she saw a pic of a girl.


She picked that pic and thought:I think isey kahen dekha hai? But kahan?


They while ignoring she placed that pic on sidetable and moved towards washroom with her dress.

Edited by cute-aly - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
To compensate this late update... I hope yeh compensation sahi rahe gi.


Part 2 (d)


In Noon

All including Manik came in sitting area and started gossiping about their concert when Mukti remembered that duppata and pic so she asked : Manik wo hamara room main koi ruka tha kya?


Manik: Haan shayad Nandini ruki thi wahan ... kyo?


This name alarmed Cabir and others senses.


Cabir immediately asked: Kya naam liya tu ne?


Manik: Nandini ... Kyo... Kya hoa?

Mukti looked at cabir and then said: I think oski hi pic ho gi wo.Isi liye mujhe laga tha k pahle kahen dekha hai main ne isey.


Abhi: Kon si pic?

Mukti: Wo jo hamare room mein hai ruko main abhi lati hoon.

Mukti went and came back with that pic and showed it to Manik to confirm her doubt.


Mukti: Manik yeh dekh osi ki pic hai na.

Manik after seeing that pic said; haan osi ki pic hai.


Cabir in anger gazed at Manik: Manik tu... tujhe kaise pata nahi chala k yeh...Nandini hai...


Aliya: Cabir relax yaar... Don't forget Manik ne kabhi osey sahi se dekha hi nahi...

Cabir: Guys I think ab jab hamien os ka pata chal gya hai to hamein os se milna chaheye...


Manik like a confused soul asked:Arey yaar koi mujhe bhi batae ga k yeh tum kis bare mein baat kar rahe ho... aur Nandini... Tum log kaise jante ho Doc ko?


Cabir jokingly:Lo g story start hone se pahle hi khatam ho gayi...( Mukti gave a glare to Cabir on this) Cabir: Acha ok ... Aise ghoor k darao nahi main batata hoon.


Manik tujhe yaad hai 1st year mein a girl had a crush on you...wo teri secret admirer... Mujhe to ajj tak samajh nahi aya k wo tere samne aur tu osey dekhne se darte kyo they...Anyway ... yaad hai... hum jahan jahan jate the wo hamein follow karti wahan a jati thi secretly.(to tease him further) Hum ne kitna tang kiya na tujhe os time.(laughed while remembering that time)


Manik with sad face said: No I didn't remember any such thing.

Mukti sadly: Haan tujhe yaad bhi kaise hoga... wo samne bhi to kum hi ati thi ... but Manik to wo Aliya ki kidnapping wala case to nahi bhool sakta na... Remember that case os day bhi wohi to thi


Flashback

Dhruv enterned in class in panic and asked: Guys Aliya ko kahen dekha kya?Main subha se osey dhond raha hoon ... na to kahen nazar aye wo aur na hi os ka phone lag raha hai.

Manik, Cabir and Mukti were shocked on this news...


Manik in Panic asked: What ? Druv alia subha se nahi mili aur tu hamein abhi bata raha hai...

Dhruv: Guys I thought wo yahan hi kahen hogi but ab mujhe... dar lag raha hai.

On same Moment Manik got a call from some unknown number...,

Manik received that call and heard an evil laugh...


Caller: hahahaha Manik... kya hoa... Kuch... I mean koi missing hai kya?

Manik got alert on his words and said in anger: Kya Bakwas kar raha hai huh?

Cabir came near him and put his phone on speaker and got a shock when heard Harshad's voice on other side.

Harshad: Tch tch tch Manik Malhotra... Itna ghusa... Abhi se... aur agar tujhe yeh bata doon k wo jisey tum sub dhond rahe ho mere pass hai tab ...tab to tera anger boiler ki tarhan BRAMMM (making a sound) se blast hi ho jae ga hai na... ( again laugh)hahahahaha.


Others with fearful expression looked at Manik and Manik while controlling his anger asked: Bol kya chaheye tujhe...?

Harshad again with laugh: Smart move Malhotra... Main bhi time zaya karna nahi chahta... so apney baap ko bol k Govt k os tender se apna naam hata le aur wo jo teri company hai jisey terey baap ne hum se liya hai... wo wapis merey naam pe kar de .

Manik: aur tujhe lagta hai k main yeh sub karon ga.


Harshad evilly: Well agar tujhe teri wo friend wapis chaheye to tujhe karna pare ga... Wo kya hai na tere pass aur koi choice nahi hai...Aur haan wo Police wala famous dialogue to tujhe yaad hi hoga so mujhe dobara kahne ki zarorat nahi pare gi... Haan incase tu ne nahi suna to... as a result tu apni is dearest friend ko hamesha k liye kho de ga...

Mnaik in anger: Nooo

He takes a deep breath and asked again: Ok Main yeh sub arrange karta hoon but aliya ko agar kuch hoa to...?

Harshad: Arey main kya pagal hoon ... jis ki wajha se mujhe meri company wapis mil rahe ho osey hi harm karo... No... Never...


Manik: Tu aliya ko chor de main tujhe wo papers de doon ga.

Harshad : Haan to thek hai... Tu papers le k ******* a ja , main tujhe teri dearest friend wapis kar doon ga.

Manik: Ok.

Fab 4 didn't knew that this convo was also heard by someone.

Manik talked with his Dad and arranged all things but didn't told him exact location...After sometime they left for that place.

When they reached there... Harshad and his men caught them and took those papers from them according to his plan .

Then Harshad came to Manik and gave a punch in his stomach.

Manik yelped in pain:Ahhh


Harshad: Ajj kitney time baad aisa hath laga hai tu...Ajj to main sare hisab barabar karon ga...


Manik with angry glare at him and asked: Where is aliya?

Harshad:Kya baat hai Mar khane k liye b isey apney sub friends ki zarorat hai.

He ordered his men : Jao ja k os larki ko le ao ... Is ko is k sub doston k samne marne mein aur maza aye ga.

When they bring aliya ... Harshad again punched Manik. On seeing this Cabir shouted: Harshad tu... tu acha nahi kar raha... Tujhe nahi pata is k baad tera kya haal hoga.

Harshad now moved towards Cabir and said: Awww kya friendship hai... Manik ko aise akele maar kahate nahi dek sakta na... yeh le tu bhi le(punch).

Cabir also yelped in pain.


Manik shouted from back: Harshad teri dushmani mere se hai na...Unhe chor de.

Harshad: Manik itni asani se kaise chor doon ... waise bhi teri jaan tery in 4ron friends mein hai na...(he slapped dhruv). To tujhe takleef dena k yeh moqa main kaise jane doon bol.

Nandini who came there from back side after informing police.She while hiding herself observed the situation and then her eyes stopped on an iron rod placed nearby.She covered her face with her duppatta.


She without making any voice moved there and picked that rod.

She came back in that direction where 2 men were holding Aliya...

Nandini from back side hit those men on their heads and freed alia from them.

Harshad's back was towards them so he didn't knew about this .

Nandini started moving towards him while holding that rod.

Fab 4's eyes widened on this ... Aliya also after picking a rod came from other side.


Nandini target was Harshad's head ... she hit him with full force but on same moment Harshad changed his position and that rod hit on his shoulder...

Harshad in pain cried: AHHH.

He looked backside and found a girl...whose face was covered with her duppatta.


His anger reached on extreme level so by leaving others he started moving towards that girl.

He pulled that rod out of her hands and throw it on other side...

And with his dangerous expressions he moved towards her.


From back side Aliya hits those persons who were holding Manik .

Harshad in anger garb Nandini's neck and said: kon hai tu... kon hai jo in ki help karne aye hai...


He tried to uncover her face but on same moment Nandini pushed him back.

Harshad in anger ran behind her... But to his bad luck on same moment police reached there...Inspector arrested his fellow men ...

Harshad when saw this he picked that iron rod which was placed nearby and throw it towards Nandini.


Fab 5 shouted in horror: Watchhh outtt.

Nandini who was running form harshad saw backside and on same moment that rod hit her on her arm and with pain she fells down on the land... and her head hits on some stone... due to which she gets unconscious.


Other side police officer while targeting Harshad's leg fired ... And he also fell down due to the bullet.

Fab 5 ran towards that girl...and Police arrested Harshad...

Fab 5 gathered around that girl and blood coming out from her head...Mukti and Aliya Moved near that girl . Mukti immediately holds her head and placed it in her lap.

Cabir shouted in panic: Guys isey hospital le k jana chaheye... Tum log late kyo kar rahe ho.


Manik who was still in shock came out of it and said: Yaaa... main Driver ko yahan bula leta hoon and hospital mein bhi phone kar deta hoon.

Dhruv: But guys yeh hai kon? Aur isey kaise pata chala k hum yahan haan?

Manik came back and interrupted their talks:Lets go driver a gya hai... Manik came fwd and without any delay he picked that girl in his arms and started running towards his car.


While placing her in his car his duppata removed a lil from her face but her hairs covered that side properly.


All sat in his car hurriedly ... but when Manik was about to sit... Police officer came and said: Excuse me sir... app mein se kisi aik ko hamare sath chalna pare ga...

Manik looked inside towards his friends and said: Guys tum isey le k hospital pohancho main yeh side handle karta hoon ... waise bhi Dad to wahan a hi jaen gey... Hmmm


Others: Ok and with this they left from there.

FlashBack ends


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Edited by cute-aly - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wowww

Omg omg

Super duper awesome yr

Thanks for posting such a long long wala update eagerly waiting for next part dear

N i m sooo sooo excited to read manik pov in past
Did he had feelings for his secret admirer nandu baby

Love you sissy
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update...

Nandini Manik ki secret admirer tha...

Manik na USA notice nahi ki...bad thing...

Manik ko abhi uski yaad nahi huya...

Kab manan banega...

Waiting for next cute-aly..

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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow.. so nandini was maniks secret admirer. .
Really excited for next
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
superb update...
nandini afraid of thuderstorm bcz of past incident...
manan talk was nice...
fab 4 recognize nandini...but manik did not recognize her...
nandini is manik secret admirer...
nandini is so brave she help them from harshad...
manik not seen her face...
loved d update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
hey api 😃
wonderful update yaar..
nandu got scared..and unintentionally manik calm her down..
mystery unfold..
nandu chali gaye..
fav 4 remember her..
nice..
waiting for next..
God bless you
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Posted: 9 years ago
Soo Nandu was Manik's secret admirer
Sooo cuteee 😉
Nice update
Nandu is gone from Manik's place, saddd
Thanks for pm
😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Yeh kya...suspense pe chor diya...
Awesome update...how brave nandini is...loved the flashback...waiting for next update

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