IshRa Revival SS - 27/9/16 - Pg 12 Part -3

updated first part have a look

So amazing start. Adi was shocked to wits hearing his fathers accusations on her mother. Emotional part as well.

Maya what a brilliant rkb's pov. You nailed it.

Adi and Ramans convo .. Simply the best.. Adi's shock his questions .. Amazing . There are a few things that stood out
1. Dad did you really mean what you said ?
2. Ramans surprise when he called ishita not ishima but mom
3. After his questions ..,adi welcoming his dad back
4. Raman laughing after 7 long years and saying " you mom liked raavan kumar more than Raman kumar.."
5. Raman guilt and anger for everybody following him after the outburst abandoning ishita .
6. Adi's confession that he too at one time called ishita a step mother... And Ramans shock .
Beautiful ... Waiting for ishitas pov
Keep writing ... Well written

Maya I'm so glad and happy that I kept you informed about pre leap and post leap situations in yhm.
It was nice talking to you .. I mean the endless pm we were sending back and forth, discussing the characters and situations and trying to figure out scenes .. Why abd the ifs and but's ...scratching our heads. I will continue to support and keep you in the loop.
Thank you

Awesome... Something similar to what's going on my mind.

Beautiful update Maya