TR- MISUNDERSTANDING (Story has moved to Thread 2 link in index) - Page 8

Created

Last reply

Replies

445

Views

40.6k

Users

75

Likes

1.4k

Frequent Posters

dh19 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 9 years ago
#71
Nice update
Waiting for past revealation
7APK thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 9 years ago
#72
' Wow !!!! Mind Blowing ...
Super - Duper Amazing ...
Awesome Update ...
Loved it...
Continue Soon...
Thanks for the PM... 😳
Viji.Chandran thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#73
nice update..

kriya s ruhi's mother... really?????
yashika.angel thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#74
Nice story...
Interesting concept...
& surly full of suspense...
Waiting for more updates

& do pm me
Snehalokwani200 thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
#75
Part 4

[note; purple is for [past]

At India

Rey was driving car but his eyes fall on his daughter who was sleeping peacefully that innocent face remind him of her. And that ice cream parlor incident was forcing him to remind about his past his beautiful memories his memories with her.


Past

Rey entered their bedroom taking baby steps knowing she must be angry he entered while she was reading novel she saw him and throw her novel on bed with full force and rey was imaging himself in place of that novel .


Rey: "taani I am sorry" he said while she just got up and went to their wardrobe


Rey: "listen me naa baba" he said while going close to her taani ignored him and went to washroom for changing while he was following her she closed door at his face rey tried to open door but it was lock from inside and he was cursing his fate


Rey: "taani plzz listen me na give me a chance to explain my mistake" he said he was telling her from 10 minutes but no reply from inside after 10 minutes she came and just glared at him and went as if he will say anything with cutest face she will forgive him so she controlled himself and went to dressing table


Rey: "taani plzzz na at least listen to me" she looked at him through mirror he was making puppy face while she just ignored him and combed her hair and got up


Rey: "plzz na jaan" he said while she open the door for going outside while rey pulled her from her wrist and she came and fall on his chest both were caught on eyelock


Rey: "taani plzz don't ignore me if u want u can yell at me shout me slap me but don't ignore me just listen to me once" he said with
guiltiness in his voice and pouted


Taani: "OK fine say I am listening" she said while seeing here and there except his face which was pouted bcoz she was feeling urge to kiss that pout



Rey: " I am sorry taani actually main office ke kaam main stuck ho gaya tha plzzz na I am sorry" he was saying with face down


Taani: "sorry sorry to aap boliye mat Rey u can't do this aap ka office ka kaam merse jyada jarroori hai u want to say that na than OK I don't have problem" she said and next second rey took her face in his palms and placed his lips at her first taani didn't respond but then taani kissed him with full aggression pouring her anger in that kiss then rey broke the kiss due to less of oxygen he hits his forehead with her


Rey: "taani aaj bola hai phir kabhi mat bolna nothing is important in my world more than u my day starts in ur arms and end in ur arms only really koyi important meeting attend karni thi" he said with tears in his eyes


Taani: "heyy OK fine I forgive u but I have my condition" she said while feeling guilty bcoz the reason of his tears rey nodded his head positively


Taani: "hmm good my first condition is u won't ever cry again bcoz of this small reason in fact small kya big reason hoye toh bhi u won't cry bcoz I am hamesha with u" she said while wiping his tears with one hand and interwining her other hand with his



Taani: "my second and last condition is take me to ice cream palour I am craving fast" she said and he smiled and hugged her they hugged almost for 5 minutes


Taani: "rey I am craving jaldi chalo" she said while rey let out soft chuckle


Rey: "unromantic wife mili hai mujhe chale" he said only to earn a glare from her



At ice cream palor


Rey brought her favorite ice cream choco chips she was eating and ice cream created her moustaches they eat ice cream and went


In car


Radio was on


And the man at radio said


When a boy cry for a girl that means she means everything to him


Taani was watching rey with happiness in her eyes they just hugged there




Present

Rey's pov

I have to move on from my past and no I can't relate ruhi with taani no I can't ruhi is the reason why I am away from my family how lonely i am I only know that taani u promised Me that u will be there with me always phir kya hua taani y u left u know that mera din tumse chalu hota tha air khatam bhi tumse but an farak sirf itna hai ki abbi tumhari yaado se shuru hota hai aur khatam bhi tumhari yaado se i am missing u but no I can't felt weak no



I took ruhi in my arms and took her to her bedroom and lay Her down there I started to move from there


Ruhi; " plzz papa stay here I am scared of darkness don't leave me" she mumbled while holding my hands first I look at her with softness in eyes but when taani's soft voice aarush giggle rang in my ears I took my hand from her with full force hatred visible in my eyes and marched out of the room


I gone in rehearsal room bcoz that tym that was only thing which can calm me down.




At Singapore

Taani was scrolling down Facebook posts when one post came


When a boy cry for a girl that means she means everything to him


She was seeing that post with hatred in her eyes


"All this is lie the truth is that all mans r same no boy can cry for a girl if he is crying then wo natak hai natak" she said to herself


Armaan: "no all r not I am not that type it's just ur mentality see me I am more handsome than ur rey" he said while sitting beside her


She was about to answer back when armaan told in middle


Armaan: "12 main 5 minutes remaining hai cum fast I will wake up aarush till the tym" he said and went from there


Armaan: "champ champ wake up taani I mean Teri mumma faint ho gayi hai hall mein jaldi uth" he said while that little boy got mini heart attack in his sleep he went running downstairs


He came down running while armaan blast the bomb on aarush's had from upstairs and all sang happy bday for him he went and hugged taani's legs


Taani knelt down and kissed his cheeks "happy bday aaru baby" she mumbled while kissing his cheeks


Aarush: "ur fine na mumma" he asked


Taani: "ya mujhe kya hoga wait armaan come down i will not leave him" she said while realizing it was armaan's plan


Armaan: "arey I was not getting any other idea rather than this to bring him downstairs" he said while justifying himself


Aarush: "armaan hamesha aisa hi karta hai I am not going to believe u again ever" he said while pouting


Taani: "aarush behave he is elder than u don't call him by his name " she said in strict tone


Armaan: "hey u miss aunty
don't u know bday boy KO chilate nahi hai and waise bhi he mujhe baiya ya uncle bulaye its better he call my name uncle is so cheap" he said while coming behind aarush


Taani was about to reply back when armaan said "cahlo chalo champ cut the cake fast" while taani give him a look will not leave you.



At India

Rey was dancing like manic his body was full of sweat but he was not ready to stop his rehearsal hall was of full of photos of taani aarush and his family he sat down after tiering one hour dance clock strike 12 he just got up and went to one photo frame of his aarush and taani he touch the photo with hand and said "happy birthday rock star miss you,papa loves you a lot hope taani will allow you to see my gift love you" he said while one tear scroll down through his cheeks


Husshh guys dry for no update and I think it is one one of the longest update so don't forget to comments and likes
SOL WILL BE UPDATE TILL NIGHT
DO LEAVE FEEDBACk PLZZ
Edited by Snehalokwani200 - 9 years ago
Angeline124 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#76
Nice update
So arush is Rey and Taani's son
Why Rey hates Ruhi!!!
Was Rey cheats Taani in last by having relationship with Kriya??!!!
Many confusions yet
Flashback is nice
Continue soon
vinii01 thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#77
Awesome update...loved it. pls update soon & thanks for pm
dh19 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 9 years ago
#78
Cute lovely and emotional update
sumana.shesha thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#79
Awesome update :)
So Aarush is Taarey's son !!!
What hapened between them ??
Update soon :)
Thanks for the PM :)
Mon_tr thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#80
Awesome update
Egarly waiting to know the real reason of taarey mu
Nxt part update soon

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Mysticaldivine

10 years ago

~Whimsical Flukes of Essence~ By Mysticaldivine [INDEX]

Dreams feel real while we're in them. It's only when we wake up that we realize something was actually strange. ~Inception MY STORIES ARE NOW...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse

3 years ago

Ink-Stained Pages: Aditi's Writing Index

[NOCOPY] [MEMBERSONLY] Tags Credits to Quantum-Dot Hello people! This is Adv. Aditi Jain aka Adi or AJ. I am a writer and here is the...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: minakrish

8 years ago

One Girl. A Hundred Journeys.|Mrina's Index

Hello people, This is me, Mrinalini , aka Mrina or Mina . And here is the Index of my stories. Now it would be easier for you all to find my...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Koeli

5 years ago

Comment Migration Request Thread #1

Hey guys, This is the place where you can request for comment migration. Please know that FFEs are going to migrate your comments. Rules - You...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: jasminerahul

3 months ago

Friendship story

I am planning to write a friendship story. I will choose the love interest of Paras Kalnawat and Karan Kundra according to the choice of the...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".