TwiNj TS(2S) : Mere RANG me RANGNE Wali..!! (Completed pg 3) - Page 5

Originally posted by: Aalina.

Read it in one go...just loved it.

Amazing yar...kerp writing

Thank u for the pm n Sorry for the late reply

No problem buddy..u managed to read and comment thats imp.. thnk u so much for dat..

Originally posted by: Sherni_Jerry

awesome update. loved it

Thnk u jerry for never missing a single post of miine.. means a lot to me.. thnx..

Awesome Ts. Loved it.
Thanks for pm.

Again sorry for walking In So Late...

Originally posted by: hailly

Awesome Ts. Loved it.
Thanks for pm.

Thank u buddy..
Seems like u r back to forum..
Hw's ur health now..??

Originally posted by: 17.sonal

Again sorry for walking In So Late...

this Ws amazinggg...

Srslyy...Holi shud b Like this... Full of Fun.. love and Colors..

I loved Evrything abt this TS..

Srsly Aisa Kuch Dikhaty TEI me toh Kya Baat Thi...

😳😳

He he.. Thank u Sonal..
Exactly I wanted to see some fun elements..thdi cheda chadi bhang Wang but to my disappointment nothing happened..
So I wrote my feelings here..
And thankfully my feelings were well received..

Originally posted by: --Nargis--

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Very cute OS...very true to Twinj's characterization. As for your writing style...i find nothing wrong, infact I think it takes more talent to writer the climax first...and then build the story around it...and make sure that itdoes't lack for anything. Itstough to build reader'santicipation for the reasons for the climax...but youhave done a splendid job. Keep it up!👏</font>

Lemme compose myself before replying..

That was such a relief to me.. M not getting words to comment..

Yeah completely agree its much difficult to build up a story going retro.. But its my way and I njoy writing like this..

Glad to no u found it connecting without lacking anything..

U made my day.. Thank u soo much..